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* MagnificentBastard: Snape ''is'' Head of Slytherin, after all.
** It's what Slytherins aspire to be: someone who can observe and analyze a situation, then take control and use it for their own best advantage. Draco manages to live up to it when he [[spoiler:saves Harry from a violent assault]] (particularly because he sensibly gets backup first rather than charge in recklessly like a Gryffindor would).
** It's what Slytherins aspire to be: someone who can observe and analyze a situation, then take control and use it for their own best advantage. Draco manages to live up to it when he [[spoiler:saves Harry from a violent assault]] (particularly because he sensibly gets backup first rather than charge in recklessly like a Gryffindor would).
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* WhatAnIdiot: [[spoiler: Lucius]], ''why'' would you believe Bella [[spoiler: right after bragging about renouncing Voldemort to her face]]?!
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* TakeThat: To the Evil!Dumbledore
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The fic is this when is not FridgeBrilliance or CrowningMomentOfAwesome. From Snape growing relationship with Harry, the faculty's sense of responsibility and protection, the inter-house friendship and just those cute moments, it would make your faith in humanity be restored by chapter 10.
* FridgeHorror: The fact that the older witches teach the younger girls how to perform a [[GroinAttack castrating curse]] as a rite of passage. Makes you wonder how many times it's used on poor, unsuspecting boys or why the girls need to use it?
* FridgeHorror: The fact that the older witches teach the younger girls how to perform a [[GroinAttack castrating curse]] as a rite of passage. Makes you wonder how many times it's used on poor, unsuspecting boys or why the girls need to use it?
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: The fic is this when is not FridgeBrilliance or SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome. From Snape growing relationship with Harry, the faculty's sense of responsibility and protection, the inter-house friendship and just those cute moments, it would make your faith in humanity be restored by chapter 10.
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* TheWoobie: Eleven years old Harry, so very much.
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** It's what Slytherins aspire to be: someone who can observe and analyze a situation, then take control and use it for their own best advantage. Draco manages to live up to it when he [[spoiler:saves Harry from a violent assault]] (particularly because he sensibly gets backup first rather than charge in recklessly like a Gryffindor would).
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* {{Woobie}}: TheWoobie: Eleven years old Harry, so very much.
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* {{Woobie}}: 11year-old Harry, so very much.
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* {{Woobie}}: 11year-old Eleven years old Harry, so very much.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The fic is this when is not FridgeBrilliance or CrowningMomentOfAwesome. From Snape growing relationship with Harry, the faculty faculty's sense of responsability responsibility and protection, the inter-house friendship and just those cute moments, it would make your faith in humanity be restored by chapter 10.
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* JerkassWoobie: Snape and to the Fic's credit, it managed to mantain his Jerkass attitude with the heartwarming moments.
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* JerkassWoobie: Snape and to the Fic's credit, it managed to mantain maintain his Jerkass attitude with the heartwarming moments.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The fic is this when is not FridgeBrilliance or CrowningMomentOfAwesome. From Snape growing relationship with Harry, the faculty sense of responsability and protection, the inter-house friendship and just those cute moments, it would make your faith in humanity be restored by chapter 10.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The fic is this when is not FridgeBrilliance or CrowningMomentOfAwesome. From Snape growing relationship with Harry, the faculty sense of responsability and protection, the inter-house friendship and just those cute moments, it would make your faith in humanity be restored by chapter 10. 10.
* FridgeHorror: The fact that the older witches teach the younger girls how to perform a [[GroinAttack castrating curse]] as a rite of passage. Makes you wonder how many times it's used on poor, unsuspecting boys or why the girls need to use it?
* FridgeHorror: The fact that the older witches teach the younger girls how to perform a [[GroinAttack castrating curse]] as a rite of passage. Makes you wonder how many times it's used on poor, unsuspecting boys or why the girls need to use it?
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* GeniusBonus: Apparently Pansy Parkinson's family includes the Borgias.
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*{{Moe}}: Harry's so happy with Snape, [[CutenessOverload it will ROT your teeth.]]
* TearJerker: Pretty much anytime we're reminded of the past 10 years of Harry's existence.
* TearJerker: Pretty much anytime we're reminded of the past 10 years of Harry's existence.
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Severus Snape, Mcgonagall, Dumbledore, Harry's sense of Heroism, Percy's love for his family, etc...In fact 90% of the characters got a new interpretation by this fic. Not that this is a bad thing and is very well done, barely changing the core personalities from the book.
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Severus Snape, Mcgonagall, [=McGonagall=], Dumbledore, Harry's sense of Heroism, Percy's love for his family, etc...In fact 90% of the characters got a new interpretation by this fic. Not that this is a bad thing and is very well done, barely changing the core personalities from the book.
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* MagnificentBastard: Snape ''is'' Head of Slytherin, after all.
* WhatAnIdiot: [spoiler: Lucius], ''why'' would you believe Bella [spoiler: right after bragging about renouncing Voldemort to her face]?!
* WhatAnIdiot: [spoiler: Lucius], ''why'' would you believe Bella [spoiler: right after bragging about renouncing Voldemort to her face]?!
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Severus Snape, Mcgonagall, Dumbledore, Harry Harry's sense of Heroism, Percy Percy's love for his family, etc... etc...In fact 90% of the characters got a new interpretation by this fic. Not that this is a bad thing and is very well done, barely changing the core personalities from the book.
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* JerkassWoobie: Snape and to the Fic's credit, it managed to mantain his Jerkass attitude with the heartwarming moments.
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* JerkassWoobie: Snape and to the Fic's credit, it managed to mantain his Jerkass attitude with the heartwarming moments.moments.
* {{Woobie}}: 11year-old Harry, so very much.
* {{Woobie}}: 11year-old Harry, so very much.
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* JerkassWoobie: Snape and to the Fic credit, managed to mantain his Jerkass attitude with the heartwarming moments.
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* JerkassWoobie: Snape and to the Fic Fic's credit, it managed to mantain his Jerkass attitude with the heartwarming moments.
