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* "Am I [[Manga/{{Working}} poplar]] yet?
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* "Am I [[Manga/{{Working}} [[Manga/{{Wagnaria}} poplar]] yet?
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* Kenji's freaking out face is hilariously memetic enough to be photoshopped onto the other girls as a joke. Same with Emi's [[spoiler: anal]] face.
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* Kenji's freaking out face is hilariously memetic enough to be photoshopped onto the other girls as a joke. Same with Emi's [[spoiler: anal]] [[spoiler:anal]] face.
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** I am the twist of my curl. [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair Pink is my hair]], and [[LargeHam loud is]] [[NoIndoorVoice my voice]]. I have [[SignatureLaugh wahaha'd]] over 1000 times. Signing to Shiichan. Speaking for Shiichan. Waiting for Act 2's arrival... I have no regrets that I didn't get a route! My whole life is [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight UNLIMITED DRILL WORKS]]
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6ovmtKSQTVU This video]] (by [[http://katawa-shoujo.com/staff.php Pimmy]], one of the artists that worked on KS) is veritable [[FountainofMemes Fountain of Memes]]:
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6ovmtKSQTVU This video]] (by [[http://katawa-shoujo.com/staff.php Pimmy]], one of the artists that worked on KS) is veritable [[FountainofMemes Fountain of Memes]]:
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6ovmtKSQTVU This video]] (by [[http://katawa-shoujo.com/staff.php Pimmy]], one of the artists that worked on KS) is a veritable [[FountainofMemes Fountain of Memes]]:
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* That's not what [[YouKeepUsingThatWord comforting]] means! [[labelnote:Explanation (spoilers)]]The single option in Shizune's route is whether or not to "comfort" Misha when she comes to Hisao's room feeling depressed. Many people do not equate "comforting" with "let's have sex". The use of the word "comfort" in the context of having sex funnily enough also shows up in Rin's route in the scene "Delirium" when Hisao wants to "comfort" Rin by giving her an orgasm.[[/labelnote]]
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* That's not what [[YouKeepUsingThatWord comforting]] "comforting" means! [[labelnote:Explanation (spoilers)]]The single option in Shizune's route is whether or not to "comfort" Misha when she comes to Hisao's room feeling depressed. Many people do not equate "comforting" with "let's have sex". The use of the word "comfort" in the context of having sex funnily enough also shows up in Rin's route in the scene "Delirium" when Hisao wants to "comfort" Rin by giving her an orgasm.[[/labelnote]]
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* That's not what [[YouKeepUsingThatWord comforting]] means! [[labelnote:Explanation (spoilers)]]The single option in Shizune's route is whether or not to "comfort" Misha when she comes to Hisao's room feeling depressed. Many people do not equate "comforting" with "let's have sex". The use of the word "comfort" in the context of having sex funnily enough also shows up in Rin's route in the scene "Delirium" when Hisao wants to "comfort" Rin by having sex with her.giving her an orgasm.[[/labelnote]]
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* That's not what [[YouKeepUsingThatWord comforting]] means! [[labelnote:Explanation (spoilers)]]The single option in Shizune's route is whether or not to "comfort" Misha when she comes to Hisao's room feeling depressed. Many people do not equate "comforting" with "let's have sex".[[/labelnote]]
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* That's not what [[YouKeepUsingThatWord comforting]] means! [[labelnote:Explanation (spoilers)]]The single option in Shizune's route is whether or not to "comfort" Misha when she comes to Hisao's room feeling depressed. Many people do not equate "comforting" with "let's have sex". The use of the word "comfort" in the context of having sex funnily enough also shows up in Rin's route in the scene "Delirium" when Hisao wants to "comfort" Rin by having sex with her.[[/labelnote]]
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* [[EarWorm Rumba]] [[VideoGame/KatawaCrash Rumba Rumba]] [[Manga/SayonaraZetsubouSensei Rumba Rumba]] [[labelnote:Explanation]]''VideoGame/KatawaCrash'', a game very loosely based on this VisualNovel and the SpiritualSuccessor of ''VideoGame/NanacaCrash'' brought up the ''Manga/SayonaraZetsubouSensei'' rap version of "Kuusou Rumba" as its game-play theme.[[/labelnote]]
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* [[EarWorm Rumba]] [[VideoGame/KatawaCrash Rumba Rumba Rumba]] [[Manga/SayonaraZetsubouSensei Rumba Rumba]] [[labelnote:Explanation]]''VideoGame/KatawaCrash'', a game very loosely based on this VisualNovel and the SpiritualSuccessor of ''VideoGame/NanacaCrash'' brought up the ''Manga/SayonaraZetsubouSensei'' rap version of "Kuusou Rumba" as its game-play theme.[[/labelnote]]
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* On the Shimmie site, "[[YamatoNadeshiko Lilly]] [[ProperLady is too classy for X."]] X being anything ranging from arguments to silly acts.
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* On the Shimmie site, "[[YamatoNadeshiko Lilly]] [[ProperLady is too classy for X."]] ]]" X being anything ranging from arguments to silly acts.
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* "[[InsistentTerminology Healthy adolescent]] [[CovertPervert sex drive]]" [[labelnote:Explanation]]When it turns out that Lilly greatly enjoys sex, she says she has this when Hisao suggests she's "dirty-minded", and it's often brought up regarding her[[/labelnote]]
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* "[[InsistentTerminology Healthy adolescent]] [[CovertPervert sex drive]]" [[labelnote:Explanation]]When it turns out that Lilly greatly enjoys sex, she says she has this when Hisao suggests she's "dirty-minded", and it's often brought up regarding her[[/labelnote]]her.[[/labelnote]]
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** [[http://i.imgur.com/kJsl3Ab.jpg Dev confirms]] that she [[spoiler:broke a nail]]
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** On January 4th, 2012, however, it was something else: [[spoiler:[[HeartwarmingMoments "Get in here, KS devs!"]]]]
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** On January 4th, 2012, however, it was something else: [[spoiler:[[HeartwarmingMoments [[spoiler:[[SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments "Get in here, KS devs!"]]]]
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* The feels. [[labelnote:Explanation]]The now-memetic term for the CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming in each girl's path.[[/labelnote]]
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* The feels. [[labelnote:Explanation]]The now-memetic term for the CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming SugarWiki/{{Heartwarming Moment|s}} in each girl's path.[[/labelnote]]
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* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=usxrnYRZf_g It's Fukin' Lilly!]] [[labelnote:Explanation]]A song by Youtube user foreverpandering where he's requested to make a short song about Hanako and to not use the word "crispy". He keeps his promise by singing how much she tastes like bacon and then says that Lilly is better than her.[[/labelnote]]
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* [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=usxrnYRZf_g It's Fukin' Lilly!]] [[labelnote:Explanation]]A song by Youtube Website/YouTube user foreverpandering where he's requested to make a short song about Hanako and to not use the word "crispy". He keeps his promise by singing how much she tastes like bacon and then says that Lilly is better than her.[[/labelnote]]
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* Bitches love the sweater-vest.
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* Bitches love the sweater-vest.[[WaistcoatOfStyle sweater-vest]].
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* [[HollywoodHeartAttack HNNNG!]] [[labelnote:Explanation]]Hisao's heart condition is a frequent joke with the fans as they give him random heart attacks in fan works. Later on, it escaped into the wild, and came to be used to describe ''any'' sufficiently cute thing causing a heart attack in the viewer.[[/labelnote]]
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* [[HollywoodHeartAttack HNNNG!]] [[labelnote:Explanation]]Hisao's heart condition is a frequent joke with the fans as they give him random heart attacks in fan works. Later on, it escaped into the wild, and came to be used to describe ''any'' [[CutenessOverload sufficiently cute thing causing a heart attack attack]] in the viewer.[[/labelnote]]
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* "[[EverybodyHatesMath Math is for gaylords]]. [[TheStoner I'd rather smoke weed]].
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* Mutou's physical resemblance with [[{{Rugrats}} Uncle Stu]], or with [[Series/DoctorWho the Tenth Doctor]].
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* The word "Din" by virtue of being an uncommon word.
** To the point that "Din Dins" is used to refer to [[spoiler:Hanako's H-scene]], due to a scene in the film TheStrangeThingAboutTheJohnsons
** To the point that "Din Dins" is used to refer to [[spoiler:Hanako's H-scene]], due to a scene in the film TheStrangeThingAboutTheJohnsons
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* The word "Din" by virtue of being an uncommon word.
**word. To the point that "Din Dins" is used to refer to [[spoiler:Hanako's H-scene]], due to a scene in the film TheStrangeThingAboutTheJohnsonsFilm/TheStrangeThingAboutTheJohnsons
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** I am the twist of my curl. [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair Pink is my hair]], and [[LargeHam loud is]] [[NoIndoorVoice my voice]]. I have [[SignatureLaugh wahaha'd]] over 1000 times. Signing to Shiichan. Speaking for Shiichan. Waiting for Act 2's arrival... I have no regrets that I didn't get a route! My whole life is [[FateStayNight UNLIMITED DRILL WORKS]]
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** I am the twist of my curl. [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair Pink is my hair]], and [[LargeHam loud is]] [[NoIndoorVoice my voice]]. I have [[SignatureLaugh wahaha'd]] over 1000 times. Signing to Shiichan. Speaking for Shiichan. Waiting for Act 2's arrival... I have no regrets that I didn't get a route! My whole life is [[FateStayNight [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight UNLIMITED DRILL WORKS]]
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* [[HollywoodHeartAttack HNNNG!]] [[labelnote:Explanation]]Hisao's heart condition is a frequent joke with the fans as they give him random heart attacks in fan works.[[/labelnote]]
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* [[HollywoodHeartAttack HNNNG!]] [[labelnote:Explanation]]Hisao's heart condition is a frequent joke with the fans as they give him random heart attacks in fan works. Later on, it escaped into the wild, and came to be used to describe ''any'' sufficiently cute thing causing a heart attack in the viewer.[[/labelnote]]
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It originated from TheImageBoardThatMustNotBeNamed. Further explanation is unnecessary.
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It originated from TheImageBoardThatMustNotBeNamed.Website/FourChan. Further explanation is unnecessary.
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* The Katawa Shoujo and ''Madoka Magica'' girls cosplaying as eachother; Shizune & Sayaka always swap, as do Hanako & Homura ( not withstanding the fact that Homura would actually fit right in with her heart problem), Mami & Lilly usually swap (though sometimes with Misha, coz of the drills), with Rin as Madoka or Kyoko, Misha as the other, and Emi with Madoka or KYUUBEY!!!
** [[http://shimmie.katawa-shoujo.com/post/view/3844?search=puella_magi_madoka_magica one way]] & [[http://www.deviantart.com/morelikethis/258306680/fanart/manga/digital/movies?offset=82&view_mode=2 the other]]
** [[http://shimmie.katawa-shoujo.com/post/view/3844?search=puella_magi_madoka_magica one way]] & [[http://www.deviantart.com/morelikethis/258306680/fanart/manga/digital/movies?offset=82&view_mode=2 the other]]
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** [[http://i.imgur.com/kJsl3Ab.jpg Dev confirms]] that she [[spoiler:broke a nail]]
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** "Why does she need glasses if she's deaf?" [[labelnote:Explanation]]A comment regarding Shizune from the same fancomic.[[/labelnote]]
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* On the Shimmie site, "[[YamatoNadashiko Lilly]] [[ProperLady is too classy for X."]] X being anything ranging from arguments to silly acts.
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* On the Shimmie site, [[ProperLady "Lilly is too classy for X."]] X being anything ranging from arguments to silly acts.
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* "[[{{Squick}} Gimme the chocolate, Hisao!]]" [[labelnote:Explanation]]A fancomic originating on 4Chan that shows a member's initial thoughts and such, until he literally falls in love with Hanako. For lack of a better phrase, shit gets real.[[/labelnote]]
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* "[[{{Squick}} Gimme the chocolate, Hisao!]]" [[labelnote:Explanation]]A fancomic originating on 4Chan that shows a member's initial thoughts and such, until he literally falls in love with Hanako. For lack of Then the game throws in a better phrase, shit gets real.XXX coprophilia sex scene.[[/labelnote]]
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** [[http://pimmy.deviantart.com/art/Sorry-Misha-123504581 It's cancer.]]
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* Mutou's physical resemblance with [[{{Rugrats}} Uncle Stu]].
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* Hisao Nakai, [[SarcasmMode Master of]] [[IdiotBall Romance]]!
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* Hisao Nakai, [[SarcasmMode Master of]] [[IdiotBall Romance]]![[CluelessChickMagnet Romance]]!
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