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1.) Too fantastical 2.) Doesn't provide a Bait And Switch. 3.) Too fantastical. 4.) Character reaction.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Not only does Jemma have to deal with psychological rehabilitation, but also physical since the environment of the planet she was on was significantly different from Earth's (e.g. different oxygen levels, force of gravity, vitamin D deficiency because of no sunlight, respiratory distress because of all the dust, etc.).
** The ATCU is trying to step into the vacuum left by S.H.I.E.L.D.'s fall, but while Rosalind has established herself as a player in the game that would have done well against the likes of HYDRA, Coulson points out that she has no idea how to deal with the current situation efficiently.
** Lincoln uses [[ShockAndAwe his powers]] to [[BlastingItOutOfTheirHands zap a metal bat out of John's hands]]. This also causes John to undergo cardiac arrest and die from the fear of him using his powers, or possibly electrical interference with his heart or pacemaker. Also, Lincoln tries to use his powers like a MagicalDefibrillator on John, and having been a doctor, he's probably had to try it a few times. It's still not 100% effective though.
** Daisy {{Unperson}}ed herself before the series started. Naturally, having no information on her piques Rosalind's interest.
** Not only does Jemma have to deal with psychological rehabilitation, but also physical since the environment of the planet she was on was significantly different from Earth's (e.g. different oxygen levels, force of gravity, vitamin D deficiency because of no sunlight, respiratory distress because of all the dust, etc.).
** The ATCU is trying to step into the vacuum left by S.H.I.E.L.D.'s fall, but while Rosalind has established herself as a player in the game that would have done well against the likes of HYDRA, Coulson points out that she has no idea how to deal with the current situation efficiently.
** Lincoln uses [[ShockAndAwe his powers]] to [[BlastingItOutOfTheirHands zap a metal bat out of John's hands]]. This also causes John to undergo cardiac arrest and die from the fear of him using his powers, or possibly electrical interference with his heart or pacemaker. Also, Lincoln tries to use his powers like a MagicalDefibrillator on John, and having been a doctor, he's probably had to try it a few times. It's still not 100% effective though.
** Daisy {{Unperson}}ed herself before the series started. Naturally, having no information on her piques Rosalind's interest.
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* CommonalityConnection: Coulson and Rosalind bond over their shared love of vintage cars.
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Ambiguity Index wick cleaning.
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* NotSoDifferent: Rosalind and Coulson. She shows up for their meeting driving a vintage convertible roadster. Hers probably doesn't fly, though.
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Daisy has to talk Lincoln down, convince him that he's not a monster after John's death.
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* HeelRealization: Downplayed. Rosalind realizes she's been a dick about Phil's hand, because she didn't know it was a recent injury and still a touchy subject.
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* HypocriticalHumor: Coulson and Rosalind bond over their shared love of vintage cars.
-->'''Rosalind:''' MyEyesAreUpHere.\\
'''Phil:''' Busted. Sorry. Does she have a name?\\
'''Rosalind:''' I love my car, but it's just a car. And it's a him.
-->'''Rosalind:''' MyEyesAreUpHere.\\
'''Phil:''' Busted. Sorry. Does she have a name?\\
'''Rosalind:''' I love my car, but it's just a car. And it's a him.
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* MyEyesAreUpHere: Rosalind is mildly annoyed that Coulson can't stop staring at her gorgeous car.
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* NotSoDifferent: Rosalind and Coulson. She shows up for their meeting driving a vintage convertible roadster. Hers probably doesn't fly, though.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: Jemma is incredibly jumpy after 6 months on an alien world. Every sound freaks her out.
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* SacrificialLamb: Lincoln's sponsor is built up as an absurdly good guy, driving a really long way to pick Lincoln up, then agreeing immediately to sell Lincoln his car, only to have him die accidentally.
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* BigFun: Spud likes greeting people with a great big hug.
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** Not only does Jemma have to deal with psychological rehabilitation, but also physical since the environment of the planet she was on was significantly different from Earth's (e.g. different oxygen levels, force of gravity, vitamin deficiency because of a radically changed diet, etc.).
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** Not only does Jemma have to deal with psychological rehabilitation, but also physical since the environment of the planet she was on was significantly different from Earth's (e.g. different oxygen levels, force of gravity, vitamin D deficiency because of a radically changed diet, no sunlight, respiratory distress because of all the dust, etc.).
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* RealityEnsues:
** Not only does Jemma have to deal with psychological rehabilitation, but also physical since the environment of the planet she was on was significantly different from Earth's (e.g. different oxygen levels, force of gravity, vitamin deficiency because of a radically changed diet, etc.).
** The ATCU is trying to step into the vacuum left by S.H.I.E.L.D.'s fall, but while Rosalind has established herself as a player in the game that would have done well against the likes of HYDRA, Coulson points out that she has no idea how to deal with the current situation efficiently.
** Lincoln uses [[ShockAndAwe his powers]] to [[BlastingItOutOfTheirHands zap a metal bat out of John's hands]]. This also causes John to undergo cardiac arrest and die from the fear of him using his powers, or possibly electrical interference with his heart or pacemaker. Also, Lincoln tries to use his powers like a MagicalDefibrillator on John, and having been a doctor, he's probably had to try it a few times. It's still not 100% effective though.
** Daisy {{Unperson}}ed herself before the series started. Naturally, having no information on her piques Rosalind's interest.
** Not only does Jemma have to deal with psychological rehabilitation, but also physical since the environment of the planet she was on was significantly different from Earth's (e.g. different oxygen levels, force of gravity, vitamin deficiency because of a radically changed diet, etc.).
** The ATCU is trying to step into the vacuum left by S.H.I.E.L.D.'s fall, but while Rosalind has established herself as a player in the game that would have done well against the likes of HYDRA, Coulson points out that she has no idea how to deal with the current situation efficiently.
** Lincoln uses [[ShockAndAwe his powers]] to [[BlastingItOutOfTheirHands zap a metal bat out of John's hands]]. This also causes John to undergo cardiac arrest and die from the fear of him using his powers, or possibly electrical interference with his heart or pacemaker. Also, Lincoln tries to use his powers like a MagicalDefibrillator on John, and having been a doctor, he's probably had to try it a few times. It's still not 100% effective though.
** Daisy {{Unperson}}ed herself before the series started. Naturally, having no information on her piques Rosalind's interest.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Not only does Jemma have to deal with psychological rehabilitation, but also physical since the environment of the planet she was on was significantly different from Earth's (e.g. different oxygen levels, force of gravity, vitamin deficiency because of a radically changed diet, etc.).
** The ATCU is trying to step into the vacuum left by S.H.I.E.L.D.'s fall, but while Rosalind has established herself as a player in the game that would have done well against the likes of HYDRA, Coulson points out that she has no idea how to deal with the current situation efficiently.
** Lincoln uses [[ShockAndAwe his powers]] to [[BlastingItOutOfTheirHands zap a metal bat out of John's hands]]. This also causes John to undergo cardiac arrest and die from the fear of him using his powers, or possibly electrical interference with his heart or pacemaker. Also, Lincoln tries to use his powers like a MagicalDefibrillator on John, and having been a doctor, he's probably had to try it a few times. It's still not 100% effective though.
** Daisy {{Unperson}}ed herself before the series started. Naturally, having no information on her piques Rosalind's interest.
** Not only does Jemma have to deal with psychological rehabilitation, but also physical since the environment of the planet she was on was significantly different from Earth's (e.g. different oxygen levels, force of gravity, vitamin deficiency because of a radically changed diet, etc.).
** The ATCU is trying to step into the vacuum left by S.H.I.E.L.D.'s fall, but while Rosalind has established herself as a player in the game that would have done well against the likes of HYDRA, Coulson points out that she has no idea how to deal with the current situation efficiently.
** Lincoln uses [[ShockAndAwe his powers]] to [[BlastingItOutOfTheirHands zap a metal bat out of John's hands]]. This also causes John to undergo cardiac arrest and die from the fear of him using his powers, or possibly electrical interference with his heart or pacemaker. Also, Lincoln tries to use his powers like a MagicalDefibrillator on John, and having been a doctor, he's probably had to try it a few times. It's still not 100% effective though.
** Daisy {{Unperson}}ed herself before the series started. Naturally, having no information on her piques Rosalind's interest.
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Not So Different has been renamed Not So Different Remark, and requires the characters to acknowledge the similarities in-universe.
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* NotSoDifferent: Rosalind demonstrates that she has a similar sense of humor to Coulson. She also owns a restored convertible, and although she hasn't named it, the car is still a "he" instead of an "it".
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** Lincoln uses [[ShockAndAwe his powers]] to [[BlastingItOutOfTheirHands zap a metal bat out of John's hands]]. This also causes John to undergo cardiac arrest and die from the fear of him using his powers, or possibly electrical interference with his heart or pacemaker. Also, Lincoln tries to use his powers like a MagicDefibrillator on John, and having been a doctor, he's probably had to try it a few times. It's still not 100% effective though.
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** Lincoln uses [[ShockAndAwe his powers]] to [[BlastingItOutOfTheirHands zap a metal bat out of John's hands]]. This also causes John to undergo cardiac arrest and die from the fear of him using his powers, or possibly electrical interference with his heart or pacemaker. Also, Lincoln tries to use his powers like a MagicDefibrillator MagicalDefibrillator on John, and having been a doctor, he's probably had to try it a few times. It's still not 100% effective though.
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** Lincoln uses [[ShockAndAwe his powers]] to [[BlastingItOutOfTheirHands zap a metal bat out of John's hands]]. This also causes John to undergo cardiac arrest and die from the fear of him using his powers, or possibly electrical interference with his heart or pacemaker.
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** Lincoln uses [[ShockAndAwe his powers]] to [[BlastingItOutOfTheirHands zap a metal bat out of John's hands]]. This also causes John to undergo cardiac arrest and die from the fear of him using his powers, or possibly electrical interference with his heart or pacemaker. Also, Lincoln tries to use his powers like a MagicDefibrillator on John, and having been a doctor, he's probably had to try it a few times. It's still not 100% effective though.
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* FacialDialogue: A Hydra thug promises May that she'll have a good time if she goes with him. Her smirk clearly communicates that she plans to have a good time beating him up.
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* NeverHeardThatOneBefore: Rosalind assumes this will be true about her artificial hand jokes. It turns out that Coulson lost his hand recently enough that he really ''hasn't'' heard that one before.
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* NeverHeardThatOneBefore: Rosalind assumes this will be true about Coulson's response to her artificial hand jokes. It turns out that Coulson he lost his hand recently enough that he really ''hasn't'' heard that one before.
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* NeverHeardThatOneBefore: Rosalind assumes this will be true about her artificial hand jokes. It turns out that Coulson lost his hand recently enough that he really ''hasn't'' heard that one before.