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** Alice [[GunNut always carries some kind of firearms]] [[PsychoKnifeNut or edged weapons with her]], [[HairTriggerTemper goes into a frenzy after hearing any comment in his address, even if it is good]], [[BloodyHilarious collects human limbs and blood]], [[{{Sadist}} enjoys the the]] [[LovesTheSoundOfScreaming screams and cries]] [[ToThePain of frightened and suffering people]], is [[LackOfEmpathy completely devoid of empathy]] [[AboveGoodAndEvil and conscience]], and has fun in {{gorn}}s, [[SadistShow Sadistic Shows]], arson, [[{{Pyromaniac}} arson]], murders, [[TerroristWithoutACause terrorist acts and other atrocities.atrocities]]. "The bigger and more blood, the better," she says.
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** Alice is the [[OnlySaneMan most sane]] and peaceful person, who surrounded psychotic and sadistic people.
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** Alice is the [[OnlySaneMan most sane]] and peaceful person, who is surrounded psychotic and sadistic people.
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** Alice [[GunNut always carries some kind of firearms]] [[PsychoKnifeNut or edged weapons with her]], [[HairTriggerTemper goes into a frenzy after hearing any comment in his address, even if it is good]], [[BloodyHilarious collects human limbs and blood]], [[{{Sadist}} enjoys the screams and cries]] [[ToThePain of frightened and suffering people]], is [[LackOfEmpathy completely devoid of empathy]] [[AboveGoodAndEvil and conscience]], and has fun in {{gorn}}s, [[SadistShow Sadist Show]] arson, murders, terrorist acts and other atrocities. "The bigger and more blood, the better," she says.
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** Alice [[GunNut always carries some kind of firearms]] [[PsychoKnifeNut or edged weapons with her]], [[HairTriggerTemper goes into a frenzy after hearing any comment in his address, even if it is good]], [[BloodyHilarious collects human limbs and blood]], [[{{Sadist}} enjoys the screams and cries]] [[ToThePain of frightened and suffering people]], is [[LackOfEmpathy completely devoid of empathy]] [[AboveGoodAndEvil and conscience]], and has fun in {{gorn}}s, [[SadistShow Sadist Show]] Sadistic Shows]], arson, murders, terrorist acts and other atrocities. "The bigger and more blood, the better," she says.
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** Alice [[GunNut always carries some kind of firearms]] [[PsychoKnifeNut or edged weapons with her]], [[HairTriggerTemper goes into a frenzy after hearing any comment in his address, even if it is good]], [[collects human limbs and blood]], [[{{Sadist}} enjoys the screams and cries]] [[ToThePain of frightened and suffering people]], is [[LackOfEmpathy completely devoid of empathy]] [[AboveGoodAndEvil and conscience]], and has fun in {{Gorn}}s, [[SadistShow Sadist Show]] arson, murders, terrorist acts and other atrocities. "The bigger and more blood, the better," she says.
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** Alice [[GunNut always carries some kind of firearms]] [[PsychoKnifeNut or edged weapons with her]], [[HairTriggerTemper goes into a frenzy after hearing any comment in his address, even if it is good]], [[collects [[BloodyHilarious collects human limbs and blood]], [[{{Sadist}} enjoys the screams and cries]] [[ToThePain of frightened and suffering people]], is [[LackOfEmpathy completely devoid of empathy]] [[AboveGoodAndEvil and conscience]], and has fun in {{Gorn}}s, {{gorn}}s, [[SadistShow Sadist Show]] arson, murders, terrorist acts and other atrocities. "The bigger and more blood, the better," she says.
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** Or she's suffering from a serious mental illness or AmbiguousDisorder (such as Paranoid Schizophrenia).
** Or she's suffering from Intermittent Explosive Disorder where she becomes violent because she can't control her anger.
** Or she suffers from Borderline Personality Disorder where she has irrational mood swings and anger that cause her to act out in violence.
** Or she suffers from SplitPersonality where one of her personalities or alter egos is crazy, unstable and insane.
** Or she's completely insane and doesn't have restraints.
** Or she's suffering from Intermittent Explosive Disorder where she becomes violent because she can't control her anger.
** Or she suffers from Borderline Personality Disorder where she has irrational mood swings and anger that cause her to act out in violence.
** Or she suffers from SplitPersonality where one of her personalities or alter egos is crazy, unstable and insane.
** Or she's completely insane and doesn't have restraints.
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** Or she's suffering from Alice is diagnosed with a serious mental illness or AmbiguousDisorder InUniverse (such as Paranoid Schizophrenia).
**Or she's suffering from Intermittent Explosive Disorder where she Alice becomes violent because she can't control her anger.
anger (aka. Intermittent Explosive Disorder).
**Or she suffers from Borderline Personality Disorder where she Alice has irrational mood swings and anger that cause her to act out in violence.
violence (aka. Borderline Personality Disorder).
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** Or she's [[DemonicPossession possessed by a demon]].
** Or she loses control to a SuperpoweredEvilSide.
** Or she becomes insane over love because LoveMakesYouCrazy.
** Or she was injected with a PsychoSerum.
** Or she gains superhuman powers and abilities and becomes DrunkWithPower.
** Or an actually Ax-Crazy character is [[BrainwashedAndCrazy mind controlling]] her.
** Or she loses control to a SuperpoweredEvilSide.
** Or she becomes insane over love because LoveMakesYouCrazy.
** Or she was injected with a PsychoSerum.
** Or she gains superhuman powers and abilities and becomes DrunkWithPower.
** Or an actually Ax-Crazy character is [[BrainwashedAndCrazy mind controlling]] her.
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** Or she's Alice is [[DemonicPossession possessed by a demon]].
**Or she Alice loses control to a SuperpoweredEvilSide.
**Or she Alice becomes insane over love because LoveMakesYouCrazy.
**Or she Alice was injected with a PsychoSerum.
**Or she Alice gains superhuman powers and abilities and becomes DrunkWithPower.
**Or an actually Ax-Crazy character Alice is [[BrainwashedAndCrazy mind controlling]] her.BrainwashedAndCrazy.
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** Eventually Alice [[KilledOffForReal murders someone for real out of anger.]] When she [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone realizes what she has done,]] she tries to [[TheAtoner apologize]] for her own actions. But people still [[ReformedButRejected treat her like a murderer.]] She eventually [[RageBreakingPoint snaps,]] and begins to kill the [[HeKnowsToomuch witnesses,]] [[ThenLetMeBeEvil the people who accused her of being a murderer,]] and eventually [[OmnicidalManiac everyone]] in [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown the]] [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill most]] [[ExtremeMeleeRevenge brutal]] [[CruelAndUnusualDeath ways]] [[ColdBloodedTorture possible.]]
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* Eventually Alice [[KilledOffForReal murders someone for real out of anger.]] When she [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone realizes what she has done,]] she tries to [[TheAtoner apologize]] for her own actions. But people still [[ReformedButRejected treat her like a murderer.]] She eventually [[RageBreakingPoint snaps,]] and begins to kill the [[HeKnowsToomuch witnesses,]] [[ThenLetMeBeEvil the people who accused her of being a murderer,]] and eventually [[OmnicidalManiac everyone]] in [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown the]] [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill most]] [[ExtremeMeleeRevenge brutal]] [[CruelAndUnusualDeath ways]] [[ColdBloodedTorture possible.]]
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*Eventually Alice [[KilledOffForReal murders someone for real out of anger.]] When she [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone realizes what she has done,]] she tries to [[TheAtoner apologize]] for her own actions. But people still [[ReformedButRejected treat her like a murderer.]] She eventually [[RageBreakingPoint snaps,]] and begins to kill the [[HeKnowsToomuch witnesses,]] [[ThenLetMeBeEvil the people who accused her of being a murderer,]] and eventually [[OmnicidalManiac everyone]] in [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown the]] [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill most]] [[ExtremeMeleeRevenge brutal]] [[CruelAndUnusualDeath ways]] [[ColdBloodedTorture possible.]]
*Eventually Alice [[KilledOffForReal murders someone for real out of anger.]] When she [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone realizes what she has done,]] she tries to [[TheAtoner apologize]] for her own actions. But people still [[ReformedButRejected treat her like a murderer.]] She eventually [[RageBreakingPoint snaps,]] and begins to kill the [[HeKnowsToomuch witnesses,]] [[ThenLetMeBeEvil the people who accused her of being a murderer,]] and eventually [[OmnicidalManiac everyone]] in [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown the]] [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill most]] [[ExtremeMeleeRevenge brutal]] [[CruelAndUnusualDeath ways]] [[ColdBloodedTorture possible.]]
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* '''Discussed''': "I don't trust that Alice. [[FauxAffablyEvil Sure, she acts nice and all, but it just seems like a cover for a ticking time bomb]]..."
* '''Conversed''': "In a horror story, right now would probably be the part where Alice has a [[FreakOut mental breakdown]] and murders, everyone, graphically. Good thing we're [[TemptingFate not]] [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall fictional]] [[NothingExcitingEverHappensHere characters]], [[ThisISReality right]]?"
* '''Conversed''': "In a horror story, right now would probably be the part where Alice has a [[FreakOut mental breakdown]] and murders, everyone, graphically. Good thing we're [[TemptingFate not]] [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall fictional]] [[NothingExcitingEverHappensHere characters]], [[ThisISReality right]]?"
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* '''Discussed''': "What about Alice?" "I don't trust that Alice. [[FauxAffablyEvil Sure, she acts nice and all, but it just seems like a cover for a ticking time bomb]]..."
* '''Conversed''': "In a horror story, right now would probably be the part where Alice has a [[FreakOut mental breakdown]] and murders, everyone, graphically. Good " "Yeah, good thing we're [[TemptingFate not]] [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall fictional]] [[NothingExcitingEverHappensHere characters]], [[ThisISReality right]]?"
* '''Conversed''': "In a horror story, right now would probably be the part where Alice has a [[FreakOut mental breakdown]] and murders, everyone, graphically.
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dewicking Knife Nut per TRS
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** Alice spends all day doing nothing but [[KnifeNut sharpening her knives]] and [[IronicNurseryTune singing sinister versions of nursery rhymes]].
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** Alice spends all day doing nothing but [[KnifeNut [[PsychoKnifeNut sharpening her knives]] and [[IronicNurseryTune singing sinister versions of nursery rhymes]].
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**Alice was faking it so she can expose [[DevilInPlainSight her boyfriend]], who is AxCrazy for real.
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'''Basic Trope''': A deranged character prone to random violence.
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'''Basic Trope''': A deranged dangerous character prone to random violence.
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** Her sociopathic elements do ''not'' stem from genetic issues or a FreudianExcuse; [[UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans it stems from her raw determination to do whatever it takes to achieve a goal]]. However, others fear the fact that this person is really NotSoDifferent from themselves; thus, they call her "insane" as a way to make it more "acceptable" to kill her.
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** Her sociopathic elements do ''not'' stem from genetic issues or a FreudianExcuse; [[UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans it stems from her raw determination to do whatever it takes to achieve a goal]]. However, others fear the fact that this person is really NotSoDifferent not any different from themselves; thus, they call her "insane" as a way to make it more "acceptable" to kill her.
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** OmnicidalManiac.
** InsaneEqualsViolent.
** InsaneEqualsViolent.
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** OmnicidalManiac.
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* '''Parodied''': Somebody calls Alice "Ms. Poopypants". She proceeds to grab an ax and kill everyone within a five-mile radius in an [[BloodyHilarious extremely over-the-top manner]], screaming [[Film/TheShining "Heeeeeeeeere's Alice!"]]
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* '''Parodied''': Somebody calls Alice "Ms. Poopypants". She proceeds to grab an ax axe and kill everyone within a five-mile radius in an [[BloodyHilarious extremely over-the-top manner]], screaming [[Film/TheShining "Heeeeeeeeere's Alice!"]]
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** Alice tries to join the villains after getting ostracized for her actions. However, she could barely contain herself from killing anyone who provoked her. Unfortunately, the villains [[EvenEvilHasStandards didn't like this]] and [[PragmaticVillainy abandoned her for causing so many problems.]]
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** Or an actually Ax-Crazy character is [[BrainwashedAndCrazy mind controlling]] her.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...and as soon as Bob is distracted, Alice takes out some piano wire and proceeds to murder him horribly.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...and as soon as Bob is distracted, Alice takes out some piano wire and proceeds to [[CruelAndUnusualDeath murder him horribly.horribly]].
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* '''Straight''': Alice is [[DevilInPlainSight obviously nuts]] and runs towards Bob swinging a large shard of glass.
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* '''Straight''': Alice is [[DevilInPlainSight obviously nuts]] nuts and runs towards Bob swinging a large shard of glass.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Alice realizes her problem and [[ItsNotYouItsMe isolates herself from society]], unwilling to face the consequences should she [[UnstoppableRage go berserk in the middle of a crowd]].
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Alice realizes her problem and [[ItsNotYouItsMe isolates herself from society]], unwilling to face the consequences should she [[UnstoppableRage go berserk in the middle of a crowd]].
** Alice realizes her problem and [[ItsNotYouItsMe isolates herself from society]], unwilling to face the consequences should she [[UnstoppableRage go berserk in the middle of a crowd]].
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Removed entries per this thread since the ones not listed in my last post are not really justifications.
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** Or is an ArtificialHuman whose mind was corrupted during her conception.
** Or she's a psychopath.
** Or she's an insane, crazy {{Yandere}} who's obsessed with Bob; she'll MurderTheHypotenuse and kill anyone who poses a rival or threat to her love.
** Or she's an AlmightyIdiot, an EldritchAbomination who lets their god-like power make them become insane.
** Or she's a MadGod.
** Or she has AGodAmI mentality.
** Or she's an insane EldritchAbomination who thrives off killing.
** Or she's seriously emotionally and mentally unstable.
** Or she's suffering from a serious mental illness or AmbiguousDisorder (such as Paranoid Schizophrenia).
** Or she has serious anger issues with a HairTriggerTemper.
** Or she's a psychopath.
** Or she's an insane, crazy {{Yandere}} who's obsessed with Bob; she'll MurderTheHypotenuse and kill anyone who poses a rival or threat to her love.
** Or she's an AlmightyIdiot, an EldritchAbomination who lets their god-like power make them become insane.
** Or she's a MadGod.
** Or she has AGodAmI mentality.
** Or she's an insane EldritchAbomination who thrives off killing.
** Or she's seriously emotionally and mentally unstable.
** Or she's suffering from a serious mental illness or AmbiguousDisorder (such as Paranoid Schizophrenia).
** Or she has serious anger issues with a HairTriggerTemper.
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** Or she's a psychopath.
** Or she's an insane, crazy {{Yandere}} who's obsessed with Bob; she'll MurderTheHypotenuse and kill anyone who poses a rival or threat to her love.
** Or she's an AlmightyIdiot, an EldritchAbomination who lets their god-like power make them become insane.
** Or she's a MadGod.
** Or she has AGodAmI mentality.
** Or she's an insane EldritchAbomination who thrives off killing.
** Or she's seriously emotionally and mentally unstable.
** Or she has serious anger issues with a HairTriggerTemper.
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** Or she's an insane BloodKnight who gets a high of fighting, violence, bloodshed, and killing.
** Or she's a MadDoctor who takes pleasure in hurting her patients.
** Or she's an insane CrazySurvivalist who's TriggerHappy and will do anything to survive including killing others.
** Or she's an evil MonsterClown.
** Or she has a KillAllHumans mentality.
** Or she's an EvilSorceress who becomes insane and unstable through the use of BlackMagic practices.
** Or she's a MadScientist that hurts people with her experiments.
** Or she's a BattleAxeNurse who takes pleasure in torturing her patients.
** Or Alice is an InsaneAdmiral who's crazy and treats her military subordinates violently.
** Or Alice is TheHedonist who lives and kills for pleasure.
** Or she's TheCaligula who's an insane ruler or leader.
** Or Alice is TheBerserker who impulsively lashes out in violence and anger.
** Or she's TheButcher who has a fondness for blood, gore and cutting up things.
** Or she's TheHorde.
** Or she's an OmnicidalManiac that wants to destroy and kill everything in the world!
** Or she's has a StrawNihilist mentality.
** Or Alice is a computer that's AIIsACrapshoot and is insane because of it.
** Or Alice is a SerialKiller who loves killing people.
** Or Alice is an EvilPoacher that violently hunts animals.
** Or she's a MadDoctor who takes pleasure in hurting her patients.
** Or she's an insane CrazySurvivalist who's TriggerHappy and will do anything to survive including killing others.
** Or she's an evil MonsterClown.
** Or she has a KillAllHumans mentality.
** Or she's an EvilSorceress who becomes insane and unstable through the use of BlackMagic practices.
** Or she's a MadScientist that hurts people with her experiments.
** Or she's a BattleAxeNurse who takes pleasure in torturing her patients.
** Or Alice is an InsaneAdmiral who's crazy and treats her military subordinates violently.
** Or Alice is TheHedonist who lives and kills for pleasure.
** Or she's TheCaligula who's an insane ruler or leader.
** Or Alice is TheBerserker who impulsively lashes out in violence and anger.
** Or she's TheButcher who has a fondness for blood, gore and cutting up things.
** Or she's TheHorde.
** Or she's an OmnicidalManiac that wants to destroy and kill everything in the world!
** Or she's has a StrawNihilist mentality.
** Or Alice is a computer that's AIIsACrapshoot and is insane because of it.
** Or Alice is a SerialKiller who loves killing people.
** Or Alice is an EvilPoacher that violently hunts animals.
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** Alice's a KnightTemplar with BlackAndWhiteInsanity.
** Alice's CharacterAlignment is ChaoticEvil.
** She's a PoliticallyIncorrectVillain [[ThePowerOfHate who's motivated by irrational hatred]].
** [[DeliberateValuesDissonance Or she's from a culture whose values are radically different from the audience's, which makes what she thinks is reasonable come off as insane]].
** Alice's CharacterAlignment is ChaoticEvil.
** She's a PoliticallyIncorrectVillain [[ThePowerOfHate who's motivated by irrational hatred]].
** [[DeliberateValuesDissonance Or she's from a culture whose values are radically different from the audience's, which makes what she thinks is reasonable come off as insane]].
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** Or she's blinded by [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge her desire]] [[RevengeBeforeReason for revenge]].
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** Or she becomes insane over love because LoveMakesYouCrazy
** Or she views her enemies as [[{{Dehumanization}} less than human]], and as such has no problem with cruelly killing them.
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** Or she becomes insane over love because LoveMakesYouCrazy
** Or she views her enemies as [[{{Dehumanization}} less than human]], and as such has no problem with cruelly killing them.LoveMakesYouCrazy.
** Or she views her enemies as [[{{Dehumanization}} less than human]], and as such has no problem with cruelly killing them.
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** She has BlueAndOrangeMorality.
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** Or she has a AGodAmI mentality.
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** Or she has a AGodAmI mentality.
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** Or she's suffers from Borderline Personality Disorder where she has irrational mood swings and anger that cause her to act out in violence.
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** Or she's she suffers from Borderline Personality Disorder where she has irrational mood swings and anger that cause her to act out in violence.
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** Or she's an insane BloodKnight who gets a high of fighting, violence, bloodshed bloodshed, and killing.
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* '''Parodied''': Somebody calls Alice "Ms. Poopypants". She proceeds to grab an axe and kill everyone within a five-mile radius in an [[BloodyHilarious extremely over-the-top manner]], screaming [[Film/TheShining "Heeeeeeeeere's Alice!"]]
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* '''Parodied''': Somebody calls Alice "Ms. Poopypants". She proceeds to grab an axe ax and kill everyone within a five-mile radius in an [[BloodyHilarious extremely over-the-top manner]], screaming [[Film/TheShining "Heeeeeeeeere's Alice!"]]
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** ...or Alice is not insane at all, just an ol' good BloodKnight.
** Alice is full aware of what horrid actions she's doing ([[MyGodWhatHaveIDone regret]] [[IRegretNothing optional]]).
** Alice is full aware of what horrid actions she's doing ([[MyGodWhatHaveIDone regret]] [[IRegretNothing optional]]).
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** ...or Alice is not insane at all, just an ol' old good BloodKnight.
** Alice isfull fully aware of what horrid actions she's doing ([[MyGodWhatHaveIDone regret]] [[IRegretNothing optional]]).
** Alice is
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* '''Conversed''': "In a horror story, right now would probably be the part where Alice has a [[FreakOut mental breakdown]] and murders everyone graphically. Good thing we're [[TemptingFate not]] [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall fictional]] [[NothingExcitingEverHappensHere characters]], [[ThisISReality right]]?"
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* '''Conversed''': "In a horror story, right now would probably be the part where Alice has a [[FreakOut mental breakdown]] and murders everyone murders, everyone, graphically. Good thing we're [[TemptingFate not]] [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall fictional]] [[NothingExcitingEverHappensHere characters]], [[ThisISReality right]]?"
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** Alice is known in-universe unique case in the psychiatric community, and is only made more terrifying by the fact that no-one understand what drives her insane rampages or how they're triggered.
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** Alice is known in-universe unique case in the psychiatric community, community and is only made more terrifying by the fact that no-one understand no one understands what drives her insane rampages or how they're triggered.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice is mentally unstable, however, she isn't particularly dangerous.
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** Alice is mentally unstable, however, she isn't particularlydangerous.dangerous.
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** Alice is mentally unstable, however, she isn't particularly
** HotBlooded
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* '''Defied''': "Alice, I think it's time for you to talk to a psychiatrist."
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