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*** Even further. [[spoiler:Neither of them knows that, as revealed in "A Single Pale Rose", they're both mourning the same person]].
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*** Even further. [[spoiler:Neither of them knows that, as revealed in "A Single Pale Rose", they're both mourning the same person]].
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** Blue Diamond bonds with Greg over their mutual feelings of loss. The irony is that Blue Diamond has no idea that the one Greg is talking about is the one who killed Pink Diamond. [[spoiler:Although we later discover that they're actually mourning the ''same Gem'', only in two different forms. Not that they know]].
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** Blue Diamond bonds with Greg over their mutual feelings of loss. The irony is that Blue Diamond has no idea that the one Greg is talking about is the one who killed Pink Diamond. [[spoiler:Although we later discover that they're actually mourning the ''same Gem'', only in two different forms. Not that they know]].
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** Blue Diamond bonds with Greg over their mutual feelings of loss. The irony is that Blue Diamond has no idea that the one Greg is talking about is the one who killed Pink Diamond.
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** Blue Diamond bonds with Greg over their mutual feelings of loss. The irony is that Blue Diamond has no idea that the one Greg is talking about is the one who killed Pink Diamond. [[spoiler:Although we later discover that they're actually mourning the ''same Gem'', only in two different forms. Not that they know]].
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*** Even more so, [[spoiler:as of "A Single Pale Rose", we know they were mourning the same person]].
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* HarsherInHindsight: [[spoiler: Steven yelling at Garnet and Pearl for keeping secrets from him becomes a lot harsher after "A Single Pale Rose" reveals that Pearl, thanks to Pink Diamond's orders, literally ''cannot'' tell Steven anything about the events surrounding Pink Diamond's "shattering", no matter how much she wants to.]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: [[spoiler: Steven yelling at Garnet and Pearl for keeping secrets from him becomes a lot harsher after "A Single Pale Rose" reveals that Pearl, thanks to Pink Diamond's orders, literally ''cannot'' tell Steven anything, no matter how much she wants to.]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: [[spoiler: Steven yelling at Garnet and Pearl for keeping secrets from him becomes a lot harsher after "A Single Pale Rose" reveals that Pearl, thanks to Pink Diamond's orders, literally ''cannot'' tell Steven anything, anything about the events surrounding Pink Diamond's "shattering", no matter how much she wants to.]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: [[spoiler: Steven yelling at Garnet and Pearl for keeping secrets from him becomes a lot harsher after "A Single Pale Rose" reveals that Pearl, thanks to Pink Diamond's orders, literally ''cannot'' tell Steven anything, no matter how much she wants to.]]
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*** Even more so, [[spoiler:as of "A Single Pale Rose", we know they were mourning the same person]].
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* WhamLine: When the Pearl reveals the identity of the other Gem at the palanquin.
-->'''Blue Pearl:''' My Diamond, I've found a native.
-->'''Blue Pearl:''' My Diamond, I've found a native.
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Garnet says outright even if she did tell him he'd just be more determined to go, he was in one of those moods and didn't snap out of it until Blue Diamond was literally right in front of him.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: As much as it was Steven's choice for going to find the answers he wanted, Greg wouldn't have been kidnapped by Blue Diamond had Garnet and Pearl just decided to come clean and not continue to keep quiet.
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Exhausted Eye Bags are situational. It's Creepy Shadowed Undereyes when it's always like that. Anyway, this isn't a character entry.
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* ExhaustedEyebags: The first time Blue Diamond shows her actual face, it's revealed she has prominent dark circles around her eyes. Looks like she was in mourning for a ''very'' long time.
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* ScoldingTheFourthWallBreaker: Greg notices he and Steven have walked into their own show's animation studio, animating ''the episode they're in'', then hurried pushes Steven out.
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* ScoldingTheFourthWallBreaker: Greg notices he and Steven have walked into their own show's animation studio, animating ''the episode they're in'', then hurried hurriedly pushes Steven and himself out.
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* ScoldingTheFourthWallBreaker: Greg notices he and Steven have walked into their own show's animation studio, animating ''the episode they're in'', then hurried pushes Steven out.
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* AudienceWhatAudience: Greg and Steven visit an animation studio and see an animator working on the current episode of ''Steven Universe''. Greg get freaked out when he sees his own model sheet about their desk, while Steven has no idea and is quickly ushered out of the studio.
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* AudienceWhatAudience: Greg and Steven visit an animation studio and see an animator working on the current episode of ''Steven Universe''. Greg get freaked out when he sees his own model sheet about above their desk, while Steven has no idea and is quickly ushered out of the studio.
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* AudienceWhatAudience: Greg and Steven visit an animation studio and see an animator working on the current episode of ''Steven Universe''. Greg notices what's going on and is disturbed by it, while Steven has no idea and is quickly ushered out of the studio.
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* AudienceWhatAudience: Greg and Steven visit an animation studio and see an animator working on the current episode of ''Steven Universe''. Greg notices what's going on and is disturbed by it, get freaked out when he sees his own model sheet about their desk, while Steven has no idea and is quickly ushered out of the studio.
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* ArtisticLicense: While flying from the east coast of the US to Korea in a biplane is ''technically'' possible, it's very dangerous and isn't something anyone would realistically do out of the blue with three people, especially not when Greg is a multi-millionaire easily capable of paying to travel by more conventional means. Depending on the route, doing it nonstop would be near the non-commercial flight distance world record.
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* JustPlaneWrong: While flying from the east coast of the US to Korea in a biplane is ''technically'' possible, it's very dangerous and isn't something anyone would realistically do out of the blue with three people, especially not when Greg is a multi-millionaire easily capable of paying to travel by more conventional means. Depending on the route, doing it nonstop would be near the non-commercial flight distance world record.
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* YouWillBeSpared: After Greg is able to console Blue Diamond over her loss, she decides to take him off Earth to save him from the apocalypse she (wrongfully) assumes is imminent.
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* YouWillBeSpared: After Greg is able to console Blue Diamond over her loss, she decides to take him off Earth to save him from the apocalypse she (wrongfully) assumes is imminent.imminent.
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* ArtisticLicense: While flying from the east coast of the US to Korea in a biplane is ''technically'' possible, it's very dangerous and isn't something anyone would realistically do out of the blue with three people, especially not when Greg is a multi-millionaire easily capable of paying to travel by more conventional means. Depending on the route, doing it nonstop would be near the non-commercial flight distance world record.
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* DontDoThisCoolThing: Garnet failing to convince Steven not to go investigate the Palanquin.
'''Garnet:''' Ah, shoot. Now I just made it more interesting.
'''Garnet:''' Ah, shoot. Now I just made it more interesting.
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*DontDoThisCoolThing: Garnet failing to convince Steven not to go investigate the Palanquin.
'''Garnet:''' Ah, shoot. Now I just made it more interesting.
'''Garnet:''' Ah, shoot. Now I just made it more interesting.
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** Greg's tendency towards "big" women is disturbingly reversed, as a another large woman becomes amazed with human empathy and decides to ''keep'' him.
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** Greg's tendency towards "big" women is disturbingly reversed, as a another large woman becomes amazed with human empathy and decides to ''keep'' him.
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* BadBadActing: When Blue Diamond's Pearl hears Greg and Steven making noise in the bushes and goes to investigate, Greg jumps out and (hilariously) pretends to be a local. He's totally unconvincing, but Blue Diamond and Pearl buy it since they don't know much about humanity.
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* BadBadActing: When Blue Diamond's Pearl hears Greg and Steven making noise in the bushes and goes to investigate, Greg jumps out and (hilariously) pretends to be a local. He's totally unconvincing, but Blue Diamond and her Pearl buy it since they don't know much about humanity.
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--> '''Garnet''': We're going to space. We're going to get him back.
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--> '''Garnet''': We're going to space. space; We're going to get him back.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: So did anyone inform Andy that his cousin has essentially been abducted by aliens? Did he just decide to return home on his own or is he still waiting in Korea for Steven and Greg to meet up with him and fly back?
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* WhamShot: Blue Diamond and her Pearl, bowing over Pink Diamond's palanquin.
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* WhamShot: Blue Diamond and her Pearl, bowing over standing next to Pink Diamond's palanquin.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Steven's gem powers lead to him crying every time Blue Diamond cries.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: If Pearl and Garnet had explained to Steven what the palanquin was and how it was related to Pink Diamond he wouldn't have been so mad and desperate for answers, and if Garnet [[PoorCommunicationKills did a better job explaining to Steven]] that he couldn't go because there was a chance that Blue Diamond would discover the Crystal Gems he might have listened. These mistakes cause the conflict of this episode and the next several.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Something that Garnet laments at the end of the episode. If Pearl and Garnet had explained to Steven what the palanquin was and how it was related to Pink Diamond he wouldn't have been so mad and desperate for answers, and if Garnet [[PoorCommunicationKills did a better job explaining to Steven]] that he couldn't go because there was a chance that Blue Diamond would discover the Crystal Gems he might have listened. These mistakes cause the conflict of this episode and the next several.
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* ForWantOfANail: If not for Greg and Steven's quick thinking, Blue Diamond would have seen a crying Steven, who would have also been in trouble.
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