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Without the hyphen, it sounds like the person themselves have caused PTSD
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Someone suffering from war caused severe PTSD.
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Someone suffering from war caused war-caused severe PTSD.
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Someone suffering from severe PTSD.
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Someone suffering from war caused severe PTSD.
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You need to use "the" in lines like those. Also, the third paragraph suggests he doesn't have to be a war veteran. It also suggests that the trauma in question is severe.
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A war veteran suffering from PTSD.
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-->[-Visit full memorial [[ShellShockedVeteran HERE]].-]
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-->[-Visit the full memorial [[ShellShockedVeteran HERE]].-]
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-->[-Visit full memorial [[ShellShockedVeteran HERE]]-]
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-->[-Visit full memorial [[ShellShockedVeteran HERE]]-]HERE]].-]
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-->[=Visit full memorial [[ShellShockedVeteran HERE]]=]
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----> Visit full memorial [[ShellShockedVeteran HERE]]
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A war veteran suffering from PTSD.
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A war veteran suffering from PTSD.PTSD.
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----> Visit full memorial [[ShellShockedVeteran HERE]]
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----> Visit full memorial [[ShellShockedVeteran HERE]]
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A war veteran suffering from trauma.
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A war veteran suffering from trauma.PTSD.
