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This is just a what a jerk moment, not an idiot moment given their apparent irrational hatred. It's the associates of Minato who knew of his childhood are the idiot ones


* Naruto is the son of the Fourth Hokage and the Kyuubi's previous jinchuuriki.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Those who knew this -- Sarutobi, Jiraiya and Kakashi -- to take extra special care in Naruto's upbringing and raise him. That they would at least train him better, ensure that he had better treatment in the village, and that when he was of appropriate age, inform him of his parentage to encourage him.\\
'''Instead:''' Jiraiya doesn't even associate with Naruto until he's nearly a teenager, Sarutobi hangs in the background without taking necessary measures, and Kakashi says nothing. It is through a series of contrived coincidences occur that reveal the truth to Naruto, when learning beforehand would have been '''very''' helpful.
* The Kyuubi attacked Konoha and killed many people. The Fourth Hokage heroically sacrificed himself to seal it into a newborn baby. However, the child now has no family to speak of, and should he let it, [[SuperPoweredEvilSide the beast will take over.]]\\
'''You'd Expect:''' The people of the village to raise the child positively, and keep loving people around him, if only to monitor him. Because the last thing you need is someone with a SuperPoweredEvilSide with mental issues.\\
'''Instead:''' They are outright hostile towards him for something he ''didn't do'', leave him on his own with no real adult supervision in his life, and encourage their children to do the same. All without ever telling him why.\\
'''Result:''' Naruto lives the first twelve years of his life in isolation and depression and only through the sheer luck that he had the strength of character as a MessianicArchetype to move on from their mistreatment of him did Konoha dodge the bullet of a walking nuclear bomb with the emotional stability of an Uchiha turning their village into a speck of dust out of despair and anger.



'''You'd Expect:''' He (lies and) tells them that the Kyuubi died with Fourth Hokage and Naruto is Foutth Hokage's son asking the village to help raise their hero's son.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' He (lies and) tells them that the Kyuubi died with Fourth Hokage and Naruto is Foutth Fourth Hokage's son asking the village to help raise their hero's son.\\



* Naruto is the son of both the Fourth Hokage and the Kyuubi's previous Jinchuuriki and as a result of being the current container of the Nine-Tailed Fox, he ended up being ostracized and distrusted by the majority of the villagers.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Those who knew this -- Sarutobi, Jiraiya and Kakashi -- would take extra special care in Naruto's upbringing and raise him. That they would at least train him better, ensure that he had better treatment in the village, and that when he was of appropriate age, inform him of his parentage and status to encourage him to use his powers for good and prove himself to the rest of the villagers.\\
'''Instead:''' Jiraiya doesn't even associate with Naruto until he's nearly a teenager, Sarutobi hangs in the background without taking necessary measures, and Kakashi says nothing. Konoha is very lucky that Iruka is around to take care of Naruto otherwise he would have become a psychotic killer like Sasuke of Gaara.



* A few years before the start of the story, the elders of Konoha suspect of the Uchihas being behind the Kyuubi's rampage, as they know the Sharingan has the ability to control the bijuus. While it WAS an Uchiha who did it, it was one who was at that point presumed dead, and the rest of the clan is not aware of this. \\

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* A few years before the start of the story, the elders of Konoha suspect of the Uchihas being behind the Kyuubi's rampage, as they know the Sharingan has the ability to control the bijuus. While it WAS an Uchiha who did it, it was one who was at that point presumed dead, and the rest of the clan is not aware of this. \\
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'''Correction:'''Naruto and Sasuke are able to seal Madara, Sasuke says to Naruto "Use the Jutsu the Sage of Six Paths gave you"(Chapter 674, Page 15), it's the original way Kishimoto was going to have Team 7 beat Madara but then switched the final villain to Kaguya.
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* Tobi comes after Konan to retrieve the Rinnegan eyes, as stated above. Because Konan distrusted Tobi anyway, she had done her research on him. She has figured out that his intangibility lasts for 5 minutes, and was ready with explosive paper tags that would explode for 10 minutes. \\
'''You'd Expect:''' Konan would anticipate that her [[ASimplePlan simple plan]] may not work as expected, or that Tobi may have other powers besides the one she had figured out. Hence, she would have a backup plan or a followup attack ready in case the explosions fail to kill Tobi as she intended. Or at the least, she would start the explosions without giving Tobi any warning.\\
'''Instead''': She [[ExplainingYourPowersToTheEnemy explains in complete detail]] exactly what she has figured out about Tobi's intangibility and how long her explosions would last before starting the explosions. \\
'''Result''': Tobi uses a disposable sharingan to start [[RealityWarper Izanagi]] right away. He escapes from the explosions losing only the disposable eye, which he soon replaces anyway with the Rinnegan that he recovers. \\
'''Additionally''': If Konan hadn't told him how long the explosions would last, Tobi would have likely started evading the explosions using his intangibility rather than Izanagi (because the Izanagi costs the eye using it and drains a lot of chakra). He would be forced to ''switch'' to Izanagi midway through the explosions, during which he would have to materialize, and Konan could have used that opening to attack him. Or she could have even caught him off-guard by saying the explosions would last for 6 minutes (for example), or trigger ''two'' rounds of 5-minute explosions with a brief pause in between. Keeping Tobi guessing would have given many more openings for followup attacks. Even though Konan didn't know about the Izanagi, revealing her entire plan upfront with no backup plan was pretty stupid.
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* Kabuto revives Deidara. Whose ultimate technique is pretty much a nuclear explosion.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Have Deidara use it immediately. As a bonus, if he can convince Tobi, have Tobi teleport to the Shinobi Alliance HQ and summon Deidara there and nuke them immediately. If Kabuto was feeling sadistic, he can have Deidara teleported and nuke Konoha and the 4 other villages or wherever the innocents were hiding. \\
'''Instead:''' Deidara uses his common techniques and resorts to nuking himself only when he's captured. He's restrained before he can use that technique again.



'''Instead:''' Instead, he turns off the Preta Path ability thus enabling him to be blindsided by Itachi in [[PowerArmor Susano'o]], and Naruto and Bee get freed. To add insult to injury, he has Nagato use Chibaku Tensei and just ''stands there'' instead of you know, summoning another bird or one of the Rams or Rhinos in his disposal. He doesn't even keep the Preta Path ability up for the slim chance that Chibaku Tensei gets destroyed, and thus, Nagato gets sealed. Granted, Kabuto probably wasn't aware that the Chibaku Tensei could be stopped or avoided, but he was facing three very crafty ninja; you'd think he'd be more [[CombatPragmatist pragmatic]].

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'''Instead:''' Instead, he turns off the Preta Path ability thus enabling him to be blindsided by Itachi in [[PowerArmor Susano'o]], and Naruto and Bee get freed. To add insult to injury, he has Nagato use Chibaku Tensei and just ''stands there'' instead of you know, summoning another bird or one of the Rams or Rhinos in his disposal. He doesn't even keep the Preta Path ability up for the slim chance that Chibaku Tensei gets destroyed, and thus, Nagato gets sealed. Granted, Kabuto probably wasn't aware that the Chibaku Tensei could be stopped or avoided, but he was facing three very crafty ninja; you'd think he'd be more [[CombatPragmatist pragmatic]]. \\
'''Worse Still :''' He also could've just used [[OneHitKill Human Path]] to remove Naruto and Bee's souls killing them. Then wait for the Eight Tails and Nine Tails to be revived to capture them.
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'''Result:''' Fourth Shinobi World War and Tobi kills Konan and takes the Rinnegan back.

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'''Result:''' Fourth Shinobi World War and Tobi kills Konan and takes the Rinnegan back.\\
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'''Worse Still:''' Konan was already distrusting Tobi, that's why she prepared the lake made up of explosive tags. Why she didn't tell them anything on how to defeat Tobi is a mystery. \\

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'''Worse Still:''' Konan was already distrusting Tobi, that's why she prepared the lake made up of explosive tags. Why she didn't tell them anything on how to defeat Tobi is a mystery. \\



'''Result:''' She loses the fight against Obito, Obito gains the rinnengan eyes. \\

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'''Result:''' She loses the fight against Obito, Obito gains the rinnengan eyes. \\
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'''Worse Still:''' Konan was already distrusting Tobi, that's why she prepared the lake made up of explosive tags. Why she didn't tell them anything on how to defeat Tobi is a mystery. \\
* Nagato is dead and Konan defects from Akatsuki. Konan has Nagato's corpse with the Rinnengan eyes. Konan also knows Tobi will come back for those eyes.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Konan destroy the eyes. Even if she couldn't do it, she could just remove the eyes, and give it to someone else like Naruto. \\
'''Instead:''' She keeps the eyes and the body in a shrine somewhere. \\
'''Result:''' She loses the fight against Obito, Obito gains the rinnengan eyes. \\
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** Naruto is framed for attempting to assassinate a number of important ninja from various nations, including the Raikage himself. Tsunade knows that Naruto's innocent, but decides to send him to Blood Prison, due to the fact that there's a MacGuffin there that Konoha wants destroyed.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Tsunade to assure Naruto that she knows that he's not guilty, and give him a mission to play along with the accusations, and go to Blood Prison to destroy the MacGuffin. It's not like he'll mind such a mission, given his patriotism.\\

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** Naruto is framed for attempting to assassinate a number of important ninja from various nations, including the Raikage himself. Tsunade knows that Naruto's innocent, but decides to send him to Blood Prison, Prison due to the fact that there's a MacGuffin there that Konoha wants destroyed.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Tsunade to assure Naruto that she knows that he's not guilty, and give him a mission to play along with the accusations, and go to Blood Prison to destroy the MacGuffin. It's not like he'll mind such a mission, given his patriotism.mission.\\
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'''Instead:''' He resurrects of all those whom he killed, not having told anything important to Naruto and just dies. Konan also nothing tells Naruto and decides to deal with Tobi by herself.\\

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'''Instead:''' He resurrects of all those whom he killed, not having told anything important to Naruto and just dies. Konan also nothing tells Naruto nothing and decides to deal with Tobi by herself.\\
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'''Or You'd Expect''': Her to just...you know...leave. They're already trapped in an alternate dimension, with no way of getting back, so the only thing standing in her way of killing everyone in the world is the Kages, who aren't anywhere near her level.\\

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'''Or You'd Expect''': Her to just...you know...leave. They're already trapped in an alternate dimension, with no way of getting back, so the only thing standing in her way of killing turning everyone in the world into White Zetsus is the Kages, Hokages, who aren't anywhere near her level.\\
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* Madara overhears a conversation between Hashirama and Tobirama, in which it is revealed that Hashirama will be elected as the first Hokage and that nobody trusts Madara.\\

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* Madara overhears a conversation between Hashirama and Tobirama, in which it is revealed that Hashirama will be elected as the first First Hokage and that nobody trusts Madara.\\



'''Instead:''' Madara decides that the peace between Uchiha and Senju is impossible, then makes a nonsensical warning to his clan to leave the village (which they understandably reject) and later the dedicates all his time to studying the Uchiha stone tablet leading to the following moment..

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'''Instead:''' Madara decides that the peace between Uchiha and Senju is impossible, then makes a nonsensical warning to his clan to leave the village (which they understandably reject) and later the dedicates all his time to studying the Uchiha stone tablet leading to the following moment..



* Twenty years ago Rin is kidnapped by the Mist and the Three Tails is planted within her her, and she's "chased" back to Konoha in the hopes that the three tails would bust out and wreck up the joint when she arrived.\\

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* Twenty years ago Rin is kidnapped by the Mist Kirigakure and the Three Tails Sanbi is planted within her her, and she's "chased" back to Konoha in the hopes that the three tails Sanbi would bust out and wreck up the joint when she arrived.\\



** In her defense, As Madara later revealed, Rin didn't really have a choice, as she was being controlled by Madara. Same goes for her pursuers.
* Kushina is the jinchuuriki of the Nine-Tails. When she gives birth, the seal holding it will weaken.\\

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** In her defense, As as Madara later revealed, Rin didn't really have a choice, as she was being controlled by Madara. Same goes for her pursuers.
* Kushina is the jinchuuriki of the Nine-Tails.Kyuubi. When she gives birth, the seal holding it will weaken.\\



* Naruto is the son of the 4th Hokage and the Kyuubi's previous jinchuuriki.\\

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* Naruto is the son of the 4th Fourth Hokage and the Kyuubi's previous jinchuuriki.\\



'''Result:''' Naruto lives the first twelve years of his life in isolation and depression and only through the sheer luck that he had the strength of character as a MessianicArchetype to move on from their mistreatment of him did the Leaf Village dodge the bullet of a walking nuclear bomb with the emotional stability of an Uchiha turning their village into a speck of dust out of despair and anger.
* Sarutobi has to break the news of what happened to the Kyuubi and 4th Hokage to the village.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' He (lies and) tells them that the Kyuubi died with 4th Hokage and Naruto is 4th Hokage's son asking the village to help raise their hero's son.\\
'''Instead:''' He tells them the truth (except 4th Hokage's son part), forbids people to talk about it and then does nothing as Naruto experiences the worst childhood ever. Even worse, he does nothing to help make Naruto's life better yet has the gall to feel guilty about it.
* Gaara's father needs to insure that he has control over the Shukaku to make sure that he won't lose control of him.\\

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'''Result:''' Naruto lives the first twelve years of his life in isolation and depression and only through the sheer luck that he had the strength of character as a MessianicArchetype to move on from their mistreatment of him did the Leaf Village Konoha dodge the bullet of a walking nuclear bomb with the emotional stability of an Uchiha turning their village into a speck of dust out of despair and anger.
* Sarutobi has to break the news of what happened to the Kyuubi and 4th Fourth Hokage to the village.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' He (lies and) tells them that the Kyuubi died with 4th Fourth Hokage and Naruto is 4th Foutth Hokage's son asking the village to help raise their hero's son.\\
'''Instead:''' He tells them the truth (except 4th Fourth Hokage's son part), forbids people to talk about it and then does nothing as Naruto experiences the worst childhood ever. Even worse, he does nothing to help make Naruto's life better yet has the gall to feel guilty about it.
* Gaara's father Rasa needs to insure that he has control over the Shukaku to make sure that he won't lose control of him.\\



* Itachi Uchiha was given a mission to wipe out the whole of the Uchiha Clan, to prevent them starting a civil war. Itachi agrees, but is unwilling to kill his beloved little brother, Sasuke. He also wants to ensure Sasuke's survival and dispel the Uchiha's negative reputation it gained following the Nine-Tails attack.\\

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* Itachi Uchiha was given a mission to wipe out the whole of the Uchiha Clan, to prevent them starting a civil war. Itachi agrees, but is unwilling to kill his beloved little brother, Sasuke. He also wants to ensure Sasuke's survival and dispel the Uchiha's negative reputation it gained following the Nine-Tails Kyuubi’s attack.\\



'''Result:''' In the end, the destruction of the entire clan brought a strong weakening of the military power of Konoha, allowed Tobi acquire a large number of Sharingans in his laboratory and also acquire another member of the Akatsuki for sealing Tailed Beasts. Itachi's scheme with Sasuke ends up working [[GoneHorriblyRight a little too well]], before [[GoneHorriblyWrong failing completely]]: In order to become strong enough to kill Itachi, Sasuke ends up defecting from Konoha to Orochimaru, a guy who wants to possess him for his eyes. And Sasuke happily embraces the possibility of this happening if it would help him get his revenge. When Sasuke does kill Itachi, he's taken into the custody of Tobi, who explains the truth of what Itachi was up to, causing Sasuke to want to [[DisproportionateRetribution destroy]] [[MisplacedRetribution the whole of Konoha]].

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'''Result:''' In the end, the destruction of the entire clan brought a strong weakening of the military power of Konoha, allowed Tobi to acquire a large number of Sharingans in his laboratory and also acquire another member of the Akatsuki for sealing Tailed Beasts. Itachi's scheme with Sasuke ends up working [[GoneHorriblyRight a little too well]], before [[GoneHorriblyWrong failing completely]]: In order to become strong enough to kill Itachi, Sasuke ends up defecting from Konoha to Orochimaru, a guy who wants to possess him for his eyes. And Sasuke happily embraces the possibility of this happening if it would help him get his revenge. When Sasuke does kill Itachi, he's taken into the custody of Tobi, who explains the truth of what Itachi was up to, causing Sasuke to want to [[DisproportionateRetribution destroy]] [[MisplacedRetribution the whole of Konoha]].



* Even Jiraya has another moment of idiocy in this scene after he arrives just in time to stop the Akatsuki duo from capturing Naruto. Starting when Sasuke demands that he wants to fight Itachi himself.\\

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* Even Jiraya Jiraiya has another moment of idiocy in this scene after he arrives just in time to stop the Akatsuki duo from capturing Naruto. Starting when Sasuke demands that he wants to fight Itachi himself.\\



* The {{filler}}s did this with Neji in the Hoshikagure Arc. BigBad Akahoshi hires the heroes to protect the village's secret weapon, but then takes measures to recover it himself, then declares them enemies of the Hidden Star Village, in front of a large crowd because they know of their motives. In the finale, everybody comes together, Akahoshi's plan to mutate the children of the village with the power of the meteorite into an army that will help him conquer the other nations is exposed, and he decides to use the meteor by himself to slaughter his own people and the Leaf genin present.\\

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* The {{filler}}s did this with Neji in the Hoshikagure Arc. BigBad Akahoshi hires the heroes to protect the village's secret weapon, but then takes measures to recover it himself, then declares them enemies of the Hidden Star Village, Hoshigakure, in front of a large crowd because they know of their motives. In the finale, everybody comes together, Akahoshi's plan to mutate the children of the village with the power of the meteorite into an army that will help him conquer the other nations is exposed, and he decides to use the meteor by himself to slaughter his own people and the Leaf genin present.\\



'''Instead:''' He refuses to stay and urges Menma and Naruto to carry on with the mission, even after Menma tells him that helping the villagers might trigger some of his memories and refuses to even look into any possible connection between Menma, the village, the attackers and the man who attacked the leaf village earlier, effectively defying the Hokage's orders because of a minor technicality.

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'''Instead:''' He refuses to stay and urges Menma and Naruto to carry on with the mission, even after Menma tells him that helping the villagers might trigger some of his memories and refuses to even look into any possible connection between Menma, the village, the attackers and the man who attacked the leaf village Konoha earlier, effectively defying the Hokage's orders because of a minor technicality.



* The deaths of Nagato's parents themselves are very stupid and senseless. Two Leaf shinobi enter their house unannounced looking for essentials and Nagato's dad picks up a weapon to defend himself. The lights are off and no one can see clearly.\\

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* The deaths of Nagato's parents themselves are very stupid and senseless. Two Leaf Konoha shinobi enter their house unannounced looking for essentials and Nagato's dad picks up a weapon to defend himself. The lights are off and no one can see clearly.\\



'''Instead:''' Nagato's dad is so paranoid about shinobi in general during the war that he takes leave of his senses: he pulls a LeeroyJenkins and bum rushes one of the shinobi, not even so much as speaking to them to make them ease their guard. In fact, he screams angrily. Yeah, like ''that's'' gonna make you look harmless and civilian. The mother says and does nothing to stop him; in fact, had the mother taken the lead and been the one to do the above, in an earnest and maternal voice of protection, the Leaf Shinobi might have been even more inclined and convinced to sympathize and lower their guards and be friendly.\\
'''Result:''' The Leaf shinobi he attacks easily outmaneuvers and slays Nagato's dad, thinking he's an enemy. Then, Nagato's mom is immediately mistaken for a subordinate/partner and slain shielding her son, who neither shinobi could see in the dark. Nagato is orphanized, kills the Leaf as well in a fit of anguish, and set onto the spiraling path of becoming a jaded antagonistic figure who will ultimately die himself because he let being a victim define his life. Neither father nor mother nor son knew well enough to play nice and more tolerant and accepting of things and cool-headed when death was on the line. Nope, they just jumped to conclusions, and as such, got their tickets punched prematurely. All in all, five dead, none of whom had to die.

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'''Instead:''' Nagato's dad is so paranoid about shinobi in general during the war that he takes leave of his senses: he pulls a LeeroyJenkins and bum rushes one of the shinobi, not even so much as speaking to them to make them ease their guard. In fact, he screams angrily. Yeah, like ''that's'' gonna make you look harmless and civilian. The mother says and does nothing to stop him; in fact, had the mother taken the lead and been the one to do the above, in an earnest and maternal voice of protection, the Leaf Konoh Shinobi might have been even more inclined and convinced to sympathize and lower their guards and be friendly.\\
'''Result:''' The Leaf shinobi he attacks easily outmaneuvers and slays Nagato's dad, thinking he's an enemy. Then, Nagato's mom is immediately mistaken for a subordinate/partner and slain shielding her son, who neither shinobi could see in the dark. Nagato is orphanized, kills the Leaf Konoha Shinobi as well in a fit of anguish, and set onto the spiraling path of becoming a jaded antagonistic figure who will ultimately die himself because he let being a victim define his life. Neither father nor mother nor son knew well enough to play nice and more tolerant and accepting of things and cool-headed when death was on the line. Nope, they just jumped to conclusions, and as such, got their tickets punched prematurely. All in all, five dead, none of whom had to die.



'''Instead:''' He resurrects of all those whom he killed, not having told anything important Naruto and just dies. Konan also nothing tells Naruto and decides to deal with Tobi by herself.\\

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'''Instead:''' He resurrects of all those whom he killed, not having told anything important to Naruto and just dies. Konan also nothing tells Naruto and decides to deal with Tobi by herself.\\



* Sakura has resolved to kill Sasuke herself, and is travelling to his location with Kiba, Akamaru, Sai and Lee. Unbeknownst to the three of them, Sakura has come up with her own plan to take Sasuke out.\\

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* Sakura has resolved to kill Sasuke herself, and is travelling traveling to his location with Kiba, Akamaru, Sai and Lee. Unbeknownst to the three of them, Sakura has come up with her own plan to take Sasuke out.\\



* Even more anime {{filler}}. While Naruto's travelling to the Land of Lightning, a gigantic eagle kidnaps Guy, who's on the journey as part of Naruto's escort. The rest of the group tracks the eagle to an island, and go ashore to search for Guy. Naruto offers to use Sage Mode's AuraVision to try and find him.\\

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* Even more anime {{filler}}. While Naruto's travelling traveling to the Land of Lightning, a gigantic eagle kidnaps Guy, who's on the journey as part of Naruto's escort. The rest of the group tracks the eagle to an island, and go ashore to search for Guy. Naruto offers to use Sage Mode's AuraVision to try and find him.\\



'''The Result:''' The Bijuu get their asses handed to them in short order by Madara and are chained by the Mazou, about to be dragged in. And worse, even ''Naruto and B are chained'', and thus, Kurama and Gyuuki are extracted.

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'''The Result:''' The Bijuu get their asses handed to them in short order by Madara and are chained by the Mazou, about to be dragged in. And worse, even ''Naruto and B are chained'', and thus, Kurama and Gyuuki Gyuki are extracted.



'''You'd Expect:''' Madara will try to take his eye immediately because anybody at the time could to understand that Obito not his ally, since Obito '''himself''' had said him that he had never considered his as ally and also betrayed him when he became the Ten Tails Jinchuuriki. Also Madara has just forced Obito to resurrect him through a jutsu which kills the user and any sensible person would understand that Obito will be displeased by this.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' Madara will try to take his eye immediately because anybody at the time could to understand that Obito is not his ally, since Obito '''himself''' had said him that he had never considered his as ally and also betrayed him when he became the Ten Tails Jinchuuriki. Also Madara has just forced Obito to resurrect him through a jutsu which kills the user and any sensible person would understand that Obito will be displeased by this.\\



'''Result:''' Obito plunges his hand through Madara's chest and taking back Yin Kurama and a portion of Shukaku's and Gyuki's chakra (that Naruto is currently missing).

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'''Result:''' Obito plunges his hand through Madara's chest and taking takes back Yin Kurama and a portion of Shukaku's and Gyuki's chakra (that Naruto is currently missing).



* Madara manipulated the Mist Shinobi to seal the Three-Tails inside of Rin in order to use her as a bomb against the Leaf Village, planning for the despair over Rin's death at the hands of Kakashi to turn Obito over to the dark side. Then when Obito is in the process of a HeelFaceTurn, Madara attempts to remove his eye.\\

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* Madara manipulated the Mist Kiri Shinobi to seal the Three-Tails Sanbi inside of Rin in order to use her as a bomb against the Leaf Village, Konoha, planning for the despair over Rin's death at the hands of Kakashi to turn Obito over to the dark side. Then when Obito is in the process of a HeelFaceTurn, Madara attempts to remove his eye.\\



'''Instead''': Sasuke wants to rule the world as a shadow guardian. Someone not chosen by people, but someone who bears people's hate without complaining. He'll do Judgements and Executions himself and bear the hatred of all the people towards him. That way the five great countries will be united. But he wants to kill the Bijuus and the five Kages trapped in the Eternal Tsukuyomi and Naruto too since he has the chakra of all the Bijuus. It's his way of preventing the past from interfering.\\

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'''Instead''': Sasuke wants to rule the world as a shadow guardian. Someone not chosen by the people, but someone who bears the people's hate without complaining. He'll do Judgements and Executions himself and bear the hatred of all the people towards him. That way the five great countries will be united. But he wants to kill the Bijuus and the five Kages trapped in the Eternal Tsukuyomi and Naruto too since he has the chakra of all the Bijuus. It's his way of preventing the past from interfering.\\



'''Or You'd Expect''': Him to tell Naruto, who he is conversing with simultaneously, or after the defeat of Kaguya when he shows up with the kage, that Sasuke is a nutjob and shouldn't be trusted because he plans to destroy the ninja world and rule it through hatred, so Naruto at least has a heads up to Sasuke's end goal and can try to talk some sense into him before the final showdown. Or, failing that, foreknowledge of the information would allow the Hokage + Naruto + The Tailed Beasts to lay the smackdown on Sasuke before the edo tensei is released.\\
'''Instead''': ...He doesn't say one word about it until Sasuke makes the first move, choosing instead to spend his short time left helping the Hokage pass on and preaching about family and ninja, so Naruto and the others are completely blindsided by Sasuke's betrayal which allows him to catch the Tailed Beasts like Pokémon and force Naruto into a one-on-one fight that costs them both an arm.

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'''Or You'd Expect''': Him to tell Naruto, who he is conversing with simultaneously, or after the defeat of Kaguya when he shows up with the kage, that Sasuke is a nutjob and shouldn't be trusted because he plans to destroy the ninja world and rule it through hatred, so Naruto at least has a heads up to Sasuke's end goal and can try to talk some sense into him before the final showdown. Or, failing that, foreknowledge of the information would allow the Hokage + Naruto + The Tailed Beasts Bijuu to lay the smackdown on Sasuke before the edo tensei Edo Tensei is released.\\
'''Instead''': ...He doesn't say one word about it until Sasuke makes the first move, choosing instead to spend his short time left helping the Hokage pass on and preaching about family and ninja, so Naruto and the others are completely blindsided by Sasuke's betrayal which allows him to catch the Tailed Beasts Bijuu like Pokémon and force Naruto into a one-on-one fight that costs them both an arm.



'''You'd Expect:''' That at least 1 Konoha citizen recognize the similarity and realize that he is Minato's son.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' That at least 1 one Konoha citizen recognize the similarity and realize that he is Minato's son.\\
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'''Instead:''' He stabs both Danzo ''and'' Karin into their heart, thus robbing him of a valuable medical ninja and if Karin did not succumb to her own idiocy later, she would have outright give up and move on from him.

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'''Instead:''' He stabs both Danzo ''and'' Karin into their heart, thus robbing him of a valuable medical ninja and if Karin did not succumb to her own idiocy later, she would have outright give given up and move moved on from him.
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'''Instead:''' Nagato's dad is so paranoid about shinobi in general during the war that he takes leave of his senses: he pulls a LeeroyJenkins and bum rushes one of the shinobi, not even so much as speaking to them to make them ease their guard. In fact, he screams angrily. Yeah, like ''that's'' gonna make you look harmless and civilian.\\
'''Result:''' The Leaf shinobi he attacks easily outmaneuvers and slays Nagato's dad, thinking he's an enemy. Then, Nagato's mom is immediately mistaken for a subordinate/partner and slain shielding her son, who neither shinobi could see in the dark. Nagato is orphanized and set onto the spiraling path of becoming a jaded antagonistic figure who will ultimately die himself because he let being a victim define his life. Neither father nor mother nor son knew well enough to play nice and more tolerant and accepting of things and cool-headed when death was on the line. Nope, they just jumped to conclusions, and as such, got their tickets punched prematurely.

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'''Instead:''' Nagato's dad is so paranoid about shinobi in general during the war that he takes leave of his senses: he pulls a LeeroyJenkins and bum rushes one of the shinobi, not even so much as speaking to them to make them ease their guard. In fact, he screams angrily. Yeah, like ''that's'' gonna make you look harmless and civilian. The mother says and does nothing to stop him; in fact, had the mother taken the lead and been the one to do the above, in an earnest and maternal voice of protection, the Leaf Shinobi might have been even more inclined and convinced to sympathize and lower their guards and be friendly.\\
'''Result:''' The Leaf shinobi he attacks easily outmaneuvers and slays Nagato's dad, thinking he's an enemy. Then, Nagato's mom is immediately mistaken for a subordinate/partner and slain shielding her son, who neither shinobi could see in the dark. Nagato is orphanized orphanized, kills the Leaf as well in a fit of anguish, and set onto the spiraling path of becoming a jaded antagonistic figure who will ultimately die himself because he let being a victim define his life. Neither father nor mother nor son knew well enough to play nice and more tolerant and accepting of things and cool-headed when death was on the line. Nope, they just jumped to conclusions, and as such, got their tickets punched prematurely. All in all, five dead, none of whom had to die.
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'''Result:''' The Leaf shinobi he attacks easily outmaneuvers and slays Nagato's dad, thinking he's an enemy. Then, Nagato's mom is immediately mistaken for a subordinate/partner and slain shielding her son, who neither shinobi could see in the dark. Nagato is orphanized and set onto the spiraling path of becoming a jaded antagonistic figure who will ultimately die himself because he let being a victim define his life. Neither father nor mother nor son knew well enough to play nice and more tolerant and blase when death was on the line.

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'''Result:''' The Leaf shinobi he attacks easily outmaneuvers and slays Nagato's dad, thinking he's an enemy. Then, Nagato's mom is immediately mistaken for a subordinate/partner and slain shielding her son, who neither shinobi could see in the dark. Nagato is orphanized and set onto the spiraling path of becoming a jaded antagonistic figure who will ultimately die himself because he let being a victim define his life. Neither father nor mother nor son knew well enough to play nice and more tolerant and blase accepting of things and cool-headed when death was on the line.line. Nope, they just jumped to conclusions, and as such, got their tickets punched prematurely.
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* The deaths of Nagato's parents themselves are very stupid and senseless. Two Leaf shinobi enter their house unannounced looking for essentials and Nagato's dad picks up a weapon to defend himself. The lights are off and no one can see clearly.
'''You'd Expect:''' Nagato's dad to turn the lights on and tell the shinobi that they have actually not entered an abandoned house but instead entered an occupied house filled with civilians and that he is a dad with a wife and young son and mean them no harm and will provide them food and shelter if they need it and he is willing to peacefully let them be.
'''Instead:''' Nagato's dad is so paranoid about shinobi in general during the war that he takes leave of his senses: he pulls a LeeroyJenkins and bum rushes one of the shinobi, not even so much as speaking to them to make them ease their guard. In fact, he screams angrily. Yeah, like ''that's'' gonna make you look harmless and civilian.
'''Result:''' The Leaf shinobi he attacks easily outmaneuvers and slays Nagato's dad, thinking he's an enemy. Then, Nagato's mom is immediately mistaken for a subordinate/partner and slain shielding her son, who neither shinobi could see in the dark. Nagato is orphanized and set onto the spiraling path of becoming a jaded antagonistic figure who will ultimately die himself because he let being a victim define his life.

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* The deaths of Nagato's parents themselves are very stupid and senseless. Two Leaf shinobi enter their house unannounced looking for essentials and Nagato's dad picks up a weapon to defend himself. The lights are off and no one can see clearly.
clearly.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Nagato's dad to cautiously turn the lights on or yell something like "Help us, please!" that is definitely not hostile and conducive to a more peaceful and inviting and approachable reaction and tell the shinobi that they have actually not entered an abandoned house but instead entered an occupied house filled with civilians and that he is a dad with a wife and young son and mean them no harm and will provide them food and shelter if they need it and he is willing to peacefully let them be.
be.\\
'''Instead:''' Nagato's dad is so paranoid about shinobi in general during the war that he takes leave of his senses: he pulls a LeeroyJenkins and bum rushes one of the shinobi, not even so much as speaking to them to make them ease their guard. In fact, he screams angrily. Yeah, like ''that's'' gonna make you look harmless and civilian.
civilian.\\
'''Result:''' The Leaf shinobi he attacks easily outmaneuvers and slays Nagato's dad, thinking he's an enemy. Then, Nagato's mom is immediately mistaken for a subordinate/partner and slain shielding her son, who neither shinobi could see in the dark. Nagato is orphanized and set onto the spiraling path of becoming a jaded antagonistic figure who will ultimately die himself because he let being a victim define his life. Neither father nor mother nor son knew well enough to play nice and more tolerant and blase when death was on the line.
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* The deaths of Nagato's parents themselves are very stupid and senseless. Two Leaf shinobi enter their house unannounced looking for essentials and Nagato's dad picks up a weapon to defend himself. The lights are off and no one can see clearly.
'''You'd Expect:''' Nagato's dad to turn the lights on and tell the shinobi that they have actually not entered an abandoned house but instead entered an occupied house filled with civilians and that he is a dad with a wife and young son and mean them no harm and will provide them food and shelter if they need it and he is willing to peacefully let them be.
'''Instead:''' Nagato's dad is so paranoid about shinobi in general during the war that he takes leave of his senses: he pulls a LeeroyJenkins and bum rushes one of the shinobi, not even so much as speaking to them to make them ease their guard. In fact, he screams angrily. Yeah, like ''that's'' gonna make you look harmless and civilian.
'''Result:''' The Leaf shinobi he attacks easily outmaneuvers and slays Nagato's dad, thinking he's an enemy. Then, Nagato's mom is immediately mistaken for a subordinate/partner and slain shielding her son, who neither shinobi could see in the dark. Nagato is orphanized and set onto the spiraling path of becoming a jaded antagonistic figure who will ultimately die himself because he let being a victim define his life.
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* Madara overheard a conversation between Hashirama and Tobirama, in which it is revealed that Hashirama will elected as the first Hokage and that nobody trusts Madara.\\

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* Madara overheard overhears a conversation between Hashirama and Tobirama, in which it is revealed that Hashirama will be elected as the first Hokage and that nobody trusts Madara.\\



'''Instead:''' Madara decides that the peace between Uchiha and Senju impossible, then makes a nonsensical warning to his clan to leave the village (which they understandably reject) and later the dedicated all his time to studying the Uchiha stone tablet leading to the following one.

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'''Instead:''' Madara decides that the peace between Uchiha and Senju is impossible, then makes a nonsensical warning to his clan to leave the village (which they understandably reject) and later the dedicated dedicates all his time to studying the Uchiha stone tablet leading to the following one.moment..



'''Instead:''' He tried to do the same thing that his ancestor did, to put an end to all wars.\\

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'''Instead:''' He tried tries to do the same thing that his ancestor did, to put an end to all wars.\\
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* Tobi can teleport wherever he wants on a whim without anyone having any way of actually knowing he's done so until he's there, and them similarly having no actual way of stopping him.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Tobi to appear whenever Naruto leaves the village, ever, and/or is either alone or with only a few people who aren't expecting immediate danger, and try and capture him and replace him with a Zetsu. Hell, Naruto's childhood would have been a perfect time to try it (remember, Naruto was alone most of his life, Iruka and others acknowledging him is a major part of his story arc). Then he can either extract the Kyuubi to use as a weapon, or hold him until the Kyuubi is necessary. Granted, he might not have known what happened to the Kyuubi after his last intrusion into Konoha, but he could have easily infiltrated the village and kept his ears out for any information on the fox.\\
'''Instead:''' Tobi just leaves Naruto alone for 13 years instead of actually trying to capture him. Then sends Itachi and Kisame to try once, then ignores him for 3+ years, particularly while he's out in the world with only Jiraiya to protect him.\\
'''Addendum:''' Obviously this applies to the other 8 Jinchuriki as well, making Akatsuki ultimately totally superfluous in nearly every possible way, aside from unsealing the tailed beasts.

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'''Instead:''' [[TooDumbToLive He uses the uber-move]]. To make matters worse, his opponent, Dosu, is unaffected, thanks to Zaku's intervention. Ultimately, Lee's actions become a [[StupidSacrifice stupid sacrifice]].
** In his defense, though, he wasn't fully aware of Zaku's abilities and might not have been able to predict that.

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'''Instead:''' [[TooDumbToLive He uses the uber-move]]. To make matters worse, his opponent, Dosu, is unaffected, thanks to Zaku's intervention. Ultimately, Lee's actions become a [[StupidSacrifice stupid sacrifice]].
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sacrifice]]. In his defense, though, he wasn't fully aware of Zaku's abilities and might not have been able to predict that.
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'''Instead''': [[StupidSacrifice She makes Kakashi kill her]], kicking off the entire series.\\

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'''Instead''': [[StupidSacrifice She makes Kakashi kill her]], kicking off the entire series.\\
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In her defense, As Madara later revealed, Rin didn't really have a choice, as she was being controlled by Madara. Same goes for her pursuers.

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In **In her defense, As Madara later revealed, Rin didn't really have a choice, as she was being controlled by Madara. Same goes for her pursuers.



In Kurama's defense here, it is stated that dying is still, y'know, painful. Even for a Tailed Beast. And it did turn out well in the end.

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In **In Kurama's defense here, it is stated that dying is still, y'know, painful. Even for a Tailed Beast. And it did turn out well in the end.

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'''Instead''': [[StupidSacrifice She makes Kakashi kill her]], kicking off the entire series.

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'''Instead''': [[StupidSacrifice She makes Kakashi kill her]], kicking off the entire series.\\



'''Instead:''' He does everything he could just to prevent Naruto from dying despite the fact that it wouldn't help him one bit.

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'''Instead:''' He does everything he could just to prevent Naruto from dying despite the fact that it wouldn't help him one bit.\\
In Kurama's defense here, it is stated that dying is still, y'know, painful. Even for a Tailed Beast. And it did turn out well in the end.
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* Madara overheard a conversation between Hashirama and Tobirama, which said that Hashirama will elected the first Hokage and that nobody trusts Madara.\\

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* Madara overheard a conversation between Hashirama and Tobirama, in which said it is revealed that Hashirama will elected as the first Hokage and that nobody trusts Madara.\\



'''Although''': spoiler: As Madara later revealed, Rin didn't really have a choice, as she was being controlled by Madara. Same goes for her pursuers.

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'''Although''': spoiler: In her defense, As Madara later revealed, Rin didn't really have a choice, as she was being controlled by Madara. Same goes for her pursuers.



'''You'd Expect:''' That he [[BoringButPractical assassinate the Third Hokage immediately]] and take his blood in order to gain another collection to his Edo Tensei arsenal.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' That he would [[BoringButPractical assassinate the Third Hokage immediately]] and take his blood in order to gain another collection to his Edo Tensei arsenal.\\



'''Instead:''' He stabs both Danzo ''and'' Karin into their heart, thus robbing him of a valuable medical ninja and if Karin does not succumb to her own idiocy later, she would have outright give up and move on from him.

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'''Instead:''' He stabs both Danzo ''and'' Karin into their heart, thus robbing him of a valuable medical ninja and if Karin does did not succumb to her own idiocy later, she would have outright give up and move on from him.



'''You'd Expect:''' When it comes to the heroic Shinobis who are unwilling to fight their own men, Kabuto erase their personalities in order to prevent them invoking ExplainingYourPowersToTheEnemy and gaining emotional closure because as shown what he did Zabuza and Third Raikage, they can easily steamroll the opposition thanks to their unlimited Chakra and HealingFactor, meanwhile he can keep some of their personalities for the ones more willing to fight the allied forces such as the Gold and Silver Brothers and Deidara to reduce micromanagement and allow them to use their creativity to perform better in war.\\
'''Instead:''' He only does erase their personalities if he really wants to, not thinking that it will somehow backfire against him.\\
'''Result:''' This causing many of the heroic Edo Tensei nijas to get easily sealed with little resistance.

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'''You'd Expect:''' When it comes to the heroic Shinobis Shinobi who are unwilling to fight their own men, Kabuto would erase their personalities in order to prevent them invoking ExplainingYourPowersToTheEnemy and gaining emotional closure because as shown what he did with Zabuza and the Third Raikage, as they can easily steamroll the opposition thanks to their unlimited Chakra and HealingFactor, meanwhile he can keep some of their while keeping the personalities for of the ones more willing to fight the allied forces forces, such as the Gold and Silver Brothers and Deidara Deidara, to reduce micromanagement and allow them to use their creativity to perform better in war.\\
'''Instead:''' He only does erase erases their personalities if he really wants to, not thinking that it will somehow backfire against him.\\
'''Result:''' This causing causes many of the heroic Edo Tensei nijas Ninjas to get easily sealed with little resistance.



'''Result:''' This cost them their defeat without accomplishing anything at all save the death of one Konoha member.

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'''Result:''' This cost them causes their defeat without accomplishing anything at all save the death of one Konoha member.Ninja.



'''You'd Expect:''' Knowing that Itachi is still out there, he'd keep Nagato's Preta Path ability up, as well as create more summons to widen the field of Shared Vision. Thus, when Itachi begins his counter attack he'd be able to easily retort and capture Itachi too.\\
'''Instead:''' Instead, he turns off the Preta Path ability thus enabling him to be blind sighted by Itachi in [[PowerArmor Susanoo]], and Naruto and Bee get freed. Adding insult to injury, he uses Nagato to create the Chibaku Tensei and just ''stands there'' instead of you know, summoning another bird or one of the Rams or Rhinos in his disposal. He doesn't even keep the Preta Path ability up in the little chance that the Chibaku Tensei gets destroyed, and thus, Nagato gets sealed. Granted, Kabuto probably wasn't aware that the Chibaku Tensei could be stopped or avoided, but he was facing three very crafty ninja; you'd think he'd be more [[CombatPragmatist pragmatic]].

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'''You'd Expect:''' Knowing that Itachi is still out there, he'd keep Nagato's Preta Path ability up, as well as create more summons to widen the field of Shared Vision. Thus, when Itachi begins his counter attack he'd be able to easily retort respond and capture Itachi too.\\
'''Instead:''' Instead, he turns off the Preta Path ability thus enabling him to be blind sighted blindsided by Itachi in [[PowerArmor Susanoo]], Susano'o]], and Naruto and Bee get freed. Adding To add insult to injury, he uses has Nagato to create the use Chibaku Tensei and just ''stands there'' instead of you know, summoning another bird or one of the Rams or Rhinos in his disposal. He doesn't even keep the Preta Path ability up in for the little slim chance that the Chibaku Tensei gets destroyed, and thus, Nagato gets sealed. Granted, Kabuto probably wasn't aware that the Chibaku Tensei could be stopped or avoided, but he was facing three very crafty ninja; you'd think he'd be more [[CombatPragmatist pragmatic]].



'''You'd Expect:''' Him to set up a trap to catch Itachi unaware, knowing what Itachi is capable of. Either a new type of clone, summoning a few of his backup Edo Tensei's, or even hiding under ground since the Sharingan can't see through the earth.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' Him to set up a trap to catch Itachi unaware, knowing what Itachi is capable of. Either a new type of clone, summoning a few of his backup Edo Tensei's, Tenseis, or even hiding under ground since the Sharingan can't see through the earth.\\



'''Instead:''' She throws a tantrum, beats up Suigetsu for a bit, then immediately falls back in love with Sasuke without anyone telling her to.
* Obito been allowed to live at Naruto and Minato's request, their moment is interrupted by Madara who uses Black Zetsu to resurrect himself using the Rinne Tensei.\\

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'''Instead:''' She throws a tantrum, beats up Suigetsu for a bit, then immediately falls back in love with Sasuke without anyone telling her to.
for no reason.
* Obito has been allowed to live at Naruto Naruto's and Minato's request, their moment is interrupted by Madara who uses Black Zetsu to resurrect himself using the Rinne Tensei.\\



'''Instead''': Sasuke wants to rule the world as a shadow guardian. Someone not chosen by people, but someone who bears people's hate without complaining. He'll do Judgements and Executions himself and bare the hatred of all the people towards him. That way the five great countries will be united. But he wants to kill the Bijuus and the five Kages trapped in the Eternal Tsukuyomi and Naruto too since he has the chakra of all the Bijuus. It's his way of preventing the past from interfering.\\

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'''Instead''': Sasuke wants to rule the world as a shadow guardian. Someone not chosen by people, but someone who bears people's hate without complaining. He'll do Judgements and Executions himself and bare bear the hatred of all the people towards him. That way the five great countries will be united. But he wants to kill the Bijuus and the five Kages trapped in the Eternal Tsukuyomi and Naruto too since he has the chakra of all the Bijuus. It's his way of preventing the past from interfering.\\

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* Madara overheard conversation Hashirama and Tobirama, which said that Hashirama will elected the first Hokage and that Madara nobody trusts.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Madara sincerely happy for Hashirama, and he would try to open up and work hard to prove the village that he is trustworthy.\\
'''Instead:''' Madara decides that the peace between Uchiha and Senju impossible, then makes nonsensical a warning his clan to leave the village (which they understandably reject) and later the dedicated all his time to studying the Uchiha stone tablet leading to the following one.

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* Madara overheard a conversation between Hashirama and Tobirama, which said that Hashirama will elected the first Hokage and that Madara nobody trusts.trusts Madara.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Madara to be sincerely happy for Hashirama, and that he would try to open up and work hard to prove the village that he is trustworthy.\\
'''Instead:''' Madara decides that the peace between Uchiha and Senju impossible, then makes a nonsensical a warning to his clan to leave the village (which they understandably reject) and later the dedicated all his time to studying the Uchiha stone tablet leading to the following one.



'''You'd Expect:''' He will learn a lesson from this story and would try help Hashirama create a village of their dreams or would try to do something else than what he did in any case.\\
'''Instead:''' He try to do the same that his ancestor to put an end to all wars.\\
'''Result:''' He did completed then what he wanted, but he ultimately ends as the biggest loser in the series, not only failing to achieve any of his goals, but only making things worse for himself and everyone else in the process.
* Twenty years ago Rin is kidnapped by the Mist and the three tails is implanted into her, and she's "chased" back to Konoha in the hopes that the three tails would bust out and wreck up the joint when she arrived.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' That she'd turn on her "pursuers", stop moving, or run in the opposite direction. Anything to buy time for Minato to arrive and try to properly seal the three tails so it couldn't escape. Even if Minato hadn't been able to do anything, it was still a better option than what she did.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' He will would learn a lesson from this story and would try help Hashirama create a village of their dreams or would try to do something else other than what he did in any case.the ancestor did.\\
'''Instead:''' He try tried to do the same thing that his ancestor did, to put an end to all wars.\\
'''Result:''' He did completed then accomplish what he wanted, but he ultimately ends up as the biggest loser in the series, not only failing to achieve any of his goals, but only making things worse for himself and everyone else in the process.
* Twenty years ago Rin is kidnapped by the Mist and the three tails Three Tails is implanted into planted within her her, and she's "chased" back to Konoha in the hopes that the three tails would bust out and wreck up the joint when she arrived.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' That she'd turn on her "pursuers", stop moving, or run in the opposite direction. Anything to buy time for Minato to arrive and try to properly seal the three tails Three Tails so it couldn't escape. Even if Minato hadn't been able to do anything, it was still a better option than what she did.\\



'''Although''': spoiler: As Madara later revealed, Rin didn't really have a choice, as she was being controlled by Madara. Same goes for her pursuers.



* The Kyuubi attacked Konoha and killed many people. The fourth hokage heroically sacrificed himself to seal it into a newborn baby. However, the child now has no family to speak of, and should he let it, [[SuperPoweredEvilSide the beast will take over.]]\\

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* The Kyuubi attacked Konoha and killed many people. The fourth hokage Fourth Hokage heroically sacrificed himself to seal it into a newborn baby. However, the child now has no family to speak of, and should he let it, [[SuperPoweredEvilSide the beast will take over.]]\\



'''Instead:''' He requests for help [[BigBad Tobi]] and together with him arranges mass genocide the entire clan Uchiha and herewith taking all the blame for the destruction of the clan on himself (even thinking of the fact that this makes it very convenient for Tobi since none but Itachi and Danzo even do not know about his involvement in the massacre). And later he tells Sasuke that he was responsible for the attack, makes himself out to be a monster, and [[MindRape Mind Rapes]] him for good measure, before running. He does this in order to give Sasuke motivation to hunt him down, kill him, and therefore redeem the Uchiha.\\
'''Result:''' In the end, the destruction of the entire clan brought a strong weakening of the military power of Konoha, allowed Tobi acquire a large number of Sharingans in his laboratory and also acquire another member of the Akatsuki for sealing Tailed Beasts. Itachi scheme with Sasuke ends up working [[GoneHorriblyRight a little too well]], before [[GoneHorriblyWrong failing completely]]: In order to become strong enough to kill Itachi, Sasuke ends up defecting from Konoha to Orochimaru, a guy who wants to possess him for his eyes. And Sasuke happily embraces the possibility of this happening if it would help him get his revenge. When Sasuke does kill Itachi, he's taken into the custody of Tobi, who explains the truth of what Itachi was up to, causing Sasuke to want to [[DisproportionateRetribution destroy]] [[MisplacedRetribution the whole of Konoha]].

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'''Instead:''' He requests for help from [[BigBad Tobi]] and together with him arranges they arrange the mass genocide of the entire clan Uchiha Clan and herewith taking takes all the blame for the destruction of the clan on himself (even thinking of the fact that this makes it very convenient for Tobi since none no one but Itachi and Danzo even do not know about his involvement in the massacre). And later he tells Sasuke that he was responsible for the attack, makes himself out to be a monster, and [[MindRape Mind Rapes]] him for good measure, before running. He does this in order to give Sasuke motivation to hunt him down, kill him, and therefore redeem the Uchiha.\\
'''Result:''' In the end, the destruction of the entire clan brought a strong weakening of the military power of Konoha, allowed Tobi acquire a large number of Sharingans in his laboratory and also acquire another member of the Akatsuki for sealing Tailed Beasts. Itachi Itachi's scheme with Sasuke ends up working [[GoneHorriblyRight a little too well]], before [[GoneHorriblyWrong failing completely]]: In order to become strong enough to kill Itachi, Sasuke ends up defecting from Konoha to Orochimaru, a guy who wants to possess him for his eyes. And Sasuke happily embraces the possibility of this happening if it would help him get his revenge. When Sasuke does kill Itachi, he's taken into the custody of Tobi, who explains the truth of what Itachi was up to, causing Sasuke to want to [[DisproportionateRetribution destroy]] [[MisplacedRetribution the whole of Konoha]].



'''Instead:''' They immediately believed him to be "Madara" despite having little proof of his identity (well except Sharingan).

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'''Instead:''' They immediately believed him to be "Madara" despite having little proof of his identity (well except (Well, aside from his Sharingan).



* Obito been allowed to live at Naruto and Minato's request, their moment is interrupted by Madara who uses the Black Zetsu to resurrect himself from the Edo Tensei.\\

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* Obito been allowed to live at Naruto and Minato's request, their moment is interrupted by Madara who uses the Black Zetsu to resurrect himself from using the Edo Rinne Tensei.\\



* Madara spends the first few pages talking to White Zetsu, and takes this chance to summon the Gedou.\\

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* Madara spends the first few pages talking to White Zetsu, and takes this chance to summon the Gedou.Gedou Mazou.\\



* Madara wants to return his Rinnegan from Black Zetsu but Obito does not allow to do so.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Madara will try to take his eye immediately because any man at a time could to understand that Obito not his friend, since Obito '''himself''' had said him that he had never considered his as ally and also betrayed him when become the Ten Tails Jinchuuriki. Also Madara has forced Obito to resurrect him through jutsu which kills the user at using and any sensible person was understandable that Obito will be displeased this.\\
'''Instead:''' Madara trying to convince him to give Rinnegan voluntarily and aslo says him come up and shake his hand.\\

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* Madara wants to return get his Rinnegan back from Obito via Black Zetsu Zetsu, but Obito does not allow to do so.is resisting.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Madara will try to take his eye immediately because any man anybody at a the time could to understand that Obito not his friend, ally, since Obito '''himself''' had said him that he had never considered his as ally and also betrayed him when become he became the Ten Tails Jinchuuriki. Also Madara has just forced Obito to resurrect him through a jutsu which kills the user at using and any sensible person was understandable would understand that Obito will be displeased by this.\\
'''Instead:''' Madara trying tries to convince him to give hand over the Rinnegan voluntarily and aslo says also tells him come up and shake his hand.\\



* Madara knows that Obito was going to resurrect Naruto and the only way to get to him: the eye Kakashi.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Madara will ignores all enemies and will take the eye Kakashi (that he will do but later) and prevent Obito to resurrect Naruto.\\
'''Instead:''' Madara is spending all his time on fighting with Guy and even not think about it.\\
'''Result:''' Guy nearly kills him and Naruto resurrected with new power.
* Kakashi knows that his eye is the only way how to get in Obito's dimension.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' While Madara busy in battle, he will restore his strength and teleports to Obito. So Madara will unable to return his Rinnegan.\\
'''Instead:''' [[ForgotAboutHisPowers He stands as a vegetable and does nothing.]]\\

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* Madara knows that Obito was going to resurrect Naruto and the Naruto. The only way to get to him: the eye Kakashi.Kakashi's Mangekyou Sharingan.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Madara will ignores all enemies would ignore everything else and will take the Kakashi's eye Kakashi (that he will do but later) and prevent Obito to resurrect from resurrecting Naruto.\\
'''Instead:''' Madara is spending Madara spends all his time on fighting with Guy and doesn't even not think about it.\\
'''Result:''' Guy nearly kills him and Naruto is resurrected with a new power.
* Kakashi knows that his eye is the only way how to get in reach Obito's dimension.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' While is Madara busy in battle, fighting Guy, he will restore his strength and teleports teleport to Obito. So Obito, so Madara will unable to return retrieve his Rinnegan.\\
'''Instead:''' [[ForgotAboutHisPowers He stands as around like a vegetable and does nothing.]]\\



* Safe within Obito's dimension, he pleads for Sakura to destroy his Rinnegan eye so that he won't give the eye to Madara shoud he ever find a way to the dimension.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Remembering the crimes that Obito did including the deaths of thousands of Shinobis that includes Neji herself, Shikaku, and Inoichi, she stabs his eye without any hesitation whatsoever.\\
'''Instead:''' She completely hesitates out of fear, resulting in Madara taking back his other eye from Obito. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Thanks a lot Sakura, your actions brought about the beginning of Infinite Tsukuyomi]].

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* Safe within Obito's his dimension, he Obito pleads for Sakura to destroy his Rinnegan eye so that he won't give the eye to Madara will be unable to take it, shoud he ever find a way to the Kamui dimension.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Remembering the crimes that Obito did including Obito's crimes, which caused the deaths of thousands of Shinobis that includes Neji herself, Shinobi, including Neji, Shikaku, and Inoichi, she stabs his eye without any hesitation whatsoever.\\
'''Instead:''' She completely hesitates out of fear, resulting in Madara taking back his other eye from Obito. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Thanks a lot lot, Sakura, your actions brought about the beginning of the Infinite Tsukuyomi]].
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'''You'd Expect:''' Madara sincerely happy for Hashirama, and he would try to open up and work hard to prove the village that he trustworthy.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' Madara sincerely happy for Hashirama, and he would try to open up and work hard to prove the village that he is trustworthy.\\
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After Rin's death Obito came to feel that the real world is a hellhole...so why would he want to bring Rin back into the crappy world that got her killed in the first place, and where she could easily die again? His true goal was to create a world where things like that don't happen. Not What An Idiot moment


* Obito witnesses the death of the girl he loves at the hand of Kakashi and reaches his despair event horizon. Immediately afterwards, Madara Uchiha tells him about his plans, which involves Obito convincing Nagato to use the Rinnegan to bring him back to life, presumably telling Obito exactly how this can be done as Nagato would likely not know it at the time.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Learning that a jutsu exists that allows the dead to come back to life, Obito immediately goes to seek Nagato out and manipulate him into resurrecting Rin, or at the very least taking the Rinnegan and doing it himself, before returning to the Leaf Village with Rin and getting back on track to become the Hokage.\\
'''Instead:''' He never once considers the possibility of bringing Rin back to life whether through Edo Tensei or Rinne Rebirth, even when he himself possesses the Rinnegan later on, choosing instead to embrace Madara's plan because he refuses to accept living in a world where Rin is dead, kicking off a scheme that results in pretty much every single hardship occurring in the series.

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* In the Forest of Death during the Chunin Exams, Sakura is left fighting 3 sound ninja all by herself. She tricks one of them through an admittedly tricky series of substitutions, getting him to assume she's a substitution when she isn't, giving her a window of opportunity as she jumps down on him with a kunai in her hand.\\

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* In the Forest of Death during the Chunin Exams, Sakura is left fighting 3 sound ninja Team Dosu all by herself. She tricks one of them Zaku through an admittedly tricky series of substitutions, getting him to assume she's a substitution when she isn't, giving her a window of opportunity as she jumps down on him with a kunai in her hand.\\



'''Instead:''' [[TooDumbToLive He uses the uber-move]]. To make matters worse, the guy he uses it on is unaffected, thanks to his teammate, making Lee's actions pretty much a [[StupidSacrifice stupid sacrifice]].

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'''Instead:''' [[TooDumbToLive He uses the uber-move]]. To make matters worse, the guy he uses it on his opponent, Dosu, is unaffected, thanks to his teammate, making Zaku's intervention. Ultimately, Lee's actions pretty much become a [[StupidSacrifice stupid sacrifice]].sacrifice]].
** In his defense, though, he wasn't fully aware of Zaku's abilities and might not have been able to predict that.



'''Instead:''' He says outright ''who'' are infiltrating Konoha. Thus, everything about Sasuke's defection can be traced back to [[UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom him, who thought is a good idea to say who they were in the first place]].
* After the revelation that Itachi is trying to protect Sasuke and wants him to be loyal to Konoha. After Sasuke confronts him and Kisame.\\

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'''Instead:''' He says outright ''who'' are infiltrating Konoha. Thus, everything about Sasuke's defection can be traced back to [[UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom him, who thought is it was a good idea to say who they were in the first place]].
* After the revelation that Itachi is trying to protect Sasuke and wants him to be loyal to Konoha. After Konoha, Sasuke confronts him and Kisame.\\



'''You'd Expect:''' Sasuke to realise that he's outmatched either way, and to not try anything stupid.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' Sasuke to realise realize that he's outmatched either way, and to not try anything stupid.\\



'''Instead:''' He lets Sasuke get a free shot at Itachi which directly cause Sasuke to defect from Konoha all because of his own honor.

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'''Instead:''' He lets Sasuke get a free shot at Itachi which directly cause Sasuke contributes to defect Sasuke's defection from Konoha all because of his own honor.Konoha.
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'''Result:''' Naruto gets seriously wounded and [[NotGoodWithRejection his heart gets broken]] thinking that Hinata betrayed him and stopped loving him. He then goes into a four-day HeroicBSOD giving up on everything. Meanwhile, Hinata gets caught red-handed by the BigBad trying to destroy his WeaponOfMassDestruction, and [[HypnotizeThePrincess she gets turned into one of his puppets.]] And THEN it turns out that [[DidntThinkThisThrough she didn't have the necessary power to destroy the Tenseigan on her own anyway]]. Really, it was only because of a bit of ContrivedCoincidence that the world didn't get destroyed.

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'''Result:''' Naruto gets seriously wounded and [[NotGoodWithRejection his heart gets broken]] thinking that Hinata betrayed him and stopped loving him. He then goes into a four-day HeroicBSOD giving up on everything. Meanwhile, Hinata gets caught red-handed by the BigBad trying to destroy his WeaponOfMassDestruction, and [[HypnotizeThePrincess she gets turned into one of his puppets.]] And THEN it turns out that [[DidntThinkThisThrough she didn't have the necessary her power alone is not enough to destroy the Tenseigan on her own anyway]]. Really, it was only because of a bit of ContrivedCoincidence that the world didn't get destroyed.
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'''Result:''' Naruto gets seriously wounded and [[NotGoodWithRejection his heart gets broken]] thinking that Hinata betrayed him and stopped loving him. He then goes into a three-day HeroicBSOD giving up on everything. Meanwhile, Hinata gets caught red-handed by the BigBad trying to destroy his WeaponOfMassDestruction, and [[HypnotizeThePrincess she gets turned into one of his puppets.]] And THEN it turns out that [[DidntThinkThisThrough she didn't have the necessary power to destroy the Tenseigan on her own anyway]]. Really, it was only because of a bit of ContrivedCoincidence that the world didn't get destroyed.

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'''Result:''' Naruto gets seriously wounded and [[NotGoodWithRejection his heart gets broken]] thinking that Hinata betrayed him and stopped loving him. He then goes into a three-day four-day HeroicBSOD giving up on everything. Meanwhile, Hinata gets caught red-handed by the BigBad trying to destroy his WeaponOfMassDestruction, and [[HypnotizeThePrincess she gets turned into one of his puppets.]] And THEN it turns out that [[DidntThinkThisThrough she didn't have the necessary power to destroy the Tenseigan on her own anyway]]. Really, it was only because of a bit of ContrivedCoincidence that the world didn't get destroyed.

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