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* The notes at the end detailing year and location of the incidents. It's scary enough for people who might recognize or even live near some of those places, but then things like ''"All Stores Nationwide", "Unidentified Underpass"'' pop up. But scariest of all, there's [[spoiler:''"[[NothingIsScarier Location Withheld]]"'']].

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* The notes at the end detailing year and location of the incidents. It's scary enough for people who might recognize or even live near some of those places, but then things like ''"All Stores Nationwide", "Unidentified Underpass"'' pop up. But scariest of all, there's [[spoiler:''"[[NothingIsScarier ''"[[NothingIsScarier Location Withheld]]"'']].Withheld]]"''.
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* One story features a group of schoolboys looking at pictures hanging up on a wall. The photographer of the photos notices that a picture has a weird face on it. Before he can point this out to the others, ''[[AnimateInanimateObject the face in the picture itself]]'' tells the boy to not tell anyone, before making an ABSOLUTELY [[NightmareFace demented angry face.]] While this is more or less typical for the manga, this ghost is different in that ''[[TwoDVisualsThreeDEffects it looks like it was 3D modeled]]'', which makes it [[UncannyValley ten times as worse.]]

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* One story features a group of schoolboys looking at pictures hanging up on they had taken of their time at a wall.lake. The photographer of the photos notices that a picture has a weird face on it. Before he can point this out to the others, ''[[AnimateInanimateObject the face in the picture itself]]'' tells the boy to not tell anyone, before making an ABSOLUTELY [[NightmareFace demented angry face.]] While this is more or less typical for the manga, this ghost is different in that ''[[TwoDVisualsThreeDEffects it looks like it was 3D modeled]]'', which makes it [[UncannyValley ten times as worse.]]
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* One story features a group of schoolboys looking at pictures hanging up on a wall. One of the boys notices that a picture has a weird face on it. Before he can point this out to the others, ''[[AnimateInanimateObject the face in the picture itself]]'' tells the boy to not tell anyone, before making an ABSOLUTELY [[NightmareFace demented angry face.]] While this is more or less typical for the manga, this ghost is different in that ''[[TwoDVisualsThreeDEffects it looks like it was 3D modeled]]'', which makes it [[UncannyValley ten times as worse.]]

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* One story features a group of schoolboys looking at pictures hanging up on a wall. One The photographer of the boys photos notices that a picture has a weird face on it. Before he can point this out to the others, ''[[AnimateInanimateObject the face in the picture itself]]'' tells the boy to not tell anyone, before making an ABSOLUTELY [[NightmareFace demented angry face.]] While this is more or less typical for the manga, this ghost is different in that ''[[TwoDVisualsThreeDEffects it looks like it was 3D modeled]]'', which makes it [[UncannyValley ten times as worse.]]
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* One story features a group of schoolboys looking at pictures hanging up on a wall. One of the boys notices that a picture has a weird face on it. Before he can point this out to the others, ''[[AnimateInanimateObject the face in the picture itself]]'' tells the boy to not tell anyone, before making an ABSOLUTELY [[NightmareFace demented angry face.]] While this is more or less typical for the manga, this ghost is different in that ''[[TwoDVisualsThreeDEffects it looks like it was 3D modeled]]'', which makes it [[UncannyValley ten times as worse.]]
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* On a meta level, the whole series is this. [[ParanoiaFuel No matter where you are, no matter what you're doing]], you could run into some horrible ''thing''. And while you might be lucky and get away with nothing worse than the scare of your life, you might not be so lucky. You might lose an ear or an eye, have your finger broken, or just straight-up ''die''.
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* The whole manga is a textbook way to induce fear in those who have Ommatophiobia (phobia of eyes [especially unnatural eyes]) and Social Anxiety Disorder, as one symptom of SAD is the fear of being watched. It is taken UpToEleven and then some.

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* The whole manga is a textbook way to induce fear in those who have Ommatophiobia (phobia of eyes [especially unnatural eyes]) and Social Anxiety Disorder, as one symptom of SAD is the fear of being watched. It is taken UpToEleven up to eleven and then some.
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* Fittingly enough, the series ends with Nightmare Fuel. The final story, "Epilogue", features Masaaki Nakayama telling a story about how he's a "natural-born coward", and one of the things that scared him as a kid was a picture book. It featured cute animals covering their faces, and one the next page, revealing them with a cry of "Byah!" The last page featured a human boy... but his face was a NightmareFace. It scared Nakayama so badly that he taped the pages shut. Ten years later, he found the book again in a bookstore... but the boy's face was cute and normal. "Maybe I was hallucinating because of fear?" he wonders, as we cut back to his studio. Then he hears something say "Byah!" behind him. [[https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/10_43.jpg The final panel]] is the {{NightmareFace}}d boy staring at him from the hallway.

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* Fittingly enough, the series ends with Nightmare Fuel. The final story, "Epilogue", features Masaaki Nakayama telling a story about how he's a "natural-born coward", and one of the things that scared him as a kid was a picture book. It featured cute animals covering their faces, and one the next page, revealing them with a cry of "Byah!" The last page featured a human boy... but his face was a NightmareFace. It scared Nakayama so badly that he taped the pages shut. Ten years later, he found the book again in a bookstore... but the boy's face was cute and normal. "Maybe I was hallucinating because of fear?" he wonders, as we cut back to his studio. Then he hears something say "Byah!" behind him. [[https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/10_43.jpg The final panel]] is the {{NightmareFace}}d boy staring at him from the hallway.hallway.
* "Midair" is the story of a guy who was sent to clean out an old house that the previous owner killed himself in. After becoming exhausted he soon falls asleep under a torn noose suspended from the ceiling and doesn't wake back up until after it gets dark outside. At that point he notices a pair of feet floating right above him... along with the face of an angry man staring down at him from the shadows. [[NothingIsScarier This is where the story abruptly ends.]]
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* "Calling". A boy is watching TV when someone knocks at the door. Disinterested, he says his mother's not home. The knocks come louder. Annoyed, he yells that his father isn't home either. Then the knocks come ''really'' loud. Fed up at this point, he yells that there's nobody home. And then he turns ''to the camera'', to a voice who calls him a liar. Terrified, he flees the house, only for the voice to knowingly whisper: "It's no use..."

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* "Calling". A boy is watching TV when someone knocks at the door. Disinterested, he says his mother's not home. The knocks come louder. Annoyed, he yells that his father isn't home either. Then the knocks come ''really'' loud. Fed up at this point, he yells that there's nobody home. And then he turns ''to the camera'', to a voice who calls him a liar. points out ''he's'' home. Terrified, he flees the house, only for the voice to knowingly whisper: "It's no use...use running..."
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* "Calling". A boy is watching TV when someone knocks at the door. Disinterested, he says his mother's not home. The knocks come louder. Annoyed, he yells that his father isn't home either. Then the knocks come ''really'' loud. Fed up at this point, he yells that there's nobody home. And then he turns ''to the camera'', to a voice who calls him a liar. Terrified, he flees the house, only for the voice to knowingly whisper: "It's no use..."
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* The notes at the end detailing year and location of the incidents. It's scary enough for people who might recognize or even live near some of those places, but then things like ''"All Stores Nationwide", "Unidentified Underpass"'' pop up. But scariest of all, there's [[spoiler:''"Location Withheld"'']].

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* The notes at the end detailing year and location of the incidents. It's scary enough for people who might recognize or even live near some of those places, but then things like ''"All Stores Nationwide", "Unidentified Underpass"'' pop up. But scariest of all, there's [[spoiler:''"Location Withheld"'']].[[spoiler:''"[[NothingIsScarier Location Withheld]]"'']].
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* The notes at the end detailing year and location of the incidents. It's scary enough for people who might recognize or even live near some of those places, but then things like ''"All Stores Nationwide", "Unidentified Underpass"'' appear pop up, and scariest of all, ''"Location Withheld"''.

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* The notes at the end detailing year and location of the incidents. It's scary enough for people who might recognize or even live near some of those places, but then things like ''"All Stores Nationwide", "Unidentified Underpass"'' appear pop up, and up. But scariest of all, ''"Location Withheld"''.there's [[spoiler:''"Location Withheld"'']].
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* The notes at the end detailing year and location of the incidents. It's scary enough for people who might recognize or even live near some of those places, but then things like ''"All Stores Nationwide", "Unidentified Underpass"'' appear, and scariest of all, ''"Location Withheld"''.

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* The notes at the end detailing year and location of the incidents. It's scary enough for people who might recognize or even live near some of those places, but then things like ''"All Stores Nationwide", "Unidentified Underpass"'' appear, appear pop up, and scariest of all, ''"Location Withheld"''.
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* The notes at the end detailing year and location of the incidents. ''"All Stores Nationwide", "Unidentified Underpass"'', and scariest of all, ''"Location Withheld"''.

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-->"..the scariest part is that ''no one at the hospital will talk about it.'' Which implies that ''everyone'' has seen this thing at some point, and (understandably) been scared shitless by it, but they ''can't discuss it openly.'' Imagine having that kind of experience, and having no one you can talk about it with--not even to check to make sure other people have seen it too, and you're not just going crazy. That damn thing would be hiding behind every pleasant sentence spoken between any coworkers in that place, undermining every positive emotion, making any smiles false, turning everyone into a liar, each person wondering, "Did they see it too? Are they thinking about it right now? How come no one else will talk about it? Am I the only one?"

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-->"..-->"...the scariest part is that ''no one at the hospital will talk about it.'' Which implies that ''everyone'' has seen this thing at some point, and (understandably) been scared shitless by it, but they ''can't discuss it openly.'' Imagine having that kind of experience, and having no one you can talk about it with--not even to check to make sure other people have seen it too, and you're not just going crazy. That damn thing would be hiding behind every pleasant sentence spoken between any coworkers in that place, undermining every positive emotion, making any smiles false, turning everyone into a liar, each person wondering, "Did they see it too? Are they thinking about it right now? How come no one else will talk about it? Am I the only one?"


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* "Leaf Warbler" features a twenty-something girl who starts having memory issues, to the point she can't even remember which elementary school she attended. However, she does remember she kept a series of diaries then. She makes it a point to collect them next time she visits her mother... only to return and complain that she just gave her a bunch of blank notebooks. However, among the empty notebooks, she does find one of her diaries. The problem is that for some reason, the diary starts in the middle of the notebook. As she sits to read, quietly, the kanji begin to fade from the page, leaving only a few, that read "within five years, I will find you, wherever you are". Trembling in horror, she quietly asks her mother what she was like when she was a child... only for it to turn out ''she'' can't remember the girl either.
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* The titual prediction in "Prediction" isn't really scary, but the ghost delivering it, whose face consists of three giant eyeballs? ''Terrifying''.

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* The titual titular prediction in "Prediction" isn't really scary, but the ghost delivering it, whose face consists of three giant eyeballs? ''Terrifying''.
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** [[https://scans-daily.dreamwidth.org/1107421.html?thread=33719005#cmt3371900 5As one reader noticed, the "baby" isn't even the creepiest part of the story.]]

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** [[https://scans-daily.dreamwidth.org/1107421.html?thread=33719005#cmt3371900 5As html?thread=33719005#cmt33719005 As one reader noticed, the "baby" isn't even the creepiest part of the story.]]
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* "The Rear Guard's Decision". A young boy never looks at his reflection when leaving the gym, because, for some reason, it's ''distorted into a horrible, blank, staring face.]].

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* "The Rear Guard's Decision". A young boy never looks at his reflection when leaving the gym, because, for some reason, it's ''distorted into a horrible, blank, staring face.]].''



* The author tells a rather creepy story about a childhood experience that he believes is his only real supernatural encounter. He was part of the swimming club in his home town and in order to allow the children to practice more for an upcoming summer competition, the coach takes them all to this small dormitory middle school outside the town. The pool was outdoors with a plastic tent covering it, and there were no lights. Regardless, they practice in the pool until late in the evening when their coach arrived and told them that they're done for the day. The author and a friend go the bathroom for a bit, only to come back to the pool and see their coach and the rest of the team standing outside looking into the tent. They all look dumbstruck and frightened, and when the author's friend took a peak, all emotion drained from her face. Their coach proceeds to count the students, finding that they're all with him, before locking the tent. The author didn't see anything, and constantly asked his friends what they saw, only for them to stay quiet about it. That is until the trip back to the city, where his friend asked if he at least was able to see what was in the far left corner of the pool... the half-submerged, corpse-like body of a child, just staring at them with dead eyes. The author can't say if he actually did.

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* The author tells a rather creepy story about a childhood experience that he believes is his only real supernatural encounter. He was part of the swimming club in his home town and in order to allow the children to practice more for an upcoming summer competition, the coach takes them all to this small dormitory middle school outside the town. The pool was outdoors with a plastic tent covering it, and there were no lights. Regardless, they practice in the pool until late in the evening when their coach arrived and told them that they're done for the day. The author and a friend go the bathroom for a bit, only to come back to the pool and see their coach and the rest of the team standing outside looking into the tent. They all look dumbstruck and frightened, and when the author's friend took a peak, peek, all emotion drained from her face. Their coach proceeds to count the students, finding that they're all with him, before locking the tent. The author didn't see anything, and constantly asked his friends what they saw, only for them to stay quiet about it. That is until the trip back to the city, where his friend asked if he at least was able to see what was in the far left corner of the pool... the half-submerged, corpse-like body of a child, just staring at them with dead eyes. The author can't say if he actually did.

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* This is approximately 85% this trope, executed very subtly. The other 15% are [[BreatherEpisode apparently pointless or goofy stories]] that don't seem to fit with the rest, but for some reason only make it creepier. From [[http://www.mangafox.com/manga/fuan_no_tane/v01/c000/12.html the one]] about the cloth-sack headed thing that waits outside the school, to [[http://www.mangafox.com/manga/fuan_no_tane/v02/c000/16.html the one]] about what the nurses have to do when in the corridor of the hospital after a baby's been born... Needless to say, not one to read in the dark at 3am.
* ''Fuan no Tane'' is a textbook way to induce fear in those who have Ommatophiobia (phobia of eyes [especially unnatural eyes]) and Social Anxiety Disorder, as one symptom of SAD is the fear of being watched. It is taken UpToEleven and then some.

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* This On a meta level, the whole series is approximately 85% this trope, executed very subtly. The other 15% are [[BreatherEpisode apparently pointless or goofy stories]] that don't seem to fit this. [[ParanoiaFuel No matter where you are, no matter what you're doing]], you could run into some horrible ''thing''. And while you might be lucky and get away with nothing worse than the rest, scare of your life, you might not be so lucky. You might lose an ear or an eye, have your finger broken, or just straight-up ''die''.
* "The Rear Guard's Decision". A young boy never looks at his reflection when leaving the gym, because, for some reason, it's ''distorted into a horrible, blank, staring face.]].
* "The Ear-Slashing Monk." A little girl having her ear cut off from a distance by a ghost is bad enough,
but for two little things really ratchet up the horror:
** He doesn't just cut the ear off in one quick snip. He ''slooooowly'' tightens the shears as the girl screams in pain. ''He's enjoying this.''
** He doesn't take the ear after cutting it off. He just vanishes. Is he just cutting random girls' ears off ForTheEvulz? [[BlueAndOrangeMorality Does he have
some reason that only make he understands?]] We don't know. We'll ''never'' know. [[NothingIsScarier And it creepier. From [[http://www.mangafox.com/manga/fuan_no_tane/v01/c000/12.html just makes the one]] about the cloth-sack headed whole thing that waits outside even creepier.]]
* "Ascent". A boy is staring out of his window when he notices
the school, lightning strikes seem to [[http://www.mangafox.com/manga/fuan_no_tane/v02/c000/16.html be taking people up with them. It's not clear whether someone (or ''something'') is responsible for the one]] about what the lightning abducting people or not, which arguably makes it worse.
* The infamous "Tacit Agreement", pictured above. The
nurses at an unnamed hospital have to do an unwritten rule... if you see a [[AmbiguouslyHuman "baby"]] when in walking from the corridor delivery room to the maternity ward, never acknowledge it, never talk about it to anyone, ''and for the love of God, don't hug it.''
** [[https://scans-daily.dreamwidth.org/1107421.html?thread=33719005#cmt3371900 5As one reader noticed, the "baby" isn't even the creepiest part of the story.]]
-->"..the scariest part is that ''no one at
the hospital after a baby's will talk about it.'' Which implies that ''everyone'' has seen this thing at some point, and (understandably) been born... Needless scared shitless by it, but they ''can't discuss it openly.'' Imagine having that kind of experience, and having no one you can talk about it with--not even to say, check to make sure other people have seen it too, and you're not just going crazy. That damn thing would be hiding behind every pleasant sentence spoken between any coworkers in that place, undermining every positive emotion, making any smiles false, turning everyone into a liar, each person wondering, "Did they see it too? Are they thinking about it right now? How come no one to read in else will talk about it? Am I the dark at 3am.
only one?"
* ''Fuan no Tane'' The titual prediction in "Prediction" isn't really scary, but the ghost delivering it, whose face consists of three giant eyeballs? ''Terrifying''.
* The whole manga
is a textbook way to induce fear in those who have Ommatophiobia (phobia of eyes [especially unnatural eyes]) and Social Anxiety Disorder, as one symptom of SAD is the fear of being watched. It is taken UpToEleven and then some.


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* "Night of the Blackout". A young woman is flicking a flashlight on and off in her darkened apartment, laughing at how her family seems to be moving in stop-motion... when she sees a zombie standing behind them.
* The "Closet"/"Whispers in the Dark"/"Reconstruction" trilogy.
** In "Closet", a girl can hear a young boy whispering to her from her closet at night, even though her closet is full and she can't find anyone in there, but she ignores it. When she decides to answer him, she can hear him scribbling away on something. He keeps trying to talk to her, but she never answers... so he responds "It's OK. I understand. ''I'll put an end to this''." And he doesn't sound like a little boy any more...
** Then in "Reconstruction", set 40 years later, construction workers are disassembling the house, and find a sketchbook... the diary of the boy from "Closet". Was he an ordinary boy BuriedAlive? Was he a ghost? [[NothingIsScarier What happened to the girl living in the house?]] We never find out, but the construction workers were probably right to not build there.
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''Fuan no Tane'' features some of the creepiest ghosts and monsters in all of manga.
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* The author tells a rather creepy story about a childhood experience that he believes is his only real supernatural encounter. He was part of the swimming club in his home town and in order to allow the children to practice more for an upcoming summer competition, the coach takes them all to this small dormitory middle school outside the town. The pool was outdoors with a plastic tent covering it, and there were no lights. Regardless, they practice in the pool until late in the evening when their coach arrived and told them that they're done for the day. The author and a friend go the bathroom for a bit, only to come back to the pool and see their coach and the rest of the team standing outside looking into the tent. They all look dumbstruck and frightened, and when the author's friend took a peak, all emotion drained from her face. Their coach proceeds to count the students, finding that they're all with him, before locking the tent. The author didn't see anything, and constantly asked his friends what they saw, only for them to stay quiet about it. That is until the trip back to the city, where his friend asked if he at least was able to see what was in the far left corner of the pool. [[spoiler: The half-submerged, corpse-like body of a child, just staring at them with dead eyes.]] The author can't say if he actually did.

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* The author tells a rather creepy story about a childhood experience that he believes is his only real supernatural encounter. He was part of the swimming club in his home town and in order to allow the children to practice more for an upcoming summer competition, the coach takes them all to this small dormitory middle school outside the town. The pool was outdoors with a plastic tent covering it, and there were no lights. Regardless, they practice in the pool until late in the evening when their coach arrived and told them that they're done for the day. The author and a friend go the bathroom for a bit, only to come back to the pool and see their coach and the rest of the team standing outside looking into the tent. They all look dumbstruck and frightened, and when the author's friend took a peak, all emotion drained from her face. Their coach proceeds to count the students, finding that they're all with him, before locking the tent. The author didn't see anything, and constantly asked his friends what they saw, only for them to stay quiet about it. That is until the trip back to the city, where his friend asked if he at least was able to see what was in the far left corner of the pool. [[spoiler: The pool... the half-submerged, corpse-like body of a child, just staring at them with dead eyes.]] eyes. The author can't say if he actually did.did.
* Fittingly enough, the series ends with Nightmare Fuel. The final story, "Epilogue", features Masaaki Nakayama telling a story about how he's a "natural-born coward", and one of the things that scared him as a kid was a picture book. It featured cute animals covering their faces, and one the next page, revealing them with a cry of "Byah!" The last page featured a human boy... but his face was a NightmareFace. It scared Nakayama so badly that he taped the pages shut. Ten years later, he found the book again in a bookstore... but the boy's face was cute and normal. "Maybe I was hallucinating because of fear?" he wonders, as we cut back to his studio. Then he hears something say "Byah!" behind him. [[http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/10_43.jpg The final panel]] is the {{NightmareFace}}d boy staring at him from the hallway.
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* The author tells a rather creepy story about a childhood experience that he believes is his only real supernatural encounter. He was part of the swimming club in his home town and in order to allow the children to practice more for an upcoming summer competition, the coach takes them all to this small dormitory middle school outside the town. The pool was outdoors with a plastic tent covering it, and since there were no lights. Regardless, they practice in the pool until late in the evening when their coach arrived and told them that they're done for the day. The author and a friend go the bathroom for a bit, only to come back to the pool and see their coach and the rest of the team standing outside looking into the tent. They all look dumbstruck and frightened, and when the author's friend took a peak, all emotion drained from her face. Their coach proceeds to count the students, finding that they're all with him, before locking the tent. The author didn't see anything, and constantly asked his friends what they saw, only for them to stay quiet about it. That is until the trip back to the city, where his friend asked if he at least was able to see what was in the far left corner of the pool. [[spoiler: The half-submerged, corpse-like body of a child, just staring at them with dead eyes.]] The author can't say if he actually did.

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* The author tells a rather creepy story about a childhood experience that he believes is his only real supernatural encounter. He was part of the swimming club in his home town and in order to allow the children to practice more for an upcoming summer competition, the coach takes them all to this small dormitory middle school outside the town. The pool was outdoors with a plastic tent covering it, and since there were no lights. Regardless, they practice in the pool until late in the evening when their coach arrived and told them that they're done for the day. The author and a friend go the bathroom for a bit, only to come back to the pool and see their coach and the rest of the team standing outside looking into the tent. They all look dumbstruck and frightened, and when the author's friend took a peak, all emotion drained from her face. Their coach proceeds to count the students, finding that they're all with him, before locking the tent. The author didn't see anything, and constantly asked his friends what they saw, only for them to stay quiet about it. That is until the trip back to the city, where his friend asked if he at least was able to see what was in the far left corner of the pool. [[spoiler: The half-submerged, corpse-like body of a child, just staring at them with dead eyes.]] The author can't say if he actually did.
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* ''Fuan no Tane'' is a textbook way to induce fear in those who have Ommatophiobia (phobia of eyes [especially unnatural eyes]) and Social Anxiety Disorder, as one symptom of SAD is the fear of being watched. It is taken UpToEleven and then some.

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* ''Fuan no Tane'' is a textbook way to induce fear in those who have Ommatophiobia (phobia of eyes [especially unnatural eyes]) and Social Anxiety Disorder, as one symptom of SAD is the fear of being watched. It is taken UpToEleven and then some.some.
* The author tells a rather creepy story about a childhood experience that he believes is his only real supernatural encounter. He was part of the swimming club in his home town and in order to allow the children to practice more for an upcoming summer competition, the coach takes them all to this small dormitory middle school outside the town. The pool was outdoors with a plastic tent covering it, and since there were no lights. Regardless, they practice in the pool until late in the evening when their coach arrived and told them that they're done for the day. The author and a friend go the bathroom for a bit, only to come back to the pool and see their coach and the rest of the team standing outside looking into the tent. They all look dumbstruck and frightened, and when the author's friend took a peak, all emotion drained from her face. Their coach proceeds to count the students, finding that they're all with him, before locking the tent. The author didn't see anything, and constantly asked his friends what they saw, only for them to stay quiet about it. That is until the trip back to the city, where his friend asked if he at least was able to see what was in the far left corner of the pool. [[spoiler: The half-submerged, corpse-like body of a child, just staring at them with dead eyes.]] The author can't say if he actually did.
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* This is approximately 85% this trope, executed very subtly. The other 15% are [[BreatherEpisode apparently pointless or goofy stories]] that don't seem to fit with the rest, but for some reason only make it creepier. From [[http://www.mangafox.com/manga/fuan_no_tane/v01/c000/12.html the one]] about the cloth-sack headed thing that waits outside the school, to [[http://www.mangafox.com/manga/fuan_no_tane/v02/c000/16.html the one]] about what the nurses have to do when in the corridor of the hospital after a baby's been born... Needless to say, not one to read in the dark at 3am.
* ''Fuan no Tane'' is a textbook way to induce fear in those who have Ommatophiobia (phobia of eyes [especially unnatural eyes]) and Social Anxiety Disorder, as one symptom of SAD is the fear of being watched. It is taken UpToEleven and then some.

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