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** After coming to regret killing off [[spoiler:Anna and Flavia]] [[OldShame for how he wrote it]] (describing it as unintentional [[StuffedInTheFridge fridging]]), the author started taking corrective measures in regards to it.
* OldShame: In November 2015, the author reread his work and had a major case of this concerning the execution of certain story elements. Among them, he felt that he had [[spoiler:Anna and Flavia]] StuffedInTheFridge despite it not being his intention, and that the [[spoiler:Cameron/Cynthia]] relationship wasn't set up as well as it should have been. [=G2G=] has said he intends to do what he can to improve on these aspects and others in the later story.
* OldShame: In November 2015, the author reread his work and had a major case of this concerning the execution of certain story elements. Among them, he felt that he had [[spoiler:Anna and Flavia]] StuffedInTheFridge despite it not being his intention, and that the [[spoiler:Cameron/Cynthia]] relationship wasn't set up as well as it should have been. [=G2G=] has said he intends to do what he can to improve on these aspects and others in the later story.
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** After coming to regret killing off [[spoiler:Anna and Flavia]] [[OldShame for how he wrote it]] it (describing it as unintentional [[StuffedInTheFridge fridging]]), the author started taking corrective measures in regards to it.
*OldShame: CreatorBacklash: In November 2015, the author reread his work and had a major case of this concerning the execution of certain story elements. Among them, he felt that he had [[spoiler:Anna and Flavia]] StuffedInTheFridge despite it not being his intention, and that the [[spoiler:Cameron/Cynthia]] relationship wasn't set up as well as it should have been. [=G2G=] has said he intends to do what he can to improve on these aspects and others in the later story.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: Comments made in-story by the Future Children, as well as one Author's Note, suggested that several of the canonical Children had been AdaptedOut (specifically Yarne, Nah and Kjelle), particularly since Mal didn't mention them among the ones he was still to find (the others were part of his crew by then). When this came to the Author's attention, he admitted the mistake in a later Author's Note (as well as showing confusion at forgetting about them since he's got plans for them), and he salvaged the situation by having Mal mention that they "still had to find them" (suggesting that they hadn't been found earlier, and rather than being forgotten or non-existent they were probably not at their in-game locations yet).
** After coming to regret killing off [[spoiler:Anna and Flavia]] [[OldShame for how he wrote it]] (describing it as unintentional [[StuffedInTheFridge fridging]]), the author started taking corrective measures in regards to it.
** After coming to regret killing off [[spoiler:Anna and Flavia]] [[OldShame for how he wrote it]] (describing it as unintentional [[StuffedInTheFridge fridging]]), the author started taking corrective measures in regards to it.
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* OldShame: In November 2015, the author reread his work and had a major case of this concerning the execution of certain story elements. Among them, he felt that he had [[spoiler:Anna and Flavia]] StuffedInTheFridge despite it not being his intention, and that the [[spoiler:Cameron/Cynthia]] relationship wasn't set up as well as it should have been. G2G has said he intends to do what he can to improve on these aspects and others in the later story.
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* OldShame: In November 2015, the author reread his work and had a major case of this concerning the execution of certain story elements. Among them, he felt that he had [[spoiler:Anna and Flavia]] StuffedInTheFridge despite it not being his intention, and that the [[spoiler:Cameron/Cynthia]] relationship wasn't set up as well as it should have been. G2G [=G2G=] has said he intends to do what he can to improve on these aspects and others in the later story.
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* OldShame: In November 2015, the author reread his work and had a major case of this concerning the execution of certain story elements; among them feeling he had [[spoiler:Anna and Flavia]] StuffedInTheFridge despite it not being his intention, and feeling the [[spoiler:Cameron/Cynthia]] relationship wasn't set up as well as it should have been. G2G has said he intends to do what he can to improve on these aspects and others in the later story.
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* OldShame: In November 2015, the author reread his work and had a major case of this concerning the execution of certain story elements; among them feeling elements. Among them, he felt that he had [[spoiler:Anna and Flavia]] StuffedInTheFridge despite it not being his intention, and feeling that the [[spoiler:Cameron/Cynthia]] relationship wasn't set up as well as it should have been. G2G has said he intends to do what he can to improve on these aspects and others in the later story.
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** WordOfGod says this was always planned; it just had really convenient timing.
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** WordOfGod says this was always planned; it just had really convenient timing.
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* OldShame: In November 2015, the author reread his work and had a major case of this concerning the execution of certain story elements; he hopes to improve on it in the future.
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* OldShame: In November 2015, the author reread his work and had a major case of this concerning the execution of certain story elements; among them feeling he hopes had [[spoiler:Anna and Flavia]] StuffedInTheFridge despite it not being his intention, and feeling the [[spoiler:Cameron/Cynthia]] relationship wasn't set up as well as it should have been. G2G has said he intends to do what he can to improve on it these aspects and others in the future.later story.
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* OldShame: In November 2015, the author reread his work and had a major case of this concerning the execution of certain story elements; he hopes to improve on it in the future.
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* RealitySubtext: Around late 2013 and early 2014, the fanfic started to get rather dark tonally. Around this time, the author started to experience depression and attempted suicide at least two times, only not going through with it because his friends helped support him - this is echoed by Cameron (in the story) developing some DeathSeeker elements as a result of [[spoiler:losing Anna due to the war intensifying, and being unjustly blamed by his son Mal for it]].
** WordOfGod says this was always planned, it just had really convenient timing.
** WordOfGod says this was always planned, it just had really convenient timing.
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* RealitySubtext: Around late 2013 and early 2014, the fanfic started to get rather dark tonally. Around this time, the author started to experience depression and attempted suicide at least two times, only not going through with it because his friends helped support him - this is echoed by Cameron (in the story) developing some DeathSeeker elements as a result of [[spoiler:losing Anna due to the war intensifying, and being unjustly blamed by his son Mal for it]].
it]]. Luckily outside of the fic, fellow fanfic writer [=lambentLodestar=] convinced [=Gone2GroundEX=] not to go through with it.
** WordOfGod says this was alwaysplanned, planned; it just had really convenient timing.
** WordOfGod says this was always
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* RealitySubtext: Around late 2013 and early 2014, the fanfic started to get rather dark tonally. Around this time, the author started to experience depression and attempted suicide at least two times, only not going through with it because his friends helped support him - this is echoed by Cameron (in the story) developing some DeathSeeker elements as a result of [[spoiler:losing Anna due to the war intensifying, and being unjustly blamed by his son Mal for it]].
** WordOfGod says this was always planned, it just had really convenient timing.
** WordOfGod says this was always planned, it just had really convenient timing.
