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A ''Doctor Who'' minisode released on iTunes on the 20th of November 2013, serving as [[Recap/DoctorWho50thPrequelTheNightOfTheDoctor another prequel]] to "The Day of the Doctor". It takes place shortly after the events of the novel ''[[Recap/NewSeriesAdventuresEnginesOfWar Engines of War]]''.
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A ''Doctor Who'' minisode released on iTunes on the 20th of November 2013, serving as [[Recap/DoctorWho50thPrequelTheNightOfTheDoctor another prequel]] to "The "[[Recap/DoctorWho50thASTheDayOfTheDoctor The Day of the Doctor".Doctor]]". It takes place shortly after the events of the novel ''[[Recap/NewSeriesAdventuresEnginesOfWar Engines of War]]''.
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[[caption-width-right:330:Pictured: 15 airborne Daleks on Gallifrey (and the butt of one partially off-image). Not pictured: approximately '''a billion billion''' more.[[note]]And, no, that's ''not'' an accidental repeat of a word as, according to the War Doctor, there are "a billion billion Daleks" firing on the planet in ''The Day of the Doctor''. That is, '''one quintillion''', a one followed by ''18'' zeroes.[[/note]] Welcome to the final day of the Time War. [[PrepareToDie Prepare to be exterminated.]] Be warned - it's gonna ''suck.'']]
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[[caption-width-right:330:Pictured: 15 airborne Daleks on Gallifrey (and the butt of one partially off-image). Not pictured: approximately '''a billion billion''' more.[[note]]And, no, that's ''not'' an accidental repeat of a word as, according to the War Doctor, there are "a billion billion Daleks" firing on the planet in ''The Day of the Doctor''. That is, '''one quintillion''', ''quintillion''''', a one followed by ''18'' zeroes.[[/note]] Welcome to the final day of the Time War. [[PrepareToDie Prepare to be exterminated.]] Be warned - it's gonna ''suck.'']]
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[[caption-width-right:330:Pictured: 15 airborne Daleks on Gallifrey (and the butt of one partially off-image). Not pictured: approximately '''a billion billion'''[[note]]And, no, that's ''not'' an accidental repeat of a word as, according to the War Doctor, there are "a billion billion Daleks" firing on the planet in ''The Day of the Doctor''. That is, '''one quintillion'''.[[/note]] more. Welcome to the final day of the Time War. [[PrepareToDie Prepare to be exterminated.]] Be warned - it's gonna ''suck.'']]
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[[caption-width-right:330:Pictured: 15 airborne Daleks on Gallifrey (and the butt of one partially off-image). Not pictured: approximately '''a billion billion'''[[note]]And, billion''' more.[[note]]And, no, that's ''not'' an accidental repeat of a word as, according to the War Doctor, there are "a billion billion Daleks" firing on the planet in ''The Day of the Doctor''. That is, '''one quintillion'''.quintillion''', a one followed by ''18'' zeroes.[[/note]] more. Welcome to the final day of the Time War. [[PrepareToDie Prepare to be exterminated.]] Be warned - it's gonna ''suck.'']]
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[[caption-width-right:330:Pictured: 15 airborne Daleks on Gallifrey (and the butt of one partially off-image). Not pictured: approximately '''a billion billion'''[[note]]And, no, that's ''not'' an accidental repeat of a word as, according to the War Doctor, there are "a billion billion Daleks" firing on the planet in ''The Day of the Doctor''.[[/note]] more. Welcome to the final day of the Time War. [[PrepareToDie Prepare to be exterminated.]] Be warned - it's gonna ''suck.'']]
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[[caption-width-right:330:Pictured: 15 airborne Daleks on Gallifrey (and the butt of one partially off-image). Not pictured: approximately '''a billion billion'''[[note]]And, no, that's ''not'' an accidental repeat of a word as, according to the War Doctor, there are "a billion billion Daleks" firing on the planet in ''The Day of the Doctor''. That is, '''one quintillion'''.[[/note]] more. Welcome to the final day of the Time War. [[PrepareToDie Prepare to be exterminated.]] Be warned - it's gonna ''suck.'']]
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The one where the Daleks ZergRush Gallifrey.
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* ShockingDefeatLegacy: Arcadia, "safest place on Gallifrey", falls to the Daleks. This is the event which provokes the War Doctor to declare "no more".
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* ShockingDefeatLegacy: Arcadia, "safest place on Gallifrey", falls to the Daleks. This is the event which provokes the War Doctor to declare "no more".
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The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's hearts start pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes, as '''approximately a billion billion Daleks''' pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit and fires, killing the recruit.
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The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's hearts start heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes, as '''approximately a billion billion Daleks''' pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit and fires, killing the recruit.
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* WhamLine: One for those who remember the Tenth Doctor's admission in "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS28E13Doomsday Doomsday]]"...
--> '''Time Lord Soldier:''' Welcome to [[ResolvedNoodleIncident Arcadia]].
--> '''Time Lord Soldier:''' Welcome to [[ResolvedNoodleIncident Arcadia]].
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The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes, as '''approximately a billion billion Daleks''' pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit and fires, killing the recruit.
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The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts hearts start pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes, as '''approximately a billion billion Daleks''' pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit and fires, killing the recruit.
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The rest... well, that ends about as well as you'd ''expect'' it to end.
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[[caption-width-right:330:Pictured: about 18 15 airborne Daleks on Gallifrey.Gallifrey (and the butt of one partially off-image). Not pictured: approximately '''a billion billion'''[[note]]And, no, that's ''not'' an accidental repeat of a word as, according to the War Doctor, there are "a billion billion Daleks" firing on the planet in ''The Day of the Doctor''.[[/note]] more. Welcome to the final day of the Time War. [[PrepareToDie Prepare to be exterminated.]] Be warned - it's gonna ''suck.'']]
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The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes, as '''approximately a bullion billion Daleks''' pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit and fires, killing the recruit.
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The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes, as '''approximately a bullion billion billion Daleks''' pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit and fires, killing the recruit.
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[[caption-width-right:330:Pictured: about 18 airborne Daleks on Gallifrey. Not pictured: approximately '''9,999,982''' '''a billion billion'''[[note]]And, no, that's ''not'' an accidental repeat of a word as, according to the War Doctor, there are "a billion billion Daleks" firing on the planet in ''The Day of the Doctor''.[[/note]] more. Welcome to the final day of the Time War. [[PrepareToDie Prepare to be exterminated.]]]]
]] Be warned - it's gonna ''suck.'']]
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Someone is fitted with a head-cam which, in the event of his death, will transmit all the information to his family drive. It is an ordinary day for this new recruit. However, the installation of his head-cam is giving him problems. He can't speak, and it's causing terrifying mental flashes that indicate ominous events are approaching. He is at Arcadia, apparently "the safest place on Gallifrey". Another soldier tells him that Arcadia is protected by 400 sky-trenches, nobody in history has got through even two. However, one Dalek would be enough to destroy them all.
The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes, as ''hundreds'' upon '''''millions''''' of Daleks pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit and fires, killing the recruit.
The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes, as ''hundreds'' upon '''''millions''''' of Daleks pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit and fires, killing the recruit.
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Someone is fitted with a head-cam which, in the event of his death, will transmit all the information to his family drive. It is an ordinary day for this new recruit. However, the installation of his head-cam is giving him problems. He can't speak, and it's causing terrifying mental flashes that indicate ominous events are approaching. He is at Arcadia, apparently "the safest place on Gallifrey". Another soldier tells him that Arcadia is protected by 400 sky-trenches, nobody in history has got through even two.two[[note]] Although we all know The Doctor's probably tried it before, just because he can![[/note]]. However, one Dalek would be enough to destroy them all.
The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes, as''hundreds'' upon '''''millions''''' of Daleks '''approximately a bullion billion Daleks''' pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit and fires, killing the recruit.
The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes, as
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* EvilOnlyHasToWinOnce: It's mentioned it would take only one Dalek getting through the sky trenches to destroy all of Arcadia. Now imagine what '''ten million''' would do...
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* EvilOnlyHasToWinOnce: It's mentioned it would take only one Dalek getting through the sky trenches to destroy all of Arcadia. Now imagine what '''ten million''' '''a billion billion of them''' would do...
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* TemptingFate: Safest place on Gallifrey indeed...
* ThisCannotBe: That couldn't possibly be a Dalek....There are 400 sky trenches....
* ThisCannotBe: That couldn't possibly be a Dalek....There are 400 sky trenches....
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* TemptingFate: Safest place on Gallifrey indeed... Nothing can get through the sky-trenches indeed...
* ThisCannotBe: That couldn't possibly be a Dalek.... There are 400 sky trenches....
* ThisCannotBe: That couldn't possibly be a Dalek.... There are 400 sky trenches....
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[[caption-width-right:330:Pictured: about 18 airborne Daleks on Gallifrey. Not pictured: approximately '''[[HolyShitQuotient 9,999,982]]''' more. Welcome to the final day of the Time War. [[PrepareToDie Prepare to be exterminated.]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:330:Pictured: about 18 airborne Daleks on Gallifrey. Not pictured: approximately '''[[HolyShitQuotient 9,999,982]]''' '''9,999,982''' more. Welcome to the final day of the Time War. [[PrepareToDie Prepare to be exterminated.]]]]
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* OhCrap: The soldier helping him when he sees a Dalek has got through.
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* OhCrap: The soldier helping him absolutely freaks out when he sees a Dalek has got through.
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Covered in the Heroic Mime example.
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* TheVoiceless: The unseen soldier cannot speak properly because of a side effect caused by hooking up the web cam.
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The one where the Daleks ZergRush the Time Lords.
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The one where the Daleks ZergRush the Time Lords.
Gallifrey.
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The one where the Daleks launch [[ZergRush everything but the kitchen sink]] at the Time Lords.
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The one where the Daleks launch [[ZergRush everything but the kitchen sink]] at ZergRush the Time Lords.
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The one where the Daleks launch a [[ZergRush everything but the kitchen sink]] at the Time Lords.
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The one where the Daleks launch a [[ZergRush everything but the kitchen sink]] at the Time Lords.
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The one with the deadliest ZergRush in the galaxy.
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The one with where the deadliest ZergRush in Daleks launch a [[ZergRush everything but the galaxy.
kitchen sink]] at the Time Lords.
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The one with the deadliest ZergRush in the galaxy.
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** The soldiers' red armour and round helmet design resemble the Chancellery Guards' uniforms from [[Recap/DoctorWhoS14E3TheDeadlyAssassin "The Deadly Assassin"]] and [[Recap/DoctorWhoS15E6TheInvasionOfTime "The Invasion of Time"]].
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** The soldiers' red armour and round helmet design resemble the Chancellery Guards' uniforms from [[Recap/DoctorWhoS14E3TheDeadlyAssassin "The "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS14E3TheDeadlyAssassin The Deadly Assassin"]] Assassin]]" and [[Recap/DoctorWhoS15E6TheInvasionOfTime "The "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS15E6TheInvasionOfTime The Invasion of Time"]].Time]]".
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->''Nothing can get past the sky trench. But if just one Dalek made it through, it could destroy this entire city. That's all it would take. One Dalek. One Dalek, acting alone, and we're finished.''
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Someone is fitted with a head-cam which, in the event of his death, will transmit all the information to his family drive. It is an ordinary day for this new recruit. However, the installation of his head-cam is giving him problems. He can't speak, and it's causing terrifying mental flashes that indicate ominous events are approaching. He is at Arcadia, apparently "The safest place on Gallifrey". Another soldier tells him that Arcadia is protected by 400 sky-trenches, nobody in history has got through even two. However, one Dalek would be enough to destroy them all.
The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes- as ''hundreds'' upon '''''millions''''' of Daleks pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit and fires, killing the recruit.
The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes- as ''hundreds'' upon '''''millions''''' of Daleks pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit and fires, killing the recruit.
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Someone is fitted with a head-cam which, in the event of his death, will transmit all the information to his family drive. It is an ordinary day for this new recruit. However, the installation of his head-cam is giving him problems. He can't speak, and it's causing terrifying mental flashes that indicate ominous events are approaching. He is at Arcadia, apparently "The "the safest place on Gallifrey". Another soldier tells him that Arcadia is protected by 400 sky-trenches, nobody in history has got through even two. However, one Dalek would be enough to destroy them all.
The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threatstrikes- strikes, as ''hundreds'' upon '''''millions''''' of Daleks pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit and fires, killing the recruit.
The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat
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* ShockingDefeatLegacy: Arcadia, "safest place on Gallifrey" falls to the Daleks. This is the event which provokes the War Doctor to declare "no more".
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* ShockingDefeatLegacy: Arcadia, "safest place on Gallifrey" Gallifrey", falls to the Daleks. This is the event which provokes the War Doctor to declare "no more".
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* YouWontFeelAThing: "From now on the head-cam is downloading directly to your memory. A tiny part of your brain is now a hard-drive. Takes up hardly any space, you won't feel a thing. Now, at the beginning sometimes this has side effects--" (''cut to vision of a screaming soldier'')
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* YouWontFeelAThing: "From now on the head-cam is downloading directly to your memory. A tiny part of your brain is now a hard-drive. Takes up hardly any space, you won't feel a thing. Now, at the beginning sometimes this has side effects--" (''cut ''[cut to vision of a screaming soldier'')
soldier]''
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The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes- as ''hundreds'' upon '''''millions''''' of Daleks pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit, opens fire, killing the recruit.
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The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes- as ''hundreds'' upon '''''millions''''' of Daleks pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit, opens fire, recruit and fires, killing the recruit.
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The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes- as ''hundreds'' upon '''''millions''''' of Daleks pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit, opens fire, and he is killed.
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The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes- as ''hundreds'' upon '''''millions''''' of Daleks pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit, opens fire, and he is killed.killing the recruit.
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No "apparently" about it - the soldier whose P.o.V the viewer is experiencing is killed, as evidenced by the red overlay.
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The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes- as ''hundreds'' upon '''''millions''''' of Daleks pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit, opens fire, and he is apparently killed.
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The first soldier has the recruit try out the scanners in his head-cam. While scanning, he notices a blur in the clouds. Zooming in to focus, he sees a Dalek. The recruit's heart starts pulsing madly as the other soldier urges him to lock on and follow that Dalek wherever it goes. Arcadia goes on maximum alert. An alarm is sounded for one Dalek incoming, but then the true threat strikes- as ''hundreds'' upon '''''millions''''' of Daleks pour down from the skies. One stops in front of the recruit, opens fire, and he is apparently killed.
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A ''Doctor Who'' minisode released on iTunes on the 20th of November 2013, serving as [[Recap/DoctorWho50thPrequelTheNightOfTheDoctor another prequel]] to "The Day of the Doctor". It takes place shortly after the events of the novel ''[[Recap/NewSeriesAdventuresEnginesofWar Engines of War]]''.
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A ''Doctor Who'' minisode released on iTunes on the 20th of November 2013, serving as [[Recap/DoctorWho50thPrequelTheNightOfTheDoctor another prequel]] to "The Day of the Doctor". It takes place shortly after the events of the novel ''[[Recap/NewSeriesAdventuresEnginesofWar ''[[Recap/NewSeriesAdventuresEnginesOfWar Engines of War]]''.War]]''.
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Someone is fitted with a head-cam which, in the event of his death, will transmit all the information to his family drive. It is an ordinary day for this new recruit. However, the installation of his head-cam is giving him problems. He can't speak, and it's causing terrifying mental flashes that indicate ominous events are approaching. He is at Arcadia, apparently "The safest place on Gallifrey". Another soldier tells him that Arcadia is protected by 400 sky-trenches, nobody in history has got through even two. However one Dalek would be enough to destroy them all.
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Someone is fitted with a head-cam which, in the event of his death, will transmit all the information to his family drive. It is an ordinary day for this new recruit. However, the installation of his head-cam is giving him problems. He can't speak, and it's causing terrifying mental flashes that indicate ominous events are approaching. He is at Arcadia, apparently "The safest place on Gallifrey". Another soldier tells him that Arcadia is protected by 400 sky-trenches, nobody in history has got through even two.
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** The soldiers' red armor and round helmet design resemble the Chancellery Guards' uniforms from "The Deadly Assassin" and "The Invasion of Time".
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** The soldiers' red armor armour and round helmet design resemble the Chancellery Guards' uniforms from [[Recap/DoctorWhoS14E3TheDeadlyAssassin "The Deadly Assassin" Assassin"]] and [[Recap/DoctorWhoS15E6TheInvasionOfTime "The Invasion of Time".Time"]].
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* HeroicMime: The POV character temporarily lost the ability to speak when first integrated into his armor.
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* HeroicMime: The POV character temporarily lost the ability to speak when first integrated into his armor.armour.