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* NoPronunciationGuide: Ceyda is properly pronounced as "Jay-da" or "Chay-da", depending on your accent, rather than "Say-da" or "Kay-da".
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* {{Magitek}}: One form [[SpellBook grimoires]] can take is a computer tablet just as capable of casting spells as anything else.
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* {{Magitek}}: One form [[SpellBook grimoires]] can take is a [[FantasyCounterpartAppliance computer tablet tablet]] just as capable of casting spells as anything else.
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* FantasticalSocialServices: The Dysfunctional Magic Unit, or DMU, of the Atrium is effectively a boarding house/therapy center for those who either [[UnSorcerer cannot use magic at all]] or only with great effort, which is treated as a disability in a society where everyone is otherwise capable of using magic.
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* DramaticIrony: Rembrandt finds the concept of Ceyda and "Sebastian" fighting hilarious since he's the former's brother Medhi but brainwashing, but Ceyda doesn't recognize him at all and he refuses to spell it out to her.
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* DramaticIrony: Rembrandt finds the concept of Ceyda and "Sebastian" fighting hilarious since he's the former's brother Medhi but brainwashing, brainwashed, but Ceyda doesn't recognize him at all all, and he refuses to spell it out to her.
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* EliteMooks: The Sons of Kesterline are Mages that have been brainwashed into new identities and serve as Kesterline's strongest warriors.
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* PoweredByAForsakenChild: The reason why Kesterline Mages are shown to be so powerful is because they draw energy from people chained to bed and drained of their magic.
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* PoweredByAForsakenChild: The reason why Kesterline Mages are shown to be so powerful is because they draw energy from people chained to bed beds and drained of their magic.
* StraightEdgeEvil: While in the Atrium, apart from going to the nightclub in the first place, Rembrandt doesn't really indulge in the same vices as the other Mages.
* StrongerThanTheyLook: Archeon looks pretty scrawny, but he's capable of easily lifting Ceyda by the neck and snapping it if not for her shields.
* StrongerThanTheyLook: Archeon looks pretty scrawny, but he's capable of easily lifting Ceyda by the neck and snapping it if not for her shields.
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* TeethClenchedTeamwork: Ceyda and Reiner have issues getting along, but their soul bond forces them to work together anyway.
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** Ceyda and Reiner have issues getting along, but their soul bond forces them to work togetheranyway.anyway.
** Reiner and Doc dislike each other immensely, with only Ceyda keeping them together.
** Ceyda and Reiner have issues getting along, but their soul bond forces them to work together
** Reiner and Doc dislike each other immensely, with only Ceyda keeping them together.
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* GlassesAreSexy: In Kesterline glasses are seen as something erotic, especially on Chatelaines like Ceyda.
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* SexySpectacles: In Kesterline glasses are seen as something erotic, especially on Chatelaines like Ceyda.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Kesterline's unlikely heroes.]]
[[caption-width-right:350:Kesterline's unlikely heroes.]]
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* OurDemonsAreDifferent: Ifrit range from small imps to beings larger than a man, and are quite dangerous.
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* SssssnakeTalk: Scallop, Ceyda's snake familiar, has a tendency to drag out "s" sounds while speaking.
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* DeathIsCheap: In the Atrium resurrections spells are common enough that someone getting killed in a fight is considered roughly as bad as getting seriously cut up in a bar fight as long as the spell's done in time, they don't have issues with time magic working on them, and it doesn't happen to someone "important" such as a politician.
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* DeathIsCheap: In the Atrium resurrections resurrection spells are common enough that someone getting killed in a fight is considered roughly as bad as getting seriously cut up in a bar fight as long as the spell's done in time, they don't have issues with time magic working on them, and it doesn't happen to someone "important" such as a politician.
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* PeoplePuppets: Reiner's magic has her using her bees to puppeteer corpses.
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* DramaticIrony: Rembrandt finds the concept of Ceyda and "Sebastian" fighting hilarious since he's the former's brother Medhi but brainwashing, but Ceyda doesn't recognize him at all and he refuses to spell it out to her.
* PoweredByAForsakenChild: The reason why Kesterline Mages are shown to be so powerful is because they draw energy from people chained to bed and drained of their magic.
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* VillainHasAPoint: Towcard may be willing to kill Medhi because he's learned too much, but he's also quite correct that Kesterline's social system is built on nothing but lies, even if he breaks it to Medhi in the least kind way.
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* VillainHasAPoint: Towcard may be willing to kill Medhi because he's learned too much, such as the fact that the Kesterline government has been keeping people to be used as batteries for their magic, but he's also quite correct that Kesterline's social system is built on nothing but lies, even if he breaks it to Medhi in the least kind way.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Harper is one of the nicest character's in the story. She's also quite capable and willing to ruthlessly kill Kesterline Mages with her blood magic.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Harper is one of the nicest character's characters in the story. She's also quite capable and willing to ruthlessly kill Kesterline Mages with her blood magic.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Harper is one of the nicest character's in the story. She's also quite capable and willing to ruthlessly kill Kesterline Mages with her blood magic.
* LanguageBarrier: Harper ends up sneaking aboard the boat back to Kesterline with Ceyda and Reiner unbeknownst to either, and runs into the issue that she and Ceyda can't directly communicate because neither speaks the other's language without the TranslatorMicrobes of the Atrium. It's mostly solved when Reiner uses effectively the spell equivalent of Google Translate to read out Harper's words for Ceyda, but she can't communicate with any other Kesterline citizens directly.
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* PlayingWithFire: The Firemite is a species of termite native to Kesterline's tropical rainforest that can breathe fire.
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* PlayingWithFire: The Firemite is a species NiceMeanAndInbetween: During Part 3, Harper's the most openly friendly even with the issue of termite native to Kesterline's tropical rainforest that can breathe fire.a language barrier (Nice), Reiner's cynical and cantankerous (Mean), and Ceyda's between the two.
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* PlayingWithFire: The Firemite is a species of termite native to Kesterline's tropical rainforest that can breathe fire.
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* {{Familiar}}: Familiars can be formed by someone bonding their soul with an existing animal, or creating one outright. They can also speak with one another telepathically. Upon learning this, Ceyda decides that she wants a dragon familiar, but later on gets a snake, Scallop.
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* {{Familiar}}: Familiars can be formed by someone bonding their soul with an existing animal, or creating one outright. They can also speak with one another telepathically. Upon learning this, Ceyda decides that she wants a dragon familiar.
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* CultureClash: After Harper saves Sebastian he gives her his grimoire to signify his surrender, which she looks strangely at, which turns out in the following chapter to be because where Harper's from, giving a person your spellbook is how one does a marriage proposal.
