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A strange and very, ''very'' surreal short created by Felix Colgrave. The short takes place over the course of a few days, where [[VillainProtagonist The Double King]] travels across the land looking for any crowns, even if it means killing innocent people.
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A strange and very, ''very'' surreal short created by Felix Colgrave.[[Creator/FelixColgrave]]. The short takes place over the course of a few days, where [[VillainProtagonist The Double King]] travels across the land looking for any crowns, even if it means killing innocent people.
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!! Double King contains examples of...
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!!Double King contains examples of...
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* TheDeterminator: Nothing, and we mean NOTHING, will stop The Double King from reaching his goal.
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* TheDeterminator: {{Determinator}}: Nothing, and we mean NOTHING, will stop The Double King from reaching his goal.
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* OffModel: When Double King pins down his own left hand with his right one, he draws a knife with ''[[MultiArmedAndDangerous another right hand]]''. Either that or he actually pins it down with his foot. Which also looks more like a hand.
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* IronicHell: Played with. Due to the Double King's absurd selfishness, the terrors of the afterlife and being forced to sit at a table with all the other monarchs he's killed don't register with him at all, but the idea of being denied any crowns to wear, while Agatha gets to keep her gigantic one, ''horrifies'' him. [[spoiler:Her stealing the tiny napkin origami one he makes for himself is the last straw.]]
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-->-- How the Youtube description describes this short.
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-->-- How the Youtube [=YouTube=] description describes this short.
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* EvilIsPetty: The Double King slew other kings and queens in many ways, and uses all of his resources available, just so he could get their crowns. There’s no big plan.
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* EvilIsPetty: The Double King slew other kings and queens in many ways, and uses all of his resources available, just so he could get their crowns. There’s There's no big plan.
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* {{Jerkass}}: The Double King.
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* {{Jerkass}}: The Double King. His only goal is to kill rulers to get their crowns. When the envoys of the Rat King show up to his castle, he leaves out a mousetrap for them.
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For more details as on the story, see [[Recap/DoubleKing this synopsis]]. You can watch it [[https://youtu.be/w_MSFkZHNi4 here]].
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For more details as on the story, see [[Recap/DoubleKing this synopsis]]. You can watch it [[https://youtu.be/w_MSFkZHNi4 [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_MSFkZHNi4 here]].
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** The very first image shows two centipede-like beasts carrying the King's throne on pillars on their backs. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_MSFkZHNi4#t=3s See here.]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_MSFkZHNi4#t=5m4s The King's mobile fortress]] is built on the back of a giant insect-like creature and it is almost pulled, but more like guided by two lion-like creatures.
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_MSFkZHNi4#t=5m4s The King's mobile fortress]] is built on the back of a giant insect-like creature and it is almost pulled, but more like guided by two lion-like creatures.
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** The very first image shows two centipede-like beasts carrying the King's throne on pillars on their backs. [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_MSFkZHNi4#t=3s com/watch?v=w_MSFkZHNi4&t=3s See here.]]
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_MSFkZHNi4#t=5m4s com/watch?v=w_MSFkZHNi4&t=5m4s The King's mobile fortress]] is built on the back of a giant insect-like creature and it is almost pulled, but more like guided by two lion-like creatures.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Most kings and queens get very little screen-time. This is mainly due to all of them being quickly killed by the Double King.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: Most kings and queens get very little screen-time. This is mainly due to all of them being quickly killed by the Double King.King.
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* PyrrhicVillainy: Double King manages to kill all the other kings and rule over most of the races, but then kills himself in a fit of insanity. When he finally manages to get Agatha's crown, he runs out of the underworld and leaps into the empty void of space -- in the end, he becomes the ultimate king, but has nothing and nowhere to rule over and can't do much other than float in space.
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* PyrrhicVillainy: PyrrhicVictory: Double King manages to kill all the other kings and rule over most of the races, but then kills himself in a fit of insanity. When he finally manages to get Agatha's crown, he runs out of the underworld and leaps into the empty void of space -- in the end, he becomes the ultimate king, but has nothing and nowhere to rule over and can't do much other than float in space.
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** [[NiceGuy Ratking Augustus the Agreeable]]
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** [[NiceGuy [[NiceMice Ratking Augustus the Agreeable]]
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** [[Cumulonemesis [[{{Cumulonemesis}} Stratomonarchus]]
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** [[Beelzebub [[{{Beelzebub}} Lord of the Flies]]
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** [[AbdicateTheThrone(Outgoing) King Aldo of the Glade]]
** [[OfferedTheCrown(Incoming) Queen Aldine of the Glade]]
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** [[AbdicateTheThrone(Outgoing) [[AbdicateTheThrone (Outgoing) King Aldo of the Glade]]
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** The ([[InNameOnly Double]]) King
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** Lady Gertrud of Squash
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** Harg the Serpent Queen
** King Ronald the Moist
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** (Incoming) Queen Aldine of the Glade
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** [[TheDitz Queen DaisyVII
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** [[GodOfTheDead Agatha, Matriarch of DeathDeath]]
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* RageBreakingPoint: In the Underworld, only Agatha is the ruler, and all the other deceased monarchs don't wear crowns, signifying their equality. This doesn't stop Double King from trying to steal Agatha's crown. When this fails, he briefly fashions one out of his napkin, but when Agatha takes it away, [[FreakOut he doesn't take it very well.]]
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* AllThereInTheScript: Asides from the titular Double King, everyone else is only given a name within the credits.
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* AllThereInTheScript: Asides Aside from the titular Double King, everyone else is only given a name within the credits.
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* OffModel: When Double King pins down his own left hand with his right one, he draws a knife with ''another right hand''. Either that or he actually pins it down with his foot. Which also looks more like a hand.
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* OffModel: When Double King pins down his own left hand with his right one, he draws a knife with ''another ''[[MultiArmedAndDangerous another right hand''.hand]]''. Either that or he actually pins it down with his foot. Which also looks more like a hand.
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: Double King is never seen wearing any footwear. This might have something to do with the fact that his feet look more like hands.
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* OffModel: When Double King pins down his own left hand with his right one, he draws a knife with ''another right hand''. Either that or he actually pins it down with his foot. Which also looks more like a hand.
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* DidNotSeeThatComing: When Double King reaches for Ronald the Moist's crown suddenly a crab pops out from under the crown and runs off with it. The hilarity is amplified by a [[SteelDrumsAndSunshine short silly calypso tune]].
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* ForciblyFormedPhysique: When Double King enters the feast hall in Underworld, he's shaped exactly like the doorway.
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* AllThereInTheScript: Asides from the titular Double King, everyone else is only given a name within the credits.
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* CrownOfPower: Some of the crowns are presumably sources of power -- a misplaced crown falling on a cloud somehow turns the cloud itself into a monarch. Most remain simply ''symbols'' of power.
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* AntagonistTitle: Named after the titular Double King.
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* StealthPun: Some of the characters' names are very punny. Case in point: [[Theatre/PeerGynt Olov the Mountain King]]
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* StealthPun: Some of the characters' names are very punny. Case in point: [[Theatre/PeerGynt Olov the Mountain King]]King]].
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!! Double King contains examples of:
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!! Double King contains examples of:of...
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* HumbleGoal: While it initially looks like the Double King is a megalomaniacal regicidal despot, all he really wants is crowns. Lots of them, at any cost, but still. [[spoiler: He is even content to hurl himself into oblivion as long as he has a nice big crown to wear during the trip.]]
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* HumbleGoal: While it initially looks like the Double King is a megalomaniacal regicidal despot, all he really wants is crowns. Lots of them, at any cost, but still. [[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He is even content to hurl himself into oblivion as long as he has a nice big crown to wear during the trip.]]
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* TheKingslayer: The Double King himself, he kills many kings and queens in search for crowns.
* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: This actually ends up saving Durt the Elder's life. His crown is differently shaped than all the others that the Double King had seen, resulting in the latter being disinterested in killing the former to take his crown.
* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: This actually ends up saving Durt the Elder's life. His crown is differently shaped than all the others that the Double King had seen, resulting in the latter being disinterested in killing the former to take his crown.
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* TheDeterminator: Nothing, and I mean NOTHING, will stop The Double King from reaching his goal.
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* TheDeterminator: Nothing, and I we mean NOTHING, will stop The Double King from reaching his goal.
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* OffWithHisHead: The Lord of the Flies gets his head ''sawed off'' for his crown, which the Double King then wears as a ring.
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* PieEyed: Double King has pupils like a 1930s cartoon character.
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* EyeScream: The Double King repeatedly tries to grab Agatha's crown despite her using magic to levitate him back to his seat. Eventually while being levitated, Double King manages to punch Agatha in her right eye. [[GrievousHarmWithABody Agatha does not take it too well.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:'''COMING EVENTUALLY''']]EVENTUALLY'''[[note]]Well, it's out now, but you understand [[ScheduleSlip what he means]].[[/note]]]]
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For more details as on the story, see [[Recap/DoubleKing this synopsis]].
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* HumbleGoal: While it initially looks like the Double King is a megalomaniacal regicidal despot, all he really wants is crowns. Lots of them, at any cost, but still.
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* HumbleGoal: While it initially looks like the Double King is a megalomaniacal regicidal despot, all he really wants is crowns. Lots of them, at any cost, but still. [[spoiler: He is even content to hurl himself into oblivion as long as he has a nice big crown to wear during the trip.]]
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* EasilyForgiven: None of the king and queens show any anger towards the Double King for killing them out of selfish reasons. They even let him join their afterlife feast!
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* EasilyForgiven: None of the king kings and queens show any anger towards the Double King for killing them out of selfish reasons. They even let him join their afterlife feast!
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* FateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler:Implied when The Double King flees the Underworld with Agatha's crown only to fall and drift into space for ''probably'' all eternity. Considering he ultimately got what he wanted and already descended into absolute madness, this trope could be inverted.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: Most of the kings and queens in the story are quickly and violently murdered by the Double King.