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* CallBack: The Starfleet and Dominion forces jam each other's sensors, just like the Klingons did in 'Nor the Battle to the Strong.'
* CastingGag: Kellin, the engineer at AR-558, is played by Bill Mumy, who played Will Robinson on ''Series/LostInSpace'', one of ''Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries'''s DuelingShows, and Lennier in ''Series/Babylon5'', one of ''[=DS9's=]'' Dueling Shows. One of his conditions for appearing in the episode is that he insisted on playing a human, so he wouldn't have to wear heavy prosthetics like he did for his entire run on ''Babylon 5''.
* CastingGag: Kellin, the engineer at AR-558, is played by Bill Mumy, who played Will Robinson on ''Series/LostInSpace'', one of ''Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries'''s DuelingShows, and Lennier in ''Series/Babylon5'', one of ''[=DS9's=]'' Dueling Shows. One of his conditions for appearing in the episode is that he insisted on playing a human, so he wouldn't have to wear heavy prosthetics like he did for his entire run on ''Babylon 5''.
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* CallBack: The Starfleet and Dominion forces jam each other's sensors, just like the Klingons did in 'Nor "Nor the Battle to the Strong.'
Strong".
* CastingGag: Kellin, the engineer at AR-558, is played by Bill Mumy, who played Will Robinson on ''Series/LostInSpace'', one of ''Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries'''s DuelingShows, and Lennier in ''Series/Babylon5'', one of ''[=DS9's=]'' Dueling Shows. One of his conditions for appearing in the episode is that he insisted on playing a human, so he wouldn't have to wear heavy prosthetics like he did for his entire run on ''Babylon 5''.
* CastingGag: Kellin, the engineer at AR-558, is played by Bill Mumy, who played Will Robinson on ''Series/LostInSpace'', one of ''Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries'''s DuelingShows, and Lennier in ''Series/Babylon5'', one of ''[=DS9's=]'' Dueling Shows. One of his conditions for appearing in the episode is that he insisted on playing a human, so he wouldn't have to wear heavy prosthetics like he did for his entire run on ''Babylon 5''.
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-->'''Sisko:''' They're not just names, it's important we remember that. We ''have'' to remember..
* DramaticIrony: Quark makes a big speech about how humans, when pushed to their limits, can be every bit as bloodthirsty and violent as any Klingon warrior, with an implicit attitude of being above this sort of thing. Then during the climactic battle, a Jem'hadar storms the infirmary and Quark guns him down without a second thought, with the realization that his previous speech applied to him just as much.
* DramaticIrony: Quark makes a big speech about how humans, when pushed to their limits, can be every bit as bloodthirsty and violent as any Klingon warrior, with an implicit attitude of being above this sort of thing. Then during the climactic battle, a Jem'hadar storms the infirmary and Quark guns him down without a second thought, with the realization that his previous speech applied to him just as much.
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-->'''Sisko:''' They're not just names, it's important we remember that. We ''have'' to remember..
remember.
* DramaticIrony: Quark makes a big speech about how humans, when pushed to their limits, can be every bit as bloodthirsty and violent as any Klingon warrior, with an implicit attitude of being above this sort of thing. Then during the climactic battle, aJem'hadar Jem'Hadar storms the infirmary and Quark guns him down without a second thought, with the realization that his previous speech applied to him just as much.
* DramaticIrony: Quark makes a big speech about how humans, when pushed to their limits, can be every bit as bloodthirsty and violent as any Klingon warrior, with an implicit attitude of being above this sort of thing. Then during the climactic battle, a
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* HoistByTheirOwnPetard: The Starfleeters use the Jem'Hadar's' "houdini" mines against them.
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* HoistByTheirOwnPetard: The Starfleeters use the Jem'Hadar's' "houdini" Jem'Hadar's "Houdini" mines against them.
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* ZergRush: The Jem'Hadar try to overwhelm the Federation garrison with sheer numbers - literally stumbling over piles of their own dead until they can close to melee combat range.
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* ZergRush: The Jem'Hadar try to overwhelm the Federation garrison with sheer numbers - literally stumbling over piles of their own dead until they can close to melee combat range.
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* ZergRush: The Jem'Hadar try to overwhelm the Federation garrison with sheer numbers.
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* ZergRush: The Jem'Hadar try to overwhelm the Federation garrison with sheer numbers.numbers - literally stumbling over piles of their own dead until they can close to melee combat range.
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**Behr actually explained that he was pushing for something ''more'' grisly as his necklace of trophies, but the network argued him down to that - what the heck did he originally want? Consider that in prior seasons we saw a Klingon warrior wearing a necklace made of Cardassian ''neck bones'', so it was somehow worse than that?
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* CastingGag: Kellin, the engineer at AR-558, is played by Bill Mumy, who played Will Robinson on ''Series/LostInSpace'', one of ''Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries'''s DuelingShows, and Lennier in ''Series/Babylon5'', one of ''[=DS9's=]'' Dueling Shows.
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* CastingGag: Kellin, the engineer at AR-558, is played by Bill Mumy, who played Will Robinson on ''Series/LostInSpace'', one of ''Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries'''s DuelingShows, and Lennier in ''Series/Babylon5'', one of ''[=DS9's=]'' Dueling Shows. One of his conditions for appearing in the episode is that he insisted on playing a human, so he wouldn't have to wear heavy prosthetics like he did for his entire run on ''Babylon 5''.
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** Other than the mines, neither side brings any weapons more powerful than rifles. The Dominion don't try to shell the Federation position, and the Federation doesn't emplace anything heavier to cover the single line of approach beyond re-purposing the Dominion's own mines. Granted, this is ''kind of'' justified with the space above AR-558 being a combat mess (making it hard to get anything really heavy beamed down and in place), and the Dominion wanting to recapture the transmitter as opposed to blowing it up, so they avoid using anything too heavy, but it's still a bit flimsy.
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** Other than the mines, neither side brings any weapons more powerful than rifles. The Dominion don't try to shell the Federation position, and the Federation doesn't emplace anything heavier to cover the single line of approach beyond re-purposing the Dominion's own mines. No one even uses infantry-level heavy weapons (for context, one in every four U.S. Marines in [[https://www.battleorder.org/us-marine-platoon-2020?lightbox=dataItem-jvjjhlo3 a typical infantry platoon]] carries a grenade launcher or rocket launcher). Granted, this is ''kind of'' justified with the space above AR-558 being a combat mess (making it hard to get anything really heavy beamed down and in place), and the Dominion wanting to recapture the transmitter as opposed to blowing it up, so they avoid using anything too heavy, but it's still a bit flimsy.
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* WasItReallyWorthIt: Sisko is having dark thoughts at the end of the episode, after the line has been held. [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy Worf]] tries to cheer him up.
-->'''Worf''': This was a great victory. One worthy of story and song.\\
'''Sisko''': It cost enough.
-->'''Worf''': This was a great victory. One worthy of story and song.\\
'''Sisko''': It cost enough.
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* ScifiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale:
** Psychological effects aside, the Dominion minefield is hilariously ineffective. [[http://stardestroyer.net/Empire/Essays/Battles-2e.html As calculated here]], according to the Federation soldiers, they've lost 107 men in 150 days, which works out to ''less than one casualty a day'', both from the minefield ''and'' repeated Jem attacks. Units on long-term deployments in active combat in wars with peer opponents ''wish'' they had casualty rates that low.
** Psychological effects aside, the Dominion minefield is hilariously ineffective. [[http://stardestroyer.net/Empire/Essays/Battles-2e.html As calculated here]], according to the Federation soldiers, they've lost 107 men in 150 days, which works out to ''less than one casualty a day'', both from the minefield ''and'' repeated Jem attacks. Units on long-term deployments in active combat in wars with peer opponents ''wish'' they had casualty rates that low.
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** Psychological effects aside, the Dominion minefield is hilariously ineffective. [[http://stardestroyer.net/Empire/Essays/Battles-2e.html As calculated here]], according to the Federation soldiers, they've lost 107 men in 150 days, which works out to ''less than one casualty a day'', both from the minefield ''and'' repeatedJem Jem'Hadar attacks. Units on long-term deployments in active combat in wars with peer opponents ''wish'' they had casualty rates that low.
** Psychological effects aside, the Dominion minefield is hilariously ineffective. [[http://stardestroyer.net/Empire/Essays/Battles-2e.html As calculated here]], according to the Federation soldiers, they've lost 107 men in 150 days, which works out to ''less than one casualty a day'', both from the minefield ''and'' repeated
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* ClosestThingWeGot: Ezri has to assist in the engineering work because Tobin, one of the past Dax hosts, was an engineer; her knowledge from Tobin is obviously behind the times, but it's still better than what most of the officers available here are capable of.
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** For as vast and far reaching as the Dominion War is when the weekly casualty report comes in at the end of the episode, there are only 1,730 Starfleet casualties listed.
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** For as vast and far reaching as the Dominion War is when the weekly casualty report comes in at the end of the episode, there are only 1,730 Starfleet casualties listed.[[note]]That would've been a fairly grim casualty report in the comparatively small civil conflicts that dominated much of the [=90s=] contemporary to ''[=DS9=]'' airing, and also would've been a fairly standard report during the Vietnam War for American casualties, dead & wounded (and thus, combined, that would've been the two conflicts the writers had the most hands-on, conscious experience with, doubly so with this episode relying heavily on Vietnam allegory) but it would've been a tiny sampling of even comparatively quiet days during either World War -- and in theory, the Dominion War involves multi-planetary ''empires'' capable of mobilizing armies in the '''hundreds of millions'''.[[/note]]
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* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: An engineer, not a magician.
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* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: An Kellin is an engineer, not a magician.
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* NewMeat: ProudWarriorRaceGuy Worf has the conn on the ''Defiant'', along with BadassNormal Miles O'Brien; ColonelBadass Kira Nerys and CowboyCop Odo are back home at the station. (ActionGirl Jadzia Dax is dead.) Sisko beams down with EnsignNewbie Nog, NaiveNewcomer Ezri Dax and TheBartender Quark at his side, all of whom are untried in infantry situations. His most battle-tested asset is CombatMedic Dr. Bashir!
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* NewMeat: ProudWarriorRaceGuy Worf [[ProudWarriorRaceGuy Worf]] has the conn on the ''Defiant'', along with BadassNormal [[BadassNormal Miles O'Brien; ColonelBadass O'Brien]]; [[ColonelBadass Kira Nerys Nerys]] and CowboyCop Odo [[CowboyCop Odo]] are back home at the station. (ActionGirl ([[ActionGirl Jadzia Dax Dax]] is dead.) Sisko beams down with EnsignNewbie Nog, NaiveNewcomer [[EnsignNewbie Nog]], [[NaiveNewcomer Ezri Dax Dax]] and TheBartender Quark [[TheBartender Quark]] at his side, all of whom are untried in infantry situations. His most battle-tested asset is CombatMedic [[CombatMedic Dr. Bashir!Bashir]]!
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* ParanoiaFuel: The invisible floating mines are a disturbing InUniverse example.
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* ParanoiaFuel: The invisible floating mines are a disturbing InUniverse example. You can walk through the same place a hundred times, never knowing when a Houdini will emerge and give you the RedShirt treatment.
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* PetTheDog: After bringing a wounded Nog back to base, Reese takes a moment to tell Sisko "The kid did good".
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* PetTheDog: After bringing a wounded Nog back to base, Reese takes a moment to tell Sisko "The kid did good".alright".
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* NewMeat: ProudWarriorRaceGuy Worf has the conn on the ''Defiant'', along with BadassNormal Miles O'Brien; IronLady Major Kira Nerys and CowboyCop Odo are back home at the station. (ActionGirl Jadzia Dax is dead.) Sisko beams down with EnsignNewbie Nog, NaiveNewcomer Ezri Dax and TheBartender Quark at his side, all of whom are untried in infantry situations. His most battle-tested asset is CombatMedic Dr. Bashir!
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* NewMeat: ProudWarriorRaceGuy Worf has the conn on the ''Defiant'', along with BadassNormal Miles O'Brien; IronLady Major ColonelBadass Kira Nerys and CowboyCop Odo are back home at the station. (ActionGirl Jadzia Dax is dead.) Sisko beams down with EnsignNewbie Nog, NaiveNewcomer Ezri Dax and TheBartender Quark at his side, all of whom are untried in infantry situations. His most battle-tested asset is CombatMedic Dr. Bashir!
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* CastingGag: Kellin, the commanding officer at AR-558, is played by Bill Mumy, who played Will Robinson on ''Series/LostInSpace'', one of ''Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries'''s DuelingShows, and Lennier in ''Series/Babylon5'', one of ''[=DS9's=]'' Dueling Shows.
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* CastingGag: Kellin, the commanding officer engineer at AR-558, is played by Bill Mumy, who played Will Robinson on ''Series/LostInSpace'', one of ''Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries'''s DuelingShows, and Lennier in ''Series/Babylon5'', one of ''[=DS9's=]'' Dueling Shows.
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* HollywoodTactics: Other than the mines, neither side brings any weapons more powerful than rifles. The Dominion don't try to shell the Federation position, and the Federation doesn't emplace anything heavier to cover the single line of approach beyond re-purposing the Dominion's own mines. Granted, this is ''kind of'' justified with the space above AR-558 being a combat mess (making it hard to get anything really heavy beamed down and in place), and the Dominion wanting to recapture the transmitter as opposed to blowing it up, so they avoid using anything too heavy, but it's still a bit flimsy.
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* HollywoodTactics: HollywoodTactics:
** Other than the mines, neither side brings any weapons more powerful than rifles. The Dominion don't try to shell the Federation position, and the Federation doesn't emplace anything heavier to cover the single line of approach beyond re-purposing the Dominion's own mines. Granted, this is ''kind of'' justified with the space above AR-558 being a combat mess (making it hard to get anything really heavy beamed down and in place), and the Dominion wanting to recapture the transmitter as opposed to blowing it up, so they avoid using anything too heavy, but it's still a bitflimsy.flimsy.
** Additionally, minefields are supposed to make territory ''impassable'', not merely dangerous to walk around in, and yet the Federation takes less than one casualty a day while ''living'' in the minefield and coming under repeated Jem'Hadar attacks.
** Other than the mines, neither side brings any weapons more powerful than rifles. The Dominion don't try to shell the Federation position, and the Federation doesn't emplace anything heavier to cover the single line of approach beyond re-purposing the Dominion's own mines. Granted, this is ''kind of'' justified with the space above AR-558 being a combat mess (making it hard to get anything really heavy beamed down and in place), and the Dominion wanting to recapture the transmitter as opposed to blowing it up, so they avoid using anything too heavy, but it's still a bit
** Additionally, minefields are supposed to make territory ''impassable'', not merely dangerous to walk around in, and yet the Federation takes less than one casualty a day while ''living'' in the minefield and coming under repeated Jem'Hadar attacks.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: In keeping with the Dominion War being analogous to World War II, this episode was directly based on the Battle of Guadalcanal. Just swap Henderson Field for the communications array.
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* FantasyConflictCounterpart: In keeping with the Dominion War being analogous to World War II, this episode was directly based on the Battle of Guadalcanal. Just swap Henderson Field for the communications array. Director Winrich Kolbe additionally drew on his experiences in the UsefulNotes/VietnamWar, feeling it was similar to Khe Sanh.
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-->'''Sisko:''' We held.
-->'''Reese:''' Those were our orders, sir.
-->'''Reese:''' Those were our orders, sir.
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-->'''Reese:'''held.\\
'''Reese:''' Those were our orders, sir.
-->'''Reese:'''
'''Reese:''' Those were our orders, sir.
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-->'''Reese:''' Children.
-->'''Sisko:''' Not for long.
* NotSoDifferent: Quark spends a lot of the episode moralizing, but in the end he drops the superior attitude, picks up a phaser, and proves that when push comes to shove he can be just as ruthless as any [[FantasticSlur hew-mon]].
-->'''Sisko:''' Not for long.
* NotSoDifferent: Quark spends a lot of the episode moralizing, but in the end he drops the superior attitude, picks up a phaser, and proves that when push comes to shove he can be just as ruthless as any [[FantasticSlur hew-mon]].
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-->'''Reese:''' Children.
-->'''Sisko:'''Children.\\
'''Sisko:''' Not for long.
* NotSoDifferent: Quark spends a lot of the episode moralizing, but in the end he drops the superior attitude, picks up a phaser, and proves that when push comes to shove he can be just as ruthless as any [[FantasticSlur hew-mon]]. And from the look on his face, he realizes this himself.
-->'''Sisko:'''
'''Sisko:''' Not for long.
* NotSoDifferent: Quark spends a lot of the episode moralizing, but in the end he drops the superior attitude, picks up a phaser, and proves that when push comes to shove he can be just as ruthless as any [[FantasticSlur hew-mon]]. And from the look on his face, he realizes this himself.
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* ScifiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale: For as vast and far reaching as the Dominion War is when the weekly casualty report comes in at the end of the episode, there are only 1,730 Starfleet casualties listed.
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* ScifiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale: ScifiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale:
** Psychological effects aside, the Dominion minefield is hilariously ineffective. [[http://stardestroyer.net/Empire/Essays/Battles-2e.html As calculated here]], according to the Federation soldiers, they've lost 107 men in 150 days, which works out to ''less than one casualty a day'', both from the minefield ''and'' repeated Jem attacks. Units on long-term deployments in active combat in wars with peer opponents ''wish'' they had casualty rates that low.
** For as vast and far reaching as the Dominion War is when the weekly casualty report comes in at the end of the episode, there are only 1,730 Starfleet casualties listed.
** Psychological effects aside, the Dominion minefield is hilariously ineffective. [[http://stardestroyer.net/Empire/Essays/Battles-2e.html As calculated here]], according to the Federation soldiers, they've lost 107 men in 150 days, which works out to ''less than one casualty a day'', both from the minefield ''and'' repeated Jem attacks. Units on long-term deployments in active combat in wars with peer opponents ''wish'' they had casualty rates that low.
** For as vast and far reaching as the Dominion War is when the weekly casualty report comes in at the end of the episode, there are only 1,730 Starfleet casualties listed.
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* ChekhovsGun: Vic Fontaine records a few songs for Bashir to take to the front lines. He then plays one of them ("I'll Be Seeing You") just before the climactic battle.
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* NewMeat: ProudWarriorRaceGuy Worf has the conn on the ''Defiant''; IronLady Major Kira Nerys, CowboyCop Odo and BadassNormal Miles O'Brien are back home at the station. (ActionGirl Jadzia Dax is dead.) Sisko beams down with EnsignNewbie Nog, NaiveNewcomer Ezri Dax and TheBartender Quark at his side, all of whom are untried in infantry situations. His most battle-tested asset is CombatMedic Dr. Bashir!
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* NewMeat: ProudWarriorRaceGuy Worf has the conn on the ''Defiant''; ''Defiant'', along with BadassNormal Miles O'Brien; IronLady Major Kira Nerys, Nerys and CowboyCop Odo and BadassNormal Miles O'Brien are back home at the station. (ActionGirl Jadzia Dax is dead.) Sisko beams down with EnsignNewbie Nog, NaiveNewcomer Ezri Dax and TheBartender Quark at his side, all of whom are untried in infantry situations. His most battle-tested asset is CombatMedic Dr. Bashir!
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* HumansAreWarriors : Quark explains to Nog what Hew-mons are like beneath the MarySueTopia:
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* HumansAreWarriors : HumansAreWarriors: An uncommonly negative example. Quark explains to Nog what Hew-mons are like beneath the MarySueTopia:
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* DueToTheDead[=/=]ContinuityNod: Sisko still reads the lists of those killed in the war.
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* DueToTheDead[=/=]ContinuityNod: DueToTheDead: Sisko still reads the lists of those killed in the war.
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* CastingGag: Kellin, the commanding officer at AR-558, is played by Bill Mumy, who played Will Robinson on ''Series/LostInSpace'', one of ''Series/StarTrekTheOriginalSeries'''s DuelingShows, and Lennier in ''Series/Babylon5'', one of ''[=DS9's=]'' Dueling Shows.
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* PetTheDog: After bringing a wounded Nog back to base, Reese takes a moment to tell Sisko "The kid did good".
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* GallowsHumor: The Federation soldiers nickname the Dominion's phasing mines "Houdinis". Find one, and you disappear.
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-->"Let me tell you something about Hew-mons, nephew. They're a wonderful, friendly people - as long as their bellies are full and their holosuites are working. But take away their creature comforts... deprive them of food, sleep, sonic showers... put their lives in jeopardy over an extended period of time... and those same friendly, intelligent, wonderful people will become as nasty and violent as the most bloodthirsty Klingon. You don't believe me? Look at those faces, look at their eyes..."
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-->"Let me tell you something about Hew-mons, nephew. They're a wonderful, friendly people - as long as their bellies are full and their holosuites are working. But take away their creature comforts... deprive them of food, sleep, sonic showers... put their lives in jeopardy over an extended period of time... and those same friendly, intelligent, wonderful people will become as nasty and as violent as the most bloodthirsty Klingon. You don't believe me? Look at those faces, look at their eyes..."
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* ShellShockedVeteran: Everyone at AR-558 - they were supposed to be rotated out after 90 days. They've been there five months with no relief and under constant attack to the point they went from 147 troops to just 43 by the time the ''Defiant'' shows up.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: Everyone at AR-558 - they were supposed to be rotated out after 90 days. They've been there five months with no relief and under constant attack to the point they went from 147 150 troops to just 43 by the time the ''Defiant'' shows up.
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** Subverted by Vargas, who describes his dead friend as a loudmouth jerk.
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** Subverted by Vargas, who describes his dead friend as a loudmouth jerk.KnowNothingKnowItAll jerk, though even he believes that one should NeverSpeakIllOfTheDead.
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* TragicKeepsake: Vargas's bandage, made from the uniform of a dead comrade.
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* TragicKeepsake: Vargas's bandage, [[FromDressToDressing made from the uniform of a dead comrade.comrade]].
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* HollywoodTactics: Other than the mines, neither side brings any weapons more powerful than rifles. The Dominion don't try to shell the Federation position, and the Federation doesn't emplace anything heavier to cover the single line of approach beyond re-purposing the Dominion's own mines.
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* HollywoodTactics: Other than the mines, neither side brings any weapons more powerful than rifles. The Dominion don't try to shell the Federation position, and the Federation doesn't emplace anything heavier to cover the single line of approach beyond re-purposing the Dominion's own mines. Granted, this is ''kind of'' justified with the space above AR-558 being a combat mess (making it hard to get anything really heavy beamed down and in place), and the Dominion wanting to recapture the transmitter as opposed to blowing it up, so they avoid using anything too heavy, but it's still a bit flimsy.
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* WriterOnBoard: The director of the episode had fought in the Vietnam War, and allowed his own experiences as a soldier to color the atmosphere of the scene and really brought out the WarIsHell trope to the forefront.
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* WriterOnBoard: The director of the episode had fought in the Vietnam War, and allowed his own experiences as a soldier to color the atmosphere of the scene scenes and really brought out the WarIsHell trope to the forefront.forefront, far moreso than was typical for ''Trek''.
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* WriterOnBoard: The director of the episode had fought in the Vietnam War, and allowed his own experiences as a soldier to color the atmosphere of the scene and really brought out the WarIsHell trope to the forefront.
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The ''Defiant'' makes a supply run to planet AR-558, the site of a Dominion communications relay that Starfleet captured. The relay has been under constant siege, with the crew defending it overdue to be relieved by a new crew. Sisko, Bashir, Nog, and Quark find themselves stuck on the planet and having to help hold the relay against a Jem'hadar batallion, while dealing with deadly Dominion booby-traps.
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The ''Defiant'' makes a supply run to planet AR-558, the site of a Dominion communications relay that Starfleet captured. The relay has been under constant siege, with the crew defending it overdue to be relieved by a new crew. Sisko, Bashir, Nog, Ezri Dax, Nog and Quark find themselves stuck on the planet and having to help hold the relay against a Jem'hadar batallion, while dealing with deadly Dominion booby-traps.
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* CombatMedic: Bashir expertly field-strips, cleans and reassembles a phaser rifle (impressing Vargas), commenting on the irony of his having "joined Starfleet to ''save'' lives." He acquits himself well in the battle.
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* NewMeat: The relief troops at the end.
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* NewMeat: The ProudWarriorRaceGuy Worf has the conn on the ''Defiant''; IronLady Major Kira Nerys, CowboyCop Odo and BadassNormal Miles O'Brien are back home at the station. (ActionGirl Jadzia Dax is dead.) Sisko beams down with EnsignNewbie Nog, NaiveNewcomer Ezri Dax and TheBartender Quark at his side, all of whom are untried in infantry situations. His most battle-tested asset is CombatMedic Dr. Bashir!
** And then there's the relief troops at the end.
** And then there's the relief troops at the end.