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* PetTheDog: Emily asks what Todd would have done with his money had he not given it all away and then gets him exactly that with her money.
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* BorrowedCatchphrase: Diane, twice in the episode. First by ending a voicemail for Bojack with "This is Diane by the way. Nguyen.... obviously." Then by reacting to the news that Mr. Peanutbutter's candidacy for governor has become legitimate with "Diane, Diane, what now?"
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* BorrowedCatchphrase: Diane, twice in the episode. First by ending a voicemail for Bojack [=BoJack=] with "This is Diane by the way. Nguyen.... obviously." Then by reacting to the news that Mr. Peanutbutter's candidacy for governor has become legitimate with "Diane, Diane, what now?"
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Adding context to an example. Removing one example that doens't show what coincidence is contrived.
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* ContrivedCoincidence:
** As it turns out, back in the day Mr. Peanutbutter just happened to wander into the set of "Untitled Horsin' Around Knockoff" and accidentally charmed his way into the main role.
** Similarly, Coodchuck-Berkowitz just happened to be a champion in the same event that Mr. Peanutbutter challenged him in.
** As it turns out, back in the day Mr. Peanutbutter just happened to wander into the set of "Untitled Horsin' Around Knockoff" and accidentally charmed his way into the main role.
** Similarly, Coodchuck-Berkowitz just happened to be a champion in the same event that Mr. Peanutbutter challenged him in.
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* ContrivedCoincidence:
** As it turns out, back in the day Mr. Peanutbutter just happened to wander into the set of "Untitled Horsin' Around Knockoff" and accidentally charmed his way into the main role.
** Similarly,ContrivedCoincidence: Coodchuck-Berkowitz just happened to be a champion in the same event that Mr. Peanutbutter challenged him in.
** As it turns out, back in the day Mr. Peanutbutter just happened to wander into the set of "Untitled Horsin' Around Knockoff" and accidentally charmed his way into the main role.
** Similarly,
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Todd when he breaks his “Drone Throne” controller.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Todd was really enjoying his "Drone Throne" to fly around and create shenanigans until he breaks the controller and then it starts flying higher. [[LampshadeHanging Lampshaded]] by Todd when he breaks his “Drone Throne” controller.him.
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* SubvertedRhymeEveryOccasion: Ralph makes Princess Carolyn a card that reads, "I'm so smitten with my favorite little... adult cat."
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* AbsenteeActor: The episode takes place immediately after Bojack's suicide attempt in the middle of the desert at the end of season 3. He hasn't returned to LA and, therefore, isn't present in the episode, with the exception of a single line where he says his name wrong during his voicemail greeting.
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* BorrowedCatchphrase: Diane, twice in the episode. First by ending a voicemail for Bojack with "This is Diane by the way. Nguyen.... obviously." Then by reacting to the news that Mr. Peanutbutter's candidacy for governor has become legitimate with "Diane, Diane, what now?"
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* FormulaBreakingEpisode: It's the first episode not to include [=BoJack=] himself.
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* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: It's the first and only episode so far not to include [=BoJack=] himself.
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-->'''Mr. Peanutbutter:''' Tommy Schlamme, schmommy... ''(starts looking doubtful)'' ...Schlamme
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-->'''Mr. Peanutbutter:''' Tommy Schlamme, schmommy... ''(starts looking doubtful)'' ...SchlammeSchlamme.
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* WordSchmord: Mr. Peanutbutter has some trouble making this work when Princess Caroline suggests working with Creator/ThomasSchlamme.
-->'''Mr. Peanutbutter:''' Tommy Schlamme, schmommy... ''(starts looking doubtful)'' ...Schlamme
-->'''Mr. Peanutbutter:''' Tommy Schlamme, schmommy... ''(starts looking doubtful)'' ...Schlamme
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-->_- '''Tom Jumbo-Grumbo'''
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[=BoJack=] has gone missing and Diane has been keeping him up to date on Mr. Peanutbutter's political campaign by leaving him messages on his voicemail.
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->''"Of course there are reasons a gubernatorial election should not be decided by a ski race, but are there also reasons it should?"''
-->_- '''Tom Jumbo-Grumbo'''
[=BoJack=] has gone missing and Diane has been keeping him up to date on Mr. Peanutbutter's political campaign by leaving him messages on hisvoicemail.
voicemail. Namely, that he has challenged the current Governor to a ski race for the position, despite not at all knowing how to ski.
->''"Of course there are reasons a gubernatorial election should not be decided by a ski race, but are there also reasons it should?"''
-->_- '''Tom Jumbo-Grumbo'''
[=BoJack=] has gone missing and Diane has been keeping him up to date on Mr. Peanutbutter's political campaign by leaving him messages on his
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* ContrivedCoincidence: As it turns out, back in the day Mr. Peanutbutter just happened to wander into the set of "Untitled Horsin' Around Knockoff" and accidentally charmed his way into the main role.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: ContrivedCoincidence:
** As it turns out, back in the day Mr. Peanutbutter just happened to wander into the set of "Untitled Horsin' Around Knockoff" and accidentally charmed his way into the main role.
** As it turns out, back in the day Mr. Peanutbutter just happened to wander into the set of "Untitled Horsin' Around Knockoff" and accidentally charmed his way into the main role.
