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Eli's back from suspension and eager to see Clare. In writing class, Clare forgives him for Vegas Night. Eli has the perfect date -- tickets to a ChuckPalahniuk reading. But Clare has the awards show tonight -- with her fighting parents in the audience. The reading is after the awards show so Eli and Clare make the date.
At the awards show, Clare's mom is tense and waiting for Clare's dad to come. All the while, she's snappish and angry. She tells Clare not the going to the ChuckPalahniuk reading because it's after curfew. And because both she and her dad need to talk to her. Clare walks away, knowing what the talk is about. In the theater, Clare's dad finally arrives because he wanted to give her flowers. The gesture doesn't please Mrs. Edwards, and both she and Mr. Edwards snap at each other in the audience. Clare wins the award for prop design but her parents are too busy being mad to even really notice. Clare gives her award speech and fortunately, Eli's there to congratulate her. Despite being told not to go out, Clare sneaks out to the reading anyway with Eli.
At the awards show, Clare's mom is tense and waiting for Clare's dad to come. All the while, she's snappish and angry. She tells Clare not the going to the ChuckPalahniuk reading because it's after curfew. And because both she and her dad need to talk to her. Clare walks away, knowing what the talk is about. In the theater, Clare's dad finally arrives because he wanted to give her flowers. The gesture doesn't please Mrs. Edwards, and both she and Mr. Edwards snap at each other in the audience. Clare wins the award for prop design but her parents are too busy being mad to even really notice. Clare gives her award speech and fortunately, Eli's there to congratulate her. Despite being told not to go out, Clare sneaks out to the reading anyway with Eli.
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Eli's back from suspension and eager to see Clare. In writing class, Clare forgives him for Vegas Night. Eli has the perfect date -- tickets to a ChuckPalahniuk Creator/ChuckPalahniuk reading. But Clare has the awards show tonight -- with her fighting parents in the audience. The reading is after the awards show so Eli and Clare make the date.
At the awards show, Clare's mom is tense and waiting for Clare's dad to come. All the while, she's snappish and angry. She tells Clare not the going to theChuckPalahniuk Creator/ChuckPalahniuk reading because it's after curfew. And because both she and her dad need to talk to her. Clare walks away, knowing what the talk is about. In the theater, Clare's dad finally arrives because he wanted to give her flowers. The gesture doesn't please Mrs. Edwards, and both she and Mr. Edwards snap at each other in the audience. Clare wins the award for prop design but her parents are too busy being mad to even really notice. Clare gives her award speech and fortunately, Eli's there to congratulate her. Despite being told not to go out, Clare sneaks out to the reading anyway with Eli.
At the awards show, Clare's mom is tense and waiting for Clare's dad to come. All the while, she's snappish and angry. She tells Clare not the going to the
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It\'s Not Rape If You Enjoyed It to Not If They Enjoyed It Rationalization per Rape Tropes Special Efforts thread
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After the party, Declan is moping. Fiona comes sloshing up with a glass of wine, telling him it isn't over yet. She fakes a drunken-state, and Holly J and Declan help her up to bed. Sav takes his cue to leave. After Fiona's put to bed, Holly J comes to sits next to Declan on the couch. They talk about Fiona's drinking some, and then Declan puts the moves on her. He tells Holly J that he misses and brushes her shoulder. Holly J is a bit put off. He starts kissing her shoulder and her neck. Holly J tells him no, they shouldn't be doing this. He continues to kiss her and Holly J looks scared as he kisses her neck. Declan tells her that the moment feels right and Holly J knows it is. He tells her that he loves her. And Holly J turns and kisses him. They then [[SexIsGood have sex.]] [[DateRape Or not.]] [[ItsNotRapeIfYouEnjoyedIt Possibly.]]
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After the party, Declan is moping. Fiona comes sloshing up with a glass of wine, telling him it isn't over yet. She fakes a drunken-state, and Holly J and Declan help her up to bed. Sav takes his cue to leave. After Fiona's put to bed, Holly J comes to sits next to Declan on the couch. They talk about Fiona's drinking some, and then Declan puts the moves on her. He tells Holly J that he misses and brushes her shoulder. Holly J is a bit put off. He starts kissing her shoulder and her neck. Holly J tells him no, they shouldn't be doing this. He continues to kiss her and Holly J looks scared as he kisses her neck. Declan tells her that the moment feels right and Holly J knows it is. He tells her that he loves her. And Holly J turns and kisses him. They then [[SexIsGood have sex.]] sex]]. [[DateRape Or not.]] [[ItsNotRapeIfYouEnjoyedIt Possibly.]]
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After the party, Declan is moping. Fiona comes sloshing up with a glass of wine, telling him it isn't over yet. She fakes a drunken-state, and Holly J and Declan help her up to bed. Sav takes his cue to leave. After Fiona's put to bed, Holly J comes to sits next to Declan on the couch. They talk about Fiona's drinking some, and then Declan puts the moves on her. He tells Holly J that he misses and brushes her shoulder. Holly J is a bit put off. He starts kissing her shoulder and her neck. Holly J tells him no, they shouldn't be doing this. He continues to kiss her and Holly J looks scared as he kisses her neck. Declan tells her that the moment feels right and Holly J knows it is. He tells her that he loves her. And Holly J turns and kisses him. They then [[SexIsGood have sex.]] [[YourMileageMayVary Maybe.]] [[DateRape Or not.]] [[ItsNotRapeIfYouEnjoyedIt Possibly.]]
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After the party, Declan is moping. Fiona comes sloshing up with a glass of wine, telling him it isn't over yet. She fakes a drunken-state, and Holly J and Declan help her up to bed. Sav takes his cue to leave. After Fiona's put to bed, Holly J comes to sits next to Declan on the couch. They talk about Fiona's drinking some, and then Declan puts the moves on her. He tells Holly J that he misses and brushes her shoulder. Holly J is a bit put off. He starts kissing her shoulder and her neck. Holly J tells him no, they shouldn't be doing this. He continues to kiss her and Holly J looks scared as he kisses her neck. Declan tells her that the moment feels right and Holly J knows it is. He tells her that he loves her. And Holly J turns and kisses him. They then [[SexIsGood have sex.]] [[YourMileageMayVary Maybe.]] [[DateRape Or not.]] [[ItsNotRapeIfYouEnjoyedIt Possibly.]]
