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* The farewell hug that Shigure and Beignet share when she and Kashou leave France is taken up a notch upon TheReveal that Beignet is their grandmother, and Shigure and Beignet knew it.
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* The farewell hug that Shigure and Beignet share when she and Kashou leave France is taken up a notch upon TheReveal that Beignet is their grandmother, and Shigure and Beignet knew it.it.
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* The farewell hug that Shigure and Beignet share when she and Kashou leave France is taken UpToEleven upon TheReveal that Beignet is their grandmother, and Shigure and Beignet knew it.
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* The farewell hug that Shigure and Beignet share when she and Kashou leave France is taken UpToEleven up a notch upon TheReveal that Beignet is their grandmother, and Shigure and Beignet knew it.
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* After being defeated by his father making a whipped cream that matches his mentor's flavor, Kashou struggles to find what he is lacking in terms of a "core." It's gotten to the point where he is starting to second-guess himself and eventually tells Maple and Cinnamon the AwfulTruth in regards to how his catpanions' encouragement is actually doing much more harm than help that he fears that he may end up pushing them away. This brings them to tears: Not for what he had said, but what he's going through and them feeling helpless in assisting him.
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* After being defeated by his father making a whipped cream that matches his mentor's flavor, Kashou struggles to find what he is lacking in terms of a "core." It's gotten to the point where he is starting to second-guess himself and eventually tells Maple and Cinnamon the AwfulTruth in regards to how his catpanions' encouragement is actually doing much more harm than help that he fears that he may end up pushing them away. This brings them to tears: Not for what he had said, but what he's going through and them feeling helpless in assisting him.that they couldn't help him as he did them.
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* After being defeated by his father making a cream that matches his mentor's flavor, Kashou struggles to find what he is lacking in terms of a "core." It's gotten to the point where he is starting to second-guess himself and eventually tells Maple and Cinnamon the AwfulTruth in regards to how his catpanions' encouragement is actually doing much more harm than help that he fears that he may end up pushing them away. This brings them to tears: Not for what he had said, but what he's going through and them feeling helpless in assisting him.
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* After being defeated by his father making a whipped cream that matches his mentor's flavor, Kashou struggles to find what he is lacking in terms of a "core." It's gotten to the point where he is starting to second-guess himself and eventually tells Maple and Cinnamon the AwfulTruth in regards to how his catpanions' encouragement is actually doing much more harm than help that he fears that he may end up pushing them away. This brings them to tears: Not for what he had said, but what he's going through and them feeling helpless in assisting him.
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* After being defeated by his father making a cream that matches his mentor's flavor, Kashou struggles to find what he is lacking in terms of a "core." It's gotten to the point where he is starting to second-guess himself and eventually tells Maple and Cinnamon the AwfulTruth in regards to how his catpanions' encouragement is doing so much more harm than help that he fears that he may end up pushing them away. This brings them to tears: Not for what he had said, but what he's going through and them feeling helpless in assisting him.
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* After being defeated by his father making a cream that matches his mentor's flavor, Kashou struggles to find what he is lacking in terms of a "core." It's gotten to the point where he is starting to second-guess himself and eventually tells Maple and Cinnamon the AwfulTruth in regards to how his catpanions' encouragement is actually doing so much more harm than help that he fears that he may end up pushing them away. This brings them to tears: Not for what he had said, but what he's going through and them feeling helpless in assisting him.
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* After being defeated by his father making a cream close to that of his mentor's flavor, Kashou struggles to find what he is lacking in terms of a "core." It's gotten to the point where he is starting to second-guess himself and eventually tells Maple and Cinnamon the AwfulTruth in regards to how his catpanions' encouragement is doing so much more harm than help that he fears that he may end up pushing them away. This brings them to tears: Not for what he had said, but what he's going through and them feeling helpless in assisting him.
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* After being defeated by his father making a cream close to that of matches his mentor's flavor, Kashou struggles to find what he is lacking in terms of a "core." It's gotten to the point where he is starting to second-guess himself and eventually tells Maple and Cinnamon the AwfulTruth in regards to how his catpanions' encouragement is doing so much more harm than help that he fears that he may end up pushing them away. This brings them to tears: Not for what he had said, but what he's going through and them feeling helpless in assisting him.
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* After being defeated by his father making a cream close to that of his mentor's flavor, Kashou struggles to find what he is lacking in terms of a "core." It's gotten to the point where he is starting to second-guess himself and eventually tells Maple and Cinnamon the AwfulTruth in regards to how his catpanions' encouragement is doing so much more harm than help that he fears that he may end up pushing them away. This brings them to tears: Not for what he had said, but what he's going through and them feeling helpless in assisting him.
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* The farewell hug that Shigure and Beignet share when she and Kachou leave France is taken UpToEleven upon TheReveal that Beignet is their grandmother, and Shigure and Beignet knew it.
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* The farewell hug that Shigure and Beignet share when she and Kachou Kashou leave France is taken UpToEleven upon TheReveal that Beignet is their grandmother, and Shigure and Beignet knew it.
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* The Extra Scenario in Vol. 2 that showcases just how badly being abandoned affected Chocola and Vanilla, even after joining the Minaduki family, they're scared of just being left alone in a room.
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* The Extra Scenario in Vol. 2 entirety of Coconut's [[ThirdActMisunderstanding Second Act Misunderstanding]] where she believes that Azuki and Kashou were making fun of her.
!!'''''Extra'''''
* ''Extra'' showcases just how badly being abandoned affected Chocola and Vanilla, even after joining the Minadukifamily, family. To the point where they're scared of just being left alone in a room.
room, as they wonder how long before they are abandoned again.
!!'''''Extra'''''
* ''Extra'' showcases just how badly being abandoned affected Chocola and Vanilla, even after joining the Minaduki
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!!'''''Vol. 2'''''
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!!'''''Vol. 4'''''
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* The Extra Scenario in Vol. 2 that showcases just how badly being abandoned affected Chocola and Vanilla, even after joining the Minaduki family, they're scared of just being left alone in a room.
* The farewell hug that Shigure and Beignet share when she and Kachou leave France is taken UpToEleven upon TheReveal that Beignet is their grandmother, and Shigure and Beignet knew it.
* The farewell hug that Shigure and Beignet share when she and Kachou leave France is taken UpToEleven upon TheReveal that Beignet is their grandmother, and Shigure and Beignet knew it.