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* AssholeVictim: Unlike her partner Briggs, Detective Pentle feels no remorse at all about killing children, derisively refers to the desperate families as "Breeders", and murders Briggs for sparing a child's life. Good luck feeling sympathy ''at all'' when she gets shot in turn and bleeds out before her partner dies.
* AutoErotica: Alice outright propositions Briggs in his flying car but the latter turns her down because he's not in the mood.
* AutoErotica: Alice outright propositions Briggs in his flying car but the latter turns her down because he's not in the mood.
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* AssholeVictim: Unlike her partner Briggs, Detective Pentle feels no remorse at all about killing children, derisively refers to the desperate families as "Breeders", and murders goes out in a MutualKill with Briggs for after she tracks him down and discovers him sparing a child's life. Good luck feeling sympathy ''at all'' when she gets shot in turn and bleeds out before child. [[DownplayedTrope Though while her partner dies.
* AutoErotica: Alice outright propositions Briggs in his flying car butviews are heinous by the latter turns her down because he's not audience's standards, they are extremely par for the course in the mood.society she lives in]].
* AutoErotica: Alice outright propositions Briggs in his flying car but
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Though the original meaning of the name referred to skin color, it's been a common name for women of all complexions since the 1960s and few people giving or given the name know it's origins..
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* IronicName: Melanie. The girl is fair-skinned and light-haired.
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* DeathByAdaptation: Both Briggs and Pentle are alive and well in the end of the original story, since it has a completely different ending.
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* RetroUniverse: It's eternal Chandler times, despite sky-scrappers reaching above the clouds, hoovering cars and clinical immortality. Part of it comes from the fact humanity itself no longer really progresses, as it has no need or reason to do it, instead relishing the relics of the past to boast of how great it is to live forever.
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* RetroUniverse: It's eternal Chandler times, despite sky-scrappers skyscrapers reaching above the clouds, hoovering hovering cars and clinical immortality. Part of it comes from the fact humanity itself no longer really progresses, as it has no need or reason to do it, instead relishing the relics of the past to boast of how great it is to live forever.
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no, it was moved to the more fitting These Hands Have Killed. he looks guilty at his bloody hands and doesn't try to wipe the blood off
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* OutDamnedSpot: Briggs notices blood on his hands, after "popping" a "gang" of children too young to even speak. He can't clean it, until he realises after a while it isn't real.
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* OutDamnedSpot: Briggs notices blood on his hands, after "popping" a "gang" of children too young to even speak. He can't clean it, until he realises after a while it isn't real.
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covered by the more specific Take Me Instead
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* HeroicSacrifice: Melanie's mother would rather let herself be killed and thus "make room" for her daughter than let Briggs shoot Melanie.
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* CensoredChildDeath: The opening scene cuts away before Briggs shoots the children.
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: The immortal part of the society just can't wrap their heads around ''why'' anyone would rather live in a squalor and constant hiding for the sake of having a child. Since the system has been running for so long, people genuinely no longer ''remember'' what it is to have children around or what they even need. Up to the point where Alice tells Briggs she would have a baby with him in any other set up, and all it causes it his horrified expression and her cracking up that it was only a joke to rile him, without meaning a word of it.
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: The immortal part of the society just can't wrap their heads around ''why'' anyone would rather live in a squalor and constant hiding for the sake of having a child. Since the system has been running for so long, people genuinely no longer ''remember'' what it is to have children around or what they even need. Up to the point where Alice tells Briggs she would have a baby with him in any other set up, setup, and all it causes it his horrified expression and her cracking up that it was only a joke to rile him, without meaning a word of it.
* GasMaskMooks: The police forces wear gas masks in the streets, underpinning their inhumane business.
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* IronicName: Melanie. The girl is fair-skined and light-haired.
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* IronicName: Melanie. The girl is fair-skined fair-skinned and light-haired.
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* KarmicDeath: Pentle dies an ignominious death from being shot in the throat, unrepentant of her crimes. Briggs, who [[HeroicSacrifice dies for Melanie's sake]], [[Film/BladeRunner peacefully looks up at the rain in his last moments]].
* LivingForeverIsAwesome: Alice holds this view and states that not having children is a small price to pay for immortality. She's proud of spending 20 years to perfect her solo number. This seems to be the general sentiment of the fortunate/upper class. On the other hand...
* LivingForeverIsAwesome: Alice holds this view and states that not having children is a small price to pay for immortality. She's proud of spending 20 years to perfect her solo number. This seems to be the general sentiment of the fortunate/upper class. On the other hand...
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* KarmicDeath: Pentle dies an ignominious death from being shot in the throat, unrepentant of her crimes. Briggs, who [[HeroicSacrifice dies for Melanie's sake]], [[Film/BladeRunner [[RedemptionInTheRain peacefully looks up at the rain rain]] [[RedemptionEqualsDeath in his last moments]].
* LivingForeverIsAwesome: Alice holds this view and states that not having children is a small price to pay for immortality. She's proud of spending 20 yearsto perfect perfecting her solo number. This seems to be the general sentiment of the fortunate/upper class. On the other hand...
* LivingForeverIsAwesome: Alice holds this view and states that not having children is a small price to pay for immortality. She's proud of spending 20 years
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* OutDamnedSpot: Briggs notices blood on his hands, after "popping" a "gang" of children too young to even speak. He can't clean it, until he realises after a while it isn't real.
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* OutDamnedSpot: Briggs notices blood on his hands, after "popping" a "gang" of children too young to even speak. He can't clean it, until he realises after a while it isn't real.OurWeaponsWillBeBoxyInTheFuture: Briggs' handgun is quite bulky.
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* RayOfHopeEnding: Briggs dies, after he kills his detective partner... but that leaves two "slots" open for other people to live and nobody has reported Melanie's existence yet.
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* RayOfHopeEnding: Briggs dies, dies after he kills his detective partner... but that leaves two "slots" open for other people to live and nobody has reported Melanie's existence yet.
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* TheRoaringTwenties: The aesthetic of the immortal humans' civilization, from their fashions and art down to the designs of their flying cars.
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* TheRoaringTwenties: The aesthetic of the immortal humans' civilization, from their fashions [[ArtDeco and art art]] down to the designs of their flying cars.cars.
* TheseHandsHaveKilled: Briggs notices blood on his hands, after "popping" a "gang" of children too young to even speak. He can't clean it until he realizes after a while it isn't real.
* TheseHandsHaveKilled: Briggs notices blood on his hands, after "popping" a "gang" of children too young to even speak. He can't clean it until he realizes after a while it isn't real.
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** Eve openly states that she's seen too much and lived for too long to keep going anymore, but having Melanie has made things seem new again and given that will back.
** In the original story, Briggs himself has a hard time remembering ''when'' exactly things happened in his life, because he's been around for centuries, to the point even basic trivia has become fuzzy since he learned it so long ago. Trace amounts of original dialogue indicating that are still left in the animated short, but almost all without the context.
** In the original story, Briggs himself has a hard time remembering ''when'' exactly things happened in his life, because he's been around for centuries, to the point even basic trivia has become fuzzy since he learned it so long ago. Trace amounts of original dialogue indicating that are still left in the animated short, but almost all without the context.
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** Eve openly states that she's seen too much and lived for too long to keep going anymore, but having Melanie has made things seem new again and given her that will back.
** In the original story, Briggs himself has a hard time remembering ''when'' exactly things happened in hislife, life because he's been around for centuries, to the point even basic trivia has become fuzzy since he learned it so long ago. Trace amounts of original dialogue indicating that are still left in the animated short, but almost all without the context.
** In the original story, Briggs himself has a hard time remembering ''when'' exactly things happened in his
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* KarmicDeath: Pentle dies an ignominious death from being shot in the throat, unrepentant of her crimes. Briggs, who [[HeroicSacrifice dies for Melanie's sake]], [[Film/BladeRunner peacefully looks up at the rain in his last moments]].
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* TheRoaringTwenties: The aesthetic of the immortal humans' civilization, from their fashions and art down to the designs of their flying cars.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Conversely, Pentle is far less of a black hat in the source material and [[GenderFlip he]] is just as tired as Briggs with the whole detective work nor he feels particularly strong about the whole "popping". And of course, he doesn't try to kill Briggs in the end, since the story resolves differently, while Pentle isn't even present at the site.
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* GenderFlip: Pentle is a guy in the original story and ''embodies'' HardboiledDetective.
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Based on the [[Literature/PumpSixAndOtherStories short story]] of the same name by Creator/PaoloBacigalupi.
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Based on the [[Literature/PumpSixAndOtherStories short story]] of the same name by Creator/PaoloBacigalupi. Creator/NolanNorth voices Briggs, Creator/ElodieYung voices Alice, and Creator/EmilyOBrien voices Eve.
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->''"I've been alive for 218 years. I've seen... too much. But she makes everything new. I love seeing things through her little eyes. They're so bright. They're so full of life. Not dead, like yours."''
->''"I've been alive for 218 years. I've seen... too much. But she makes everything new. I love seeing things through her little eyes. They're so bright. They're so full of life. Not dead, like yours."''
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* BodyMotifs: Eyes. The "Rejoo" treatment is visually signified by how, among other things, Alice's eyes get brighter. Later, Melanie admits that she's SeenItAll, but seeing the world through Melanie's eyes has made life worth living again. And when Briggs is fatally shot, the scene focuses on his eyes gazing at the world around him before he collapses.
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* BodyMotifs: Eyes. The "Rejoo" treatment is visually signified by how, among other things, Alice's eyes get brighter. Later, Melanie Eve admits that she's SeenItAll, but seeing the world through Melanie's eyes has made life worth living again. And when Briggs is fatally shot, the scene focuses on his eyes gazing at the world around him before he collapses.
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* ImmortalProcreationClause: Rejuvenation treatments appear to cause sterility as a side effect, as the ones with children have stopped taking them.
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* ImmortalProcreationClause: Rejuvenation treatments appear to cause sterility as a side effect, as the ones with children have stopped taking them. This is explicitly stated to be the case in the original short story and even stated that the immortality itself doesn't inherently cause sterility; the sterility was explicitly added to the Rejoo.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Briggs appears to genuinely want to understand why breeders do what they do. The adaptation plays his drive to learn as entirely noble, whereas the original short story more describes him coming to terms with the fact that he's developing a fetish for these women.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Briggs appears to genuinely want to understand why breeders do what they do. The adaptation plays his drive to learn as entirely noble, whereas the original short story more describes him coming to terms with the fact that he's developing a fetish for these women.women, notably in the story ''he's'' the one that jokes to Alice that he'd impregnate her and not the other way around as in the episode.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Briggs appears to genuinely want to understand why breeders do what they do. The adaptation plays his drive to learn as entirely noble, whereas the original short story more describes him coming to terms with the fact that he's developing a fetish for these women.
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* DeathOfAChild: Briggs kills two children in the opening.
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* DeathOfAChild: Briggs kills two four children in the opening.opening, setting the tone for the rest of the short.