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* SenpaiKohai: Several characters throughout the quest refer to Homura as Senpai. Hilariously, Homura forgets the name of one of them, prompting a "why won't you notice me, senpai."
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* SempaiKouhai: SenpaiKohai: Several characters throughout the quest refer to Homura as Senpai. Hilariously, Homura forgets the name of one of them, prompting a "why won't you notice me, senpai."
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* {{Plunder}}: Homura steals Oriko's [[NiceHat hat]] after beating her in combat. It is still sitting in her inventory.
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''Veritable'' is a quest run by [=AnonymousRabbit=] on Sufficient Velocity. In it, you play as Homura, in an alternate universe set after the events of Puella Magi Madoka Magica, but during the events of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Rebellion]]. Which, unfortunately for you, affected the Law of Cycles in all dimensions, not just the one they happened in. Cue the Law of Cycles no longer functioning properly, familiars reappearing, and an evil eye showing up in the sky. And that's on top of the Wraith swarm that's going to happen in three days. And that's just the start of things.
You can read the quest [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/veritable-level-one-remake-un-nouveau-monde-pmmm.8581/ here]]. It continues in a second thread [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/veritable-level-one-restart-danse-fictive-de-deuil-thread-2-pmmm.13127/ here]]. Or, if you'd rather just read the story posts, a story only thread is [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/veritable-re-location-story-only-thread.11166/ here]].
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You can read the quest [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/veritable-level-one-remake-un-nouveau-monde-pmmm.8581/ here]]. It continues in a second thread [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/veritable-level-one-restart-danse-fictive-de-deuil-thread-2-pmmm.13127/ here]]. Or, if you'd rather just read the story posts, a story only thread is [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/veritable-re-location-story-only-thread.11166/ here]].
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''Veritable'' is a quest run by [=AnonymousRabbit=] on Sufficient Velocity. Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom. In it, you play as Homura, in an alternate universe set after the events of Puella ''Puella Magi Madoka Magica, Magica'', but during the events of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Rebellion]]. Which, unfortunately for you, affected the Law of Cycles in all dimensions, not just the one they happened in. Cue the Law of Cycles no longer functioning properly, familiars reappearing, and an evil eye showing up in the sky. And that's on top of the Wraith swarm that's going to happen in three days. And that's just the start of things.
You can read the quest [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/veritable-level-one-remake-un-nouveau-monde-pmmm.8581/ here]]. It continues in a second thread [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/veritable-level-one-restart-danse-fictive-de-deuil-thread-2-pmmm.13127/ here]]. Or, if you'd rather just read the story posts, a story only thread is [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/veritable-re-location-story-only-thread.11166/here]].
!!!Tropeshere]]. It ran for a year before being abandoned in October 2015.
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!!''Veritable'' contains examples of:
You can read the quest [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/veritable-level-one-remake-un-nouveau-monde-pmmm.8581/ here]]. It continues in a second thread [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/veritable-level-one-restart-danse-fictive-de-deuil-thread-2-pmmm.13127/ here]]. Or, if you'd rather just read the story posts, a story only thread is [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/veritable-re-location-story-only-thread.11166/
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!!''Veritable'' contains examples of:
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* AnArmAndALeg: Homura and loses an arm during her fight with [[spoiler: Sayaka]].
* AnArmAndALeg: Homura and loses an arm during her fight with [[spoiler: Sayaka]].
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* MysteriousBacker:
** Yuu seems to be getting information she can't possibly know. [[spoiler: Turns out it's from the Law of Cycles.]]
** Yuu seems to be getting information she can't possibly know. [[spoiler: Turns out it's from the Law of Cycles.]]
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* MysteriousBacker:
**MysteriousBacker: Yuu seems to be getting information she can't possibly know. [[spoiler: Turns out it's from the Law of Cycles.]]
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* ScrewYourself: A mild version, but [[WordOfGod AnonymousRabbit]] has stated that it is possible to have Homudox as a love interest.
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* ScrewYourself: A mild version, but [[WordOfGod AnonymousRabbit]] [=AnonymousRabbit=] has stated that it is possible to have Homudox as a love interest.
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* ShoutOut: [[spoiler: The Sayakanator's]] abilities are very similar to those of Sayaka from Roleplay/SayakaQuest.
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* ShoutOut: [[spoiler: The Sayakanator's]] abilities are very similar to those of Sayaka from Roleplay/SayakaQuest.''Roleplay/SayakaQuest''.
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Sayaka and Walpurgisnact]].
* BeamOWar: Happens during the fight with [[spoiler: Walpurgisnact.]]
* BequeathedPower: It turns out those ribbons Madoka gave Homura at the end of Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica are this.
* {{BFG}}: The Graviton Beam Emitter
** Also, the Dominator.
* BeamOWar: Happens during the fight with [[spoiler: Walpurgisnact.]]
* BequeathedPower: It turns out those ribbons Madoka gave Homura at the end of Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica are this.
* {{BFG}}: The Graviton Beam Emitter
** Also, the Dominator.
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* CombinedEnergyAttack: How Homura eventually defeats [[spoiler: Walpurgisnact]].
* CradleOfLoneliness: Homura with Madoka's ribbon.
* DemonicPossession: Homurcifer does this to [[spoiler: Ruki]].
* CradleOfLoneliness: Homura with Madoka's ribbon.
* DemonicPossession: Homurcifer does this to [[spoiler: Ruki]].
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* EvilTwin: The [[FanNickname Homudox.]]
* FaceMonsterTurn: [[spoiler: Oriko witches, despite the Law of Cycles being active. And she's only the first...]]
* FeatherMotif: Homura seems to have one.
* FaceMonsterTurn: [[spoiler: Oriko witches, despite the Law of Cycles being active. And she's only the first...]]
* FeatherMotif: Homura seems to have one.
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* IKnowYouAreInThereSomewhereFight: Ruki against Oriko[[spoiler:'s witch.]]
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* InSeriesNickname: The Angel.
* InverseLawOfUtilityAndLethality: Because the Graviton Beam Emitter is so powerful, Homura cannot safely use it in the city.
** Also, Arty's strongest attack has such a wide range that she very nearly kills her companions with it each time she uses it. This doesn't stop her from using it repeatedly, much to the chagrin of her allies.
* TheLancer: Appropriately enough, Kyouko.
* InverseLawOfUtilityAndLethality: Because the Graviton Beam Emitter is so powerful, Homura cannot safely use it in the city.
** Also, Arty's strongest attack has such a wide range that she very nearly kills her companions with it each time she uses it. This doesn't stop her from using it repeatedly, much to the chagrin of her allies.
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* LawyerFriendlyCameo: "Arty"
* LiarRevealed: When Homura goes to confront Mami for her decision to remove her from the battlefield, it turns out this happened off-screen.
* LiarRevealed: When Homura goes to confront Mami for her decision to remove her from the battlefield, it turns out this happened off-screen.
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* MeatPuppet: Homurcifer does this a lot.
* MementoMacGuffin: Madoka's Ribbons.
* MementoMacGuffin: Madoka's Ribbons.
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* MysteriousBacker: Yuu seems to be getting information she can't possibly know. [[spoiler: Turns out it's from the Law of Cycles.]]
** The text messages.
** The text messages.
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* MysteriousBacker: MysteriousBacker:
** Yuu seems to be getting information she can't possibly know. [[spoiler: Turns out it's from the Law of Cycles.]]
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* NumberTwoForBrains: Kyouko
* PerpetualMolt: Homura does this when using Wings of Hope.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Homura and Kyouko are terrible at communicating with each other early on. It doesn't help that Kyouko and Mami seem convinced that Homura is off her rocker. It really doesn't help that they're kind of right.
** This is subverted when it turns out [[spoiler: someone is sabotaging their telepathy and sending fake messages to them to cause the miscommunications]].
* PowerUpgradingDeformation: After Oriko is [[spoiler: restored from being a witch]], parts of her body take on a doll like appearance, indicating that the reversion wasn't quite complete. On the upside, it's implied that being [[spoiler: part witch]] has made her stronger.
** Likewise, Ruki grew tails after Homurcifer started to possess her.
* ReplacementGoldfish: Madoka apparently tried to create one of these of herself for Homura inside the ribbons.
** This is subverted when it turns out [[spoiler: someone is sabotaging their telepathy and sending fake messages to them to cause the miscommunications]].
* PowerUpgradingDeformation: After Oriko is [[spoiler: restored from being a witch]], parts of her body take on a doll like appearance, indicating that the reversion wasn't quite complete. On the upside, it's implied that being [[spoiler: part witch]] has made her stronger.
** Likewise, Ruki grew tails after Homurcifer started to possess her.
* ReplacementGoldfish: Madoka apparently tried to create one of these of herself for Homura inside the ribbons.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Homura and Kyouko are terrible at communicating with each other early on. It doesn't help that Kyouko and Mami seem convinced that Homura is off her rocker. It really doesn't help that they're kind of right. \n** This is subverted when it turns out [[spoiler: someone is sabotaging their telepathy and sending fake messages to them to cause the miscommunications]].
* PowerUpgradingDeformation: After Oriko is [[spoiler: restored from being a witch]], parts of her body take on a doll like appearance, indicating that the reversion wasn't quite complete. On the upside, it's implied that being [[spoiler: part witch]] has made herstronger.
**stronger. Likewise, Ruki grew tails after Homurcifer started to possess her.
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* SchoolgirlLesbians: Ruki and Oriko.
* SchmuckBait: Sub-goal - Kill a Level 5 Wraith with your bare hands!
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* SchmuckBait: Sub-goal - Kill a Level 5 Wraith with your bare hands!
** Cue the players trying to come up with ways to render a powerful monster OnlyMostlyDead so they can finish it with their bare hands. [[spoiler:It doesn't work.]]
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* SempaiKouhai: Several characters throughout the quest refer to Homura as Senpai.
** Hilariously, Homura forgets the name of one of them, prompting a "why won't you notice me, senpai."
** Hilariously, Homura forgets the name of one of them, prompting a "why won't you notice me, senpai."
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* SempaiKouhai: Several characters throughout the quest refer to Homura as Senpai.
**Senpai. Hilariously, Homura forgets the name of one of them, prompting a "why won't you notice me, senpai."
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* TakeUpMySword: Why Homura is still protecting Mitakihara.
* TalkingIsAFreeAction: Good thing, too. There have been several instances where the players wrote in long speeches at really inappropriate moments.
** Occasionally averted when the QM got sick of it and had another character interrupt.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Homura and Yuu during the [[spoiler: Walpurgisnact fight]].
* TalkingIsAFreeAction: Good thing, too. There have been several instances where the players wrote in long speeches at really inappropriate moments.
** Occasionally averted when the QM got sick of it and had another character interrupt.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Homura and Yuu during the [[spoiler: Walpurgisnact fight]].
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* TragicKeepsake: Madoka's ribbons.
* TragicMonster: Ruki.
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''Veritable'' is a quest run by AnonymousRabbit on Sufficient Velocity. In it, you play as Homura, in an alternate universe set after the events of Puella Magi Madoka Magica, but during the events of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Rebellion]]. Which, unfortunately for you, affected the Law of Cycles in all dimensions, not just the one they happened in. Cue the Law of Cycles no longer functioning properly, familiars reappearing, and an evil eye showing up in the sky. And that's on top of the Wraith swarm that's going to happen in three days. And that's just the start of things.
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''Veritable'' is a quest run by AnonymousRabbit [=AnonymousRabbit=] on Sufficient Velocity. In it, you play as Homura, in an alternate universe set after the events of Puella Magi Madoka Magica, but during the events of [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Rebellion]]. Which, unfortunately for you, affected the Law of Cycles in all dimensions, not just the one they happened in. Cue the Law of Cycles no longer functioning properly, familiars reappearing, and an evil eye showing up in the sky. And that's on top of the Wraith swarm that's going to happen in three days. And that's just the start of things.
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* BigBad: Homurcifer.
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* BigBad: Homurcifer.[[SuperpoweredEvilSide Homucifer]] reprises this role from [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Rebellion]], only this time she is up against her non-evil AlternateSelf.
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* FanNickname: There's a few of them floating around.
** The Homudox.
** Sayakanator.
** [[Roleplay/SayakaQuest Best Girl]].
** The Homudox.
** Sayakanator.
** [[Roleplay/SayakaQuest Best Girl]].
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* AlternateUniverse: This is set in an alternate universe to that in which Rebellion happened. The events of Rebellion affect it anyway.
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* AlternateUniverse: This is set in an alternate universe to that in which where the events of Rebellion happened.didn't happen. The events of Rebellion affect it anyway.
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''Veritable'' is a quest run by AnonymousRabbit on Sufficient Velocity. In it, you play as Homura, in an alternate universe set after the events of Puella Magi Madoka Magica, but during the events of [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Rebellion]]. Which, unfortunately for you, affected the Law of Cycles in all dimensions, not just the one they happened in. Cue the Law of Cycles no longer functioning properly, familiars reappearing, and an evil eye showing up in the sky. And that's on top of the Wraith swarm that's going to happen in three days. And that's just the start of things.
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''Veritable'' is a quest run by AnonymousRabbit on Sufficient Velocity. In it, you play as Homura, in an alternate universe set after the events of Puella Magi Madoka Magica, but during the events of [[PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagicaTheMovieRebellion Rebellion]]. Which, unfortunately for you, affected the Law of Cycles in all dimensions, not just the one they happened in. Cue the Law of Cycles no longer functioning properly, familiars reappearing, and an evil eye showing up in the sky. And that's on top of the Wraith swarm that's going to happen in three days. And that's just the start of things.
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* BequeathedPower: It turns out those ribbons Madoka gave Homura at the end of PuellaMagiMadokaMagica are this.
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* BequeathedPower: It turns out those ribbons Madoka gave Homura at the end of PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica are this.
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* InverseLawOfUtilityAndLethality: Because the Graviton Beam Emitter is so powerful, Homura cannot safely use it in the city.
** Also, Arty's strongest attack has such a wide range that she very nearly kills her companions with it each time she uses it. This doesn't stop her from using it repeatedly, much to the chagrin of her allies.
** Also, Arty's strongest attack has such a wide range that she very nearly kills her companions with it each time she uses it. This doesn't stop her from using it repeatedly, much to the chagrin of her allies.