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** One of the large carnivores living in Antarctica is the Antarctic Teratorn, a GiantFlyer vastly larger than any living flying bird. Normally it scavenges off the frozen bodies of large animals, but in summer it has to hunt. It does this by harrying its victims and spraying them with stomach acid until they collapse from exhaustion, at which point it devours them alive. One story follows a European explorer who meets this exact fate; he is ripped open and devoured, his bones broken and his flesh torn off in strips, [[CruelAndUnusualDeath and yet he remains alive for some time after it starts eating]].
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** One of the large carnivores living in Antarctica is the Antarctic Teratorn, a GiantFlyer vastly larger than any living other flying bird.bird in the world. Normally it scavenges off the frozen bodies of large animals, but in summer it has to hunt. It does this by harrying its victims and spraying them with stomach acid until they collapse from exhaustion, at which point it devours them alive. One story follows a European explorer who meets this exact fate; he is ripped open and devoured, his bones broken and his flesh torn off in strips, [[CruelAndUnusualDeath and yet he remains alive for some time after it starts eating]].
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** One of the large carnivores living in Antarctica is the Antarctic Teratorn, a GiantFlyer vastly larger than any living flying bird. Normally it scavenges off the frozen bodies of large animals, but in summer it has to hunt. It does this by harrying its victims and spraying them with stomach acid until they collapse from exhaustion, at which point it devours them alive. One story follows a European explorer who meets this exact fate; he is ripped open and devoured, his bones broken and his flesh torn off in strips, [[CruelAndUnusualDeath and yet he remains alive for some time after it starts eating]].
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* MemeticMutation: Green Antarctica and the Tsalal have become bywords on AlternateHistoryDotCom for evil, depravity, and general {{Dystopia}}-ness.
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* MemeticMutation: Green Antarctica and the Tsalal have become bywords on AlternateHistoryDotCom Website/AlternateHistoryDotCom for evil, depravity, and general {{Dystopia}}-ness.
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* MemeticMutation: Green Antarctica and the Tsalal have become bywords on AlternateHistoryDotCom for evil, depravity, and general {{Dystopia}}-ness.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Whenever Tsalal "[[AdaptationDecay adaptations]]" of Western media is brought up.
-->Right now, I'm watching ''Literature/OliverTwist''. It's at the gripping scene where [[RonTheDeathEater Oliver]], having sold Nell into slavery and murdered Fagin, '''is conspiring with the Artful Dodger to start the great London Fire.'''''
** The [[GodIsEvil Zhu]] interpretation of Literature/AChristmasCarol is equally amusing:
-->Skrog cares nothing for people, and refuses to participate in the rites of guarding. [[GodIsEvil God]] sends a series of visions to terrorize Skrog, but instead of knuckling down, Skrog becomes ever more adamantly opposed to God and God's will. His example is so ferocious that the community rallies around Skrog, and in the end, they sacrifice all the newborns, in a massive blood ritual.
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Whenever Tsalal "[[AdaptationDecay adaptations]]" of Western media is brought up.
-->Right now, I'm watching ''Literature/OliverTwist''. It's at the gripping scene where [[RonTheDeathEater Oliver]], having sold Nell into slavery and murdered Fagin, '''is conspiring with the Artful Dodger to start the great London Fire.'''''
** The [[GodIsEvil Zhu]] interpretation of Literature/AChristmasCarol is equally amusing:
-->Skrog cares nothing for people, and refuses to participate in the rites of guarding. [[GodIsEvil God]] sends a series of visions to terrorize Skrog, but instead of knuckling down, Skrog becomes ever more adamantly opposed to God and God's will. His example is so ferocious that the community rallies around Skrog, and in the end, they sacrifice all the newborns, in a massive blood ritual.
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** Whenever Tsalal "[[AdaptationDecay adaptations]]" of Western media is brought up.
** The [[GodIsEvil Zhu]] interpretation of
-->Skrog
--->Skrog cares nothing for people, and refuses to participate in the rites of guarding. [[GodIsEvil God]] sends a series of visions to terrorize Skrog, but instead of knuckling down, Skrog becomes ever more adamantly opposed to God and God's will. His example is so ferocious that the community rallies around Skrog, and in the end, they sacrifice all the newborns, in a massive blood ritual.
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* {{Squick}}: The eating and mating habits of the Tsalal.
** Three words: Hive Monkey Concubines.
** Three words: Hive Monkey Concubines.
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-->For the highbrow set, there's adaptations of Low World classics. Right now, I'm watching ''Literature/OliverTwist''. It's at the gripping scene where [[RonTheDeathEater Oliver]], having sold Nell into slavery and murdered Fagin, '''is conspiring with the Artful Dodger to start the great London Fire.'''''
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* NightmareRetardant: The project is so much more focused on RuleOfScary than plausibility that it ends up being more silly than terrifying to many readers.
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* {{Narm}}: More than a few reviewers have stated that they find the Tsalals' brutality to be almost too much to be able to take seriously, stating that it feels more like shock value for the sake of it.
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** Three words : Hive Monkey Concubines.
* UncannyValley: Howard Phillips falls into this if you are a Tsalal who is not used to non-Tsalal people.
* UncannyValley: Howard Phillips falls into this if you are a Tsalal who is not used to non-Tsalal people.
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** Three words : words: Hive Monkey Concubines.
* UncannyValley: Howard Phillips falls into this if you are a Tsalal who is not used to non-Tsalal people.
* UncannyValley: Howard Phillips falls into this if you are a Tsalal who is not used to non-Tsalal people.
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* UnfortunateImplications: The black-skinned Tsalal are constantly described as not just evil, but barely human, as well as AlwaysChaoticEvil. This is adapted straight from [[Franchise/CthulhuMythos the Cthulhu Mythos]], but still...
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* UnfortunateImplications: The black-skinned Tsalal are constantly described as not just evil, but barely human, as well as AlwaysChaoticEvil. Um...
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* UnfortunateImplications: The black-skinned Tsalal are constantly described as not just evil, but barely human, as well as AlwaysChaoticEvil. Um...This is adapted straight from [[Franchise/CthulhuMythos the Cthulhu Mythos]], but still...
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-->For the highbrow set, there's adaptations of Low World classics. Right now, I'm watching OliverTwist. It's at the gripping scene where [[RonTheDeathEater Oliver]], having sold Nell into slavery and murdered Fagin, '''is conspiring with the Artful Dodger to start the great London Fire.'''''
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-->For the highbrow set, there's adaptations of Low World classics. Right now, I'm watching OliverTwist.''Literature/OliverTwist''. It's at the gripping scene where [[RonTheDeathEater Oliver]], having sold Nell into slavery and murdered Fagin, '''is conspiring with the Artful Dodger to start the great London Fire.'''''
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* CompleteMonster: Multiple cultures of them.
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** The Tsalal of course have their own brand of NightmareFuel, the "Nameless Glacier" in the center of Antarctica. And the culture of the so-called Cold Islanders.
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** The [[GodIsEvil Zhu]] interpretation of AChristmasCarol is equally amusing:
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** The [[GodIsEvil Zhu]] interpretation of AChristmasCarol Literature/AChristmasCarol is equally amusing:
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-->Skrog cares nothing for people, and refuses to participate in the rites of guarding. [[GodIsEvil God]] sends a series of visions to terrorize Skrog, but instead of knuckling down, Skrog becomes ever more adamantly opposed to God and God's will. His example is so ferocious that the community rallies around Skrog, and in the end, they sacrifice all the newborns, in a massive blood ritual.
-->Skrog cares nothing for people, and refuses to participate in the rites of guarding. [[GodIsEvil God]] sends a series of visions to terrorize Skrog, but instead of knuckling down, Skrog becomes ever more adamantly opposed to God and God's will. His example is so ferocious that the community rallies around Skrog, and in the end, they sacrifice all the newborns, in a massive blood ritual.
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-->For the highbrow set, there's adaptations of Low World classics. Right now, I'm watching OliverTwist. It's at the gripping scene where [[RonTheDeathEater Oliver]], having sold Nell into slavery and murdered Fagin, '''[[BeyondTheImpossible is '''is conspiring with the Artful Dodger to start the great London Fire.]]''''''''''
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-->For the highbrow set, there's adaptations of Low World classics. Right now, I'm watching OliverTwist. It's at the gripping scene where [[RonTheDeathEater Oliver]], ''[[CharacterDerailment having sold Nell into slavery and murdered Fagin,]] '''[[BeyondTheImpossible is conspiring with the Artful Dodger to start the great London Fire.]]'''''
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-->For the highbrow set, there's adaptations of Low World classics. Right now, I'm watching OliverTwist. It's at the gripping scene where [[RonTheDeathEater Oliver]], ''[[CharacterDerailment Oliver]], having sold Nell into slavery and murdered Fagin,]] Fagin, '''[[BeyondTheImpossible is conspiring with the Artful Dodger to start the great London Fire.]]'''''
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-->For the highbrow set, there's adaptations of Low World classics. Right now, I'm watching OliverTwist. It's at the gripping scene where [[RonTheDeathEater Oliver]], ''[[CharachterDerailment having sold Nell into slavery and murdered Fagin,]] '''[[BeyondTheImpossible is conspiring with the Artful Dodger to start the great London Fire.]]'''''
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-->For the highbrow set, there's adaptations of Low World classics. Right now, I'm watching OliverTwist. It's at the gripping scene where [[RonTheDeathEater Oliver]], ''[[CharachterDerailment ''[[CharacterDerailment having sold Nell into slavery and murdered Fagin,]] '''[[BeyondTheImpossible is conspiring with the Artful Dodger to start the great London Fire.]]'''''
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-->For the highbrow set, there's adaptations of Low World classics. Right now, I'm watching OliverTwist. It's at the gripping scene where [[RonTheDeathEater Oliver]], ''having ''[[CharachterDerailment having sold Nell into slavery and murdered Fagin, '''is Fagin,]] '''[[BeyondTheImpossible is conspiring with the Artful Dodger to start the great London Fire.''''']]'''''
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-->For the highbrow set, there's adaptations of Low World classics. Right now, I'm watching OliverTwist. It's at the gripping scene where [[RonTheDeathEater Oliver]], ''having sold Nell into slavery and murdered Fagin '''is conspiring with the Artful Dodger to start the great London Fire.'''''
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-->For the highbrow set, there's adaptations of Low World classics. Right now, I'm watching OliverTwist. It's at the gripping scene where [[RonTheDeathEater Oliver]], ''having sold Nell into slavery and murdered Fagin Fagin, '''is conspiring with the Artful Dodger to start the great London Fire.'''''
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-->For the highbrow set, there's adaptations of Low World classics. Right now, I'm watching OliverTwist. It's at the gripping scene where [[RonTheDeathEater Oliver]], ''having sold Nell into slavery and murdered Fagin is '''is conspiring with the Artful Dodger to start the great London Fire.'''''''
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-->For the highbrow set, there's adaptations of Low World classics. Right now, I'm watching OliverTwist. It's at the gripping scene where [[RonTheDeathEater Oliver]], ''having sold Nell into slavery and murdered Fagin is conspiring with the Artful Dodger to start the great London Fire.''
-->For the highbrow set, there's adaptations of Low World classics. Right now, I'm watching OliverTwist. It's at the gripping scene where [[RonTheDeathEater Oliver]], ''having sold Nell into slavery and murdered Fagin is conspiring with the Artful Dodger to start the great London Fire.''
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** The Tsalal of course have their own brand of HighOctaneNightmareFuel, the "Nameless Glacier" in the center of Antarctica. And the culture of the so-called Cold Islanders.
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** The Tsalal of course have their own brand of HighOctaneNightmareFuel, NightmareFuel, the "Nameless Glacier" in the center of Antarctica. And the culture of the so-called Cold Islanders.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: The Yag, the Kings in Yellow and how the Hali treat torture. Everything about the Tsalal.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: NightmareFuel:
** The Yag, the Kings in Yellow and how the Hali treat torture. Everything about the Tsalal.
** The Yag, the Kings in Yellow and how the Hali treat torture. Everything about the Tsalal.
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* UnfortunateImplications: The black-skinned Tsalal are constantly described as not just evil, but barely human. Um...
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* CompleteMonster: [[BeyondTheImpossible Multiple cultures of them.]] them.
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Fetish Fuel: \"We no longer collect examples of fetish fuel. We did so for long enough to establish that literally everything is someone\'s fetish fuel, and that some few individuals are quite willing to go on about theirs at length.\"
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: The Yag, the Kings in Yellow and how the Hali treat torture.
* NightmareFuel: Everything about the Tsalal.
** The Tsalal of course have their own brand of NightmareFuel, the "Nameless Glacier" in the center of Antarctica. And the culture of the so-called Cold Islanders.
* NightmareFuel: Everything about the Tsalal.
** The Tsalal of course have their own brand of NightmareFuel, the "Nameless Glacier" in the center of Antarctica. And the culture of the so-called Cold Islanders.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: The Yag, the Kings in Yellow and how the Hali treat torture.
* NightmareFuel:torture. Everything about the Tsalal.
** The Tsalal of course have their own brand ofNightmareFuel, HighOctaneNightmareFuel, the "Nameless Glacier" in the center of Antarctica. And the culture of the so-called Cold Islanders.
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** The Tsalal of course have their own brand of