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* FetishFuel: While Monza is disguised as a whore in Cardotti's, a patron sees her maimed hand and regards it as an intriguing novelty.
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* FetishFuel: While Monza is disguised as a whore in Cardotti's, a patron sees her maimed hand and regards it as an intriguing novelty.
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* AndThenWhat: Orso at one point asks Monza what, since he's defined her entire life up to this point, she'll do with herself once she actually succeeds in killing him. [[spoiler: Monza just responds, [[ShutUpHannibal "I'll think of something"]] and runs him through.]]

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* AndThenWhat: Orso at one point asks Monza what, since he's defined her entire life up to this point, she'll do with herself once she actually succeeds in killing him. [[spoiler: Monza just responds, [[ShutUpHannibal "I'll think of something"]] something," and runs him through.]]through]].
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** [[BrutalHonesty Monza]] also delivers these to Salier and Rogont for handing Orso the rulership due to selfishness.

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** [[BrutalHonesty Monza]] also delivers these to Salier and Rogont for handing Orso the rulership of Styria due to selfishness.

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* FlockOfWolves: By the end of the sixth volume, [[spoiler:one of Monza's party members is dead after attempting to kill her master, two are in charge of Monza's former mercenary band that she has an EnemyMine with, and three carry out separate plans of her assassination (though Vitari and Shenkt are GoodAllAlong).]]



** [[BrutalHonesty Monza]] also delivers these to Salier and Rogont for handing Orso the rulership due to selfishness.



* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Monza systematically works her way through the list of those who participated in her brother's murder and her attempted murder.

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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Monza systematically works her way through the list of those who participated in her brother's murder and her attempted murder. Deconstructed like all hell. [[spoiler:Eventually (somewhat) reconstructed, as she succeeds in her goal, becomes the ruler of Styria, and averts the AndWhatNow scenario many of her allies were predicting.]]
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A mysterious stranger finds her broken body and nurses her back to health; suspicious in turn of his motives, Monza escapes as soon as she's able, and swears revenge on all the men present at her "murder"; seven in all, counting Orzo, his two sons, his general, Monza's treacherous second-in-command, Orzo's bodyguard, and the banker who's Orzo's financial backer.

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A mysterious stranger finds her broken body and nurses her back to health; suspicious in turn of his motives, Monza escapes as soon as she's able, and swears revenge on all the men present at her "murder"; seven in all, counting Orzo, Orso, his two sons, his general, Monza's treacherous second-in-command, Orzo's Orso's bodyguard, and the banker who's Orzo's Orso's financial backer.



** "Monza, Monza, what would I do without you?" Said by both Cosca and Orzo, two people who have been both comrades and enemies to Monza.

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** "Monza, Monza, what would I do without you?" Said by both Cosca and Orzo, Orso, two people who have been both comrades and enemies to Monza.



* TheButcher: Monza's epithet is "The Butcher of Caprile", because of the bloody sack of that city by her army. [[spoiler:It turns out that she gave explicit orders not to sack the city, which were ignored in her absence while she was reporting to Duke Orzo]].

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* TheButcher: Monza's epithet is "The Butcher of Caprile", because of the bloody sack of that city by her army. [[spoiler:It turns out that she gave explicit orders not to sack the city, which were ignored in her absence while she was reporting to Duke Orzo]].Orso]].



** When Duke Orzo finds out that Monza is still alive, he has the best assassins and bounty hunters brought to him and offers them a big reward for killing her.

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** When Duke Orzo Orso finds out that Monza is still alive, he has the best assassins and bounty hunters brought to him and offers them a big reward for killing her.



* IronicEcho: At the very start of the novel, Orzo asks Monza, then his prize general, "Monza, Monza. What would I do without you?" At the end of the novel and at the final step of Monza's RoaringRampageOfRevenge, Orzo asks Monza what she'll do with her life once she's no longer consumed with a desire for revenge by asking, "Monza, Monza. What would do you without me?"

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* IronicEcho: At the very start of the novel, Orzo Orso asks Monza, then his prize general, "Monza, Monza. What would I do without you?" At the end of the novel and at the final step of Monza's RoaringRampageOfRevenge, Orzo Orso asks Monza what she'll do with her life once she's no longer consumed with a desire for revenge by asking, "Monza, Monza. What would do you without me?"



* ItsPersonal: Duke Orzo killed Monza's beloved brother Benna (as well as permanently maiming and almost killing Monza herself).

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* ItsPersonal: Duke Orzo Orso killed Monza's beloved brother Benna (as well as permanently maiming and almost killing Monza herself).



* NotQuiteDead: Monza, who Duke Orzo is convinced that he killed. [[spoiler: Later, Nicomo Cosca.]]

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* NotQuiteDead: Monza, who Duke Orzo Orso is convinced that he killed. [[spoiler: Later, Nicomo Cosca.]]



** Orzo's inner circle who participated in the attack on Monza and Benna.

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** Orzo's Orso's inner circle who participated in the attack on Monza and Benna.



* UnwittingPawn: Monza has been manipulated into most of the infamous actions that form her backstory by [[spoiler: her brother Benna]]. At the beginning of the book [[spoiler: Shenkt]] plans to use her as a pawn against Duke Orzo and the Bank of Valint and Balk but she gets away. Ironically [[spoiler: she fulfills Shenkt's plan all on her own]].

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* UnwittingPawn: Monza has been manipulated into most of the infamous actions that form her backstory by [[spoiler: her brother Benna]]. At the beginning of the book [[spoiler: Shenkt]] plans to use her as a pawn against Duke Orzo Orso and the Bank of Valint and Balk but she gets away. Ironically [[spoiler: she fulfills Shenkt's plan all on her own]].



* WhereItAllBegan: [[spoiler:Monza confronts Orzo in his fortress of Fontezarmo, where he had her "killed" in the beginning.]]

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* WhereItAllBegan: [[spoiler:Monza confronts Orzo Orso in his fortress of Fontezarmo, where he had her "killed" in the beginning.]]
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* AndThenWhat: Orso at one point asks Monza what, since he'd defined her entire life up to this point, she'll do with herself once she actually succeeds in killing him. [[spoiler: Monza just responds, [[ShutUpHannibal "I'll think of something"]] and runs him through.]]

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* AndThenWhat: Orso at one point asks Monza what, since he'd he's defined her entire life up to this point, she'll do with herself once she actually succeeds in killing him. [[spoiler: Monza just responds, [[ShutUpHannibal "I'll think of something"]] and runs him through.]]
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* AndThenWhat: Orso at one point asks Monza what, since he'd defined her entire life up to this point, she'll do with herself once she actually succeeds in killing him. [[spoiler: Monza just responds, [[ShutUpHannibal "I'll think of something"]] and runs him through.]]
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* HeelFaceDoorSlam: [[spoiler: essentially Shivers' story arc in a nutshell.]]
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** [[spoiler: Or her brother did, at any rate; while Monza is not a very nice person (though she has her moments), she was absolutely loyal to Duke Orso.]]
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* BestServedCold: Revenge is the motivation for quite a few characters. The title is especially appropriate to the book's themes because, in the end, vengeance proves cold comfort.

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* BestServedCold: One of those times when the trope names the work. Revenge is the motivation for quite a few characters. The title is especially appropriate to the book's themes because, in the end, vengeance proves cold comfort.
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: [[spoiler: Friendly]] feels this way after discovering that [[spoiler:Safety]] has been abandoned.

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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: [[spoiler: Friendly]] feels this way after discovering that [[spoiler:Safety]] has been abandoned.abandoned.
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* AllPartOfTheShow: Shivers agrees to engage in a pantomime battle with Greylock. Greylock seems to understand that it's a pretend battle, even if Shivers isn't totally convinced he understands the concept of a fake fight. Greylock [[spoiler: understands well enough, but he's secretly planning to kill Shivers anyway, as revenge for his brother's death during the war against Bethod. He attacks Shivers for real during their supposed mock fight, while the onlookers comment on how real it all looks, including a man asking "how did they do that?" when Shivers ends up slicing off Greylock's arm.]]


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* OhCrap: Shivers and another Northman named Greylock whom he's never met are meant to be putting on a pantomime of the battle between Logen Ninefingers and Fenris the Feared, with Shivers playing Logen and Greylock as the Feared. However, Greylock [[spoiler:is the older brother of the boy murdered by Black Dow at Uffrith during the war against Bethod; one of the only casualties in that engagement, but enough to cause Greylock to swear revenge on anyone who fought on Dow's side. Shivers doesn't know this until the battle begins, and Greylock attacks him with full intent to kill.]]
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* TheApprentice: Day, who starts of as Morveer's apprentice and then is his assistant.

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* TheApprentice: Day, who starts of as Morveer's apprentice and then is becomes his assistant.



* BulletTime: When Shenkt uses his SuperSpeed, time seems to slow down to him, making it seem that he's normally while everything else moves at a snail's pace. Because he's moving so fast, the force of his blows is increased many times over.
* TheButcher: Monza's epithet is "The Butcher of Caprile", because of the bloody sack of that city by her army. [[spoiler: It turns out that she gave explicit orders not to sack the city, which were ignored in her absence while she was reporting to Duke Orzo.]]

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* BulletTime: When Shenkt uses his SuperSpeed, time seems to slow down to him, making it seem that he's moving normally while everything else moves at a snail's pace. Because he's moving so fast, the force of his blows is increased many times over.
* TheButcher: Monza's epithet is "The Butcher of Caprile", because of the bloody sack of that city by her army. [[spoiler: It [[spoiler:It turns out that she gave explicit orders not to sack the city, which were ignored in her absence while she was reporting to Duke Orzo.]]Orzo]].



* ExactWords: First we pretend. Then we fight for real." [[spoiler:"Fighting for real" was supposed to mean against others, but Greylock means him and Shivers stop pretending to fight each other and fight ''each other'' for real]].

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* ExactWords: First "First we pretend. Then we fight for real." [[spoiler:"Fighting for real" was supposed to mean against others, but Greylock means him and Shivers stop pretending to fight each other and fight ''each other'' for real]].



** Cosca is a serious alcoholic and had reached the non-functional stage when introduced, but for the rest of the novel stays sober and functions quite well (despite desperately wanting a drink the whole time). At the end of the novel [[spoiler: in a subversion of CharacterDevelopment, he immediately goes back to drinking the instant that it no longer serves his plans to stay sober]].

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** Cosca is a serious alcoholic and had reached the non-functional stage when introduced, but for the rest of the novel stays sober and functions quite well (despite desperately wanting a drink the whole time). At the end of the novel [[spoiler: in a subversion of CharacterDevelopment, Character Development, he immediately goes back to drinking the instant that it no longer serves his plans to stay sober]].



* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Morveer goes to great lengths to ensure that he won't be poisoned by his own concoctions, drilling Day endlessly about what a common fate this is for poisoners. [[spoiler: This doesn't prevent his death when Cosca forces Morveer's own mounted needle into the poisoner's neck.]]

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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Morveer goes to great lengths to ensure notes that he won't be poisoned by his own concoctions, drilling Day endlessly about what it's a common fate this is for poisoners. [[spoiler: This doesn't prevent poisoners to die from their own poisons and takes great pains to immunize himself from his death when Cosca forces Morveer's own mounted needle into arsenal. [[spoiler:In the poisoner's neck.]]end, he's fatally poisoned by the one concoction he cannot build up a resistance to]].



** Morveer does more to aid Monza after [[spoiler:turning on her than he did when he was working for her]]?
* ItsPersonal: Duke Orzo killed Monza's beloved brother Benna (as well as almost killing and permanently maiming Monza herself).

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** Morveer does more to aid Monza after [[spoiler:turning on her than he did when he was working for her]]?
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* ItsPersonal: Duke Orzo killed Monza's beloved brother Benna (as well as almost killing and permanently maiming and almost killing Monza herself).



** Day, Morveer's apprentice, is blonde and appears sunnily innocent.

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** Day, Morveer's apprentice, is blonde blond and appears sunnily innocent.



** An argument could be made for any of Monza's recruits but it comes across most consistently with Morveer. He initially appears to be a sophisticated, if slightly eccentric gentleman assassin but his egomania and disdain for human life quickly become apparent. As more and more of his back story opens up it only gets worse. Subverted in how he frets about his own lack of people skills and how at times he genuinely wants people to relate to and understand him.

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** An argument could be made for any of Monza's recruits but it comes across most consistently with Morveer. He initially appears to be a sophisticated, if sophisticated (if slightly eccentric eccentric) gentleman assassin assassin, but his egomania and disdain for human life quickly become apparent. As more and more of his back story opens up it only gets worse. Subverted in how he frets about his own lack of people skills and how at times he genuinely wants people to relate to and understand him.



* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: To make sure [[spoiler:Mauthis]] is good and dead, Morveer goes ahead and poisons [[spoiler:every single ledger in the bank, killing an extra forty or so people in the process]].

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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: To make sure [[spoiler:Mauthis]] is good and dead, gets poisoned, Morveer goes ahead and poisons [[spoiler:every single ledger in the bank, killing an extra forty or so additional people in the process]].



* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: Monza is not pleased when the female soldier who tortured Shivers and herself (not knowing who they were), later tells Monza (once she knows who her prisoner was) how she considers Monza to be her hero and an inspiration.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: At the end of the novel, Cosca gives Monza a touching speech about how despite her pretentions to ruthlessness, she is actually a good person (see JerkWithAHeartOfGold). He gives this as a reason why he loved her and still loves her despite her betraying him [[spoiler: in addition to the fact that Cosca knows Benna was the one who betrayed him and basically roped Monza into going along with it]].
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: [[spoiler: Friendly]] feels this way after discovering that [[spoiler: Safety]] has been abandoned.

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* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: Monza is not pleased when the female soldier who tortured Shivers and herself her (not knowing who they were), later tells Monza (once she knows who her prisoner was) how she considers Monza to be her hero and an inspiration.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: At the end of the novel, Cosca gives Monza a touching speech about how how, despite her pretentions pretensions to ruthlessness, she is actually a good person (see JerkWithAHeartOfGold).person. He gives this as a reason why he loved her and still loves her despite her betraying him [[spoiler: in addition to the fact that Cosca knows Benna was the one who betrayed him and basically roped Monza into going along with it]].
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: [[spoiler: Friendly]] feels this way after discovering that [[spoiler: Safety]] [[spoiler:Safety]] has been abandoned.

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* BulletTime: Shenkt can cause time to slow down and move normally while everything else moves at a snail's pace. Because he's moving so fast, the force of his blows is increased many times over.

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* BulletTime: When Shenkt can cause uses his SuperSpeed, time seems to slow down and move to him, making it seem that he's normally while everything else moves at a snail's pace. Because he's moving so fast, the force of his blows is increased many times over.


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* MundaneUtility: Shenkt uses his BulletTime perceptions that come with his SuperSpeed to elongate and savor his quality time with [[spoiler:Vitari]].
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* {{Retirony}}: [[spoiler:Morveer notes how ironic it is for him to die on the eve of his retirement]].
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* DoubleStandard: Cosca openly admits that he's forgiven Monza but not his lieutenants for the same act of a betrayal purely because she's a beautiful woman and they're ugly men.


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** Monza notices the Bone Thief's hobby of whittling. That same hobby is shared by [[spoiler:Shenkt, who is revealed to be the same person]].
** When an informant lists Monza's collaborators and gets to Vitari, Shenkt frowns. This is played off as Shenkt concentrating on the task at hand, but we later learn that [[spoiler:Vitari is Shenkt's lover, and this is a rather rude discovery for him]].

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* TheDreaded: The Cripple is greatly feared, particularly by Carlot dan Eider.



* TheGhost: The Cripple (Sand dan Glokta) is mentioned a number of times, but never makes an appearance, being in a different country.
* GreaterScopeVillain: The epic feud between Bayaz and Khalul is occasionally referenced as the engine behind all the war and suffering.



* MadonnaWhoreComplex: Duke Salier shows off two sculptures intended to be displayed as a pair, one of the artist's mother and the other his favorite whore. Monza snaps that she has no time for artists' mothers and whores.

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* MadonnaWhoreComplex: Duke Salier shows off two sculptures intended to be displayed as a pair, one of the artist's mother and the other of his favorite whore. Monza snaps that she has no time for artists' mothers and whores.


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* TheRedBaron: Sand dan Golkta is referred to only as "the Cripple" in this book.

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** Shivers and Monza each give one to the other in the end, when their relationship is at its worst.

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** Many of Monza's victims criticize her for being largely responsible for all the bad things that have happened to her and also point out all the misery that her quest for vengeance has caused others.
** Shivers and Monza each give one these to the each other in the end, frequently when their relationship is at its worst.a low point.
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* NostalgiaFilter: Discussed. Cosca doesn't believe that things used to be better, and thinks that it's only natural for people to get less idealistic and more aware of the darkness in the world as they age.

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** Cosca once again misses with his throwing knife, which was a RunningGag in ''The First Law''.



* CherryTapping: Ganmark toys with Monza during their duel. He fights her left-handed and, after defeating her, tosses her sword back to her for a second round.



* FauxAffablyEvil: Both Morveer and Day try to have pleasant and professional personalities, with varying degrees of success, but it's just an disarming act. They are treacherous and cruel people.



* NonActionGuy: The poisoners, Morveer and Day, are not fighters. Day does prove a decent shot with a flatbow, however.
* TheNondescript: Morveer chose Day as his apprentice largely because of her blandly pleasant and forgettable looks.



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech:
** Ganmark spends his duel with Monza explaining very clearly how useless, destructive and hypocritical her RoaringRampageOfRevenge is.
** Shivers and Monza each give one to the other in the end, when their relationship is at its worst.



* TalkingIsAFreeAction: Discussed. Ganmark engages in some serious BreakThemByTalking while dueling Monza. Monza tells him to [[ShutUpHannibal just shut up and fight]], but Ganmark counters that he can easily cut pieces from her and talk at the same time.



* VillainHasAPoint: Simultaneously played straight and inverted when [[spoiler: Shivers]] turns on Monza. They both throw a [[ReasonYouSuckSpeech flurry of accusations]] at the other, and both acknowledge (quietly, to themselves) that here is a lot of truth to what the other says. It doesn't stop them from going through with trying to kill each other, though.
* WeaponOfChoice: Played straight with Monza's Calvez rapier, Friendly's cleaver, Vitari's chain (mentioned rarely, but carried over from the main trilogy), Ganmark's Union-style steels, and Morveer and Day's poisoned needles and blowguns. Played for laughs with Cosca's gilt-encrusted sword, which he lists "can be pawned" as one of its better qualities (and it's condition when Cosca is introduced). Played with in Shivers' use of a sword [[spoiler: before losing his eye]] and an axe later, used to signify his [[spoiler: Face Heel Turn]].

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Simultaneously played straight and inverted when [[spoiler: Shivers]] turns on Monza. They both throw a [[ReasonYouSuckSpeech [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech flurry of accusations]] at the other, and both acknowledge (quietly, to themselves) that here is a lot of truth to what the other says. It doesn't stop them from going through with trying to kill each other, though.
** Ganmark delivers a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Monza on how useless, destructive and hypocritical her revenge is.
* WeaponOfChoice: Played straight with Monza's Monza favors a fencing sword and uses a [[CoolSword Calvez rapier, Friendly's cleaver, Vitari's rapier]] throughout the story. Friendly is a self-admitted and ardent KnifeNut, using a cleaver and knife to fight. Vitari still has her chain (mentioned rarely, but carried over with the cruciform spike on the end, from the main trilogy), Ganmark's Union-style steels, and ''The First Law''. Morveer and Day's Day use poisoned needles and blowguns. Played for laughs with Cosca's gilt-encrusted sword, which he lists "can be pawned" as one of its better qualities (and it's condition when Cosca is introduced).blowguns. Played with in Shivers' use of a sword [[spoiler: before losing his eye]] and an axe later, used to signify his [[spoiler: Face Heel Turn]].


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* WhatMeasureIsAMook: Various characters, even Cosca, contemplate how the random people who get killed along the way were probably decent people with families who loved them.
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* MadonnaWhoreComplex: Duke Salier shows off two sculptures intended to be displayed as a pair, one of the artist's mother and the other his favorite whore. Monza snaps that she has no time for artists' mothers and whores.

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* CycleOfRevenge: While the plot follows Monza's RoaringRampageOfRevenge, others have or acquire reasons to take vengeance on ''her'' and her group: [[spoiler:Greylock tries to settle an old score on Shivers, and Carlot dan Eider informs Duke Orso of Monza's plans in vengeance for ruining her life]].



* {{Deconstruction}}: The plot revolves entirely on the premise that revenge, while a glorified pursuit in stories, is self-destructive and only causes people to come after you in kind. After her surgery, Monza has a clear choice of leaving Styria with her fortune, or pursuing the most powerful man in the land in order to kill him and his associates. She chooses the latter, and her vendetta ends up with a lot more people killed than what she set out for, good men injured, and escalating the war that Monza gets tangled up in.

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The plot revolves entirely on the premise that revenge, while a glorified pursuit in stories, is self-destructive and only causes people to come after you in kind. After her surgery, Monza has a clear choice of leaving Styria with her fortune, or pursuing the most powerful man in the land in order to kill him and his associates. She chooses the latter, and her vendetta ends up with a lot more people killed than what she set out for, good men injured, and escalating the war that Monza gets tangled up in.



* IronicEcho:
** At the very start of the novel, Orzo asks Monza, then his prize general, "Monza, Monza. What would I do without you?" At the end of the novel and at the final step of Monza's RoaringRampageOfRevenge, Orzo asks Monza what she'll do with her life once she's no longer consumed with a desire for revenge by asking, "Monza, Monza. What would do you without me?"

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IronicEcho: At the very start of the novel, Orzo asks Monza, then his prize general, "Monza, Monza. What would I do without you?" At the end of the novel and at the final step of Monza's RoaringRampageOfRevenge, Orzo asks Monza what she'll do with her life once she's no longer consumed with a desire for revenge by asking, "Monza, Monza. What would do you without me?"
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* BrutalHonesty: Orso notes Shenkt's blunt honesty when they arrange his contract.


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* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: Cosca notes that "indiscriminate slaughter" is a bit redundant.


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* ProfessionalKiller: Many. Everyone in Monza's gang is being hired to kill people, and the group hires temporary mercenaries as well. Orso recruits killers to go after Monza's gang, including Shenkt.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: Cosco brings up examples of [[MusicalAssassin performers who also fight]] by alliterating pairs of trades, until he can't think of something to alliterate with "jugglers."


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* ExactWords: First we pretend. Then we fight for real." [[spoiler:"Fighting for real" was supposed to mean against others, but Greylock means him and Shivers stop pretending to fight each other and fight ''each other'' for real]].


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** Greylock repeats, "First we pretend. Then we fight for real." Shivers doesn't realize that [[spoiler:"we fight for real" means Greylock and ''him'']].


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* MusicalAssassin: The fighters Monza brings in to Carlotti's House of Leisure have to pass as performers until they strike, so Monza recruits thugs with skills in performance. There's a surprisingly large supply.


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* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: While planning the raid on Cardotti's House of Leisure, Cosca indulges in a bunch of fancy words, forcing Shivers to repeatedly ask what he means, and for Vitari to supply the simple translation. Shivers quickly gets annoyed.

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* BarbarianLonghair: Shivers gets an ImportantHaircut and for a time wears it in the style of the Italian Renaissance FantasyCounterpartCulture in which he's ended up. He then lets it grow long again following his FaceHeelTurn.

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* BarbarianLonghair: Shivers wears his hair long in imitation of his brother, though not all Northmen have long hair. He gets an ImportantHaircut and for a time wears it to better blend in the style of the with Styria's Italian Renaissance FantasyCounterpartCulture in which he's ended up. He then FantasyCounterpartCulture, but ultimately lets it grow long again following his FaceHeelTurn.out again.



* CoolSword: Monza bears a Calvez sword, crafted by the greatest swordmaker in living memory.



* FlatEarthAtheist: Morveer and Day scoff at Shivers' claims to have witnessed magic, proclaiming that science is the only true power in the world.



** When Morveer looks like he might tumble from the side of the bank house, Day has a slight smile on her face. [[spoiler:She ultimately betrays him]].



* {{Irony}}: Holy shit, where do we start? With the fact that [[spoiler:half the betrayals in the book are by accident]]? Or how [[spoiler:Morveer does more to aid Monza after turning on her than he did when he was working for her]]? The only constants in this story are that almost any slight will be avenged, almost every trust will be betrayed, and that you can't stop the consequences of your actions. That leads to a lot of irony of the situational, cosmic, and tragic varieties.

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* {{Irony}}: Holy shit, where do we start? With the fact that [[spoiler:half {{Irony}}:
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the betrayals in the book are by accident]]? Or how [[spoiler:Morveer accident.
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does more to aid Monza after turning [[spoiler:turning on her than he did when he was working for her]]? The only constants in this story are that almost any slight will be avenged, almost every trust will be betrayed, and that you can't stop the consequences of your actions. That leads to a lot of irony of the situational, cosmic, and tragic varieties.



* TheNondescript: A large reason for Morveer choosing Day as his assistance was because she has a pleasant and forgettable appearance.



* SdrawkcabAlias: Morveer's GoToAlias is to call himself Rotsac Reevrom. He thinks this is the height of comedy, and his internal monologue admits that he can never help but giggle when he trots it out.

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* SdrawkcabAlias: Morveer's GoToAlias is to call himself Rotsac Reevrom. He thinks this is the height of comedy, and his internal monologue admits that he can never help but giggle when he trots it out.

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* AlliterativeName: Monza (Monzcarro Murcatto)

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* AlliterativeName: Monza (Monzcarro Murcatto)Monzcarro Murcatto



* CallBack:
** When Shivers first talks to Morveer about magic, Morveer the FlatEarthAtheist scoffs at him. In a later chapter, Morveer asks how Shivers plans to get inside the banking house, and Shivers replies, "Magic."
** Monza's line, "Irony? In a prison?" is a callback to the line from ''The First Law'', "Rhetoric? In a sewer?"



* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Morveer poisons Monza and Shivers during their first meeting to discuss Monza's job offer, establishing him as cunning, ruthless and not to be trusted. His next scene, where he mocks Shivers mercilessly for no reason, establishes him as a {{jerkass}}.



* IronicNickname: Zigzagged with Friendly. He's TheComicallySerious as opposed to jovial and is a self-confessed psychopath, but in some respect, the name fits, as he is the least actively malicious character.
** Also zigzags with Faithful Carpi. On one hand, he previously betrayed Cosca, but on the other, his betrayal was in staying faithful to Monza when she betrayed their leader. He later proceeds to backstab Monza, but as he points out, doing so stayed faithful ''to her example'', as Carpi's betrays her in the same manner that she betrayed Cosca, and for the same motivation.

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* IronicNickname: Zigzagged with IronicNickname:
** Shivers notes that Friendly is awfully reticent for a man named
Friendly. He's TheComicallySerious as opposed to jovial and is a self-confessed psychopath, but in some respect, told the name fits, as he is was probably meant to be ironic. However, Friendly ''is'' the least actively malicious character.
character in Monza's gang.
** Also zigzags Zigzags with Faithful Carpi. On one hand, he previously betrayed Cosca, but on the other, his betrayal was in staying faithful to Monza when she betrayed their leader. He later proceeds to backstab Monza, but as he points out, doing so stayed faithful ''to her example'', as Carpi's betrays her in the same manner that she betrayed Cosca, and for the same motivation.



* TheNapoleon: Shivers chews out Morveer in the Northern tongue for giving him grief, saying that short men like him try to show off how clever they are to make them feel big.



* SdrawkcabAlias: Morveer's GoToAlias is to call himself Rotsac Reevrom.

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* SdrawkcabAlias: Morveer's GoToAlias is to call himself Rotsac Reevrom. He thinks this is the height of comedy, and his internal monologue admits that he can never help but giggle when he trots it out.
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** Or at any rate [[spoiler: her brother did, with Monza just kind of being collateral damage.]]
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** Or at any rate [[spoiler: her brother did, with Monza just kind of being collateral damage.]]
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* ImprobableWeaponUser: Deconstructed, naturally. Many of the CarnivalOfKillers Cosca hires use improbable weapons, most notably a firebreather (the mundane, circus variant) who likes to weaponize his talents. None of these weapons really work well, from simply being impractical to actively suicidal; the firebreather caught himself on fire and burned to death.

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