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The USS Discovery crash lands on an unfamiliar planet, into a morass of "parasitic ice". The crew suffer various degrees of injury, and struggle to make repairs to the ship. They have no idea if Commander Burnham made it through.
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The USS Discovery ''Discovery'' crash lands on an unfamiliar planet, into a morass of "parasitic ice". The crew suffer various degrees of injury, and struggle to make repairs to the ship. They have no idea if Commander Burnham made it through.
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Attracted by all the dilithium aboard Discovery, Zareh shows up, intending to take all the dilithium by force. Saru tries to negotiate an agreement beneficial to all, but Zareh doesn't really care. Zareh kills one of the townsfolk and threatens to kill Tilly.
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Attracted by all the dilithium aboard Discovery, ''Discovery'', Zareh shows up, intending to take all the dilithium by force. Saru tries to negotiate an agreement beneficial to all, but Zareh doesn't really care. Zareh kills one of the townsfolk and threatens to kill Tilly.
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Grateful, the townsfolk give Saru what he needs to complete repairs to Discovery. Unfortunately, the sun has set and it looks like the "parasitic ice" will crush the ship before it can break free. Fortunately, some ship shows up and lifts Discovery out of the ice with a tractor beam.
Burnham has shown up to rescue them. She had been looking for Discovery for a year.
Burnham has shown up to rescue them. She had been looking for Discovery for a year.
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Grateful, the townsfolk give Saru what he needs to complete repairs to Discovery.''Discovery''. Unfortunately, the sun has set and it looks like the "parasitic ice" will crush the ship before it can break free. Fortunately, some ship shows up and lifts Discovery out of the ice with a tractor beam.
Burnham has shown up to rescue them. She had been looking forDiscovery ''Discovery'' for a year.
Burnham has shown up to rescue them. She had been looking for
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* BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: Defied. Saru adamantly refuses to let Georgiou finish off Zareh, instead [[DoWithHimAsYouWill leaving his fate up to the Coridanites thta he'd been exploiting]].
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* BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: Defied. Saru adamantly refuses to let Georgiou finish off Zareh, instead [[DoWithHimAsYouWill leaving his fate up to the Coridanites thta that he'd been exploiting]].
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* PreviouslyOn: We're reminded of the events that the USS Discovery to the 32nd Century.
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* PreviouslyOn: We're reminded of the events that the USS Discovery brought ''Discovery'' to the 32nd Century.century.
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After the ''Discovery'' crash-lands on a strange planet in a strange future, the crew finds themselves racing against time to repair their ship. Meanwhile, Saru and Tilly embark on a perilous first-contact mission in hopes of finding Burnham.
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Attracted by all the dilithium aboard Discovery, Zareh shows up, intending to take all the dilithium by force. Saru tries to negotiate an agreement beneficial to all, but Zareh doesn't really care. Zareh kills one of the townsfolk and threatens to kill Tilly.
Commander Georgiou shows up and saves Saru and Tilly, and almost kills Zareh, but Saru stops her. Saru leaves the decision of what to do with Zareh to the townsfolk.
Grateful, the townsfolk give Saru what he needs to complete repairs to Discovery. Unfortunately, the sun has set and it looks like the "parasitic ice" will crush the ship before it can break free. Fortunately, some ship shows up and lifts Discovery out of the ice with a tractor beam.
Burnham has shown up to rescue them. She had been looking for Discovery for a year.
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* BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: Defied. Saru adamantly refuses to let Georgiou finish off Zareh, instead [[DoWithHimAsYouWill leaving his fate up to the Coridanites he'd been exploiting]].
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* BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: Defied. Saru adamantly refuses to let Georgiou finish off Zareh, instead [[DoWithHimAsYouWill leaving his fate up to the Coridanites thta he'd been exploiting]].
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* TheCaptain: After two seasons of being the NumberTwo, Saru officially gets the big chair -- and proves, several times, that he's ready for it.
* CombatSadomasochist: Georgiou considers being hit with Zareh's AgonyBeam several times to be "foreplay".[[note]]The next time the show visits the Mirror Universe, characters are depicted using Agonizers ''on themselves'' as a sort of party game, seeing who can hold one the longest.[[/note]]
* CombatSadomasochist: Georgiou considers being hit with Zareh's AgonyBeam several times to be "foreplay".[[note]]The next time the show visits the Mirror Universe, characters are depicted using Agonizers ''on themselves'' as a sort of party game, seeing who can hold one the longest.[[/note]]
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* TheCaptain: After two seasons of being the NumberTwo, Saru officially gets the big chair -- chair-- and proves, several times, that he's ready for it.
* CombatSadomasochist: Georgiou considers being hit with Zareh's AgonyBeam several times to be "foreplay".[[note]]The next time that the show visits the Mirror Universe, characters are depicted using Agonizers ''on themselves'' as a sort of party game, seeing who can hold one the longest.[[/note]]
* CombatSadomasochist: Georgiou considers being hit with Zareh's AgonyBeam several times to be "foreplay".[[note]]The next time that the show visits the Mirror Universe, characters are depicted using Agonizers ''on themselves'' as a sort of party game, seeing who can hold one the longest.[[/note]]
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* DoWithHimAsYouWill: Saru refuses to kill a helpless opponent because that would be against Starfleet's ideals. Instead, he leaves Zareh to the mercy of those he was abusing, and if they choose to kill him, that's their decision.
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* DoWithHimAsYouWill: Saru refuses to kill a helpless opponent because that would be against Starfleet's ideals. Instead, he leaves Zareh to the mercy of those whom he was abusing, and if they choose to kill him, that's their decision.
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* LeonineContract: Zareh keeps The Colony under thumb by virtue of the fact that he's the only person with a warp-capable ship. The Colony can only get supplies through him, so they have no choice but to acquiesce to his demands.
* LudicrousGibs: What's left of Leland has to be shoveled out of the spore chamber into a bio-waste container. Georgiou wanted to make sure he stayed dead after ripping Control's nanites out of him.
* LudicrousGibs: What's left of Leland has to be shoveled out of the spore chamber into a bio-waste container. Georgiou wanted to make sure he stayed dead after ripping Control's nanites out of him.
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* LeonineContract: Zareh keeps The Colony under thumb by virtue of the fact that he's being the only person with a warp-capable ship. The Colony can only get supplies through him, so they have no choice but to acquiesce to his demands.
* LudicrousGibs: What's left of Leland has to be shoveled out of the spore chamber into a bio-waste container. Georgiou wanted to make sure that he stayed dead after ripping Control's nanites out of him.
* LudicrousGibs: What's left of Leland has to be shoveled out of the spore chamber into a bio-waste container. Georgiou wanted to make sure that he stayed dead after ripping Control's nanites out of him.
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* TheNicknamer: Reno dubs the Ensign shoveling up Leland's remains "Ensign Hazmat", and ignores him when he tells her his actual name. She also dubs Stamets "bobcat", and when questioned about it, simply says "I don't know, I'm on drugs."
-->'''Reno:''' So, unless Hazmat over here is gonna be helping after he cleans up aisle five…\\
-->'''Reno:''' So, unless Hazmat over here is gonna be helping after he cleans up aisle five…\\
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* TheNicknamer: Reno dubs the Ensign shoveling up Leland's remains "Ensign Hazmat", "Hazmat", and ignores him when he tells her his actual name. name[[note]]and so do the closing credits, which identify him as "Ensign Hazmat"[[/note]]. She also dubs Stamets "bobcat", and when questioned about it, simply says "I don't know, I'm on drugs."
"Bobcat" for, uh, some reason.
-->'''Reno:''' So, unless Hazmat over here is gonna be helping after he cleans up aislefive…\\five...\\
-->'''Reno:''' So, unless Hazmat over here is gonna be helping after he cleans up aisle
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* PlotHole: During the first part of the finale last season, ''Discovery'' was left with a skeleton crew consisting of: the characters in the credits (Burnham, Saru, Tilly, Stamets), the bridge crew (Rhys, Bryce, Owosekun, Detmer, Nilsson) and the special guest stars (Nhan, Georgiou, Reno, Culber and Spock, who [[ForegoneConclusion didn't end up staying aboard]]). During this episode, Tilly claims there are 88 people back on board. This explains how Dr. Pollard and Linus the Saurian are still aboard, but does not explain why.
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* PlotHole: During the first part of the finale last season, ''Discovery'' was left with a skeleton crew consisting of: the characters in the credits (Burnham, Saru, Tilly, Stamets), the bridge crew (Rhys, Bryce, Owosekun, Detmer, Nilsson) Nilsson), and the special guest stars (Nhan, Georgiou, Reno, Culber Culber, and Spock, who [[ForegoneConclusion didn't end up staying aboard]]). During this episode, Tilly claims that there are 88 people back on board. This explains how Dr. Pollard and Linus the Saurian are still aboard, but does not explain why.
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** Zareh quickly deduces that ''Discovery'' is from the past based on the readings he detected, their antiquated tech, and Saru's attitude.
** Conversely, Tilly deduces that ''Discovery's'' stores of dilithium are valuable in a post-Burn future, ''despite not knowing she's '''in''' a post-Burn future'', simply because the Colony's ships don't have any.
** Conversely, Tilly deduces that ''Discovery's'' stores of dilithium are valuable in a post-Burn future, ''despite not knowing she's '''in''' a post-Burn future'', simply because the Colony's ships don't have any.
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** Zareh quickly deduces that ''Discovery'' is from the past based on the readings that he detected, their antiquated tech, and Saru's attitude.
** Conversely, Tilly deduces that ''Discovery's'' stores of dilithium are valuable in a post-Burn future, ''despite not knowing that she's '''in''' a post-Burn future'', simply because the Colony's ships don't have any.
** Conversely, Tilly deduces that ''Discovery's'' stores of dilithium are valuable in a post-Burn future, ''despite not knowing that she's '''in''' a post-Burn future'', simply because the Colony's ships don't have any.
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* SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay: Kal is reluctant to believe Saru and Tilly are Starfleet on their word alone, as they could have stolen ''Discovery''. Tilly proves it by quoting Starfleet regulations.
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* SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay: Kal is reluctant to believe that Saru and Tilly are Starfleet on their word alone, as they could have stolen ''Discovery''. Tilly proves it by quoting Starfleet regulations.
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: It's implied Georgiou stomped Leland's skull in to make sure he stayed dead. Some poor guy named Gene (aka "Hazmat") has to clean his remains out of the spore chamber with a shovel.
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: It's implied that Georgiou stomped Leland's skull in to make sure that he stayed dead. Some poor guy ensign named Gene (aka "Hazmat") has to clean his remains out of the spore chamber with a shovel.
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* VillainHasAPoint: Georgiou's Terran mindset leads her to believe any reception to their landing won't be a welcome one, while Saru is more inclined to act diplomatically. She ends up being half-right when the locals turn out to be helpful while the one extorting them is not, and her intervention is the only reason things end well for Saru and Tilly.
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* VillainHasAPoint: Georgiou's Terran mindset leads her to believe that any reception to their landing won't be a welcome one, while Saru is more inclined to act diplomatically. She ends up being half-right when the locals turn out to be helpful while the one extorting them is not, and her intervention is the only reason that things end well for Saru and Tilly.
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* AngerBornOfWorry: Culber is furious when he sees Stamets bleeding in a Jeffries tube.
-->'''Culber:''' What are you doing, Paul? You're in a Jefferies tube! What the hell were you thinking?\\
'''Reno:''' Hey, genius, he's stuck in a tube in a ship in a vice, and he's bleeding all over the place. Argue about this later.\\
'''Culber:''' Listen, Paul, everything is gonna be all right. We're gonna focus on one moment at a time, okay, and...we're gonna do all of this slowly and carefully. Because I need you out of there alive, so I can kill you.
-->'''Culber:''' What are you doing, Paul? You're in a Jefferies tube! What the hell were you thinking?\\
'''Reno:''' Hey, genius, he's stuck in a tube in a ship in a vice, and he's bleeding all over the place. Argue about this later.\\
'''Culber:''' Listen, Paul, everything is gonna be all right. We're gonna focus on one moment at a time, okay, and...we're gonna do all of this slowly and carefully. Because I need you out of there alive, so I can kill you.
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* SingleBiomePlanet: Reno guesses that they're on the wrong planet based on the fact that "Terralysium wasn't particularly icy."
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* AndAllIGotWasThisLousyTShirt: When Stamets insists on returning to duty despite still being concussed and injured, Culber agrees to release him from Sickbay if he can spell "My partner brought me out of a coma and all I got was this lousy t-shirt". One cut later, he finishes doing so (though Culber points out that he forgot the hyphen in "t-shirt").
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'''Tilly:''' Okay, what the [[CurseCutShort f]]-\\
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'''Tilly:''' Okay, what the [[CurseCutShort f]]-\\f]]-
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* CombatSadomasochist: Georgiou considers being hit with Zareh's AgonyBeam several times to be "foreplay".[[note]]The next time the show visits the Mirror Universe, characters are depicted using Agonizers ''on themselves'' as some sort of party game.[[/note]]
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* CombatSadomasochist: Georgiou considers being hit with Zareh's AgonyBeam several times to be "foreplay".[[note]]The next time the show visits the Mirror Universe, characters are depicted using Agonizers ''on themselves'' as some a sort of party game.game, seeing who can hold one the longest.[[/note]]
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After the ''Discovery'' crash-lands on a strange planet, planet in a strange future, the crew finds themselves racing against time to repair their ship. Meanwhile, Saru and Tilly embark on a perilous first-contact mission in hopes of finding Burnham.
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* CombatSadomasochist: Georgiou considers being hit with Zareh's AgonyBeam several times to be "foreplay".
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* CombatSadomasochist: Georgiou considers being hit with Zareh's AgonyBeam several times to be "foreplay".[[note]]The next time the show visits the Mirror Universe, characters are depicted using Agonizers ''on themselves'' as some sort of party game.[[/note]]
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* PlotHole: During the first part of the finale last season, ''Discovery'' was left with a skeleton crew consisting of: the characters in the credits (Burnham, Saru, Tilly, Stamets), the bridge crew (Rhys, Bryce, Owosekun, Detmer, Nilsson) and the special guest stars (Nhan, Georgiou, Reno, Culber). During this episode, Tilly claims there are 88 people back on board, besides her, Saru and the thus-far-MIA Burnham. This explains how Dr. Pollard and Linus the Saurian are still aboard, but does not explain why.
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* PlotHole: During the first part of the finale last season, ''Discovery'' was left with a skeleton crew consisting of: the characters in the credits (Burnham, Saru, Tilly, Stamets), the bridge crew (Rhys, Bryce, Owosekun, Detmer, Nilsson) and the special guest stars (Nhan, Georgiou, Reno, Culber). Culber and Spock, who [[ForegoneConclusion didn't end up staying aboard]]). During this episode, Tilly claims there are 88 people back on board, besides her, Saru and the thus-far-MIA Burnham.board. This explains how Dr. Pollard and Linus the Saurian are still aboard, but does not explain why.
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* RaceAgainstTheClock: If the crew doesn't get ''Discovery's'' systems back online by nightfall, the parasitic ice on the surface will cover the ship and crush it. They come in a bit late, leaving ''Discovery'' with too little thrust to break through the ice, but Burnham shows up in time for a rescue.
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* RaceAgainstTheClock: If the crew doesn't get ''Discovery's'' systems back online by nightfall, the parasitic ice on the surface will cover the ship and crush it. They come in a bit late, leaving ''Discovery'' with too little thrust to break through the ice, but Burnham shows up in time for a rescue.to play TheCavalry.
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'''Nhan:''' ([[DidIJustSayThatOutLoud winces]]) (mouths to Tilly) Sorry.\\
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'''Nhan:''' ([[DidIJustSayThatOutLoud winces]]) (mouths to Tilly) Sorry.[[DidIJustSayThatOutLoud Sorry]].\\
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** Conversely, Tilly deduces that ''Discovery's'' stores of dilithium are valuable in a post-Burn future, ''despite not knowing what the Burn is'', simply because the Colony's ships don't have any.
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** Conversely, Tilly deduces that ''Discovery's'' stores of dilithium are valuable in a post-Burn future, ''despite not knowing what the Burn is'', she's '''in''' a post-Burn future'', simply because the Colony's ships don't have any.
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* GoLookAtTheDistraction: Georgiou sends Nhan to Stamets and Reno under the pretense that they need help, then sneaks off to join Saru and Tilly.
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* SoftSpokenSadist: Zareh speaks softly and carries a gun that kills people slowly and painfully. And he likes using it.
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* GeniusBonus: When ''Discovery'' is out of control and about to collide with a piece of space debris, Detmer and Owosekun say "Brace! Brace! Brace!" in unison without explanation. In aviation, the verbal command warns everyone within earshot to brace for impact.
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* SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale: Linus, a Saurian, says his visible spectrum is 74,000nm. For a human analogy, the average person can see from red to purple, but you can't look at a rainbow and say that the human spectrum is however wide the rainbow is.
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* GeniusBonus: When ''Discovery'' is out of control and about to collide with a piece of space debris, Detmer and Owosekun say "Brace! Brace! Brace!" in unison without explanation. In aviation, the verbal command warns everyone within earshot to brace for impact.
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'''Rreno:''' Back at you, Bobcat.\\
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-->'''Reno:''' So, unless Hazmat over here is gonna be helping after he cleans up aisle five…\\
'''"Hazmat":''' M-my name's Gene, actually.\\
'''Reno:''' I've already forgotten that.\\
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'''Stamets:''' Hugh, thanks. Jett, thanks for nothing.\\
'''Rreno:''' Back at you, Bobcat.\\
'''Culber:''' "Bobcat"?\\
'''Reno:''' I don't know, I'm on drugs.
'''"Hazmat":''' M-my name's Gene, actually.\\
'''Reno:''' I've already forgotten that.\\
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'''Stamets:''' Hugh, thanks. Jett, thanks for nothing.\\
'''Rreno:''' Back at you, Bobcat.\\
'''Culber:''' "Bobcat"?\\
'''Reno:''' I don't know, I'm on drugs.
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* ScifiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale: Linus, a Saurian, says his visible spectrum is 74,000nm. For a human analogy, the average person can see from red to purple, but you can't look at a rainbow and say that the human spectrum is however wide the rainbow is.
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* ScifiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale: SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale: Linus, a Saurian, says his visible spectrum is 74,000nm. For a human analogy, the average person can see from red to purple, but you can't look at a rainbow and say that the human spectrum is however wide the rainbow is.
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: It's implied Georgiou stomped Leland's skull in to make sure he stayed dead. They have to clean his remains out of the spore chamber with a shovel.
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: It's implied Georgiou stomped Leland's skull in to make sure he stayed dead. They have Some poor guy named Gene (aka "Hazmat") has to clean his remains out of the spore chamber with a shovel.
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* TheDogBitesBack: When disarmed and at the mercy of Georgiou and Saru, Zareh tries to get the Os'ir the bartender to help him by threatening to destroy the atmosphere if he does not. Os'ir instead lowers his weapon and seeks a better deal from Starfleet, which gets him Zareh's ship. Zareh then gets sent to the surface to brave the ice.
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* TheDogBitesBack: When disarmed and at the mercy of Georgiou and Saru, Zareh tries to get the Os'ir the bartender to help him by threatening to destroy the atmosphere if he does not. Os'ir instead lowers his weapon and seeks a better deal from Starfleet, which gets him Zareh's ship. Zareh then gets sent to the surface to brave the ice.
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* SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay: Kal is reluctant to believe Saru and Tilly are Starfleet on their word alone, as they could have stolen ''Discovery''. Tilly proves it by quoting Starfleet regulations at them.regulations.