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->''"Yeah, and if I recall correctly, that's all the stuff we already knew."''
-->--'''[[SnarkyNonHumanSidekick Jack]]''', ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheSeries'', [[Recap/CalvinAndHobbesTheSeriesS2E4TheTransmitterConspiracyPart1 "The Transmitter Conspiracy Part 1"]]
-->--'''[[SnarkyNonHumanSidekick Jack]]''', ''Fanfic/CalvinAndHobbesTheSeries'', [[Recap/CalvinAndHobbesTheSeriesS2E4TheTransmitterConspiracyPart1 "The Transmitter Conspiracy Part 1"]]
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->"Free screen-writing tip: No member of the human race ever begins a sentence with, "''As you know.''" "'' [[FridgeLogic If they already know it, why are you telling them what they already know?"]]
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-->--'''[[TheSpoonyExperiment The Spoony One]] reviewing ''Night Claws''
-->--'''[[TheSpoonyExperiment The Spoony One]] reviewing ''Night Claws''
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->"Free screenwriting tip: no member of the human race ever begins a sentence with 'as you know'. [[FridgeLogic If they already know it, why are you telling them what they already know?"]]
-->--'''[[TheSpoonyExperiment The Spoony One]] reviewing ''Night Claws''
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->Free screenwriting tip - no member of the human race ever begins a sentence with "As you know". If they already know it, why are you telling them what they already know?
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->Free screenwriting tip - no member of the human race ever begins a sentence with "As you know". If they already know it, why are you telling them what they already know?
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-->--''' BennettTheSage''' reviewing, '''"SonicTheHedgehogTheMovie"'''
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-->-- ''CrashBandicoot2CortexStrikesBack''
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->'''Harry''': All right Murph, Thomas, Faerie Fighting 101.
->'''Thomas''': I know, Harry.
->'''Harry''': Yeah, but I'm going to go over it anyway, so listen up.
-->-- ''TheDresdenFiles/ProvenGuilty''
->'''Thomas''': I know, Harry.
->'''Harry''': Yeah, but I'm going to go over it anyway, so listen up.
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'''Harry:''' Yeah, but I'm going to go over it anyway, so listen up.
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'''Donovan''': [[SarcasmMode When I need an elementary lesson in robotics, I'll file an application with you formally, and in triplicate.]]
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'''Donovan''': [[SarcasmMode [[DeadpanSnarker When I need an elementary lesson in robotics, I'll file an application with you formally, and in triplicate.]]
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-->--''[[WebAnimation/ZeroPunctuation Yahtzee]]'' ''[[http://www.escapistmagazine.com/articles/view/columns/extra-punctuation/9460-Elves-and-Dwarves-Dont-Define-Fantasy on the frequency of this trope in fantasy games.]]''
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->'''Harry''': All right Murph, Thomas, Faerie Fighting 101.
->'''Thomas''': I know, Harry.
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->'''Dr. N. Gin''': But Dr. Cortex, to reach full power, we need not only your master crystal, but also the remaining twenty-five slave crystals on the surface. How do you expect to retrieve them when we don't have any earthbound operatives left?
->'''Dr. Neo Cortex''': '''You fool!''' Do you think I'm unaware of the situation?!
-->-- ''CrashBandicoot 2: [[CrashBandicoot2CortexStrikesBack Cortex Strikes Back]]''
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->'''Powell''': If any [robot] gets within twenty feet of us, we'll be sensed whether we're in the line of sight or not. I hope you know that.\\
'''Donovan''': [[SarcasmMode When I need an elementary lesson in robotics, I'll file an application with you formally, and in triplicate.]]
-->-- ''IRobot'', "Catch That Rabbit"
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->[T]he main character's usually some empty-headed prick who's been living in this world his entire life but still needs to have situations explained to him because I guess he never paid attention in burly warrior school.
-->--''[[ZeroPunctuation Yahtzee]]'' ''[[http://www.escapistmagazine.com/articles/view/columns/extra-punctuation/9460-Elves-and-Dwarves-Dont-Define-Fantasy on the frequency of this trope in fantasy games.]]''
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->{{Seanbaby}}: [as intro news anchor] Tonight's top story: Everything you already know because you're living it.
-->--''[[ElectronicGamingMonthly Broken Pixels]] - WWE Crush Hour''
->{{Seanbaby}}: [as intro news anchor] Tonight's top story: Everything you already know because you're living it.
-->--''[[ElectronicGamingMonthly Broken Pixels]] - WWE Crush Hour''
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'''Max:''' AHHH! Giant talking dog!
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'''Max:''' ''*shocked*'' AHHH! Giant talking dog!dog!
-->-- ''[[Game/SamAndMax Sam & Max: The Devil's Playhouse]]''
-->-- ''[[Game/SamAndMax Sam & Max: The Devil's Playhouse]]''
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->'''Sam:''' Boy, Grandpa Stinky, I sure am glad to see you back working in this diner again after returning from [[OverlyLongGag a long time away to work with your granddaughter who is also coincidentally named Stinky]].\\
'''Grandpa Stinky:''' Was all that ''really'' necessary?\\
'''Sam:''' Sorry. Max is all short-term memory. I have to bring him up to speed every once in a while.\\
'''Max:''' AHHH! Giant talking dog!
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'''Voldemort''': Yes, I ''know'', Quirrell! I hear ''everything you '''here!'''''
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'''Voldemort''': Yes, I ''know'', Quirrell! I hear ''everything you '''here!''''''''hear!'''''
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->'''Quirrell''': My Lord, the Yule Ball has finally arrived and I've brought the key!\\
'''Voldemort''': Yes, I ''know'', Quirrell! I hear ''everything you '''here!'''''
-->--''AVeryPotterMusical''
->'''Quirrell''': My Lord, the Yule Ball has finally arrived and I've brought the key!\\
'''Voldemort''': Yes, I ''know'', Quirrell! I hear ''everything you '''here!'''''
-->--''AVeryPotterMusical''
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-->-- ''TheSimpsons'', "Bart's Inner Child"Child"
->Caslet tried very hard not to sigh. Shannon really didn't understand how irritating it was to have things you already knew explained to you. On the other hand, her lecture mode normally insured that she caught anything you might ''not'' know . . . or that you'd simply forgotten to consider.
-->-- ''[[HonorHarrington Flag in Exile]]''
->Caslet tried very hard not to sigh. Shannon really didn't understand how irritating it was to have things you already knew explained to you. On the other hand, her lecture mode normally insured that she caught anything you might ''not'' know . . . or that you'd simply forgotten to consider.
-->-- ''[[HonorHarrington Flag in Exile]]''
