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* [[spoiler:[[http://twixie-answers.tumblr.com/post/36602236451/and-the-zebra-tongue-slips-out-when-shes-angry We get to see a flashback to Venus' childhood]]. Not only was Jupiter still a sadistic witch, we get to see first hand the abuse poor Venus suffered.]]
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* [[spoiler:[[http://twixie-answers.tumblr.com/post/36602236451/and-the-zebra-tongue-slips-out-when-shes-angry We get to see a flashback toVenus' Astra's childhood]]. Not only was Jupiter still a sadistic witch, we get to see first hand the abuse poor Venus Astra suffered.]]
* [[spoiler:[[http://twixie-answers.tumblr.com/post/36602236451/and-the-zebra-tongue-slips-out-when-shes-angry We get to see a flashback to
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* [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-1-314155921 A number]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-2-314242140 of the scenes]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-3-314352868 from the arc]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-4-314536136 that shows]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-7-315293810 the traumatic]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-9-315562510 events that]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-12-316011439 led]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-13-316115686?q=gallery%3Adekomaru%2F38179563&qo=12 to Hazel's]] StartOfDarkness (which does a good job of DeConstructing {{Deconstruction}} the Complete Monster image many readers must have had of her by showing how scarred she was by her early life, and how she regrets it now).
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* [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-1-314155921 A number]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-2-314242140 of the scenes]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-3-314352868 from the arc]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-4-314536136 that shows]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-7-315293810 the traumatic]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-9-315562510 events that]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-12-316011439 led]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-13-316115686?q=gallery%3Adekomaru%2F38179563&qo=12 to Hazel's]] StartOfDarkness (which does a good job of DeConstructing the CompleteMonster Complete Monster image many readers must have had of her by showing how scarred she was by her early life, and how she regrets it now).
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* From the Twixie Blog, [[PastSins Nyx]] and Midnight managed to get through Pinkie Pie's hole in the FourthWall and were essentially adopted by Twilight and Trixie. Trixie [[http://twixie-answers.tumblr.com/post/20487931761 realizes eventually they'll have to let them go back to their families.]]
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* From the Twixie Blog, [[PastSins [[Fanfic/PastSins Nyx]] and Midnight managed to get through Pinkie Pie's hole in the FourthWall and were essentially adopted by Twilight and Trixie. Trixie [[http://twixie-answers.tumblr.com/post/20487931761 realizes eventually they'll have to let them go back to their families.]]
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* [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-1-314155921 A number]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-2-314242140 of the scenes]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-3-314352868 from the arc]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-4-314536136 that shows]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-7-315293810 the traumatic]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-9-315562510 events that]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-12-316011439 led led]] [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/The-Greatest-Gift-Lulamoon-Sonata-Page-13-316115686?q=gallery%3Adekomaru%2F38179563&qo=12 to Hazel's]] StartOfDarkness (which does a good job of DeConstructing the CompleteMonster image many readers must have had of her by showing how scarred she was by her early life, and how she regrets it now).
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* [[http://twixie-answers.tumblr.com/post/47570098960/to-this-day-i-still-have-not-played-l-a-noire To be the only one]].
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* [[http://twixie-answers.tumblr.com/post/47570098960/to-this-day-i-still-have-not-played-l-a-noire To be the only one]].one]].
** [[http://dekomaru.deviantart.com/art/Ask-Twixie-Tumblr-413-365333217?q=gallery%3Adekomaru%2F36300826&qo=0 On a related note.]]
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* [[spoiler:[[http://twixie-answers.tumblr.com/post/43689684428/r-i-p-mother-blossom Hazel's foster mother]] passed away. While Hazel takes it alright, it's still sad considering how much of her family she's lost in her life.]]
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* [[spoiler:[[http://twixie-answers.tumblr.com/post/43689684428/r-i-p-mother-blossom Hazel's foster mother]] passed away. While Hazel takes it alright, it's still sad considering how much of her family she's lost in her life.]]]]
* [[http://twixie-answers.tumblr.com/post/47570098960/to-this-day-i-still-have-not-played-l-a-noire To be the only one]].
* [[http://twixie-answers.tumblr.com/post/47570098960/to-this-day-i-still-have-not-played-l-a-noire To be the only one]].
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Hazel]]!''
* [[spoiler:[[TheseHandsHaveKilled Hazel's reaction]] to being forced to kill[[CompleteMonster Venus]].Venus.]]
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* [[spoiler:[[http://twixie-answers.tumblr.com/post/43689684428/r-i-p-mother-blossom Hazel's foster mother]] passed away. While Hazel takes it alright, it's still sad considering how much of her family she's lost in her life.]]
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* [[spoiler:[[http://twixie-answers.tumblr.com/post/36602236451/and-the-zebra-tongue-slips-out-when-shes-angry We get to see a flashback to Venus' childhood]]. Not only was Jupiter still a sadistic witch, we get to see first hand the abuse poor Venus suffered.]]
* [[spoiler:Nova remembers [[http://twixie-answers.tumblr.com/post/40023658954/the-break-down who she was.]] It's not pretty.]]
* [[spoiler:Nova remembers [[http://twixie-answers.tumblr.com/post/40023658954/the-break-down who she was.]] It's not pretty.]]
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* [[spoiler:[[http://twixie-answers.tumblr.com/post/36602236451/and-the-zebra-tongue-slips-out-when-shes-angry We get to see a flashback to Venus' childhood]]. Not only was Jupiter still a sadistic witch, we get to see first hand the abuse poor Venus suffered.]]
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* The "Hazel" arc that finished on May 31, which actually makes Hazel sympathetic. ''[[AbusiveParents Ha]][[CompleteMonster zel]]!''
* The "Hazel" arc that finished on May 31, which actually makes Hazel sympathetic. ''[[AbusiveParents Ha]][[CompleteMonster zel]]!''
