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** Robert Olmstead fits this role better. [[spoiler: Until the end.]]
** Robert Olmstead fits this role better. [[spoiler: Until the end.]]
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** Robert Olmstead fits this role better. [[spoiler: UntilAllen is the end.]]only remaining inhabitant of Innsmouth who is not part of the Esoteric Order of Dagon and not in the process of mutating into a fishman.
** Robert Olmstead fits this role better. [[spoiler: Until
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Innsmouth is a fishing town; there\'s no need to assume the \"fish odor\" is coming from the inhabitants\' bodies.
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** ArtisticLicenseBiology: What we think of as the "fish odor" is actually the smell of [[http://www.humantouchofchemistry.com/node/10 dead fish]]. So unless [[Film/ReAnimator Herbert West]] is up to something [[NonHumanUndead even worse]]. . .
*** The smell is present in live fish as well, as anyone who's gone fishing can attest. It just gets stronger after the fish dies.
*** Also the only remaining notable industry in town is fishing so there's a lot of fish to stink up the joint.
*** The smell is present in live fish as well, as anyone who's gone fishing can attest. It just gets stronger after the fish dies.
*** Also the only remaining notable industry in town is fishing so there's a lot of fish to stink up the joint.
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I thought these ill-bred people's gill-slits showed."''\\
--''Dagon Tabernacle Choir'' [[http://www.cthulhulives.org/Solstice/fish-menplayer.html]][[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3tTHn2tHhcI]]
Innsmouth is a small, run-down village on the northern coast of Massachusetts, near Ipswich, Gloucester, and [[LovecraftCountry Arkham]]. Locals don't like it much. There are whispered rumors about dark dealings with the supernatural, the taint of foreign blood, and some sort of hereditary deformity. While touring New England, a young man learns of the town's sinister reputation and [[SchmuckBait decides it's worth a visit]]. Curiouser and curiouser, he bribes the local drunk, said to be the [[OnlySaneMan only normal human left]], with his favorite poison. The tale he tells is crazy yet the narrator cannot ignore the sinister atmosphere and the evidence before his own eyes. After barely escaping with his own life, our hero eventually [[spoiler: discovers that he himself is one of the hybrid FishPeople, a direct descendant of Innsmouth's most prominent family]].
"[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Shadow_Over_Innsmouth The Shadow Over Innsmouth]]" is one of Creator/HPLovecraft's longest and most famous stories. Among the various beasties of the CthulhuMythos, the Deep Ones and their half-human spawn are among the most popular and enduring, inspiring numerous other authors (including [[http://www.amazon.com/Shadows-over-Innsmouth-Stephen-Jones/dp/0345444078/ref=sr_1_2?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1308273466&sr=1-2 Neil Gaiman]]), as well as the 2001 film ''Film/{{Dagon}}'', the 2007 film ''Film/{{Cthulhu}}'', and the video game ''VideoGame/CallOfCthulhuDarkCornersOfTheEarth''.
''Innsmouth'' has also been adapted twice as an audio drama by the Atlanta Radio Theater Company and the HP Lovecraft Historical Society. It has also been [[http://www.clasicadecomedias.com/version_teatral.html adapted for stage in Spain.]]
--''Dagon Tabernacle Choir'' [[http://www.cthulhulives.org/Solstice/fish-menplayer.html]][[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3tTHn2tHhcI]]
Innsmouth is a small, run-down village on the northern coast of Massachusetts, near Ipswich, Gloucester, and [[LovecraftCountry Arkham]]. Locals don't like it much. There are whispered rumors about dark dealings with the supernatural, the taint of foreign blood, and some sort of hereditary deformity. While touring New England, a young man learns of the town's sinister reputation and [[SchmuckBait decides it's worth a visit]]. Curiouser and curiouser, he bribes the local drunk, said to be the [[OnlySaneMan only normal human left]], with his favorite poison. The tale he tells is crazy yet the narrator cannot ignore the sinister atmosphere and the evidence before his own eyes. After barely escaping with his own life, our hero eventually [[spoiler: discovers that he himself is one of the hybrid FishPeople, a direct descendant of Innsmouth's most prominent family]].
"[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Shadow_Over_Innsmouth The Shadow Over Innsmouth]]" is one of Creator/HPLovecraft's longest and most famous stories. Among the various beasties of the CthulhuMythos, the Deep Ones and their half-human spawn are among the most popular and enduring, inspiring numerous other authors (including [[http://www.amazon.com/Shadows-over-Innsmouth-Stephen-Jones/dp/0345444078/ref=sr_1_2?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1308273466&sr=1-2 Neil Gaiman]]), as well as the 2001 film ''Film/{{Dagon}}'', the 2007 film ''Film/{{Cthulhu}}'', and the video game ''VideoGame/CallOfCthulhuDarkCornersOfTheEarth''.
''Innsmouth'' has also been adapted twice as an audio drama by the Atlanta Radio Theater Company and the HP Lovecraft Historical Society. It has also been [[http://www.clasicadecomedias.com/version_teatral.html adapted for stage in Spain.]]
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I thought these ill-bred people's gill-slits showed."''\\
--''Dagon"''
-->--''Dagon Tabernacle Choir'' [[http://www.cthulhulives.org/Solstice/fish-menplayer.html]][[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3tTHn2tHhcI]]
Innsmouth is a small, run-down village on the northern coast of Massachusetts, near Ipswich, Gloucester, and [[LovecraftCountry Arkham]]. Locals don't like it much. There are whispered rumors about dark dealings with the supernatural, the taint of foreign blood, and some sort of hereditary deformity. While touring New England, a young man learns of the town's sinister reputation and [[SchmuckBait decides it's worth a visit]]. Curiouser and curiouser, he bribes the local drunk, said to be the [[OnlySaneMan only normal human left]], with his favorite poison. The tale he tellsis crazy sounds crazy, yet the narrator cannot ignore the sinister atmosphere and the evidence before his own eyes. After barely escaping with his own life, our hero eventually [[spoiler: discovers that he himself is one of the hybrid FishPeople, a direct descendant of Innsmouth's most prominent family]].
"[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Shadow_Over_Innsmouth Theeyes.
"The ShadowOver Innsmouth]]" Over_Innsmouth" is one of Creator/HPLovecraft's longest and most famous stories. Among the various beasties of the CthulhuMythos, the Deep Ones and their half-human spawn are among the most popular and enduring, inspiring numerous other authors (including [[http://www.amazon.com/Shadows-over-Innsmouth-Stephen-Jones/dp/0345444078/ref=sr_1_2?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1308273466&sr=1-2 Neil Gaiman]]), as well as the 2001 film ''Film/{{Dagon}}'', the 2007 film ''Film/{{Cthulhu}}'', and the video game ''VideoGame/CallOfCthulhuDarkCornersOfTheEarth''.
''Innsmouth'' has also been adapted twice as an audio drama by the Atlanta Radio Theater Company and theHP H. P. Lovecraft Historical Society. It has also been [[http://www.clasicadecomedias.com/version_teatral.html adapted for stage in Spain.]]
--''Dagon
-->--''Dagon Tabernacle Choir'' [[http://www.cthulhulives.org/Solstice/fish-menplayer.html]][[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3tTHn2tHhcI]]
Innsmouth is a small, run-down village on the northern coast of Massachusetts, near Ipswich, Gloucester, and [[LovecraftCountry Arkham]]. Locals don't like it much. There are whispered rumors about dark dealings with the supernatural, the taint of foreign blood, and some sort of hereditary deformity. While touring New England, a young man learns of the town's sinister reputation and [[SchmuckBait decides it's worth a visit]]. Curiouser and curiouser, he bribes the local drunk, said to be the [[OnlySaneMan only normal human left]], with his favorite poison. The tale he tells
"[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Shadow_Over_Innsmouth The
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* MeaningfulName: Obed ''Marsh'' was the first to unite the land-dwelling people of Innsmouth with the water-going Deep Ones, and his family is allegedly full of hybrids. Another family that married the Deep Ones were the [[PunnyName Gilmans]].
** [[spoiler: The narrator-protagonist is named Robert ''Olm''stead. An olm is an amphibian that spends its entire life in deep water, like a fish. The Deep Ones are described as fish-like amphibians. [[AndThenJohnWasAZombie Guess what Robert is?]]]]
** [[spoiler: The narrator-protagonist is named Robert ''Olm''stead. An olm is an amphibian that spends its entire life in deep water, like a fish. The Deep Ones are described as fish-like amphibians. [[AndThenJohnWasAZombie Guess what Robert is?]]]]
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* AuthorAvatar: The narrator shares his antiquarian interests and frugal travel habits with Lovecraft. [[spoiler: His horror at his inhuman heritage may also reflect Lovecraft's fear of hereditary insanity, thanks to his father's breakdown, and his shock at learning that his great-grandmother was . . . WELSH]].
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* AuthorAvatar: The narrator shares his antiquarian interests and frugal travel habits with Lovecraft. [[spoiler: His horror at his inhuman heritage may also reflect Lovecraft's fear of hereditary insanity, thanks to his father's breakdown, and his shock at learning that his great-grandmother was . . . WELSH]].breakdown]].
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* CorruptHick: The locals. They live in the ruined town of Innsmouth, Massachusetts. They are very secretive, do not like outsiders, walk awkwardly, and don't look like a human combined with a fish or a frog.quite human. . .
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* DyingTown: Innsmouth. Everyone is poorer, even the Marsh family; half the buildings are abandoned and crumbling, and population is going down. But if you think of it as a [[spoiler:breeding [[spoiler: breeding ground for Deep Ones...]]
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* HahvahdYahdInMyCah: The real fun of the ARTC version is hearing the cast affect some truly ridiculous New England accents.
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* DyingTown: Innsmouth ''appears'' to be this.
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* DyingTown: Innsmouth ''appears'' to be this.
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** [[spoiler: It ''is'', as a town (everyone
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** [[spoiler: It ''is'', as a town (everyone is poorer, even the Marsh family, family; half the buildings are abandoned and crumbling, and population is going down). But if you think of it as a breeding ground for Deep Ones...]]
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** AdaptationalBadass: HPL depicted the Deep Ones as a pathetic degenerate subhuman race. Most writers since have turned them into aquatic supermen who would even give Aquaman a run for his money.
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** AdaptationalBadass: HPL Lovecraft depicted the Deep Ones as a pathetic degenerate subhuman race. Most writers since have turned them into aquatic supermen who would even give Aquaman a run for his money. This may have to do with [[ValuesDissonance changing understandings]] of ''why'' the Deep Ones would be able to obliterate humanity if they felt the need to. To someone like Lovecraft, the only way sub-humans (e.g. Deep Ones) ''would'' be able to do it would be through the text-implied superior numbers (look at the surge from Devil Reef alone!), along with a little help from their exported shoggoths. If you're not steeped in the 1920s racism that Lovecraft held, though...
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--''Dagon [[RunningTheAsylum Tabernacle Choir]]'' [[http://www.cthulhulives.org/Solstice/fish-menplayer.html]][[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3tTHn2tHhcI]]
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--''Dagon [[RunningTheAsylum Tabernacle Choir]]'' Choir'' [[http://www.cthulhulives.org/Solstice/fish-menplayer.html]][[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3tTHn2tHhcI]]
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"[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Shadow_Over_Innsmouth The Shadow Over Innsmouth]]" is one of Creator/HPLovecraft's longest and most famous stories. Among the various beasties of the CthulhuMythos, the Deep Ones and their half-human spawn are among the most popular and enduring, inspiring numerous other authors (including [[http://www.amazon.com/Shadows-over-Innsmouth-Stephen-Jones/dp/0345444078/ref=sr_1_2?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1308273466&sr=1-2 Neil Gaiman]]), as well as the 2001 film ''{{Dagon}}'' and the video game ''DarkCornersOfTheEarth''.
''Innsmouth'' has also been adapted twice as an audio drama by the AtlantaRadioTheaterCompany and the HP Lovecraft Historical Society. It has also been [[http://www.clasicadecomedias.com/version_teatral.html adapted for stage in Spain.]]
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"[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Shadow_Over_Innsmouth The Shadow Over Innsmouth]]" is one of Creator/HPLovecraft's longest and most famous stories. Among the various beasties of the CthulhuMythos, the Deep Ones and their half-human spawn are among the most popular and enduring, inspiring numerous other authors (including [[http://www.amazon.com/Shadows-over-Innsmouth-Stephen-Jones/dp/0345444078/ref=sr_1_2?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1308273466&sr=1-2 Neil Gaiman]]), as well as the 2001 film ''{{Dagon}}'' ''Film/{{Dagon}}'', the 2007 film ''Film/{{Cthulhu}}'', and the video game ''DarkCornersOfTheEarth''.
''VideoGame/CallOfCthulhuDarkCornersOfTheEarth''.
''Innsmouth'' has also been adapted twice as an audio drama by theAtlantaRadioTheaterCompany Atlanta Radio Theater Company and the HP Lovecraft Historical Society. It has also been [[http://www.clasicadecomedias.com/version_teatral.html adapted for stage in Spain.]]
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** YouFailBiologyForever: What we think of as the "fish odor" is actually the smell of [[http://www.humantouchofchemistry.com/node/10 dead fish]]. So unless [[ReAnimator Herbert West]] is up to something [[NonHumanUndead even worse]]. . .
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** YouFailBiologyForever: ArtisticLicenseBiology: What we think of as the "fish odor" is actually the smell of [[http://www.humantouchofchemistry.com/node/10 dead fish]]. So unless [[ReAnimator [[Film/ReAnimator Herbert West]] is up to something [[NonHumanUndead even worse]]. . .
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"[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Shadow_Over_Innsmouth The Shadow Over Innsmouth]]" is one of HPLovecraft's Creator/HPLovecraft's longest and most famous stories. Among the various beasties of the CthulhuMythos, the Deep Ones and their half-human spawn are among the most popular and enduring, inspiring numerous other authors (including [[http://www.amazon.com/Shadows-over-Innsmouth-Stephen-Jones/dp/0345444078/ref=sr_1_2?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1308273466&sr=1-2 Neil Gaiman]]), as well as the 2001 film ''{{Dagon}}'' and the video game ''DarkCornersOfTheEarth''.
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** YouFailBiologyForever: What we think of as the "fish odor" is actually the smell of [[http://www.humantouchofchemistry.com/node/10 dead fish]]. So unless [[ReAnimator Herbert West]] is up to something [[NonHumanUndead even worse]]. . .
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* SinisterMinister: Zadok Allen recalls how the Esoteric Order of Dagon took over the town and Captain Marsh's crewmen were promoted as priests of the new religion. Creepy tiara-wearing priests still lurk in dark corners, and several are seen among the narrator's pursuers toward the end.
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* SinisterMinister: Zadok Allen recalls how the Esoteric Order of Dagon took over the town and Captain Marsh's crewmen were promoted as priests of the new religion. Creepy tiara-wearing priests still lurk in dark corners, and several are seen among the narrator's pursuers toward the end.
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*** Arguable. Even in the original story the Deep Ones are immortal, possess powerful magic and are capable of ingenious, long-reaching plans to regain their influence in the surface world. The ending especially hints that what is seen in Innsmouth is nothing more but the tiny surface of a massive iceberg.
*** They are considered "degenerate" and "subhuman" by human moral standards, but it is stated in the original story that they could wipe out the human race, if they cared to.
*** The point remains that they don't care to. The race is defined in this story by apathy. They just lie face down on the ocean bottom until somebody drops them a line (pun intended) and then contact with the Deep Ones causes the human society involved to decay and collapse. (Innsmouth being the second human society noted for this in this story.) Perhaps the Deep Ones do have vast powers down below, but just give up on humanity because the human cultures they come into contact with actually are so degenerate that it's not worth the minor effort required to wipe humanity out. (That and the loss of the booty calls of course.)
*** That's true of the majority of Lovecraft's creations, though - humans are so insignificant to them that they just don't care.
*** They are considered "degenerate" and "subhuman" by human moral standards, but it is stated in the original story that they could wipe out the human race, if they cared to.
*** The point remains that they don't care to. The race is defined in this story by apathy. They just lie face down on the ocean bottom until somebody drops them a line (pun intended) and then contact with the Deep Ones causes the human society involved to decay and collapse. (Innsmouth being the second human society noted for this in this story.) Perhaps the Deep Ones do have vast powers down below, but just give up on humanity because the human cultures they come into contact with actually are so degenerate that it's not worth the minor effort required to wipe humanity out. (That and the loss of the booty calls of course.)
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*** The smell is present in live fish as well, as anyone who's gone fishing can attest. It just gets stronger after the fish dies. dies.
*** Also the only remaining notable industry in town is fishing so there's a lot of fish to stink up the joint.
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*** The point remains that they don't care to. The race is defined in this story by apathy. They just lie face down on the ocean bottom until somebody drops them a line (pun intended) and then contact with the Deep Ones causes the human society involved to decay and collapse. (Innsmouth being the second human society noted for this in this story.) Perhaps the Deep Ones do have vast powers down below, but just give up on humanity because the human cultures they come into contact with actually are so degenerate that it's not worth the minor effort required to wipe humanity out. (That and the loss of the booty calls of course.)
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* [[spoiler: TomatoInTheMirror: The narrator is a Deep One hybrid himself, descended from Obed Marsh and one Pth'thya-l'yi]].
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*** They are considered "degenerate" and "subhuman" by human moral standards, but it is stated that they could wipe out the human race, if they cared to.
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*** They are considered "degenerate" and "subhuman" by human moral standards, but it is stated in the original story that they could wipe out the human race, if they cared to.
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*** They are considered "degenerate" and "subhuman" by human moral standards, but it is stated that they could wipe out the human race, if they cared to.
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* NoNameGiven: The protagonist of the story is never named. His name, however, is revealed to be Robert Olmstead in [[AllThereInTheManual Lovecraft's notes]].