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* AccidentalKiss[=/=]CrashIntoHello: Snow White falls from the sky and meets Alice in this manner, sparking rumors and provoking jealousy from the Dormouse. Alice claims that their accidental kiss meant nothing to him, but when Snow White bluntly expresses similarly, he appears to be disappointed.
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* AccidentalKiss[=/=]CrashIntoHello: AccidentalKiss: Snow White falls from the sky and meets Alice in this manner, sparking rumors and provoking jealousy from the Dormouse. Alice claims that their accidental kiss meant nothing to him, but when Snow White bluntly expresses similarly, he appears to be disappointed.
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* CompletelyMissingThePoint: Alice drags Snow White into the city to prove he's popular. Snow White instead focuses on how different everything is rather (e.g. everyone in town doesn't have names) rather than Alice's attempts to prove himself.
* CurtainsMatchTheWindow: Dormouse.
* DistressedDamsel: Snow White.
* CurtainsMatchTheWindow: Dormouse.
* DistressedDamsel: Snow White.
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* HairColors:
** FieryRedhead: Jack of Hearts.
** YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Mirror. The Dormourse has green hair and the Cheshire Cat has purple hair.
** FieryRedhead: Jack of Hearts.
** YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Mirror. The Dormourse has green hair and the Cheshire Cat has purple hair.
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* TheIngenue: Snow White.
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* TheMadHatter
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* LovingBully: Alice and White Rabbit both bully their respective love interest. [[spoiler: The Red King counts too.]]
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* PinkGirlBlueBoy
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* OverprotectiveDad: Snow White's father, [[spoiler:Count Philip the Fourth]], didn't let her go outside the property and [[spoiler:ordered the young Crazy and Red King to protect her by killing anyone from the outside from getting near her.]]
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* StepfordSmiler: Alice.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Alice.
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* OverprotectiveDad: Snow White's father, [[spoiler:Count Philip the Fourth]], didn't let her go outside the property and [[spoiler:ordered the young Crazy and Red King to protect her by killing anyone from the outside from getting near her.]]
* LovingBully: Alice and White Rabbit both bully their respective love interest. [[spoiler: The Red King counts too.]]
* LoveAtFirstSight: Happy with Snow White.
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Snow White.]]
* LovingBully: Alice and White Rabbit both bully their respective love interest. [[spoiler: The Red King counts too.]]
* LoveAtFirstSight: Happy with Snow White.
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Snow White.]]
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* OverprotectiveDad: YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Mirror. The Dormourse has green hair and the Cheshire Cat has purple hair.
%%* LoveAtFirstSight: Happy with SnowWhite's father, [[spoiler:Count Philip the Fourth]], didn't let her go outside the property and [[spoiler:ordered the young Crazy and Red King to protect her by killing anyone from the outside from getting near her.White.
%%* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Snow White.]]
* LovingBully: Alice and White Rabbit both bully their respective love interest. [[spoiler: The Red King counts too.]]
* LoveAtFirstSight: Happy with Snow White.
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Snow White.]]
%%* LoveAtFirstSight: Happy with Snow
%%* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Snow White.]]
* LoveAtFirstSight: Happy with Snow White.
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Snow White.]]
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* WickedStepmother: Snow White's stepmother abused her after her father's death and planned her death by asking to go on a WildGooseChase for the golden apple.
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* WickedStepmother: Partially adverted as Snow White's stepmother mother is actually her biological mother. She abused her Snow White after her father's death and planned her death by asking to go on a WildGooseChase for the golden apple.
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* LoveatFirstSight: Happy with Snow White.
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* LoveatFirstSight: LoveAtFirstSight: Happy with Snow White.
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Snow White.]]
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Snow White.]]
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* OverprotectiveDad: Snow White's father, [[spoiler:Count Philip the Fourth,]] didn't let her go outside the property and [[spoiler:ordered the young Crazy and Red King to protect her by killing anyone from the outside from getting near her.]]
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* OverprotectiveDad: Snow White's father, [[spoiler:Count Philip the Fourth,]] Fourth]], didn't let her go outside the property and [[spoiler:ordered the young Crazy and Red King to protect her by killing anyone from the outside from getting near her.]]
* LovingBully: Alice and White Rabbit both bully their respective love interest. [[spoiler: The Red King counts too.]]
* LoveatFirstSight: Happy with Snow White.
* LovingBully: Alice and White Rabbit both bully their respective love interest. [[spoiler: The Red King counts too.]]
* LoveatFirstSight: Happy with Snow White.
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* OverprotectiveDad: Snow White's father, Count Philip the Fourth, didn't let her go outside the property and [[spoiler:ordered the young Crazy and Red King to protect her by killing anyone from the outside from getting near her.]]
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* OverprotectiveDad: Snow White's father, Count [[spoiler:Count Philip the Fourth, Fourth,]] didn't let her go outside the property and [[spoiler:ordered the young Crazy and Red King to protect her by killing anyone from the outside from getting near her.]]
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* WickedStepmother: Alice's stepmother abused her after her father's death and planned her death by asking to go WildGooseChase for the golden apple.
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* WickedStepmother: Alice's Snow White's stepmother abused her after her father's death and planned her death by asking to go on a WildGooseChase for the golden apple.
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* OverprotectiveDad
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* WickedStepmother: Alice's stepmother abused her after her father's death and planned her death by asking to go [[WildGooseChase wild goose chase]] for the golden apple.
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* WickedStepmother: Alice's stepmother abused her after her father's death and planned her death by asking to go [[WildGooseChase wild goose chase]] WildGooseChase for the golden apple.
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* WickedStepmother: Alice's stepmother planned for her to be killed when she asked Alice to find a golden apple.
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* WickedStepmother: Alice's stepmother abused her after her father's death and planned her death by asking to go [[WildGooseChase wild goose chase]] for her to be killed when she asked Alice to find a the golden apple. apple.
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* WickedStepmother: Alice's stepmother planned for her to be killed when she asked her Alice to find a golden apple.
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* OverprotectiveDad
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* WickedStepmotherWickedStepmother: Alice's stepmother planned for her to be killed when she asked her to find a golden apple.
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Dewicking cut trope.
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* HeroicAlbino: Snow White
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* FragileFlower: Snow White.
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Though she is feared, scorned, and bullied by others for being a "demon child" due to her [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl white hair]] and [[RedEyesTakeWarning red eyes]], Snow White strives to do good in hopes that her efforts will gain their friendship one day. Her only seeming companion is Mirror, who is asked day after day by Snow White's "Mother" (or employer) if she is the FairestOfThemAll.
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Though she is feared, scorned, and bullied by others for being a "demon child" due to her [[WhiteHairedPrettyGirl white hair]] hair and [[RedEyesTakeWarning red eyes]], Snow White strives to do good in hopes that her efforts will gain their friendship one day. Her only seeming companion is Mirror, who is asked day after day by Snow White's "Mother" (or employer) if she is the FairestOfThemAll.
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** WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: Snow White. This, coupled with her attached, bunny-like hood, causes Alice to presume she works for the White Rabbit.
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* CommonEyeColors:
** BlueEyes: Alice
** BrownEyes: Jack of Hearts
** GreenEyes: Dormouse
** PurpleEyes: Mirror and the Red King
** RedEyesTakeWarning: Snow White and the White Rabbit
** BlueEyes: Alice
** BrownEyes: Jack of Hearts
** GreenEyes: Dormouse
** PurpleEyes: Mirror and the Red King
** RedEyesTakeWarning: Snow White and the White Rabbit
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* AccidentalKiss[=/=]CrashIntoHello: Snow White falls from the sky and meets Alice in this manner, some sparking rumors and provoked provoking jealousy from the Dormouse. Alice claims that their accidental kiss meant nothing to him, but when Snow White bluntly expresses similarly, he appears to be disappointed.
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Snow White's reaction to Alice once his [[BeaneathTheMask mask]] comes off.
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Snow White's reaction to Alice once his [[BeaneathTheMask mask]] mask comes off.
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* TerrifiedOfGerms: Not necessarily "terrified," but the Mysterious Man openly expresses a disgust in germs in general.
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* TerrifiedOfGerms: Not necessarily "terrified," but the Mysterious Man openly expresses a disgust in of germs in general.
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* AccidentalKiss[=/=]CrashIntoHello: Snow White falls from the sky and meets Alice in this manner, some rumors and provoked jealousy from the Dormouse. Alice claims the that their accidental kiss meant nothing to him, but when Snow White bluntly expresses similarly, he appears to be disappointed.
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* FriendToAllLivingThings: It's not so much that Snow White is a friend to animals as animals are simply drawn to her. And react negatively if she's threatened.
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* FriendToAllLivingThings: It's Snow White, though it's subverted in that it's not so much that Snow White is a friend to animals as animals are simply drawn to her. her, for whatever reason. And react negatively if she's she is threatened.
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* [[DoesNotLikeSpam Does Not Like Apples]]: Snow White. Though, this is naturally with good reason.
* FriendToAllLivingThings: It's not so much that Snow White is a friend to animals as animals are simply drawn to her. And react negatively if she's threatened.
* GreenEyedMonster: Dormouse is not pleased about Alice's and Snow White's AccidentalKiss.
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* HowDoYouLikeThemApples: Snow White ''hates'' apples.
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* CurtainsMatchTheWindow: Dormouse.
* HairColors:
** FieryRedhead: Jack of Hearts.
** WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: Snow White. This, coupled with her attached, bunny-like hood, causes Alice to presume she works for the White Rabbit.
** YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Mirror. The Dormourse has green hair and the Cheshire Cat has purple hair.
** FieryRedhead: Jack of Hearts.
** WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: Snow White. This, coupled with her attached, bunny-like hood, causes Alice to presume she works for the White Rabbit.
** YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Mirror. The Dormourse has green hair and the Cheshire Cat has purple hair.
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* WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: Snow White. This, coupled with her attached, bunny-like hood, causes Alice to presume she works for the White Rabbit.
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* AccidentalKiss[=/=]CrashIntoHello: This is how Snow White falls from the sky and meets Alice meets in this manner, some rumors and provoked jealousy from the Dormouse. Alice claims the kiss meant nothing to him, but Snow White.White expresses similarly, he appears to be disappointed.
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* TheIngenue: Snow White.
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* AccidentalKiss: Between AccidentalKiss[=/=]CrashIntoHello: This is how Alice and meets Snow White.
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* WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: Snow White. This, coupled with her attached hood, causes Alice to presume she works for the White Rabbit.
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* WhiteHairedPrettyGirl: Snow White. This, coupled with her attached attached, bunny-like hood, causes Alice to presume she works for the White Rabbit.
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* {{Yandere}}: Mirror pretty much makes it clear he would get rid of Snow White's WickedStepmother and bullies if he had her consent.
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* {{Yandere}}: Mirror pretty much makes it clear that he would get rid of Snow White's WickedStepmother and bullies if only he had her consent.
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Snow White's reaction to Alice once his [[BeaneathTheMask mask]] comes off.
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* {{Jerkass}}/JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Alice.
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* {{Jerkass}}/JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Alice.{{Jerkass}}: Alice. He occasionally leans into JerkWithAHeartOfGold territory.
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* TerrifiedOfGerms: Not necessarily "terrified," but the Mysterious Man openly expresses a disgust in germs in general.
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* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: Mirror and the Mysterious Man towards Snow White.
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* WholesomeCrossdresser: [[spoiler:Jack of Hearts.]]
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According to Mirror, the only way for Snow White to return to her realm is to "make Alice the king."
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According to Mirror, the only way for Snow White to return to her realm is to [[RightfulKingReturns "make Alice the king."
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