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The game’s official blog can be found [[http://beyondthepalerpg.tumblr.com here]].
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The game’s game's official blog can be found [[http://beyondthepalerpg.tumblr.com here]].
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* DreamLand: The Dreamtime.
* EmotionEater:
** Skinwalkers sustain themselves on the terror their actions produce.
* EvilIsBurningHot:
** In the nightmarish lairs of skinwalkers, there is a blazing, blood red bonfire that is impossible to extinguish without suffocating it with dirt outside the lair. This bonfire is also how skinwalkers can enter the material plane.
* EvilTaintedPlace:
** Wherever a skinwalker takes residence in the physical plane, the nearby area becomes uncanny and hostile-feeling.
* ExploringTheEvilLair:
** A human should never go into a skinwalker's lair without the proper equipment and people lest they want to become prey.
* FantasticNoir
* EmotionEater:
** Skinwalkers sustain themselves on the terror their actions produce.
* EvilIsBurningHot:
** In the nightmarish lairs of skinwalkers, there is a blazing, blood red bonfire that is impossible to extinguish without suffocating it with dirt outside the lair. This bonfire is also how skinwalkers can enter the material plane.
* EvilTaintedPlace:
** Wherever a skinwalker takes residence in the physical plane, the nearby area becomes uncanny and hostile-feeling.
* ExploringTheEvilLair:
** A human should never go into a skinwalker's lair without the proper equipment and people lest they want to become prey.
* FantasticNoir
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* TheHedonist: Ba’alah, the demon prince of gluttony. For her, debauchery, indulgence and vice is the norm.
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* TheHedonist: Ba’alah, Ba'alah, the demon prince of gluttony. For her, debauchery, indulgence and vice is the norm.
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* MagicalLand
* MarkedToDie:
** Even if somebody did escape a near-lethal encounter with a skinwalker, they are still marked with a spiritual taint that allows the skinwalker to easily find them through the Dreamtime next time. In short, those attacked by skinwalkers usually end up living on borrowed time.
* MushroomMan: Sprigs can be made of mushrooms
* MarkedToDie:
** Even if somebody did escape a near-lethal encounter with a skinwalker, they are still marked with a spiritual taint that allows the skinwalker to easily find them through the Dreamtime next time. In short, those attacked by skinwalkers usually end up living on borrowed time.
* MushroomMan: Sprigs can be made of mushrooms
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* OurMonstersAreDifferent:
** OurAngelsAreDifferent: Most of an angel’s body is made from inorganic materials except for their wings, which are formed from the energy of their soul.
** OurDemonsAreDifferent:
*** Qarinah can drain a person’s mana through physical touch or intimate acts, fitting seeing as their servants to Lilith the demon prince of lust.
*** [[AsianFoxSpirit Kitsune]] are different enough that they're not considered demons in the setting, and are actually a strain of [[OurWerewolvesAreDifferent werewolves]]
*** Lilitus are OtherwordlyAndSexuallyAmbiguous demons that embody domination.
** OurDragonsAreDifferent: While not fully fleshed out yet, the author has said they're a neutral force that maintains the mortal world.
** OurElvesAreDifferent: Dokkalfar are a race of elves that have historically had close ties to humans. It’s also easier for them to tell lies compared to other elves.
** OurGhostsAreDifferent: Ghosts are unaware of their surroundings, unless they absorb energy such as electricity or mana.
*** If a ghost and a shade (see OurSpiritsAreDifferent below) fuse together, they become an Ankou.
** OurSpiritsAreDifferent: Shades are specters that are born from and embody negative emotions.
** OurZombiesAreDifferent: Gravewalkers are the products of several shades inhabiting a corpse.
** OurAngelsAreDifferent: Most of an angel’s body is made from inorganic materials except for their wings, which are formed from the energy of their soul.
** OurDemonsAreDifferent:
*** Qarinah can drain a person’s mana through physical touch or intimate acts, fitting seeing as their servants to Lilith the demon prince of lust.
*** [[AsianFoxSpirit Kitsune]] are different enough that they're not considered demons in the setting, and are actually a strain of [[OurWerewolvesAreDifferent werewolves]]
*** Lilitus are OtherwordlyAndSexuallyAmbiguous demons that embody domination.
** OurDragonsAreDifferent: While not fully fleshed out yet, the author has said they're a neutral force that maintains the mortal world.
** OurElvesAreDifferent: Dokkalfar are a race of elves that have historically had close ties to humans. It’s also easier for them to tell lies compared to other elves.
** OurGhostsAreDifferent: Ghosts are unaware of their surroundings, unless they absorb energy such as electricity or mana.
*** If a ghost and a shade (see OurSpiritsAreDifferent below) fuse together, they become an Ankou.
** OurSpiritsAreDifferent: Shades are specters that are born from and embody negative emotions.
** OurZombiesAreDifferent: Gravewalkers are the products of several shades inhabiting a corpse.
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* OurMonstersAreDifferent:
**OurAngelsAreDifferent: Most of an angel’s angel's body is made from inorganic materials except for their wings, which are formed from the energy of their soul.
** * OurDemonsAreDifferent:
*** ** Qarinah can drain a person’s mana through physical touch or intimate acts, fitting seeing as their servants to Lilith the demon prince of lust.
*** ** [[AsianFoxSpirit Kitsune]] are different enough that they're not considered demons in the setting, and are actually a strain of [[OurWerewolvesAreDifferent werewolves]]
*** ** Lilitus are OtherwordlyAndSexuallyAmbiguous demons that embody domination.
** * OurDragonsAreDifferent: While not fully fleshed out yet, out, the author has said that they're a neutral force that maintains the mortal world.
** * OurElvesAreDifferent: Dokkalfar are a race of elves that have historically had close ties to humans. It’s also easier for them to tell lies compared to other elves.
** * OurGhostsAreDifferent: Ghosts are unaware of their surroundings, unless they absorb energy such as electricity or mana.
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* OurSpiritsAreDifferent: Shades are specters that are born from and embody negative emotions.
** * OurZombiesAreDifferent: Gravewalkers are the products of several shades inhabiting a corpse.
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* OurSpiritsAreDifferent: Shades are specters that are born from and embody negative emotions.
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* PrimalFear:
** Judging by their many monstrous traits and behaviors like lurking in dark places, stalking humans, sometimes replacing them, and having animalistic teeth and claws, skinwalkers seem to have all the hallmarks of being based on the worst primeval fears.
** Judging by their many monstrous traits and behaviors like lurking in dark places, stalking humans, sometimes replacing them, and having animalistic teeth and claws, skinwalkers seem to have all the hallmarks of being based on the worst primeval fears.
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* PrimalFear:
**PrimalFear: Judging by their many monstrous traits and behaviors like lurking in dark places, stalking humans, sometimes replacing them, and having animalistic teeth and claws, skinwalkers seem to have all the hallmarks of being based on the worst primeval fears.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning:
** Skinwalkers are described as having red, smoldering eyes full of pure malice and hatred.
* SpareAMessenger:
** To facilitate the spread of more terror and panic, skinwalkers always leave one grotesquely mutilated person after a rampage.
** Skinwalkers are described as having red, smoldering eyes full of pure malice and hatred.
* SpareAMessenger:
** To facilitate the spread of more terror and panic, skinwalkers always leave one grotesquely mutilated person after a rampage.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning:
**RedEyesTakeWarning: Skinwalkers are described as having red, smoldering eyes full of pure malice and hatred.
*SpareAMessenger:
**SpareAMessenger: To facilitate the spread of more terror and panic, skinwalkers always leave one grotesquely mutilated person after a rampage.
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* SpiderPeople: The Jorōgumo.
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* UndeathlyPallor:
** Skinwalkers have corpse-like skin to go well with their burning, blood red eyes.
* UrbanFantasy
** Skinwalkers have corpse-like skin to go well with their burning, blood red eyes.
* UrbanFantasy
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* UndeathlyPallor:
**UndeathlyPallor: Skinwalkers have corpse-like skin to go well with their burning, blood red eyes.
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* AudienceSurrogate: Ellie acts as one.
* BazaarOfTheBizarre: The Troll Bazaar in Courting Trouble. An underground market populated by supernatural folk.
* ChildEater: [[spoiler: The onibaba in The Girl]].
* ClearTheirName: Courting Trouble begins with an Elf named Nemue asking Ellie to prove she's innocent of murdering Dokkalfar (Dark Elves).
* DetectiveDrama: The stories follow Ellie solving mysteries
* BazaarOfTheBizarre: The Troll Bazaar in Courting Trouble. An underground market populated by supernatural folk.
* ChildEater: [[spoiler: The onibaba in The Girl]].
* ClearTheirName: Courting Trouble begins with an Elf named Nemue asking Ellie to prove she's innocent of murdering Dokkalfar (Dark Elves).
* DetectiveDrama: The stories follow Ellie solving mysteries
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* BazaarOfTheBizarre: The Troll Bazaar in
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* DetectiveDrama: The stories follow Ellie solving
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* LesbianVampire: Ellie meets one in Courting Trouble.
* MissingChild: The main plot of The Girl.
* MissingChild: The main plot of The Girl.
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*** Qarinah can drain a person’s mana through physical touch or [[HornyDevils intimate acts]], fitting seeing as their servants to Lilith the demon prince of lust.
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*** Qarinah can drain a person’s mana through physical touch or [[HornyDevils intimate acts]], acts, fitting seeing as their servants to Lilith the demon prince of lust.
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*** {{Kitsune}} are different enough that they're not considered demons in the setting, and are actually a strain of [[OurWerewolvesAreDifferent werewolves]]
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*** {{Kitsune}} [[AsianFoxSpirit Kitsune]] are different enough that they're not considered demons in the setting, and are actually a strain of [[OurWerewolvesAreDifferent werewolves]]
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*** Lilitus are {{intersex}} demons that embody domination.
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*** Lilitus are {{intersex}} OtherwordlyAndSexuallyAmbiguous demons that embody domination.
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*** Lilitus are [[{{Hermaphrodite}} intersex]] demons that embody domination.
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*** Lilitus are [[{{Hermaphrodite}} intersex]] {{intersex}} demons that embody domination.
