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* In addition, there's also secondary villain Tsukuyomi. She starts as a mere PunchClockVillain with shades of PsychopathicManchild and a crush on her [[SenpaiKohai ex-sempai]] Setsuna Sakurazaki, but as time passes, she becomes [[StalkerWithACrush really, *really*, creepily obsessed with Setsuna]]. And also seems to derive sexual pleasure from murder.
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* In addition, there's also secondary villain Tsukuyomi. She starts as a mere PunchClockVillain with shades of PsychopathicManchild and a crush on her [[SenpaiKohai [[UsefulNotes/JapaneseHonorifics ex-sempai]] Setsuna Sakurazaki, but as time passes, she becomes [[StalkerWithACrush really, *really*, creepily obsessed with Setsuna]]. And also seems to derive sexual pleasure from murder.
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* In addition, there's also secondary villain Tsukuyomi. She starts as a mere PunchClockVillain with shades of PsychopathicManchild and a crush on her [[SempaiKohai ex-sempai]] Setsuna Sakurazaki, but as time passes, she becomes [[StalkerWithACrush really, *really*, creepily obsessed with Setsuna]]. And also seems to derive sexual pleasure from murder.
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* In addition, there's also secondary villain Tsukuyomi. She starts as a mere PunchClockVillain with shades of PsychopathicManchild and a crush on her [[SempaiKohai [[SenpaiKohai ex-sempai]] Setsuna Sakurazaki, but as time passes, she becomes [[StalkerWithACrush really, *really*, creepily obsessed with Setsuna]]. And also seems to derive sexual pleasure from murder.
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* [[{{Pyromaniac}} Quartum]] and [[PsychoElectro Secundum]]. ''All'' of the Averrunci have a tendency towards [[UncannyValley creepiness]] but the other four have the decency to [[AffablyEvil behave]] [[NothingPersonal themselves]] [[JustFollowingOrders otherwise]]. [[KillItWithFire Quartum]] [[AxCrazy and]] [[SmugSuper Secundum]]... [[SlasherSmile do]] ''[[NightmareFace NOT]].''
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* [[{{Pyromaniac}} Quartum]] and [[PsychoElectro Secundum]]. ''All'' of the Averrunci have a tendency towards [[UncannyValley creepiness]] creepiness but the other four have the decency to [[AffablyEvil behave]] [[NothingPersonal themselves]] [[JustFollowingOrders otherwise]]. [[KillItWithFire Quartum]] [[AxCrazy and]] [[SmugSuper Secundum]]... [[SlasherSmile do]] ''[[NightmareFace NOT]].''
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*** Taken UpToEleven in chapter 307 [[spoiler: when Negi is succumbing too much to the dark side to the point, he is now in a coma ''while his legs are [[TakenForGranite turning into stone]]''. What makes this high octane is that ''[[TheMedic Konoka]] herself'' cannot heal him. AT ALL.]] [[spoiler:[[HesBack And when he comes back,]] [[HumanoidAbomination NEGI IS OFFICIALLY NOT A HUMAN ANYMORE!!!]]]]
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*** Taken UpToEleven up to eleven in chapter 307 [[spoiler: when Negi is succumbing too much to the dark side to the point, he is now in a coma ''while his legs are [[TakenForGranite turning into stone]]''. What makes this high octane is that ''[[TheMedic Konoka]] herself'' cannot heal him. AT ALL.]] [[spoiler:[[HesBack And when he comes back,]] [[HumanoidAbomination NEGI IS OFFICIALLY NOT A HUMAN ANYMORE!!!]]]]
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Initially, Negima seems to be just cool, funny, badass, and [[TastesLikeDiabetes filled with cuteness and sugar.]] '''[[NightmareFuel It's not.]]'''
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Initially, Negima seems to be just cool, funny, badass, and [[TastesLikeDiabetes filled with cuteness and sugar.]] sugar. '''[[NightmareFuel It's not.]]'''
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** Slavery is a common practice in the Magical World, complete with legalized contracts. Ako, Akira, and Natsumi end up selling themselves into slavery as slave maids with shock collars shortly after their arrival in the Magical World to pay for expensive medicine they mistakenly bought which put them in monumental debt. In Chapter 245, Ako even offers herself as a SexSlave to Tosaka that forgoes the usual protections slaves have in the Magical World against excessive mistreatment to hide Negi's secret Nagi identity, something which horrifies the man since in the Magical World that means she could be tortured and killed and the authorities wouldn't bat an eye. Keep in mind, Ako is a preteen middle-school girl.
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** Slavery is a common practice in the Magical World, complete with legalized contracts. Ako, Akira, and Natsumi end up selling themselves into slavery as slave maids with shock collars shortly after their arrival in the Magical World to pay for expensive medicine they mistakenly bought which put them in monumental debt. In Chapter 245, Ako even offers herself as a SexSlave to Tosaka that forgoes the usual protections slaves have in the Magical World against excessive mistreatment to hide Negi's secret Nagi identity, something which horrifies the man since in the Magical World that means she could be tortured and killed and the authorities wouldn't bat an eye. Keep in mind, Ako is a preteen middle-school girl.
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* The amount of danger poor Negi goes through is shocking. He's been dismember, impaled, and nearly dies many points in the story.
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* The amount of danger poor Negi goes through is shocking. He's been dismember, He gets dismembered, impaled, and nearly dies many points in the story.
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* The amount of danger poor Negi goes through is shocking. He's been dismember, impaled, and nearly dies many points in the story.
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** Slavery is a common practice in the Magical World, complete with legalized contracts. Ako, Akira, and Natsumi end up selling themselves into slavery as slave maids with shock collars shortly after their arrival in the Magical World to pay for expensive medicine they mistakenly bought which put them in monumental debt.
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** Slavery is a common practice in the Magical World, complete with legalized contracts. Ako, Akira, and Natsumi end up selling themselves into slavery as slave maids with shock collars shortly after their arrival in the Magical World to pay for expensive medicine they mistakenly bought which put them in monumental debt. In Chapter 245, Ako even offers herself as a SexSlave to Tosaka that forgoes the usual protections slaves have in the Magical World against excessive mistreatment to hide Negi's secret Nagi identity, something which horrifies the man since in the Magical World that means she could be tortured and killed and the authorities wouldn't bat an eye. Keep in mind, Ako is a preteen middle-school girl.
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* Some of the laws and habits of the magical world are pretty nightmarish and unsettling, genocide and slavery are a common occurrence, with many races undergoing FantasticRacism. Slaves in particular are forced to wear shock collars in case of attempted escapes or disobedience by their owners.
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* Some of the laws and habits of the magical world are pretty nightmarish and unsettling, genocide and slavery are a common occurrence, with many races undergoing FantasticRacism. Slaves in particular are forced to wear shock collars in case of attempted escapes or disobedience by their owners. If anyone tries to remove the collars, they will explode and kill the slave in the process.
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** Slavery is a common practice in the Magical World. World, complete with legalized contracts. Ako, Akira, and Natsumi end up selling themselves into slavery as slave maids with shock collars shortly after their arrival in the Magical World to pay for expensive medicine they mistakenly bought which put them in monumental debt.
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** Slavery is a common practice in the Magical World. Ako, Akira, and Natsumi end up selling themselves into slavery as slave maids with shock collars shortly after their arrival in the Magical World to pay for her expensive medicine.
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** Slavery is a common practice in the Magical World. Ako, Akira, and Natsumi end up selling themselves into slavery as slave maids with shock collars shortly after their arrival in the Magical World to pay for her expensive medicine.medicine put them in monumental debt.
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** "Senpai... Setsuna-senpai... Please, satisfy me now... If you don't satisfy me, why... I might even... end up slicing up all these other little puppets all around us as well..."
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** Some of her insane MemeticMolester dialogue towards Setsuna is downright chilling: "Senpai... Setsuna-senpai... Please, satisfy me now... If you don't satisfy me, why... I might even... end up slicing up all these other little puppets all around us as well..."
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* Ako required a rare 'cure-all' medicine to cure her sickness which cost a Million Drachmas. Cue chapter 320 where it is revealed Dryads are hunted down and their horns cut off and sold to create a 'cure-all' medicine which cost a Million Drachmas. [[FridgeHorror Do the Math.]]
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* Some of the laws and habits of the magical world are pretty nightmarish and unsettling, genocide and slavery are a common occurrence, with many races undergoing FantasticRacism.
** Ako required a rare 'cure-all' medicine to cure her sickness which cost a Million Drachmas. Cue chapter 320 where it is revealed Dryads are hunted down and their horns cut off and sold to create a 'cure-all' medicine which cost a Million Drachmas. [[FridgeHorror Do the Math.]]]]
** Slavery is a common practice in the Magical World. Ako, Akira, and Natsumi end up selling themselves into slavery as slave maids with shock collars shortly after their arrival in the Magical World to pay for her expensive medicine.
** Ako required a rare 'cure-all' medicine to cure her sickness which cost a Million Drachmas. Cue chapter 320 where it is revealed Dryads are hunted down and their horns cut off and sold to create a 'cure-all' medicine which cost a Million Drachmas. [[FridgeHorror Do the Math.
** Slavery is a common practice in the Magical World. Ako, Akira, and Natsumi end up selling themselves into slavery as slave maids with shock collars shortly after their arrival in the Magical World to pay for her expensive medicine.
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[[caption-width-right:350:[[OhCrap Uh....maybe some other time...]]]]
Initially, Negima seems to be just cool, funny, badass, and [[TastesLikeDiabetes filled with cuteness and sugar.]] '''[[NightmareFuel It's not.]]'''
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* When Makie falls under Evangeline's control, the image of a naked, vampire-controlled young girl with an ominous smile on a nightwatch becomes understandably unsettling...
* [[spoiler: Negi's Demon Form. [[OneWingedAngel NEGI'S]]... [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge DEMON]]... [[BewareTheNiceOnes FORM]]. Made worse when Nodoka's artifact is seen displaying Negi's thoughts, which are covered in creeping blackness and read things such as "[[ThisIsUnforgivable never forgive]]" and "KILL THEM"]].
** What makes it even worse is that [[spoiler: Negi is normally an [[WideEyedIdealist idealistic]] and [[CheerfulChild cheerful]] AdorablyPrecociousChild who ApologizesALot, so seeing him cave into his rage and ''try to kill someone'' is even more terrifying that it would have been otherwise. This may be expected coming from an angsty AntiHero, but from ''Negi?'']] He is only TEN YEARS OLD!
*** Taken UpToEleven in chapter 307 [[spoiler: when Negi is succumbing too much to the dark side to the point, he is now in a coma ''while his legs are [[TakenForGranite turning into stone]]''. What makes this high octane is that ''[[TheMedic Konoka]] herself'' cannot heal him. AT ALL.]] [[spoiler:[[HesBack And when he comes back,]] [[HumanoidAbomination NEGI IS OFFICIALLY NOT A HUMAN ANYMORE!!!]]]]
* In addition, there's also secondary villain Tsukuyomi. She starts as a mere PunchClockVillain with shades of PsychopathicManchild and a crush on her [[SempaiKohai ex-sempai]] Setsuna Sakurazaki, but as time passes, she becomes [[StalkerWithACrush really, *really*, creepily obsessed with Setsuna]]. And also seems to derive sexual pleasure from murder.
** More to the point, she's also probably the only villain in the series who's totally evil with no AntiVillain tendencies or FreudianExcuse for her actions, which just makes her even more creepy than most other bad guys.
** Plus, there's the fact that it was heavily implied that she was going to rape Setsuna when she hit Setsuna with a ClothingDamage spell, followed by pinning her on the ground, and slowly and deliberately cutting off Setsuna's Sarashi bra. Coming from a bespectacled little blonde moppet in a frilly Victorian gown makes this even more creepy...
** "Senpai... Setsuna-senpai... Please, satisfy me now... If you don't satisfy me, why... I might even... end up slicing up all these other little puppets all around us as well..."
*** Also, please take note of where her hand (and the knife in it) is [[VisualInnuendo while]] [[NightmareFetishist she]] [[NightmareFuel says]] [[FetishRetardant that...]]
** Tsukuyomi tries to kill Fate because she hasn't killed anyone for a while.
* In Chapter 311, in a possible ShoutOut to the final scene in [[Film.{{Aliens}} Aliens]]: [[spoiler: Chachamaru is [[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe cut in half]] by Averruncus of [[PlayingWithFire Fire]]. It also doesn't help that Chachamaru's insides are shown in great detail.]]
** In chapter 323 Hakase touches an important problem: [[spoiler: would repaired Chachamaru (even with memories intact) still have a soul?]] Luckily, the fire spear was 3 centimetres off of hitting the main engine.
* Chapter 317. [[spoiler:The Magical World begins collapsing. Yeah, it had been building up for a while, but to actually see it happen is something else entirely. And how is it happening? Picture tornadoes. Tornadoes thousands of feet high and several miles in diameter. ''Thousands'' of these whirlwinds all over the place. And anything they touch simply vanishes, crumbling away like dust. And through the whirlwinds, all that can be seen is the arid, inhospitable landscape of Mars, which is the only thing that any survivors will see. And of course, there's the population of the Magical World running around, screaming, terrified out of their minds. Not a pretty picture.]]
* Something not mentioned here before: The scene after the Chao arc where Evangeline freezes Asuna. Sure, Asuna broke out of it after a few seconds, but what's scary is that it worked at all. Asuna is meant to be 100% immune to all magic. It's the first time you can start to really get a feel for Evangelines power.
* Ako required a rare 'cure-all' medicine to cure her sickness which cost a Million Drachmas. Cue chapter 320 where it is revealed Dryads are hunted down and their horns cut off and sold to create a 'cure-all' medicine which cost a Million Drachmas. [[FridgeHorror Do the Math.]]
* The background stories of Fate's minions in general are surprisingly dark for Akamatsu: In case of Shiori for example [[spoiler:her sister was beat nearly to death just because of her ability to read minds very well. And then she was erased by Secundum!]]
* The second Fate when he's attacking Shiori.
* During the attack on the village, Negi's teen-aged cousin and CoolBigSis Nekane suffered ''horrifying'' injuries... [[spoiler: More exactly, [[TakenForGranite her petrified legs]] ''[[LiterallyShatteredLives were SHATTERED]]''.]] OWWWWWWW.
* [[{{Pyromaniac}} Quartum]] and [[PsychoElectro Secundum]]. ''All'' of the Averrunci have a tendency towards [[UncannyValley creepiness]] but the other four have the decency to [[AffablyEvil behave]] [[NothingPersonal themselves]] [[JustFollowingOrders otherwise]]. [[KillItWithFire Quartum]] [[AxCrazy and]] [[SmugSuper Secundum]]... [[SlasherSmile do]] ''[[NightmareFace NOT]].''
* When Kotaro and some of the other Ala Alba members try to sneak by Fate using [[spoiler: Natsumi's]] FailedASpotCheck artifact, it turns ''incredibly'' tense (especially since by that point, it's made very clear that if they're spotted, it's all over for them.) Watching poor Natsumi [[HeroicBSOD suffering a nervous breakdown]] when Fate walks ''right up to her'' doesn't help, either.
* From the first anime's first episode: After Nodoka's (alarming) response to the obviously perverted doujin Haruna shows her, Yue pulls up this trope by name.
-->'''Yue:''' Haruna, enough. She'll have nightmares.
** Remember that Nodoka was androphobic at that point.
[[caption-width-right:350:[[OhCrap Uh....maybe some other time...]]]]
Initially, Negima seems to be just cool, funny, badass, and [[TastesLikeDiabetes filled with cuteness and sugar.]] '''[[NightmareFuel It's not.]]'''
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* When Makie falls under Evangeline's control, the image of a naked, vampire-controlled young girl with an ominous smile on a nightwatch becomes understandably unsettling...
* [[spoiler: Negi's Demon Form. [[OneWingedAngel NEGI'S]]... [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge DEMON]]... [[BewareTheNiceOnes FORM]]. Made worse when Nodoka's artifact is seen displaying Negi's thoughts, which are covered in creeping blackness and read things such as "[[ThisIsUnforgivable never forgive]]" and "KILL THEM"]].
** What makes it even worse is that [[spoiler: Negi is normally an [[WideEyedIdealist idealistic]] and [[CheerfulChild cheerful]] AdorablyPrecociousChild who ApologizesALot, so seeing him cave into his rage and ''try to kill someone'' is even more terrifying that it would have been otherwise. This may be expected coming from an angsty AntiHero, but from ''Negi?'']] He is only TEN YEARS OLD!
*** Taken UpToEleven in chapter 307 [[spoiler: when Negi is succumbing too much to the dark side to the point, he is now in a coma ''while his legs are [[TakenForGranite turning into stone]]''. What makes this high octane is that ''[[TheMedic Konoka]] herself'' cannot heal him. AT ALL.]] [[spoiler:[[HesBack And when he comes back,]] [[HumanoidAbomination NEGI IS OFFICIALLY NOT A HUMAN ANYMORE!!!]]]]
* In addition, there's also secondary villain Tsukuyomi. She starts as a mere PunchClockVillain with shades of PsychopathicManchild and a crush on her [[SempaiKohai ex-sempai]] Setsuna Sakurazaki, but as time passes, she becomes [[StalkerWithACrush really, *really*, creepily obsessed with Setsuna]]. And also seems to derive sexual pleasure from murder.
** More to the point, she's also probably the only villain in the series who's totally evil with no AntiVillain tendencies or FreudianExcuse for her actions, which just makes her even more creepy than most other bad guys.
** Plus, there's the fact that it was heavily implied that she was going to rape Setsuna when she hit Setsuna with a ClothingDamage spell, followed by pinning her on the ground, and slowly and deliberately cutting off Setsuna's Sarashi bra. Coming from a bespectacled little blonde moppet in a frilly Victorian gown makes this even more creepy...
** "Senpai... Setsuna-senpai... Please, satisfy me now... If you don't satisfy me, why... I might even... end up slicing up all these other little puppets all around us as well..."
*** Also, please take note of where her hand (and the knife in it) is [[VisualInnuendo while]] [[NightmareFetishist she]] [[NightmareFuel says]] [[FetishRetardant that...]]
** Tsukuyomi tries to kill Fate because she hasn't killed anyone for a while.
* In Chapter 311, in a possible ShoutOut to the final scene in [[Film.{{Aliens}} Aliens]]: [[spoiler: Chachamaru is [[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe cut in half]] by Averruncus of [[PlayingWithFire Fire]]. It also doesn't help that Chachamaru's insides are shown in great detail.]]
** In chapter 323 Hakase touches an important problem: [[spoiler: would repaired Chachamaru (even with memories intact) still have a soul?]] Luckily, the fire spear was 3 centimetres off of hitting the main engine.
* Chapter 317. [[spoiler:The Magical World begins collapsing. Yeah, it had been building up for a while, but to actually see it happen is something else entirely. And how is it happening? Picture tornadoes. Tornadoes thousands of feet high and several miles in diameter. ''Thousands'' of these whirlwinds all over the place. And anything they touch simply vanishes, crumbling away like dust. And through the whirlwinds, all that can be seen is the arid, inhospitable landscape of Mars, which is the only thing that any survivors will see. And of course, there's the population of the Magical World running around, screaming, terrified out of their minds. Not a pretty picture.]]
* Something not mentioned here before: The scene after the Chao arc where Evangeline freezes Asuna. Sure, Asuna broke out of it after a few seconds, but what's scary is that it worked at all. Asuna is meant to be 100% immune to all magic. It's the first time you can start to really get a feel for Evangelines power.
* Ako required a rare 'cure-all' medicine to cure her sickness which cost a Million Drachmas. Cue chapter 320 where it is revealed Dryads are hunted down and their horns cut off and sold to create a 'cure-all' medicine which cost a Million Drachmas. [[FridgeHorror Do the Math.]]
* The background stories of Fate's minions in general are surprisingly dark for Akamatsu: In case of Shiori for example [[spoiler:her sister was beat nearly to death just because of her ability to read minds very well. And then she was erased by Secundum!]]
* The second Fate when he's attacking Shiori.
* During the attack on the village, Negi's teen-aged cousin and CoolBigSis Nekane suffered ''horrifying'' injuries... [[spoiler: More exactly, [[TakenForGranite her petrified legs]] ''[[LiterallyShatteredLives were SHATTERED]]''.]] OWWWWWWW.
* [[{{Pyromaniac}} Quartum]] and [[PsychoElectro Secundum]]. ''All'' of the Averrunci have a tendency towards [[UncannyValley creepiness]] but the other four have the decency to [[AffablyEvil behave]] [[NothingPersonal themselves]] [[JustFollowingOrders otherwise]]. [[KillItWithFire Quartum]] [[AxCrazy and]] [[SmugSuper Secundum]]... [[SlasherSmile do]] ''[[NightmareFace NOT]].''
* When Kotaro and some of the other Ala Alba members try to sneak by Fate using [[spoiler: Natsumi's]] FailedASpotCheck artifact, it turns ''incredibly'' tense (especially since by that point, it's made very clear that if they're spotted, it's all over for them.) Watching poor Natsumi [[HeroicBSOD suffering a nervous breakdown]] when Fate walks ''right up to her'' doesn't help, either.
* From the first anime's first episode: After Nodoka's (alarming) response to the obviously perverted doujin Haruna shows her, Yue pulls up this trope by name.
-->'''Yue:''' Haruna, enough. She'll have nightmares.
** Remember that Nodoka was androphobic at that point.
