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* AcceptableTargets: Homosexuals, Jews, goths, anime fans, the Japanese, [[TakeThatCritics her critics]], [[ShipToShipCombat Team Jacob members]]...
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* BetterThanCanon: The snarkers' {{fanon}}.
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* BileFascination
* CreatorsPet: Jenny is almost as bad as her friend... [[TheWoobie until Chapter 37, that is.]]
* DamselScrappy: Joan, [[RecycledINSPACE much like Bella]].
* DesignatedHero: Joan again (''[[{{Jerkass}} and how]]'').
* DesignatedVillain: [[EnsembleDarkhorse Brian]].
* CreatorsPet: Jenny is almost as bad as her friend... [[TheWoobie until Chapter 37, that is.]]
* DamselScrappy: Joan, [[RecycledINSPACE much like Bella]].
* DesignatedHero: Joan again (''[[{{Jerkass}} and how]]'').
* DesignatedVillain: [[EnsembleDarkhorse Brian]].
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* TheScrappy: [[AuthorAvatar Joan/Erin]].
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* DrinkingGame: [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/DrinkingGame/BrewdeningLove Behold mortals,]] the quickest way to get alcohol poisoning ever created by man.
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* DrinkingGame: [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/DrinkingGame/BrewdeningLove Behold mortals,]] Behold, mortals]], the quickest way to get alcohol poisoning ever created by man.
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* IdiotPlot: Let's face it, this is Erin [[ADateWithRosiePalms jacking off]] to Edward, nothing more.
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* MemeticMolester: The Pope is commonly seen as this by the spanish fanbase because of the AccidentalInnuendo of his Pope Stick and because of the scene where he penetrates Edward being interpreted as The Pope literally sodomizing Edward.
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* MemeticMolester: The Pope is commonly seen as this by the spanish Spanish fanbase because of the AccidentalInnuendo of his Pope Stick and because of the scene where he penetrates Edward being interpreted as The Pope literally sodomizing Edward.
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* MemeticMolester: The Pope is commonly seen as this by the spanish fanbase because of the AccidentalInnuendo of his Pope Stick and because of the scene where he penetrates Edward being interpreted as The Pope literally sodomizing Edward.
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* {{Shipping}}: Brian and Hugo/Mr. Smith. Good luck reading the moment where Joan discovers Brian with Mr. Smith while the latter is spoused, and not thinking it's a weird kink of them.
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* {{Shipping}}: Brian and Hugo/Mr. Smith. Good luck reading the moment where Joan discovers Brian with Mr. Smith while the latter is spoused, handcuffed, and not thinking it's a weird kink of them.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Brian and Joan's dad.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: EnsembleDarkhorse:
** Brian and Joan's dad.
** Brian and Joan's dad.
** The Pope as one of the most hilarious characters in the story, especially with his near-literal {{Deus Ex Machina}}s (one of them actually literal as Jesus is with him).
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* MemeticBadass: Brian, the Creator/ChuckNorris of this fic.
* MemeticMutation: From the Twilight Sucks fic-sporking thread linked in the summary: JENNY WAS THE WINDOW!
* MemeticMutation: From the Twilight Sucks fic-sporking thread linked in the summary: JENNY WAS THE WINDOW!
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* MemeticBadass: MemeticBadass:
** Brian, the Creator/ChuckNorris of this fic.
** The Pope. He initially seems like a simple, kind Pope, but then he shows a Popemobile that is explicitly described to be like the Batmobile, and uses a Popestick to basically force Edward into getting back to Joan, fight vampires, and resurrect the dead. Jesus even seems to be his ''sidekick''! Readers' comparisons to ComicBook/{{Batman}} are far from uncommon.
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** From the Twilight Sucks fic-sporking thread linked in the summary: JENNY WAS THE WINDOW!
** Brian, the Creator/ChuckNorris of this fic.
** The Pope. He initially seems like a simple, kind Pope, but then he shows a Popemobile that is explicitly described to be like the Batmobile, and uses a Popestick to basically force Edward into getting back to Joan, fight vampires, and resurrect the dead. Jesus even seems to be his ''sidekick''! Readers' comparisons to ComicBook/{{Batman}} are far from uncommon.
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** From the Twilight Sucks fic-sporking thread linked in the summary: JENNY WAS THE WINDOW!
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* NightmareFuel: The "Popestick." You'll never want to get on the Pope's bad side again.
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* NightmareFuel: NightmareFuel:
** The "Popestick." You'll never want to get on the Pope's bad side again.
** The "Popestick." You'll never want to get on the Pope's bad side again.
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Jenny [[TheWoobie after Joan treated her like crap]], and surprisingly, Edward [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome after he dumped Joan]].
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap:
** Jenny [[TheWoobie after Joan treated her like crap]], and surprisingly, Edward [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome after he dumped Joan]].
** Jenny [[TheWoobie after Joan treated her like crap]], and surprisingly, Edward [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome after he dumped Joan]].
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* {{Shipping}}: Brian and Hugo/Mr. Smith.
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* {{Shipping}}: Brian and Hugo/Mr. Smith. Good luck reading the moment where Joan discovers Brian with Mr. Smith while the latter is spoused, and not thinking it's a weird kink of them.
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* FamilyUnfriendlyAesop: Hey kids! It's okay to be a hypocritical antisemitic whore as long as you pay lip service to God! Also, if anyone criticizes you and actually gives you good advice, they're a sinner!
** You know how [[PapaWolf your father]] scolded you for letting [[StalkerWithaCrush a mysterious guy sneak into your room every night]] without him knowing? [[GoodParents He's not looking out for your safety]], he's just an [[AbusiveParents abusive]] [[TheAlcoholic drunk]]!
** You know how [[PapaWolf your father]] scolded you for letting [[StalkerWithaCrush a mysterious guy sneak into your room every night]] without him knowing? [[GoodParents He's not looking out for your safety]], he's just an [[AbusiveParents abusive]] [[TheAlcoholic drunk]]!
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* FanPreferredCouple: [[FanNickname Hugo]]/[[EnsembleDarkhorse Brian]].
** Edward/Jenny, thanks to Chapter 37.
** And Edward/Becca. Heck, any pairing except [[OfficialCouple canon ones]].
** At this point, any pairing that doesn't involve [[{{Jerkass}} Erin]] or [[AuthorAvatar Joan]].
** Edward/Jenny, thanks to Chapter 37.
** And Edward/Becca. Heck, any pairing except [[OfficialCouple canon ones]].
** At this point, any pairing that doesn't involve [[{{Jerkass}} Erin]] or [[AuthorAvatar Joan]].
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** And Edward/[[BlackBestFriend Becca]]. Heck, any pairing except [[OfficialCouple canon ones]].
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** And Edward/[[BlackBestFriend Becca]].Edward/Becca. Heck, any pairing except [[OfficialCouple canon ones]].
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Jenny [[TheWoobie after Joan treated her like crap]], and surprisingly, Edward [[MomentOfAwesome after he dumped Joan]].
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Jenny [[TheWoobie after Joan treated her like crap]], and surprisingly, Edward [[MomentOfAwesome [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome after he dumped Joan]].
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* AwesomeMoments: [[BadassNormal Brian]] [[PyroManiac burning down Joan's house]] [[WouldHitAGirl and punching her out]], [[TakeThatScrappy then calling her out on her hypocrisy]], and finishing off with uttering his unforgettable line, [[MemeticMutation "Because I am the FBI and I can."]]
** [[TookALevelInBadass Edward splitting with Joan and finally realizing she's trouble]].
** [[TookALevelInBadass Edward splitting with Joan and finally realizing she's trouble]].
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* FunnyMoments: "O0o0o0o0o0o0o <- they are cute bubles." [[MakesAsMuchSenseInContext No, it doesn't make sense in context]].
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* MemeticBadass: Brian, the ChuckNorris of this fic.
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* MemeticBadass: Brian, the ChuckNorris Creator/ChuckNorris of this fic.
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* BlackHoleSue: Everything revolves around Joan.
* CreatorsPet: Jenny is almost as bad as [[MarySue her friend]]... [[TheWoobie until Chapter 37, that is.]]
* CreatorsPet: Jenny is almost as bad as [[MarySue her friend]]... [[TheWoobie until Chapter 37, that is.]]
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* GodModeSue: [[AuthorAvatar Joan]] in [[SpinOff Twilight World/Bible]], who is made "The Queen of Christianity".
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* JerkassSue: Joan
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* SympatheticSue: After Joan [[KickTheDog smacks]] [[TheWoobie Jenny]] and [[MurderTheHypotenuse plans to murder her]] as well as [[EnsembleDarkhorse Brian]] [[ShipSinking so he can't be paired up with Mr. Smith anymore]], we are expected to feel bad for ''her'' and wish death on these two innocent people because she lost her boyfriend. Yup.
* ThirtySuePileup: Until recently, every good character was a MarySue. Now, only [[AuthorAvatar Joan]] is.
* ThirtySuePileup: Until recently, every good character was a MarySue. Now, only [[AuthorAvatar Joan]] is.
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* RelationshipSue: Three guesses and the first two don't count.
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* RelationshipSue: Three guesses and the first two don't count.Joan
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* BlackHoleSue: Everything revolves around Joan..
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* BlackHoleSue: Everything revolves around Joan..Joan.
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* DamselScrappy: [[MarySue Joan]], [[RecycledINSPACE much like Bella]].
* DesignatedHero: [[MarySue Joan]], [[{{Jerkass}} and how.]]
* DesignatedHero: [[MarySue Joan]], [[{{Jerkass}} and how.]]
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* DamselScrappy: [[MarySue Joan]], Joan, [[RecycledINSPACE much like Bella]].
* DesignatedHero:[[MarySue Joan]], [[{{Jerkass}} Joan again (''[[{{Jerkass}} and how.]]how]]'').
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* JerkassSue: Joan, and how.
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* JerkassSue: Joan, and how.Joan
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* RelationshipSue: Joan.Three guesses and the first two don't count.
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* VillainDecay: Wait, who is [[Literature/{{Twilight}} James]] again?
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* FunnyMoments: "O0o0o0o0o0o0o <- they are cute bubles." No, it doesn't [[MakesAsMuchSenseInContext make sense in context]].
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* FunnyMoments: "O0o0o0o0o0o0o <- they are cute bubles." No, it doesn't [[MakesAsMuchSenseInContext No, it doesn't make sense in context]].
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* FunnyMoments: "O0o0o0o0o0o0o <- they are cute bubles." No, it doesn't [[ItMakesSenseInContext make sense in context]].
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* FunnyMoments: "O0o0o0o0o0o0o <- they are cute bubles." No, it doesn't [[ItMakesSenseInContext [[MakesAsMuchSenseInContext make sense in context]].
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* AcceptableTargets: Homosexuals, Jews, goths, anime fans, the Japanese, [[TakeThatCritics her critics]], [[ShiptoShipCombat Team Jacob members]]...
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* AcceptableTargets: Homosexuals, Jews, goths, anime fans, the Japanese, [[TakeThatCritics her critics]], [[ShiptoShipCombat [[ShipToShipCombat Team Jacob members]]...
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* AwesomeMoments: [[BadassNormal Brian]] [[PyroManiac burning down Joan's house]] [[WouldHitAGirl and punching her out]], [[TakeThatScrappy then calling her out on her hypocrisy]], and finishing off with uttering his unforgettable line, [[MemeticMutation "Because I am the FBI and I can."]] [[ManlyTears One tears up just thinking about it...]]
** [[TookALevelinBadass Edward splitting with Joan and finally realizing she's trouble]].
** [[TookALevelinBadass Edward splitting with Joan and finally realizing she's trouble]].
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* AwesomeMoments: [[BadassNormal Brian]] [[PyroManiac burning down Joan's house]] [[WouldHitAGirl and punching her out]], [[TakeThatScrappy then calling her out on her hypocrisy]], and finishing off with uttering his unforgettable line, [[MemeticMutation "Because I am the FBI and I can."]] [[ManlyTears One tears up just thinking about it...]]
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: The [[TakeThat revenge chapters]] come right out of nowhere, and are never mentioned again. There are also many dropped arcs, including whether [[MarySue Joan]] chose [[ShallowLoveInterest Edward or Jacob.]]
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: The [[TakeThat [[TakeThatCritics revenge chapters]] come right out of nowhere, and are never mentioned again. There are also many dropped arcs, including whether [[MarySue Joan]] chose [[ShallowLoveInterest Edward or Jacob.]]again.
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* BlackHoleSue: Everything revolves around this bitch. EVERYTHING.
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* BlackHoleSue: Everything revolves around this bitch. EVERYTHING.Joan..
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* DamselScrappy: [[MarySue Joan]], [[RecycledINSPACE much like Bella]], is always getting into trouble so [[RelationshipSue Edward]] [[WhattheHellHero can save her.]] [[SarcasmMode What a strong female she is.]]
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* DamselScrappy: [[MarySue Joan]], [[RecycledINSPACE much like Bella]], is always getting into trouble so [[RelationshipSue Edward]] [[WhattheHellHero can save her.]] [[SarcasmMode What a strong female she is.]]Bella]].
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* DieForOurShip: [[{{Yandere}} Don't get between Edward and Joan/Erin. It won't be pretty.]]
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** Firebird, [[Tropers.SkeksisGirl Skegs]], [[Tropers.PuzzleChick Pussle]], and Halohead, who are actually Lady Phoenix, Tropers/SkeksisGirl, Tropers/PuzzleChick, and Tropers/EchoFiveSeven from Twilight Sucks. Any of the other [[{{MST}} snarkers]] featured in the [[TakeThat revenge chapters]] also deserve credit.
* FamilyUnfriendlyAesop: Hey kids! It's okay to be a hypocritical antisemitic whore as long as you pay lip service to God! Also, if anyone criticizes you and actually gives you damn good advice... THEY ARE A SINNER!!!
** You know how [[PapaWolf your father]] scolded you for letting [[StalkerWithaCrush a mysterious guy sneak into your room every night]] without him knowing? [[GoodParents He's not looking out for your safety]]- he's just an [[AbusiveParent abusive]] [[INeedaFreakingDrink drunk]]!
* FamilyUnfriendlyAesop: Hey kids! It's okay to be a hypocritical antisemitic whore as long as you pay lip service to God! Also, if anyone criticizes you and actually gives you damn good advice... THEY ARE A SINNER!!!
** You know how [[PapaWolf your father]] scolded you for letting [[StalkerWithaCrush a mysterious guy sneak into your room every night]] without him knowing? [[GoodParents He's not looking out for your safety]]- he's just an [[AbusiveParent abusive]] [[INeedaFreakingDrink drunk]]!
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** Firebird, [[Tropers.SkeksisGirl Skegs]], [[Tropers.PuzzleChick Pussle]], and Halohead, who are actually Lady Phoenix, Tropers/SkeksisGirl, Tropers/PuzzleChick, and Tropers/EchoFiveSeven from Twilight Sucks. Any of the other [[{{MST}} snarkers]] featured in the [[TakeThat [[TakeThatCritics revenge chapters]] also deserve credit.
* FamilyUnfriendlyAesop: Hey kids! It's okay to be a hypocritical antisemitic whore as long as you pay lip service to God! Also, if anyone criticizes you and actually gives youdamn good advice... THEY ARE A SINNER!!!
advice, they're a sinner!
** You know how [[PapaWolf your father]] scolded you for letting [[StalkerWithaCrush a mysterious guy sneak into your room every night]] without him knowing? [[GoodParents He's not looking out for yoursafety]]- safety]], he's just an [[AbusiveParent [[AbusiveParents abusive]] [[INeedaFreakingDrink [[TheAlcoholic drunk]]!
* FamilyUnfriendlyAesop: Hey kids! It's okay to be a hypocritical antisemitic whore as long as you pay lip service to God! Also, if anyone criticizes you and actually gives you
** You know how [[PapaWolf your father]] scolded you for letting [[StalkerWithaCrush a mysterious guy sneak into your room every night]] without him knowing? [[GoodParents He's not looking out for your
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** And Edward/[[BlackBestFriend Becca]]. Heck, any pairing except [[OfficialCouple canon ones]] (except [[RunningGag Brian/Hugo]]- that has to be canon).
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* GodModeSue: [[AuthorAvatar Joan]] in [[SpinOff Twilight World/Bible]], who is made "The Queen of Christianity," [[SarcasmMode because we all know how much of a good Christian she is.]]
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* GodModeSue: [[AuthorAvatar Joan]] in [[SpinOff Twilight World/Bible]], who is made "The Queen of Christianity," [[SarcasmMode because we all know how much of a good Christian she is.]]Christianity".
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* IdiotPlot: Let's face it, this is Erin [[ADateWithRosiePalms masturbating]] over [[ShallowLoveInterest Edward]], nothing more.
** ESPECIALLY in Edward's Birthday. [[SelfInsertFic She even changes her character's name to Erin at the last second.]]
* JerkassSue: Joan. [[PrecisionFStrike Freaking]] Joan.
* MemeticBadass: Brian, the [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamina]] of this fic.
** ESPECIALLY in Edward's Birthday. [[SelfInsertFic She even changes her character's name to Erin at the last second.]]
* JerkassSue: Joan. [[PrecisionFStrike Freaking]] Joan.
* MemeticBadass: Brian, the [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamina]] of this fic.
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* IdiotPlot: Let's face it, this is Erin [[ADateWithRosiePalms masturbating]] over [[ShallowLoveInterest Edward]], jacking off]] to Edward, nothing more.
** ESPECIALLY in Edward's Birthday. [[SelfInsertFic She even changes her character's name to Erin at the last second.]]
* JerkassSue: Joan. [[PrecisionFStrike Freaking]] Joan.
Joan, and how.
* MemeticBadass: Brian, the[[TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamina]] ChuckNorris of this fic.
* MemeticBadass: Brian, the
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*** Jacob getting [[ShockandAwe electricuted to death]], [[OurSoulsareDifferent having his soul ripped out to be punched by God]], and [[FireandBrimstoneHell being thrown into Hell.]] Why? Because he is gay!
* RelationshipSue: [[ShallowLoveInterest Joan's entire reason]] for being is to hook up with Edward.
** The same could be said about Edward- he is only in the story so [[ShallowLoveInterest he can fall in love]] with [[AuthorAvatar Eri-]] [[MarySue I mean Joan]].
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: [[CreatorsPet Jenny]] [[TheWoobie after Joan treated her like crap]], and, surprisingly, [[ShallowLoveInterest Edward]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome after he told Joan he doesn't love her anymore]].
* RelationshipSue: [[ShallowLoveInterest Joan's entire reason]] for being is to hook up with Edward.
** The same could be said about Edward- he is only in the story so [[ShallowLoveInterest he can fall in love]] with [[AuthorAvatar Eri-]] [[MarySue I mean Joan]].
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: [[CreatorsPet Jenny]] [[TheWoobie after Joan treated her like crap]], and, surprisingly, [[ShallowLoveInterest Edward]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome after he told Joan he doesn't love her anymore]].
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*** Jacob getting [[ShockandAwe electricuted [[ShockAndAwe electrocuted to death]], [[OurSoulsareDifferent [[OurSoulsAreDifferent having his soul ripped out to be punched by God]], and [[FireandBrimstoneHell [[FireAndBrimstoneHell being thrown into Hell.]] Why? Because he is gay!
Hell]].
* RelationshipSue:[[ShallowLoveInterest Joan's entire reason]] for being is to hook up with Edward.
** The same could be said about Edward- he is only in the story so [[ShallowLoveInterest he can fall in love]] with [[AuthorAvatar Eri-]] [[MarySue I mean Joan]].
Joan.
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap:[[CreatorsPet Jenny]] Jenny [[TheWoobie after Joan treated her like crap]], and, and surprisingly, [[ShallowLoveInterest Edward]] [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome Edward [[MomentOfAwesome after he told Joan he doesn't love her anymore]].dumped Joan]].
* RelationshipSue:
** The same could be said about Edward- he is only in the story so [[ShallowLoveInterest he can fall in love]] with [[AuthorAvatar Eri-]] [[MarySue I mean Joan]].
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* TheScrappy: [[MarySue Joan]] and [[{{Jerkass}} Erin]]. [[SelfInsertFic Though, they are the same person...]]
* {{Shipping}}: Brian and [[{{Fannickname}} Hugo]]/Mr. Smith OTP! No matter how much Erin denies it. They are the best part of the story.
** Wasn't Jenny and Becca suggested too?
*** And Joan and Jenny.
* [[SoBadItsGood So Bad It's Sex-ah]]: Mostly, it's this.
* {{Sympathetic Sue}}: After Joan [[ArmorPiercingSlap smacks]] [[TheWoobie Jenny]] and [[MurdertheHypotenuse plans to murder her]] as well as [[EnsembleDarkhorse Brian]] [[TakeThat so he can't be paired up with Mr. Smith anymore]], we are expected to feel bad for HER and wish death on these two innocent people because she lost her boyfriend. Yup.
* ThirtySuePileup: Until recently, every good character was a {{Mary Sue}} or {{Gary Stu}}. Now, only [[AuthorAvatar Joan]] is.
* {{Shipping}}: Brian and [[{{Fannickname}} Hugo]]/Mr. Smith OTP! No matter how much Erin denies it. They are the best part of the story.
** Wasn't Jenny and Becca suggested too?
*** And Joan and Jenny.
* [[SoBadItsGood So Bad It's Sex-ah]]: Mostly, it's this.
* {{Sympathetic Sue}}: After Joan [[ArmorPiercingSlap smacks]] [[TheWoobie Jenny]] and [[MurdertheHypotenuse plans to murder her]] as well as [[EnsembleDarkhorse Brian]] [[TakeThat so he can't be paired up with Mr. Smith anymore]], we are expected to feel bad for HER and wish death on these two innocent people because she lost her boyfriend. Yup.
* ThirtySuePileup: Until recently, every good character was a {{Mary Sue}} or {{Gary Stu}}. Now, only [[AuthorAvatar Joan]] is.
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* TheScrappy: [[MarySue Joan]] and [[{{Jerkass}} Erin]]. [[SelfInsertFic Though, they are the same person...]]
[[AuthorAvatar Joan/Erin]].
* {{Shipping}}: Brian and[[{{Fannickname}} Hugo]]/Mr. Smith OTP! No matter how much Erin denies it. They are the best part of the story.
** Wasn't Jenny and Becca suggested too?
*** And Joan and Jenny.
Hugo/Mr. Smith.
*[[SoBadItsGood So Bad It's Sex-ah]]: SoBadItsGood: Mostly, it's this.
*{{Sympathetic Sue}}: SympatheticSue: After Joan [[ArmorPiercingSlap [[KickTheDog smacks]] [[TheWoobie Jenny]] and [[MurdertheHypotenuse [[MurderTheHypotenuse plans to murder her]] as well as [[EnsembleDarkhorse Brian]] [[TakeThat [[ShipSinking so he can't be paired up with Mr. Smith anymore]], we are expected to feel bad for HER ''her'' and wish death on these two innocent people because she lost her boyfriend. Yup.
* ThirtySuePileup: Until recently, every good character was a{{Mary Sue}} or {{Gary Stu}}.MarySue. Now, only [[AuthorAvatar Joan]] is.
* {{Shipping}}: Brian and
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** [[AnatomicallyImpossibleSex The guy who magically made Bella pregnant with a demon baby, obviously.]]
* {{Wangst}}: In '''''spades'''''.
--> "How could he dump me? DID he dump me? Leaving your girldriend after a talk like that I dunno. He had bean so mean... He had just leafed me becorse I was hot. It was UNFARE!!!111 [[YouFailReligiousStudiesForever I wandered if this was how Jesus had felt being beetrayd by Jewdas.]]"
* {{Warped Aesop}}: [[ShallowLoveInterest Marrying someone just because they are sex-ah.]]
** [[TrueLovesKiss True love]] happening in a matter of hours and [[ShallowLoveInterest only based on physical appearances.]]
** {{God}} [[GodModeSue makes ANYTHING possible]]... [[YouFailReligiousStudiesForever including forcing people to fall in love with you against their will]] and [[RageAgainsttheHeavens killing those you don't like!]] [[{{Hypocrite}} All you have to do is pray for their deaths/attention!]]
* TheWoobie: Jenny, who nearly had her boyfriend stolen by [[{{Jerkass}} Joan]] and got [[ArmorPiercingSlap smacked]] for supposedly wanting to steal [[ShallowLoveInterest Edward]]. [[GoodParents Mr. Smith]] could count too, considering he is supposedly [[AbusiveParents abusive]], but seems to be a nice guy who has to put up with [[MarySue Joany Sue's]] behavior.
** [[CampGay Jacob]] in [[DudeNotFunny Edward Secert.]] He is [[ShockandAwe fried by lighting]] and [[FireandBrimstoneHell thrown headfirst into Hell]] because he is a homosexual and won't permanently cut off his own finger to prove he is straight.
** [[KillerRabbit Pikachu]] in [[SpinOff Truelove Fight]]. [[InformedFlaw There were no signs of it doing anything harmful,]] [[KicktheDog yet Edward threw it up, and it never came down.]] [[DiedHappilyEverAfter Fans think it is in Heaven...]]
*** Actually, since Truelove Fight has been gaining in popularity (at least on the TS forums), the Pikachu has been elevated to something of a [[MemeticBadass memetic badass]], appearing in two fics and earning the nickname "The Snarkachu."
** Everyone who is stuck in this crapfest except [[{{Jerkass}} Erin]]/[[AuthorAvatar Joan]]. Specifically:
*** [[DieforOurShip Bella]], who was [[TheChewToy killed in]] [[SpinOff Twilight World]] for finding love, forced to have an abortion after [[YouFailBiologyForever magically becoming pregnant with James's (er,]] [[RougeAnglesofSatin Joms's]]) [[YouFailBiologyForever baby]] in [[{{SpinOff}} Bellas Baby]], and insulted by [[{{Jerkass}} Erin]] constantly.
*** [[BlackBestFriend Becca]], to quote the source material, ""I scremed in joy and ran down the hill and into Beccas car, [[{{Jerkass}} telling her that no matter how much lipstick she had on her lips would always look a bit ugly so to drop the fucking lippy and to drive to]]"
*** [[BadassNormal Brian]], who is being hunted down in Chapter 37 [[DieForOurShip to keep people from pairing him with Hugo]].
*** [[GoodParents Hugo]]... Poor Hugo. He is accused of being [[INeedAFreakingDrink an alcoholic]], [[AbusiveParents abusive]], [[WhenYouComingHomeDad too busy to see his daughter]], and an OverprotectiveDad, when in fact [[GoodParents he is shown to be caring, hardworking but still having time for his daughter, and only concerned for her safety]]. [[FanPreferredCouple He is also kept from the love of his life, Brian.]]
** Tana from [[SpinOff Edwards Birthday.]] She compliments [[ShallowLoveInterest Edward]] one time, and gets [[ArmorPiercingSlap slapped]], [[MyGirlIsASlut called a slut]], and [[MoralEventHorizon punched in the stomach by Edward.]]
* {{Wangst}}: In '''''spades'''''.
--> "How could he dump me? DID he dump me? Leaving your girldriend after a talk like that I dunno. He had bean so mean... He had just leafed me becorse I was hot. It was UNFARE!!!111 [[YouFailReligiousStudiesForever I wandered if this was how Jesus had felt being beetrayd by Jewdas.]]"
* {{Warped Aesop}}: [[ShallowLoveInterest Marrying someone just because they are sex-ah.]]
** [[TrueLovesKiss True love]] happening in a matter of hours and [[ShallowLoveInterest only based on physical appearances.]]
** {{God}} [[GodModeSue makes ANYTHING possible]]... [[YouFailReligiousStudiesForever including forcing people to fall in love with you against their will]] and [[RageAgainsttheHeavens killing those you don't like!]] [[{{Hypocrite}} All you have to do is pray for their deaths/attention!]]
* TheWoobie: Jenny, who nearly had her boyfriend stolen by [[{{Jerkass}} Joan]] and got [[ArmorPiercingSlap smacked]] for supposedly wanting to steal [[ShallowLoveInterest Edward]]. [[GoodParents Mr. Smith]] could count too, considering he is supposedly [[AbusiveParents abusive]], but seems to be a nice guy who has to put up with [[MarySue Joany Sue's]] behavior.
** [[CampGay Jacob]] in [[DudeNotFunny Edward Secert.]] He is [[ShockandAwe fried by lighting]] and [[FireandBrimstoneHell thrown headfirst into Hell]] because he is a homosexual and won't permanently cut off his own finger to prove he is straight.
** [[KillerRabbit Pikachu]] in [[SpinOff Truelove Fight]]. [[InformedFlaw There were no signs of it doing anything harmful,]] [[KicktheDog yet Edward threw it up, and it never came down.]] [[DiedHappilyEverAfter Fans think it is in Heaven...]]
*** Actually, since Truelove Fight has been gaining in popularity (at least on the TS forums), the Pikachu has been elevated to something of a [[MemeticBadass memetic badass]], appearing in two fics and earning the nickname "The Snarkachu."
** Everyone who is stuck in this crapfest except [[{{Jerkass}} Erin]]/[[AuthorAvatar Joan]]. Specifically:
*** [[DieforOurShip Bella]], who was [[TheChewToy killed in]] [[SpinOff Twilight World]] for finding love, forced to have an abortion after [[YouFailBiologyForever magically becoming pregnant with James's (er,]] [[RougeAnglesofSatin Joms's]]) [[YouFailBiologyForever baby]] in [[{{SpinOff}} Bellas Baby]], and insulted by [[{{Jerkass}} Erin]] constantly.
*** [[BlackBestFriend Becca]], to quote the source material, ""I scremed in joy and ran down the hill and into Beccas car, [[{{Jerkass}} telling her that no matter how much lipstick she had on her lips would always look a bit ugly so to drop the fucking lippy and to drive to]]"
*** [[BadassNormal Brian]], who is being hunted down in Chapter 37 [[DieForOurShip to keep people from pairing him with Hugo]].
*** [[GoodParents Hugo]]... Poor Hugo. He is accused of being [[INeedAFreakingDrink an alcoholic]], [[AbusiveParents abusive]], [[WhenYouComingHomeDad too busy to see his daughter]], and an OverprotectiveDad, when in fact [[GoodParents he is shown to be caring, hardworking but still having time for his daughter, and only concerned for her safety]]. [[FanPreferredCouple He is also kept from the love of his life, Brian.]]
** Tana from [[SpinOff Edwards Birthday.]] She compliments [[ShallowLoveInterest Edward]] one time, and gets [[ArmorPiercingSlap slapped]], [[MyGirlIsASlut called a slut]], and [[MoralEventHorizon punched in the stomach by Edward.]]
to:
--> "How could he dump me? DID he dump me? Leaving your girldriend after a talk like that I dunno. He had bean so mean... He had just leafed me becorse I was hot. It was UNFARE!!!111
** [[TrueLovesKiss True love]] happening in a matter of hours and [[ShallowLoveInterest only based on physical appearances.]]
** {{God}} [[GodModeSue makes ANYTHING possible]]... [[YouFailReligiousStudiesForever including forcing people to fall in love with you against their will]] and [[RageAgainsttheHeavens killing those you don't like!]] [[{{Hypocrite}} All you have to do is pray for their deaths/attention!]]
** [[CampGay Jacob]] in [[DudeNotFunny Edward Secert.]] He is [[ShockandAwe fried by lighting]] and [[FireandBrimstoneHell thrown headfirst into Hell]] because he is a homosexual and won't permanently cut off his own finger to prove he is straight.
** [[KillerRabbit Pikachu]] in [[SpinOff Truelove Fight]]. [[InformedFlaw There were no signs of it doing anything harmful,]] [[KicktheDog yet Edward threw it up, and it never came down.]] [[DiedHappilyEverAfter Fans think it is in Heaven...]]
*** Actually, since Truelove Fight has been gaining in popularity (at least on the TS forums), the Pikachu has been elevated to something of a [[MemeticBadass memetic badass]], appearing in two fics and earning the nickname "The Snarkachu."
**
*** [[DieforOurShip Bella]], who was [[TheChewToy killed in]] [[SpinOff Twilight World]] for finding love, forced to have an abortion after [[YouFailBiologyForever magically becoming pregnant with James's (er,]] [[RougeAnglesofSatin Joms's]]) [[YouFailBiologyForever baby]] in [[{{SpinOff}} Bellas Baby]], and insulted by [[{{Jerkass}} Erin]] constantly.
*** [[BlackBestFriend Becca]], to quote the source material, ""I scremed in joy and ran down the hill and into Beccas car, [[{{Jerkass}} telling her that no matter how much lipstick she had on her lips would always look a bit ugly so to drop the fucking lippy and to drive to]]"
*** [[BadassNormal Brian]], who is being hunted down in Chapter 37 [[DieForOurShip to keep people from pairing him with Hugo]].
*** [[GoodParents Hugo]]... Poor Hugo. He is accused of being [[INeedAFreakingDrink an alcoholic]], [[AbusiveParents abusive]], [[WhenYouComingHomeDad too busy to see his daughter]], and an OverprotectiveDad, when in fact [[GoodParents he is shown to be caring, hardworking but still having time for his daughter, and only concerned for her safety]]. [[FanPreferredCouple He is also kept from the love of his life, Brian.]]
** Tana from [[SpinOff Edwards Birthday.]] She compliments [[ShallowLoveInterest Edward]] one time, and gets [[ArmorPiercingSlap slapped]], [[MyGirlIsASlut called a slut]], and [[MoralEventHorizon punched in the stomach by Edward.]]
