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* GenreSavvy: The Daleks get one. The best way to kill off Gallifrey? Send '''''TEN MILLION''''' Daleks down onto the planet and drastically out number the Timlords. [[spoiler: Until The Doctor shows up, it ''works''.]]
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* ShockingDefeatLegacy: Arcadia, "safest place on Gallifrey" falls to the Daleks. This is event provokes the War Doctor to declare "no more".
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* ShockingDefeatLegacy: Arcadia, "safest place on Gallifrey" falls to the Daleks. This is the event which provokes the War Doctor to declare "no more".
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* ThisCannotBe: That couldn't possibly be a dalek....There are 400 sky trenches....
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* ThisCannotBe: That couldn't possibly be a dalek....Dalek....There are 400 sky trenches....
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* JustBeforeTheEnd: Of Gallifrey.
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POVCam: The screen is the soldier's personal camera. This lets the audience see the war as if they were the soldier.
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* TheVoiceless: The unseen soldier cannot speak properly because of a side effect caused by hooking up the web cam. This lets the audience see the war as if they were the soldier.\n
*ThisCannotBeThisCannotBe: That couldn't possibly be a dalek....There are 400 sky trenches....
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* GenreSavvy: The Daleks get one. The best way to kill of Gallifrey? Send 10,000,000 Daleks down onto the planet and drastically out number the Timlords. [[spoiler: Until The Doctor shows up, it ''works''.]]
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* GenreSavvy: The Daleks get one. The best way to kill of off Gallifrey? Send 10,000,000 '''''TEN MILLION''''' Daleks down onto the planet and drastically out number the Timlords. [[spoiler: Until The Doctor shows up, it ''works''.]]
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* GenreSavvy: The Daleks get one. The best way to kill of Gallifrey? Send 10,000,000 Daleks down onto the planet and drastically out number the Timlords. [[spoiler: Until The Doctor shows up, it ''works''.]]
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* JustBeforeTheEnd: Of Gallifrey.
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* JustBeforeTheEnd: Of Gallifrey.
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* MoodWhiplash: It's a fairly low-key short as you see the Time Lord soldier being outfitted with a suit of armor. Then the screen suddenly flips to the same soldier outfitting the viewpoint guy screaming "RUN! EVERYBODY, JUST '''RUN'''!"
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* EvilHasToWinOnlyOnce: It's mentioned it would take only one Dalek getting through the sky trenches to destroy all of Arcadia. Now imagine what '''ten million''' would do...
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* EvilHasToWinOnlyOnce: EvilOnlyHasToWinOnce: It's mentioned it would take only one Dalek getting through the sky trenches to destroy all of Arcadia. Now imagine what '''ten million''' would do...
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* EvilHasToWinOnlyOnce: It's mentioned it would take only one Dalek getting through the sky trenches to destroy all of Arcadia. Now imagine what '''ten million''' would do...
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->''[[TemptingFate Nothing can get past the sky trench.]] [[EvilOnlyHasToWinOnce But if just one Dalek made it through, it could destroy this entire city.]] That's all it would take. One Dalek. One Dalek, acting alone, and we're finished.''
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* YouWontFeelAThing: "From now on the head-cam is downloading directly to your memory. A tiny part of your brain is now a hard-drive. Takes up hardly any space, you won't feel a thing. Now, at the beginning sometimes this has side effects-- (''cut to vision of a screaming soldier'')
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* YouWontFeelAThing: "From now on the head-cam is downloading directly to your memory. A tiny part of your brain is now a hard-drive. Takes up hardly any space, you won't feel a thing. Now, at the beginning sometimes this has side effects-- effects--" (''cut to vision of a screaming soldier'')
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* {{Determinator}}: To the Daleks, who have been so dogged at removing the Time Lords from the universe for the better part of four centuries that they've finally [[WeHaveReserves sent just about every one of their kind to one place]] so they could perform a one-sided veritable slaughter of the species.
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[[caption-width-right:330:Pictured: about 18 airborne Daleks on Gallifrey. Not pictured: approximately '''9,999,982''' more. Welcome to the final day of the Time War. [[PrepareToDie Prepare to be exterminated.]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:330:Pictured: about 18 airborne Daleks on Gallifrey. Not pictured: approximately '''9,999,982''' '''[[HolyShitQuotient 9,999,982]]''' more. Welcome to the final day of the Time War. [[PrepareToDie Prepare to be exterminated.]]]]
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A ''Doctor Who'' minisode released on iTunes on the 20th of November 2013, serving as [[Recap/DoctorWho50thPrequelTheNightOfTheDoctor another prequel]] to "The Day of the Doctor".
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A ''Doctor Who'' minisode released on iTunes on the 20th of November 2013, serving as [[Recap/DoctorWho50thPrequelTheNightOfTheDoctor another prequel]] to "The Day of the Doctor". It takes place shortly after the events of the novel ''[[Recap/NewSeriesAdventuresEnginesofWar Engines of War]]''.
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The last day of the Time War is underway. That same soldier who thought one Dalek was bad enough will now rush down to the residential areas of Gallifrey, after the sky trenches have been lost. He tells the War Council that Arcadia has fallen, and retreats to a ruined street for cover. Here, he will meet an elderly man out of nowhere, [[Recap/DoctorWho50thASTheDayOfTheDoctor asking the soldier that he needs to borrow the his gun...]]
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The last day of the Time War is underway. That same soldier who thought one Dalek was bad enough will now rush down to the residential areas of Gallifrey, after the sky trenches have been lost. He tells the War Council that Arcadia has fallen, and retreats to a ruined street for cover. Here, he will meet an elderly man out of nowhere, [[Recap/DoctorWho50thASTheDayOfTheDoctor asking the soldier that he needs to borrow the his gun...]]
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The last day of the Time War is underway. That same soldier who thought one Dalek was bad enough will now rush down to the residential areas of Gallifrey, after the sky trenches have been lost. He tells the War Council that Arcadia has fallen, and retreats to a ruined street for cover. Here, he will meet an elderly man out of nowhere, [[Recap/DoctorWho50thASTheDayOfTheDoctor asking him the soldier that he needs to borrow the soldier's his gun...]]
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The last day of the Time War is underway. That same soldier who thought one Dalek was bad enough will now rush down to the residential areas of Gallifrey, after the sky trenches have been lost. He tells the War Council that Arcadia has fallen, and retreats to a ruined street for cover. Here, he will meet an elderly man, man out of nowhere, [[Recap/DoctorWho50thASTheDayOfTheDoctor asking him that he needs to borrow the soldier's gun...]]
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The last day of the Time War is underway. That same soldier who thought one Dalek was bad enough will now rush down to the residential areas of Gallifrey, after the sky trenches have been lost. He tells the War Council that Arcadia has fallen, and retreats to a ruined street for cover. Here, he will meet an elderly man, [[Recap/DoctorWho50thASTheDayOfTheDoctor asking him that he needs to borrow the soldier's gun...
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The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes- as ''hundreds'' upon '''''millions'''''' of Daleks pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit, opens fire, and he is apparently killed.
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The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes- as ''hundreds'' upon '''''millions'''''' '''''millions''''' of Daleks pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit, opens fire, and he is apparently killed.
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The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes- as ''hundreds'' upon '''''millions'''''' of Daleks pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit, opens fire, and he is apparently killed.
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->''[[TemptingFate Nothing can get past the sky trench.]] But if just one Dalek made it through, it could destroy this entire city. That's all it would take. One Dalek. One Dalek, acting alone, and we're finished.''
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->''[[TemptingFate Nothing can get past the sky trench.]] [[EvilOnlyHasToWinOnce But if just one Dalek made it through, it could destroy this entire city. city.]] That's all it would take. One Dalek. One Dalek, acting alone, and we're finished.''
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Someone is fitted with a head-cam which, in the event of his death, will transmit all the information to his family drive. It is an ordinary day for this new recruit. However, the installation of his head-cam is giving him problems. He can't speak, and it's causing terrifying mental flashes that indicate ominous events are approaching. He is at Arcadia, apparently "The safest place on Gallifrey". Another soldier tells him that Arcadia is protected by 400 sky-trenches, nobody in history has got through even two. However one Dalek would be enough to destroy them all. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek, and then many more Daleks attack and he is apparently killed.
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Someone is fitted with a head-cam which, in the event of his death, will transmit all the information to his family drive. It is an ordinary day for this new recruit. However, the installation of his head-cam is giving him problems. He can't speak, and it's causing terrifying mental flashes that indicate ominous events are approaching. He is at Arcadia, apparently "The safest place on Gallifrey". Another soldier tells him that Arcadia is protected by 400 sky-trenches, nobody in history has got through even two. However one Dalek would be enough to destroy them all.
The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees aDalek, Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then many more the true threat strikes- as ''hundreds'' of Daleks attack pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit, opens fire, and he is apparently killed.
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Someone is fitted with a head-cam which, in the event of his death, will transmit all the information to his family drive. He is at Arcadia, apparently "The safest place on Gallifrey". Another soldier tells him that Arcadia is protected by 400 sky-trenches, nobody in history has got through even two. However one Dalek would be enough to destroy them all. While scanning he sees a Dalek, and then many more Daleks attack and he is apparently killed. You can watch it [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Eem2Ehq_xBI on YouTube]].
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Someone is fitted with a head-cam which, in the event of his death, will transmit all the information to his family drive. It is an ordinary day for this new recruit. However, the installation of his head-cam is giving him problems. He can't speak, and it's causing terrifying mental flashes that indicate ominous events are approaching. He is at Arcadia, apparently "The safest place on Gallifrey". Another soldier tells him that Arcadia is protected by 400 sky-trenches, nobody in history has got through even two. However one Dalek would be enough to destroy them all. While scanning scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek, and then many more Daleks attack and he is apparently killed. killed.
You can watch it [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Eem2Ehq_xBI on YouTube]].
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-->''[[TemptingFate Nothing can get past the sky trench. But if just one Dalek made it through, it could destroy this entire city. That's all it would take. One Dalek. One Dalek, acting alone, and we're finished.''
-->-- A '''Time Lord soldier''' who had '''NO''' idea how bad the situation was about to get.
-->-- A '''Time Lord soldier''' who had '''NO''' idea how bad the situation was about to get.
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