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* HonoraryUncle: Early in their friendship, the child Polly suggests that she could address Tom as "Uncle Tom", but he asks her not to because it makes him feel like the title character of ''Literature/UncleTomsCabin''.

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* CurtainsMatchTheWindow: Laurel, whose hair is described as "light and floating, of a colour that could have been grey or no colour at all" and has [[GrayEyes eyes to match]].

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* TheLadette: Polly tries her hand at this throughout the story, as part of her self-imposed "hero training". She builds her muscles by lifting up her bed, joins the school football team as it's only girl and gets into fights with the local bully. She spends a lot of time looking wild and unclean as a result.

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* TheLadette: Polly tries her hand at this throughout the story, as part of her self-imposed "hero training". She builds her muscles by lifting up her bed, joins the school football team as it's its only girl and gets into fights with the local bully. She spends a lot of time looking wild and unclean as a result.



** The ending itself is deliberately vague and confusing about exactly how much of [[spoiler:Polly and Tom's relationship] is being sacrificed or if [[spoiler:they can keep being together]].

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* AmbiguousSituation: The degree to which the stories Polly and Tom come up with are actually RewritingReality. On the one hand, things like the horse and [[spoiler:Sam turning into a dragon]] are clearly fictions that Mr Leroy is deliberately bringing to life to turn against them. On the other hand, Tom's alter ego Thomas Piper, along with Piper's sister and her son turn out to be [[spoiler:Tom's brother, sister-in-law and nephew, respectively]], all real people who existed long before Tom and Polly even met but somehow end up living lives that more-or-less directly reflect Polly and Tom's writing. With the book's running theme of blending the real world with "Nowhere", this ambiguity is probably on purpose.



* MindScrew: Wait, ''what'' happens at the end again?

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** Polly and Tom come across Lorenzo, a wild, aggressive horse who resembles the golden steed Tom's alter ego rides in their stories. Direct parallels are drawn between Lorenzo and TheAllegedCar that Tom drives later on, the vehicle being similarly unpredictable and directed by Tom's swearing. Tom later says he "swapped the horse out for the car", implying that the two are somehow one, yet both continue to exist
at the end again?same time. At the end, Tom summons the horse to his aid, and it briefly appears, but later on Lorenzo is nowhere to be found, but Tom's car is in the garden. ''What?''
** The ending itself is deliberately vague and confusing about exactly how much of [[spoiler:Polly and Tom's relationship] is being sacrificed or if [[spoiler:they can keep being together]].
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* CurtainsMatchTheWindow: Laurel, whose hair is described as "light and floating, of a colour that could have been grey or no colour at all" and has [[GrayEyes eyes to match]].


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* MythologyGag: The full names of both Laurel and her [[MyGrandsonMyself "mother"]] are "Eudora Mabel Lorelei" and "Mabel Tatiana", referencing various fairy queens from the works of Shakespeare and mythology. Since it's established that a lot of the literature that Laurel is based on actually exists in-universe, it's possible that she chose these names herself as a private joke.


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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Laurel. According to the reading of the will at the beginning, her full name is "Mrs Eudora Mabel Lorelei Perry Lynn". Of course, given who she [[TheFairFolk actually is]], it's likely that none of these is her real name.

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* BigBad: Laurel, the Fairy Queen and main threat to Tom and Polly.



* ChildProdigy: Tom, with regards to music. It's stated that Laurel specifically seeks out young men with this particular talent, having previously targeted [[spoiler:Polly's grandfather]] and later setting her sights on [[spoiler:Leslie Piper]].



* ConnectedAllAlong:
** At first, Leslie and his mother are just random people from Stow-on-the-Water who just happen to strongly resemble characters in Polly and Tom's stories. Later, Leslie starts going to school in Polly's town and it turns out that [[spoiler:he is Tom's nephew, and later becomes the target of Tom's ex-wife, Laurel]].
** Granny turns out to have a connection to the BigBad as well: [[spoiler:Laurel seduced and sacrificed her husband, Polly's grandfather]].



* ExtremeDoormat: Polly, who regularly curses her own "soft-heartedness". She spends most of her friendship with Nina being her lackey out of fear of the friendship ending and silently puts up with almost all of her parents' terrible behaviour despite how it affects her. Her entire relationship with Seb - spanning more than six years - is really just a string of romantic events and proposals that she doesn't have the heart to turn down. She finally shakes it off in the end.

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* ExtremeDoormat: Polly, who regularly curses her own "soft-heartedness". She spends most of her friendship with Nina being her lackey out of fear of the friendship ending and silently puts up with almost all of her parents' terrible behaviour despite how it affects her. Her entire relationship with Seb - spanning more than six years - is really just a string of romantic events and proposals that she doesn't have the heart to turn down. She finally shakes it off in the end. Ironically, about the only person she isn't ever a doormat to is Tom, who often annoys her with his own tendencies toward this.



* MaybeEverAfter: The MindScrew ending leaves some readers confused about where Tom and Polly's relationship will go. It's possible they might be able to get away with staying together, but it's hard to believe Laurel would let sleeping dogs lie after being cheated.

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* MaybeEverAfter: The MindScrew ending leaves some readers confused about it deliberately ambiguous where Tom and Polly's relationship will go. It's possible they might be able to get away with staying together, but it's hard to believe Laurel would let sleeping dogs lie after being cheated.


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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Tom, who Polly first meets when she is 10 and thus vaguely assumes that everyone over the age of 20 is "old", combined with his recent harrowing divorce leaving him looking drained and aged. After not having seen him for several years, she gets quite a shock once she grows up and sees a picture of him, realising that he was much younger than she had imagined. Tom's exact age is never given, but he would have been in his early 20's at the start of the book.
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* ExtremeDoormat: Polly, who regularly curses her own "soft-heartedness". She spends most of her friendship with Nina being her lackey out of fear of the friendship ending and silently puts up with almost all of her parents' terrible behaviour despite how it affects her. Her entire relationship with Seb - spanning more than six years - is really just a string of romantic events and proposals that she doesn't have the heart to turn down. She finally shakes it off in the end.
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* LadykillerInLove: Leslie with [[spoiler:Laurel]]. A lot of it is down to magic, but when [[spoiler:Laurel is defeated and she abandons Leslie]], he clearly cared enough to cry his eyes out over it.


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* UnnamedParent: Averted with Polly's parents, Ivy and Reg, but Granny is much more integral to the story than either of them and she is only ever called Granny.
* WifeHusbandry: A gender-flipped version with Laurel and Tom. She adopted him and his brother after they lost their parents at a young age, and she essentially raised him to be her consort so she could claim his soul.
* YourCheatingHeart:
** Polly's father Reg leaves Ivy for Joanna Renton after having been with both women for quite some time, and Ivy says that Joanna was far from the first.
** Though both were caused by Laurel's magic and were probably inadvertent, [[spoiler:Polly's grandfather still left Granny for Laurel, and Leslie did the same to Nina]].

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* BigEater: Sam, who always has food of some kind on his person.

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* BigBrotherBully: [[spoiler:Tom's brother, Charles]]. He's a bully to everyone else, too, but gets extra bad points for [[spoiler:being the one to originally have a contract with Laurel before willingly exchanging Tom's life for his.]] He explicitly says at the end that he's glad he did it.
* BigEater: Sam, who always has food of some kind on his person. person.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Laurel, to a soul-eating extreme.


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* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: Polly herself.


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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Charles (aka [[spoiler:Thomas Piper]]) is unpleasant and abrasive to everyone he meets, and as a child he [[spoiler:made a deal with Laurel to take Tom's life instead of his]], but he genuinely loves and cares about his wife and son, and will do anything for them.
* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Ultimately, Seb. At the end, Polly reflects that he loved her in the same way that most other people bear a grudge.


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* UncannyFamilyResemblance: [[spoiler:Tom and his older brother, Charles.]] Characters who know them both regularly confuse one for the other at first glance.

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* BadLiar: Laurel relies mostly on her magic and being painfully sweet to get her way, and seemingly has never had to learn the art of lying. Though she puts on a good show of sadness when she tells Polly that Tom is dying, she barely bothers to put much effort into the details, blaming it on "one of those cancer things". Polly is too distraught and caught up in Laurel's spell to notice.

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* BadLiar: Laurel relies mostly on her magic and being painfully sweet to get her way, and seemingly has never had to learn the art of lying. Though she puts on a good show of sadness when she tells Polly that [[spoiler:that Tom is dying, she barely bothers to put much effort into the details, blaming it on "one of those cancer things".things"]]. Polly is too distraught and caught up in Laurel's spell to notice.



* BlondeBrunetteRedhead: Polly, Nina and Fiona, respectively, though Nina spends far more time with her hair dyed in a crazy colour than with her own natural shade.



* DyeHard: Once they become teenagers, Nina's penchant for dyeing her hair extreme colours like green or crimson becomes as much a part of her personal brand as her BoobsOfSteel.



** A silly game the prefects at Polly's school play involves looking into a mirror in a darkened room, where you will supposedly see the face of your one true love behind you. Nothing happens when Polly tries it, but when she breaks into Laurel's bedroom later in the book, a picture on the wall behind her stands out more clearly reflected in the mirror than when she looks directly at it. It's quite some time before she finds out the photo is Tom as a young boy.

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** A silly game the prefects at Polly's school play involves looking into a mirror in a darkened room, where you will supposedly see the face of your one true love behind you. Nothing happens when Polly tries it, but when she breaks into Laurel's bedroom later in the book, a picture on the wall behind her stands out more clearly reflected in the mirror than when she looks directly at it. It's quite some time before she finds out the photo is Tom of [[spoiler:Tom as a young boy.boy]].



* TheLadette: Polly tries her hand at this throughout the story, as part of her self-imposed "hero training". She builds her muscles by lifting up her bed, joins the school football team as it's only girl and gets into fights with the local bully. She spends a lot of time looking wild and unclean as a result.



* LightIsNotGood: Laurel is fair-haired, dresses in a lot of white and gold, and generally gives off a sweet and pleasant air. She's also a Fairy Queen who has survived for millennia by seducing young men and stealing their souls.



** Fiona was ''hoping'' for one with her father's business colleague, Hans, even following him back to Germany to be with him when she was 15. It turned out to be very one-sided, and Hans essentially patted her on the head and sent her back to England.



* MyGrandsonMyself: Laurel pulls this to avoid anyone figuring out she uses human sacrifices to extend her life. There's also a bit of RefugeInAudacity at play, as it's strongly implied that Seb's mother was not only one of these sacrifices, but Laurel then passed the poor woman off as her own mother at the funeral Polly crashes in the beginning, denying her even the small luxury of dying as herself.

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* MyGrandsonMyself: Laurel pulls this to avoid anyone figuring out she uses human sacrifices to extend her life. There's also a bit of RefugeInAudacity at play, as it's strongly implied that Seb's mother [[spoiler:Seb's mother]] was not only one of these sacrifices, but Laurel then passed the poor woman off as her own mother at the funeral Polly crashes in the beginning, denying her even the small luxury of dying as herself.



* NoodleIncident: Whatever happened when Fiona ran away to Germany to be with Hans. All that gets revealed is that he eventually sent her back to England, but ''something'' happened over there. Polly only ever refers to it as "Fiona's Scandal", and Fiona herself wonders whether Hans still walks with a limp.



* ParentalNeglect: Even before the above happens, things aren't great for Polly at home. Her mother considers her to be more of a burden than anything else, complaining to her outright about having to "dump" Polly at a friend's house so she can have a social life, and her father disappears the minute things get bad. Even though Tom is ultimately harmless, it's very telling that neither parent is overly concerned about Polly spending so much time with a man more than twice her age.

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* ParentalNeglect: Even before the above happens, things aren't great for Polly at home. Her mother considers her to be more of a burden than anything else, complaining to her outright about having to "dump" Polly at a friend's house so she can have a social life, and her father disappears the minute things get bad. Even though Tom is ultimately harmless, a good guy, Polly's parents have no way of knowing this, and it's very telling that neither parent one of them is overly concerned about Polly spending so much time with a man more than twice her age.



* PrettyBoy: Leslie, with his long, curly hair and glittery skull earring. He is just as aware of his good looks as Nina is of hers. He is apparently pretty enough for Laurel to overlook the fact that he isn't named 'Tom'.

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* PrettyBoy: Leslie, with his long, curly hair and glittery skull earring. He is just as aware of his good looks as Nina is of hers. He is apparently pretty enough for Laurel [[spoiler:Laurel to overlook the fact that he isn't named 'Tom'.'Tom']].


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* ProphecyTwist: Laurel basically gives Tom the "power" of Prophecy Twist. All of the stories he and Polly make up together come true, but none of them are 100% accurate to the source material.
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** A silly game the prefects at Polly's school play involves looking into a mirror in a darkened room, where you will supposedly see the face of your one true love behind you. Nothing happens when Polly tries it, but when she breaks into Laurel's bedroom later in the book,, a picture on the wall behind her stands out more clearly reflected in the mirror than when she looks directly at it. It's quite some time before she finds out the photo is Tom as a young boy.

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** A silly game the prefects at Polly's school play involves looking into a mirror in a darkened room, where you will supposedly see the face of your one true love behind you. Nothing happens when Polly tries it, but when she breaks into Laurel's bedroom later in the book,, book, a picture on the wall behind her stands out more clearly reflected in the mirror than when she looks directly at it. It's quite some time before she finds out the photo is Tom as a young boy.
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* ParentalNeglect: Even before the above happens, thinks aren't great for Polly at home. Her mother considers her to be more of a burden than anything else, complaining to her outright about having to "dump" Polly at a friend's house so she can have a social life, and her father disappears the minute things get bad. Even though Tom is ultimately harmless, it's very telling that neither parent is overly concerned about Polly spending so much time with a man more than twice her age.

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* ParentalNeglect: Even before the above happens, thinks things aren't great for Polly at home. Her mother considers her to be more of a burden than anything else, complaining to her outright about having to "dump" Polly at a friend's house so she can have a social life, and her father disappears the minute things get bad. Even though Tom is ultimately harmless, it's very telling that neither parent is overly concerned about Polly spending so much time with a man more than twice her age.

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* ExactWords: As Queen of the Faeries, Laurel is bound to adhere to this.

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* ExactWords: As Queen of the Faeries, Fairies, Laurel is bound to adhere to this.


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* HalfHumanHybrid:
** Seb, born to a mortal mother and the King of the Fairies. He's never expressly shown using any kind of magical power, but he knows all about the Fairy world.
** Implied with Ann Abraham, who says near the end that her "mother was a Leroy", one of the surnames Laurel and her associates use. It might account for her somewhat-RippleEffectProofMemory, as she is the only one of the quartet to even vaguely recall knowing who Polly is at the end, the others having been spelled into forgetting about her.
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* BigEater: Sam, who always has food of some kind on his person.
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* TrueCompanions: The heroes of Tom and Polly's stories. Later, this also extends to their counterparts in the real world.
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* AstralProjection: Polly works some rudimentary magic to do this, determined to reach Tom and demand an explanation. Unfortunately, she does so at exactly the wrong time, and it directly leads to her memories being erased.


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* FoodChains: It isn't elaborated upon, but Seb marks it as significant that Polly didn't eat or drink anything when she crashed the funeral at Hunsdon House. This was completely by accident, as she was so afraid of being discovered as an impostor that she forgot to touch her drink, but it was just as well she didn't.
* {{Foreshadowing}}:
** Most of the books Tom sends to Polly are a kind of coded message trying to get her to understand his situation because part of Laurel's spell is that he can't directly tell her. Most obviously, he sends her the book containing the Ballad of Tam Lin and Thomas the Rhymer, but other stories like ''East of the Sun and West of the Moon'' end up being quite helpful to Polly along the way.
** A silly game the prefects at Polly's school play involves looking into a mirror in a darkened room, where you will supposedly see the face of your one true love behind you. Nothing happens when Polly tries it, but when she breaks into Laurel's bedroom later in the book,, a picture on the wall behind her stands out more clearly reflected in the mirror than when she looks directly at it. It's quite some time before she finds out the photo is Tom as a young boy.


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* LandOfFaerie: Hunsdon House is transformed into this during the finale, and it's clear that it was always connected to it in some way.


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* ProperlyParanoid: Almost all of Granny's superstitions are completely ridiculous, but it's strongly implied she only threw herself into them after [[spoiler:Laurel took her husband]] and she was desperate to hold the people from Hunsdon House at bay, and she was ''very'' smart to be afraid of them.


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* SomeoneToRememberHimBy: [[spoiler:Laurel took Granny's husband, also called Tom, while she was pregnant with Polly's father.]] She muses that this is probably why she spoiled her child so much.

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* BalefulPolymorph: Tan Hanivar in the stories that Polly and Tom write. It bleeds over into his real world counterpart, Sam, who turns into a dragon made of ''garbage'' and gets hit by Tom's car in the process.

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* BalefulPolymorph: Tan Hanivar in the stories that Polly and Tom write. It [[spoiler:It bleeds over into his real world counterpart, Sam, who turns into a dragon made of ''garbage'' and gets hit by Tom's car in the process.]]



* TheDragon: Mr Leroy for his wife, Laurel. He appears more often throughout the story and is the most persistent threat, though it is implied that his involvement is preferable to [[TheDreaded Laurel's]].



* ExactWords: Being a fairy, Laurel is bound to adhere to this.
* FailedASpotCheck: The spell Laurel casts erases all Polly's memories of Tom, and also affects the same memories in her friends and family, so they can't remind her of his existence. What Laurel didn't realise was that Fiona, at the time only a casual school acquaintance of Polly's, saw her and Tom together one night, and reminding her of this is the key to Polly getting all her memories back for good.
* TheFairFolk: Laurel and Morton Leroy, as well as their acquaintances. It's never made clear whether or not Seb, Mr Leroy's son, is one, though he is certainly involved in their dealings. Given that his mother was a sacrifice to Laurel, he might be a HalfHumanHybrid.

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* ExactWords: Being a fairy, As Queen of the Faeries, Laurel is bound to adhere to this.
* FailedASpotCheck: The spell Laurel casts erases all Polly's memories of Tom, and also affects the same memories in her friends and family, so they can't remind her of his existence. What Laurel didn't realise was that Fiona, [[spoiler:Fiona, at the time only a casual school acquaintance of Polly's, saw her and Tom together one night, and reminding her of this is the key to Polly getting all her memories back for good.
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* TheFairFolk: Laurel and Morton Leroy, as well as their acquaintances. It's never made clear whether or not Seb, Mr Leroy's son, son and half-human on his mother's side, is one, though he is certainly involved in their dealings. Given that his mother was a sacrifice to Laurel, he might be a HalfHumanHybrid.



* ForcedIntoEvil: Seb. The first time Polly met him was at his mother's funeral, who had been killed to help Laurel live even longer. He grew up knowing he was the second least valuable member of the family, and that if Tom wasn't there to die they would have no compunction about sacrificing him instead. It's strongly implied in the end that, with his father being defeated by Polly and Tom, Seb will now have to take his place as Laurel's consort. He's not the most pleasant of young men, but it's hard to blame him for it.

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* ForcedIntoEvil: Seb. The first time Polly met him was at his mother's funeral, who had been killed to help Laurel live even longer. He grew up knowing he was the second least valuable member of the family, and that if Tom wasn't there to die they would have no compunction about sacrificing him instead. It's strongly implied in the end that, with [[spoiler:with his father being defeated by Polly and Tom, Seb will now have to take his place as Laurel's consort. consort.]] He's not the most pleasant of young men, but it's hard to blame him for it. it.
* FromACertainPointOfView: Quite a bit of this in the finale as a way of getting away with [[spoiler:beating Laurel. In order to win, Polly had to mean it when she told Tom she didn't want to see him again, but this doesn't necessarily stop him from seeing ''her''.]]



* MaybeEverAfter: The MindScrew ending leaves some readers confused about where Tom and Polly's relationship will go.

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* MaybeEverAfter: The MindScrew ending leaves some readers confused about where Tom and Polly's relationship will go. It's possible they might be able to get away with staying together, but it's hard to believe Laurel would let sleeping dogs lie after being cheated.



* Really700YearsOld: It's not stated exactly how old Laurel is, but the ballad of Tam Lin dates back to the 1500s, and it's implied she's even older than that.
* ReallyGetsAround: Nina develops an incredible figure seemingly overnight, much to Polly's jealousy, and wastes no time putting it to good use on any man she can get her hands on. By the time they are in their late teens, she is famed for her sex life. Leslie is basically her male counterpart, and they "cross paths" more than once.
* RewritingReality: The stories that Polly and Tom make up have a habit of turning out to be true, though usually with a bit of a twist.

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* Really700YearsOld: It's not stated exactly how old Laurel is, but the ballad of Tam Lin dates back to the 1500s, and it's 1500s. She keeps a selection of photographs on her wall, strongly implied she's even older than that.
to be of all the men who's souls she has taken. The boys in the pictures look more old-fashioned the further back Polly looks, and several are just crude charcoal sketches. Laurel has been at this for a ''very'' long time.
* ReallyGetsAround: Nina develops an incredible figure seemingly overnight, much to Polly's jealousy, and wastes no time putting it to good use on any man she can get her hands on. By the time they are in their late teens, she is famed for her sex life. Leslie is basically her male counterpart, and they "cross paths" run into a "collision course" with each other more than once.
* RewritingReality: The stories that Polly and Tom make up have a habit of turning out to be true, though usually with a bit of a twist. This was part of the "gift" that Laurel gave Tom when he left her, but she was angry enough at him for going that she put a bit of bite into the spell.



* SpannerInTheWorks: Fiona. She is pretty much a background character during Polly's childhood, until she becomes Polly's flatmate while they are at university together. It is exactly this relative lack of importance that causes Laurel to overlook Fiona, and her reminding Polly of the time Tom came to see her at a school pantomime is what finally confirms to Polly that she wasn't just making him up and spurs her on to confront Laurel.
* StalkerWithACrush: Seb to Polly, though oddly enough he only develops the crush ''after'' he starts stalking her, on his father's orders after she accepts the titular Fire & Hemlock photograph from Tom at the beginning.
* ThisIsReality: Part of Tom's criticism of Polly writing PurpleProse. Namely, he takes her to task for describing man's back as having "rippling muscles beneath silken skin", and dictates to her a fairly graphic depiction of the types of things more likely to be discovered on men's backs.

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* SpannerInTheWorks: Fiona.[[spoiler:Fiona. She is pretty much a background character during Polly's childhood, until she becomes Polly's flatmate while they are at university together. It is exactly this relative lack of importance that causes Laurel to overlook Fiona, and her reminding Polly of the time Tom came to see her at a school pantomime is what finally confirms to Polly that she wasn't just making him up and spurs her on to confront Laurel.
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* StalkerWithACrush: Seb to Polly, though oddly enough he only develops the crush ''after'' he starts stalking her, on his father's orders after she accepts the titular Fire & Hemlock photograph from Tom at the beginning.
* ThisIsReality: Part of Tom's criticism of Polly writing PurpleProse. Namely, he takes her to task for describing a man's back as having "rippling muscles beneath silken skin", and dictates to her a fairly graphic depiction of the types of things more likely to be discovered on men's backs.
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* DrivesLikeCrazy: Tom. It's established that he can get away with this because his life is protected from danger until it's time for Laurel to claim it, so he can behave as recklessly as he wants until his seven years are up without fear of dying.

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* DrivesLikeCrazy: Tom. It's established that he can get away with this because his life is protected from danger until it's time for Laurel to claim it, so he can behave as recklessly as he wants until his seven nine years are up without fear of dying.



* PurposeDrivenImmortality: Tom's purpose is to be sacrificed to extend Mr Leroy's life once his seven-year contract with Laurel is up. During that seven years, though, it is magically impossible for him to die. It's not that he recovers from mortal wounds; the world just bends around him to prevent him from getting injured. This is the reason he DrivesLikeCrazy.

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* PurposeDrivenImmortality: Tom's purpose is to be sacrificed to extend Mr Leroy's life once his seven-year nine-year contract with Laurel is up. During that seven nine years, though, it is magically impossible for him to die. It's not that he recovers from mortal wounds; the world just bends around him to prevent him from getting injured. This is the reason he DrivesLikeCrazy.



* YourSoulIsMine: Laurel has a claim over Tom's soul, and she plans to take it after seven years. She has done this many times over the years, including to Polly's own grandfather.

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* YourSoulIsMine: Laurel has a claim over Tom's soul, and she plans to take it after seven nine years. She has done this many times over the years, including to Polly's own grandfather.
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* BadLiar: Laurel relies mostly on her magic and being painfully sweet to get her way, and seemingly has never had to learn the art of lying. When she tells Polly that Tom is dying she barely bothers to put in much effort, blaming it on "one of those cancer things". Polly is too distraught and caught up in Laurel's spell to notice.

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* BadLiar: Laurel relies mostly on her magic and being painfully sweet to get her way, and seemingly has never had to learn the art of lying. When Though she puts on a good show of sadness when she tells Polly that Tom is dying dying, she barely bothers to put in much effort, effort into the details, blaming it on "one of those cancer things". Polly is too distraught and caught up in Laurel's spell to notice.

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* AdultsAreUseless: A depressingly realistic version with Polly's parents. Her mother is paranoid, controlling and nagging, but believes that she is a long-suffering martyr who gives up everything for other people, and she sinks into spiky moods when thing aren't to her liking. Polly's father is a feckless, DirtyCoward who tries to coddle his wife by treating her moods as a joke, which only makes them worse, and they both attempt to use Polly against the other, without much thought or care for her at all. They aren't related to the main plot outside of their effect on Polly's state of mind because they care too much about themselves to get involved in it.

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* AdultsAreUseless: A depressingly realistic version with Polly's parents. Her mother is paranoid, controlling and nagging, but believes that she is a long-suffering martyr who gives up everything for other people, and she sinks into spiky moods when thing things aren't to her liking. Polly's father is a feckless, DirtyCoward who tries to coddle his wife by treating her moods as a joke, which only makes them worse, and they both attempt to use Polly against the other, without much thought or care for her at all. They aren't related to the main plot outside of their effect on Polly's state of mind because they care too much about themselves to get involved in it.



* BadLiar: Laurel relies mostly on her magic and being painfully sweet to get her way, and seemingly has never had to learn the art of lying. When she tells Polly that Tom is dying she barely bothers to put in much effort, blaming it on "one of those cancer things". Polly is too distraught and caught up in Laurel's spell to notice.
* BalefulPolymorph: Tan Hanivar in the stories that Polly and Tom write. It bleeds over into his real world counterpart, Sam, who turns into a dragon made of ''garbage'' and gets hit by Tom's car in the process.



* DirtyCoward: Polly's father, Reg. Even his own mother believes he is "only too happy for someone else to do his dirty work for him". Polly's mother sends her to live with Reg full time, but he is too afraid to explain to his new girlfriend that it's more than just a weekend visit. When Polly elects to leave, Reg is ''relieved'', and happily sends his young daughter out alone into a strange town with no money or transport or place to live.

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* DirtyCoward: Polly's father, Reg. Even his own mother believes he is "only too happy for someone else to do his dirty work for him". Polly's mother sends her to live with Reg full time, full-time, but he is too afraid to explain to his new girlfriend that it's more than just a weekend visit. When Polly elects to leave, Reg is ''relieved'', and happily sends his young daughter out alone into a strange town with no money or transport or place to live.



* [[EvilDetectingDog Evil-Detecting Cat]]: Or magic-detecting, at least. One of the first signs that there might be something odd going on with Tom is when Granny's cat Mintchoc, usually very friendly, runs away at the sight of him, and refuses to come out until after he's gone.

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* [[EvilDetectingDog Evil-Detecting Cat]]: Or magic-detecting, at least. One of the first signs that there might be something odd going on with Tom is when Granny's cat cat, Mintchoc, usually very friendly, runs away at the sight of him, and refuses to come out until after he's gone.



* FailedASpotCheck: The magic Laurel uses erases all Polly's memories of Tom, and also affects the same memories in her friends and family, so they can't remind her of his existence. What Laurel didn't realise was that Fiona, at the time only a casual school acquaintance of Polly's, saw her and Tom together one night, and reminding her of this is the key to Polly getting all her memories back for good.
* TheFairFolk: Laurel and Co.

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* FailedASpotCheck: The magic spell Laurel uses casts erases all Polly's memories of Tom, and also affects the same memories in her friends and family, so they can't remind her of his existence. What Laurel didn't realise was that Fiona, at the time only a casual school acquaintance of Polly's, saw her and Tom together one night, and reminding her of this is the key to Polly getting all her memories back for good.
* TheFairFolk: Laurel and Co.Morton Leroy, as well as their acquaintances. It's never made clear whether or not Seb, Mr Leroy's son, is one, though he is certainly involved in their dealings. Given that his mother was a sacrifice to Laurel, he might be a HalfHumanHybrid.



* GranolaGirl: Nina, briefly, as one of her many "crazes".



* IHaveBoobsYouMustObey: Once Nina's figure develops, she embraces it for all it's worth.



* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Polly is manipulated into agreeing to forget about Tom. Subverted, though, as while they removed all her memories of him, they didn't (or perhaps couldn't) remove all the memories and knowledge he was linked to, leading to bits of information she couldn't have possibly learned anywhere and conflicting memories. These open the door to remembering Tom.

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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Polly is manipulated into agreeing to forget about Tom. Subverted, though, as while they removed all her memories of him, they didn't (or perhaps couldn't) remove all the memories and knowledge he was linked to, leading to bits of information she couldn't have possibly learned anywhere else and conflicting memories. These open the door to remembering Tom.



* NeverMyFault: Ivy never acknowledges that she was a bad mother to Polly, even when called out on it, and instead blames her behaviour on everyone else, Polly included.



* PrettyBoy: Leslie, with his long, curly hair and glittery skull earring, and he is just as aware of his good looks as Nina is of hers. He is apparently pretty enough for Laurel to overlook the fact that he isn't named 'Tom'.

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* PrettyBoy: Leslie, with his long, curly hair and glittery skull earring, and he earring. He is just as aware of his good looks as Nina is of hers. He is apparently pretty enough for Laurel to overlook the fact that he isn't named 'Tom'.



* ThisIsReality: Part of Tom's criticism of Polly writing PurpleProse. Namely, he takes her to task of writing of a handsome man's back "rippling" and explains why the prose is sentimental drivel.

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* ThisIsReality: Part of Tom's criticism of Polly writing PurpleProse. Namely, he takes her to task of writing of a handsome for describing man's back "rippling" as having "rippling muscles beneath silken skin", and explains why dictates to her a fairly graphic depiction of the prose is sentimental drivel. types of things more likely to be discovered on men's backs.

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* DontMessWithGranny: Polly's Granny is extremely kind and loving towards her, but woe betide anyone else who gets in her way or defies her wishes. She makes bank tellers quake with fear.


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* NeverMessWithGranny: Polly's Granny is extremely kind and loving towards her, but woe betide anyone else who gets in her way or defies her wishes. She makes bank tellers quake with fear, and even the similarly strong-willed Ivy is no match for her.


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* RaisedByGrandparents: Both of Polly's parents are alive and well, but prove to be so incompetent at taking care of her that Granny takes matters into her own hands and moves Polly in with her when she is 12, where she stays until she moves away to college.
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* DontMessWithGranny: Polly's Granny is extremely kind and loving towards her, but woe betide anyone else who gets in her way or defies her wishes. She makes bank tellers quake with fear.
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*ClingyJealousGirl: Ivy, to the point of paranoia. Though she was right about Reg cheating on her, she didn't help the situation by steaming open his mail and refusing to let him go anywhere or spend any money without accounting to her for it. While she is with David Bragge, she even starts to believe there might be something going on with him and Polly, who at the time is ''twelve''.
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* AbsoluteCleavage: Nina becomes extremely fond of this kind of outfit in her teens, and her breasts (as well as other parts of her anatomy) become something of a legend in Polly's small town.

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* AbsoluteCleavage: Nina becomes extremely fond of this kind of outfit in her teens, and her breasts "much-discussed bosom" (as well as other parts of her anatomy) become something of a legend in Polly's small town.



* RewritingReality: Tom and Polly's stories have a slight tendency to come true.

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* RewritingReality: Tom and Polly's The stories that Polly and Tom make up have a slight tendency habit of turning out to come true.be true, though usually with a bit of a twist.



** The whole story is based on the ballad of Tam Lin.

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** The whole story is based on the ballad of Tam Lin.Lin, with a bit of Thomas the Rhymer thrown in.
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* AdultsAreUseless: A depressingly realistic version with Polly's parents. Her mother is paranoid, controlling and nagging, but believes that she is a long-suffering martyr who gives up everything for other people, and she sinks into spiky moods when thing aren't to her liking. Polly's father is a lazy DirtyCoward who tries to coddle his wife by treating her moods as a joke, which only makes them worse, and they both attempt to use Polly against the other, without much thought or care for her at all. They aren't related to the main plot outside of their effect on Polly's state of mind because they care too much about themselves to get involved in it.

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* AdultsAreUseless: A depressingly realistic version with Polly's parents. Her mother is paranoid, controlling and nagging, but believes that she is a long-suffering martyr who gives up everything for other people, and she sinks into spiky moods when thing aren't to her liking. Polly's father is a lazy feckless, DirtyCoward who tries to coddle his wife by treating her moods as a joke, which only makes them worse, and they both attempt to use Polly against the other, without much thought or care for her at all. They aren't related to the main plot outside of their effect on Polly's state of mind because they care too much about themselves to get involved in it.
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* PrettyBoy: Leslie, with his long, feathery hair and skull earring, and he is just as aware of his good looks as Nina is of hers. He is apparently pretty enough for Laurel to overlook the fact that he isn't named 'Tom'.

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* PrettyBoy: Leslie, with his long, feathery curly hair and glittery skull earring, and he is just as aware of his good looks as Nina is of hers. He is apparently pretty enough for Laurel to overlook the fact that he isn't named 'Tom'.
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* DirtyCoward: Polly's father, Reg. Even his own mother believes he is "only too happy for someone else to do his dirty work for him". Polly's mother sends her to live with Reg full time, but he is too afraid to explain to his new girlfriend that it's more than just a weekend visit. When Polly elects to leave, Reg is ''relieved'', and happily sends his young daughter out alone into a strange town with no money or transport or place to live.


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* FailedASpotCheck: The magic Laurel uses erases all Polly's memories of Tom, and also affects the same memories in her friends and family, so they can't remind her of his existence. What Laurel didn't realise was that Fiona, at the time only a casual school acquaintance of Polly's, saw her and Tom together one night, and reminding her of this is the key to Polly getting all her memories back for good.
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* FatAndProud: Nina, though her pride shifts to [[BoobsofSteel something else]] once puberty kicks in and her body change quite dramatically.

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* FatAndProud: Nina, though her pride shifts to [[BoobsofSteel something else]] once puberty kicks in and her body change changes quite dramatically.



* ItsAllAboutMe: Both of Polly's parents are deeply, but her mother is worse because she's convinced herself that she's entirely self''less'', sacrificing everything for others and resenting them for it, even when it's completely unjustified.

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* ItsAllAboutMe: Both of Polly's parents are deeply, deeply selfish, but her mother is worse much more harmful because she's convinced herself that she's entirely self''less'', sacrificing everything for others and resenting them for it, even when it's completely unjustified.
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* FatAndProud: When they are young teenagers, Polly admires Nina's body because it is curvier than her own. Towards the end of the book Polly also is somewhat plump.

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* FatAndProud: When they are young teenagers, Polly admires Nina's Nina, though her pride shifts to [[BoobsofSteel something else]] once puberty kicks in and her body because it is curvier than her own. Towards the end of the book Polly also is somewhat plump.change quite dramatically.

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