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* GeniusBonus: "Onani" meaning masturbation is a literary one, as the oldest known reference to the "sin" of masturbation is Onan in ''Literature/TheBible''.
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* GeniusBonus: "Onani" meaning masturbation is a literary one, as the oldest known reference to the "sin" of masturbation (especially in a less than positive context) is Onan in ''Literature/TheBible''.
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* TheWoobie: Kitahara, and Kurosawa himself after [[spoiler: he confesses his misdeeds, and from then on, nearly every student seems intent on belitting/bullying/beating him.]]
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* TheWoobie: Kitahara, and Kurosawa himself after [[spoiler: he [[spoiler:he confesses his misdeeds, and from then on, nearly every student seems intent on belitting/bullying/beating him.]]him]].
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* GeniusBonus: "Onani" meaning masturbation is a literary one, as the oldest known reference to the "sin" of masturbation is Onan in Literature/TheBible.
* GrowingTheBeard: Started as a parody of Death Note with fapping. Ended as a story about growing up.
* GrowingTheBeard: Started as a parody of Death Note with fapping. Ended as a story about growing up.
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* GeniusBonus: "Onani" meaning masturbation is a literary one, as the oldest known reference to the "sin" of masturbation is Onan in Literature/TheBible.
''Literature/TheBible''.
* GrowingTheBeard: Started as a parody ofDeath Note ''Death Note'' with fapping. Ended as a story about growing up.
* GrowingTheBeard: Started as a parody of
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* JerkassWoobie: Kitahara is very much this, with the "jerkass" part only getting worse with time as she asks Kurosawa to "punish" girls for increasingly petty reasons, from harassing and tormenting her to ''talking to her in a slightly arrogant tone''.
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** JerkassWoobie: Kitahara is very much this, with the "jerkass" part only getting worse with time as she asks Kurosawa to "punish" girls for increasingly petty reasons, from harassing and tormenting her to ''talking to her in a slightly arrogant tone''.
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** [[ComingOfAgeStory "Coming" of Age]] never sounded so dirty.
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** JerkassWoobie: Kitahara is very much this, with the "jerkass" part only getting worse with time as she asks Kurosawa to "punish" girls for increasingly petty reasons, from harassing and tormenting her to ''talking to her in a slightly arrogant tone''.tone''.
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* GeniusBonus: "Onani" meaning masturbation is a literary one, as the oldest known reference to the "sin" of masturbation is Onan in TheBible.
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* GeniusBonus: "Onani" meaning masturbation is a literary one, as the oldest known reference to the "sin" of masturbation is Onan in TheBible.Literature/TheBible.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: Oh, yeah. [[BetterThanItSounds But according to the consensus...]]
* {{Fan Nickname}}: [[Manga/DeathNote Fap Note]] - The manga itself.
* {{Fan Nickname}}: [[Manga/DeathNote Fap Note]] - The manga itself.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: Oh, yeah. [[BetterThanItSounds [[SugarWiki/BetterThanItSounds But according to the consensus...]]
*{{Fan Nickname}}: FanNickname: [[Manga/DeathNote Fap Note]] - The manga itself.
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* {{Fan Nickname}}: [[Manga/DeathNote Fap Note]] - The manga itself.
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* GeniusBonus: "Onani" meaning masturbation is a literary one, as the oldest known reference to the "sin" of masturbation is Onan in TheBible.
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* AudienceAlienatingPremise: Oh, yeah. [[BetterThanItSounds But according to the consensus...]]
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Better Than It Sounds is Not A Trope. Use a review to tell people how a work is the most awesomest thing evar.
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* BetterThanItSounds: "Kurasawa the Master of Fapping, the story of a guy who faps on cute girls of his class in the girl's toilets but ends up falling in love for real." You wouldn't think it's a realistic portrayal of bullying, anti-social behaviors and the struggle to learn human relationships.
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** JerkassWoobie: Kitahara is very much this, with the "jerkass" part only getting worse with time as she asks Kurosawa to "punish" girls for increasingly petty reasons.
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** JerkassWoobie: Kitahara is very much this, with the "jerkass" part only getting worse with time as she asks Kurosawa to "punish" girls for increasingly petty reasons.reasons, from harassing and tormenting her to ''talking to her in a slightly arrogant tone''.
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* BetterThanItSounds: "Kurasawa the Master of Fapping, the story of a guy of fantasizes on cute girls of his class in the girl's toilets but ends up falling in love for real." You wouldn't think it's a realistic portrayal of bullying, anti-social behaviors and the struggle to learn human relationships.
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* BetterThanItSounds: "Kurasawa the Master of Fapping, the story of a guy of fantasizes who faps on cute girls of his class in the girl's toilets but ends up falling in love for real." You wouldn't think it's a realistic portrayal of bullying, anti-social behaviors and the struggle to learn human relationships.
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* TheWoobie: Kitahara, and Kurosawa himself after [[spoiler: he confesses his misdeeds, and from then on, nearly every student seems intent on belitting/bullying/beating him.]]
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* TheWoobie: Kitahara, and Kurosawa himself after [[spoiler: he confesses his misdeeds, and from then on, nearly every student seems intent on belitting/bullying/beating him.]]]]
** JerkassWoobie: Kitahara is very much this, with the "jerkass" part only getting worse with time as she asks Kurosawa to "punish" girls for increasingly petty reasons.
** JerkassWoobie: Kitahara is very much this, with the "jerkass" part only getting worse with time as she asks Kurosawa to "punish" girls for increasingly petty reasons.
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* BetterThanItSounds: "Kurasawa the Master of Fapping, the story of a guy of fantasizes on cute girls of his class in the girl's toilets but ends up falling in love for real." You wouldn't think it's a realistic portrayal of bullying, anti-social behaviors and the struggle to learn human relationships.
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Taken out due to lack of elaboration and documented examples of this audience reaction. If there\'s no real explanation to go after the joke, then it\'s best to leave it out.
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* EndingFatigue: [[DoubleEntendre Subverted, as after his daily regimen, he seems to be at about the same energy level as before.]]
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your mileage may vary can not have examples, only their subitems can
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* YourMileageMayVary: ''Woo boy.''
* YourMileageMayVary: ''Woo boy.''
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* TheWoobie: Kitahara, and Kurosawa himself after [[spoiler: he confesses his misdeeds, and from then on, nearly every student seems intent on belitting/bullying/beating him.]]
* YourMileageMayVary: ''Woo boy.'']]
* YourMileageMayVary: ''Woo boy.''
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* YourMileageMayVary: ''[[{{Understatement}} Woo boy]].''
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* YourMileageMayVary: ''[[{{Understatement}} Woo boy]].''Woo boy.''
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game, not a trope.
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* BetterThanItSounds: It sounds really perverse, [[{{squick}} gross]], and stupid, but then the GenreShift occurs and it becomes something unique and genuinely interesting.
