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** Kelvin is an SickeninglySweet baby unicorn who can create giant hurricanes that [[PersonOfMassDestruction can destroy entire cities, and sometimes even planets at will]]. [[EyeBeams And he can fire ionizing radiation beams from his eyeballs.]]
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** Kelvin is an a SickeninglySweet baby unicorn who can create giant hurricanes that [[PersonOfMassDestruction can destroy entire cities, and sometimes even planets at will]]. will]], [[EyeBeams And and he can fire ionizing radiation powerful laser beams from his eyeballs.eyes.]]
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* '''Downplayed''': Kelvin is a pretty adult unicorn. The horn ''is'' there for a reason...
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* '''Downplayed''': Kelvin is a rather pretty adult unicorn. The horn ''is'' there for a reason...
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'''Viewer B''': [[GenreSavvy Yeah, you didn't know that?]]
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'''Viewer B''': [[GenreSavvy Yeah, you didn't know that?]]that?
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** ...But he is also capable of burning down foes to ashes with his fire-breath attacks.
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** Kelvin is an SickeninglySweet baby unicorn who can create giant hurricanes that [[PersonOfMassDestruction can destroy entire cities, and sometimes even planets at will]].
** Every single cute critter in the universe is trying to kill you.
** Every single cute critter in the universe is trying to kill you.
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** Kelvin is an SickeninglySweet baby unicorn who can create giant hurricanes that [[PersonOfMassDestruction can destroy entire cities, and sometimes even planets at will]].
will]]. [[EyeBeams And he can fire ionizing radiation beams from his eyeballs.]]
** Every single cute critter in theuniverse multiverse is trying to kill you.
** Every single cute critter in the
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* '''Downplayed''': Kelvin is an adult unicorn. The horn is there for a reason.
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* '''Downplayed''': Kelvin is an a pretty adult unicorn. The horn is ''is'' there for a reason.reason...
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** Kelvin is a TastesLikeDiabetes baby unicorn who can create giant hurricanes that [[PersonOfMassDestruction can destroy entire cities, and sometimes even planets at will]].
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** Kelvin is a TastesLikeDiabetes an SickeninglySweet baby unicorn who can create giant hurricanes that [[PersonOfMassDestruction can destroy entire cities, and sometimes even planets at will]].
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???'''Exploited''': Emperor Evulz offers Kelvin as a present to the hero, figuring the unicorn might kill the hero by accident.
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** "And ''that's'' why you can't keep him."
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** "And ''that's'' why you can't [[PetBabyWildAnimal keep him.him]]."
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Back to KillerRabbitKillerRabbit, and ''don't'' try to pet it!
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* '''Reconstructed''': ...but with the proper training, unicorn owners can have their pets shock on command or in defense '''only'''.
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* '''Reconstructed''': ...but with the proper training, unicorn owners can have their pets shock on command or in defense '''only'''. Unicorn owners rarely have to worry about home invasion.
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* '''Discussed''': "...and I suppose that when you're smasming uncontrolably on the ground, you'll still call Kelvin 'Cute.'"
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* '''Discussed''': "...and I suppose that when you're smasming uncontrolably spasming uncontrollably on the ground, you'll still call Kelvin 'Cute.'"
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** Alternatively, the unicorns are the predators.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Kelvin is a TastesLikeDiabetes baby unicorn who can create giant hurricanes that [[PersonOfMassDestruction can destroy entire cities, and sometimes even planets at will]].
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** Kelvin is a TastesLikeDiabetes baby unicorn who can create giant hurricanes that [[PersonOfMassDestruction can destroy entire cities, and sometimes even planets at will]].
** Kelvin is a TastesLikeDiabetes baby unicorn who can create giant hurricanes that [[PersonOfMassDestruction can destroy entire cities, and sometimes even planets at will]].
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** Every single cute critter in the universe is trying to kill you.
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** CuteIsEvil
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Kelvin is an adult unicorn. The horn is there for a reason.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Not all cute creatures have powerful attacking capabilities, but it is impossible to know which.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Not all cute creatures have powerful attacking capabilities, but it is impossible to know which.which do and which don't without someone, at some point, finding out the hard way.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''': Because they are so cute, many people ignore the unicorns' deadliness (even as ''babies''), and so a lot of pet-owner wannabes adopt baby unicorns. [[NotSoHarmlessPunishment Cue a huge spike in electricity-related deaths]].
* '''Reconstructed''': ...but with the proper training, unicorn owners can have their pets shock on command or in defense '''only'''.
* '''Reconstructed''': ...but with the proper training, unicorn owners can have their pets shock on command or in defense '''only'''.
* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''': Because they are so cute, many people ignore the unicorns' deadliness (even as ''babies''), and so a lot of pet-owner wannabes adopt baby unicorns. [[NotSoHarmlessPunishment Cue a huge spike in electricity-related deaths]].
* '''Reconstructed''': ...but with the proper training, unicorn owners can have their pets shock on command or in defense '''only'''.
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%%* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
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Because they are so cute, many people ignore the unicorns' deadliness (even as ''babies''), and so a lot of pet-owner wannabes adopt baby unicorns. [[NotSoHarmlessPunishment Cue a huge spike in electricity-related deaths]].
*'''Reconstructed''': ???'''Reconstructed''': ...but with the proper training, unicorn owners can have their pets shock on command or in defense '''only'''.
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* '''Averted''': No creature is capable of being dangerous as well as cute at the same time.
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* '''Averted''': No creature Unicorns are cute/majestic. That's all there is capable of being dangerous as well as cute at the same time. to it. They're even hesitant to ''stab'' attackers with their trademark horns.
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* '''Discussed''': ???
"...and I suppose that when you're smasming uncontrolably on the ground, you'll still call Kelvin 'Cute.'"
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--> '''Viewer A''': Whoa! Baby unicorns can ''zap'' people?
--> '''Viewer B''': [[GenreSavvy Yeah, you didn't know that?]]
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--> '''Viewer A''': Whoa! Baby unicorns can ''zap'' people?
--> '''Viewer B''': [[GenreSavvy Yeah, you didn't know that?]]
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* '''Justified''': Unicorns were always capable of doing this as a way of self-defense.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Unicorns were always capable of doing this as a way of self-defense.
** Unicorns were always capable of doing this as a way of self-defense.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...But he is also capable of burning down foes to ashes with his fire-breath attacks.
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** ...But he is also capable of burning down foes to ashes with his fire-breath attacks.
** ...But he is also capable of burning down foes to ashes with his fire-breath attacks.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "It's amazing how a critter so cute can cause so much destruction."
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** "It's amazing how a critter so cute can cause so much destruction."
** "It's amazing how a critter so cute can cause so much destruction."
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* '''Invoked''': ???
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* '''Invoked''': ???A species of small carnivores has evolved to look much less dangerous than they actually are as a way of catching potential prey off-guard.
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** "Cute" doesn't discourage most predators, and unicorns are one of the many species that developed something that ''would'''.
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** "Cute" doesn't discourage most predators, and unicorns are one of the many species that developed something that ''would'''.''would''.
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** Or, the not-so-painful electric bolts blind Kelvin's enemies.
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** Or, the not-so-painful The "not-so-painful" electric bolts blind Kelvin's enemies.
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** Or, the bolts [[MindRape leave a huge psychological scar]] on the enemies.
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** Or, Even better, the bolts [[MindRape leave a huge psychological scar]] on the enemies.
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** Or, the not-so-painful electric bolts blind Kelvin's enemies.
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** Or, the bolts [[MindRape leave a huge psychological scar]] on the enemies.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Not all cute creatures have powerful attacking capabilities, but it is impossible to know which.
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* '''Deconstructed''': ???
* '''Reconstructed''': ???
* '''Averted''': No creature is capable of being dangerous as well as cute at the same time.
* '''Enforced''': "Viewers like cute creatures, as well as powerful ones. Let's combine both features to make something that will please all the fans!"
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* '''Averted''': No creature is capable of being dangerous as well as cute at the same time.
* '''Enforced''': "Viewers like cute creatures, as well as powerful ones. Let's combine both features to make something that will please all the fans!"
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** "And ''that's'' why you can't keep him.""
* '''Invoked''': ???
* '''Defied''': Kelvin refuses to learn offensive powers, arguing that his cuteness would act as a natural form of protection.
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* '''Invoked''': ???
* '''Defied''': Kelvin refuses to learn offensive powers, arguing that his cuteness would act as a natural form of protection.
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* '''Conversed''': ???
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** "Cute" doesn't discourage most predators, and unicorns are one of the many species that developed something that ''would'''.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "It's amazing how a critter so cute can cause so much destruction."
** "And ''that's'' why you can't keep him."
** "And ''that's'' why you can't keep him."
