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* In ''The Lost Fable," the heroes see Flashback!Ozpin ask Jinn "How do I destroy Salem," and Jinn reply [[CompleteImmortality "You can't."]] Ozpin proceeds to drop to his knees in despair and changes the rest of the cast's feelings about Ozpin and their mission as they have similar feelings. An effective WhamLine until you think about Ozpin's question and reaction for more than a minute. For one, Ozpin's wording was rather daft, as it left him open to not one, but two potential cases of ExactWords, which the series would later point out (perhaps someone besides him can destroy Salem, and destroying someone isn't the only way to defeat them.) It apparently didn't occur to him to ask a better worded question at any point afterwards. The fact that he resorted to asking a nigh-omniscient magical being the question also implies he knew destroying her was a long shot, making his reaction seem overblown.
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* In ''The Lost Fable," the heroes see Flashback!Ozpin ask Jinn "How do I destroy Salem," and Jinn reply [[CompleteImmortality "You can't."]] Ozpin proceeds to drop to his knees in despair and changes the rest of the cast's feelings about Ozpin and their mission as they have similar feelings. An effective WhamLine until you think about Ozpin's question and reaction for more than a minute. For one, Ozpin's wording was rather daft, as it left him open to not one, but two potential cases of ExactWords, which the series would later point out (perhaps someone besides him can destroy Salem, and destroying someone isn't the only way to defeat them.) It apparently didn't occur to him to ask a better worded question at any point afterwards. The fact that he resorted to asking a nigh-omniscient magical being the question also implies he knew destroying her was a long shot, making his reaction seem overblown.
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** The way she presents it ''can'' give the impression that it was forced on them. However, it's not communicated very well, and it's not the sort of thing you would exactly complain about.
** Qrow tiredly blows over it once Yang brings it up, giving the impression that even ''he's'' tired of Raven's idiocy.
** Qrow tiredly blows over it once Yang brings it up, giving the impression that even ''he's'' tired of Raven's idiocy.
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** The way she presents it ''can'' give the impression that it was forced on them. However, it's not communicated very well, and it's not the sort of thing you would exactly complain about.
** Qrow tiredly blows over it once Yang brings it up, giving the impression that even ''he's'' tired of Raven's idiocy.
** Qrow tiredly blows over it once Yang brings it up, giving the impression that even ''he's'' tired of Raven's idiocy.
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Removed after asking on the Narm clean-up thread
whether it's Narm or Narm Charm, as there's an overlapping entry under both. The advice was to remove this one and keep the Narm Charm entry.
whether it's Narm or Narm Charm, as there's an overlapping entry under both. The advice was to remove this one and keep the Narm Charm entry.Deleted line(s) 7,9 (click to see context) :
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* In "Battle of Beacon", Adam's one-liner when Blake runs into him ("Hello, my darling") is [[http://kobblublu.tumblr.com/post/138385454754/do-over extremely corny]] even though it's intended with ''a lot'' of malice.
* In "Battle of Beacon", Adam's one-liner when Blake runs into him ("Hello, my darling") is [[http://kobblublu.tumblr.com/post/138385454754/do-over extremely corny]] even though it's intended with ''a lot'' of malice.
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Restoring an entry that was removed without an edit reason. Removing bad example indentation and natterific additions; entries should never depend on entries that appear elsewhere, they should always stand on their own merit. Also removing Speculative Troping.
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** However, see the entry under NarmCharm in the YMMV page as to why it works.
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** It ''can'' come off as her implying it was forced on them, but that is never directly stated in the show, making it difficult to understand.
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* At the end of Volume 7, Salem finally arrives in Atlas to take matters into her own hands, an event foreshadowed since TheStinger for Volume 6 and one that spells bad news for Remnant as a whole. However, the fact that she emerges from a storm riding on a massive, flying ''sperm whale'' of all things, is so over the top and ridiculous it's hard not to laugh a little.
