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* While it was quite unsettling the stories about the kids who were lost to the witches, there's something oddly funny about how Grandma specifies that the girl-turned-chicken laid brown eggs.
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* While it was quite unsettling the stories about the kids who were lost to the witches, there's something oddly funny about how Grandma specifies that the girl-turned-chicken laid brown eggs.eggs.
* The graphic novel, the distaff-Jenkins repeatedly points out that her parents live a bohemian lifestyle. When they finally appear - after their daughter said they would have just been to yoga - Grandmama notes that they're carrying buckets of coins, which means they'd lied about the yoga and were instead gambling in the casino.
* The graphic novel, the distaff-Jenkins repeatedly points out that her parents live a bohemian lifestyle. When they finally appear - after their daughter said they would have just been to yoga - Grandmama notes that they're carrying buckets of coins, which means they'd lied about the yoga and were instead gambling in the casino.
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* Bruno doesn't even notice he's a mouse until the protagonist points it out to him, and even denies it, even though the floor is much closer to his face and judging by the protagonist's description, he must have gone through some very intense pain during the transformation.
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* Bruno [[Main/ObliviousTransformation doesn't even notice he's a mouse until the protagonist points it out to him, him]], and even denies it, even though the floor is much closer to his face and judging by the protagonist's description, he must have gone through some very intense pain during the transformation.
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-->"The fact that you're a mouse has nothing to do with me."
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-->"The fact that you're a mouse has nothing to do with me.""
* An unintentional one, but during the scary opening speech, there's a bit of levity when it says, "but... and here comes the big 'but'." Don't get it? Say it out loud!
* When Grandma gets pneumonia, the doctors tell her to change the holiday location and give up smoking. The narrator makes a point of saying that Grandma was convinced to change her mind about the holiday... but ''not'' the smoking.
* While it was quite unsettling the stories about the kids who were lost to the witches, there's something oddly funny about how Grandma specifies that the girl-turned-chicken laid brown eggs.
* An unintentional one, but during the scary opening speech, there's a bit of levity when it says, "but... and here comes the big 'but'." Don't get it? Say it out loud!
* When Grandma gets pneumonia, the doctors tell her to change the holiday location and give up smoking. The narrator makes a point of saying that Grandma was convinced to change her mind about the holiday... but ''not'' the smoking.
* While it was quite unsettling the stories about the kids who were lost to the witches, there's something oddly funny about how Grandma specifies that the girl-turned-chicken laid brown eggs.
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[[AC:Book]]
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-->"The fact that you're a mouse has nothing to do with me."
[[AC:Film]]
* The Grand High Witch’s [[LargeHam hammy]] response after shooting down one witch’s idea of feeding children poisoned candy.
-->“''VI''-TCHES VORK ''ON''-LY VITH ''MA''-GIC!”
* Elsie (Miss Sensitivity), while Marlene is crying hysterically.
--> '''Elsie''': Is she sober?
--> '''Mr. Stringer''': Yes she's sober! I've been with her all aftern... When... I... Uh... I saw her w... Yes, of course she's sober! Don't be stupid!
* Bruno’s [[DullSurprise reaction]] to discovering that he’s been turned into a mouse. At first he denies it, but upon taking a good look at himself, goes wide-eyed and can only mutter, “Good Lord”... [[AngstWhatAngst before shrugging and going right back to eating]].
* The head chef shouting about a mouse in his trousers.
* Ms Irvine's magnificent WTF face when she enters the dining room and sees all the mice running around.
* A random witch compliments the Grand High Witch's (disguised) new look. The Grand High Witch responds, [[DeadpanSnarker "I wish I could say the same for you."]]
* Bruno's father and his obnoxious attitude towards the hotel staff. His thick Scottish accent just adds to it. The Grand High Witch looks like she's seconds from giving him a ''very'' painful death when having to deal with him. When informed he's Bruno's father, the Grand High Witch scoffs she's not a bit surprised.
* Marlene slips into the Grand High Witch's room and spots a bottle of Formula 86. Mistaking it for perfume, she dabs it on her neck. During one of their secret trysts, Mr. Stringer tries kissing her on the neck, only to back away in disgust. Marlene then looks in the mirror and sees she's grown a patch of fur on her neck. She also squeals like a mouse, most likely because the formula sunk into her vocal chords. [[LaserGuidedKarma That's what you get for pinching from your guests!]]
* Mr. Stringer finding the Grand High Witch transformed into a mouse. He whacks her with a butcher knife and she explodes in a cloud of green smoke and gunk, some of which gets on his face.
** He also grabs a mouse in hand, but instead of killing it, he just tosses it across the room.
[[AC:Film]]
* The Grand High Witch’s [[LargeHam hammy]] response after shooting down one witch’s idea of feeding children poisoned candy.
-->“''VI''-TCHES VORK ''ON''-LY VITH ''MA''-GIC!”
* Elsie (Miss Sensitivity), while Marlene is crying hysterically.
--> '''Elsie''': Is she sober?
--> '''Mr. Stringer''': Yes she's sober! I've been with her all aftern... When... I... Uh... I saw her w... Yes, of course she's sober! Don't be stupid!
* Bruno’s [[DullSurprise reaction]] to discovering that he’s been turned into a mouse. At first he denies it, but upon taking a good look at himself, goes wide-eyed and can only mutter, “Good Lord”... [[AngstWhatAngst before shrugging and going right back to eating]].
* The head chef shouting about a mouse in his trousers.
* Ms Irvine's magnificent WTF face when she enters the dining room and sees all the mice running around.
* A random witch compliments the Grand High Witch's (disguised) new look. The Grand High Witch responds, [[DeadpanSnarker "I wish I could say the same for you."]]
* Bruno's father and his obnoxious attitude towards the hotel staff. His thick Scottish accent just adds to it. The Grand High Witch looks like she's seconds from giving him a ''very'' painful death when having to deal with him. When informed he's Bruno's father, the Grand High Witch scoffs she's not a bit surprised.
* Marlene slips into the Grand High Witch's room and spots a bottle of Formula 86. Mistaking it for perfume, she dabs it on her neck. During one of their secret trysts, Mr. Stringer tries kissing her on the neck, only to back away in disgust. Marlene then looks in the mirror and sees she's grown a patch of fur on her neck. She also squeals like a mouse, most likely because the formula sunk into her vocal chords. [[LaserGuidedKarma That's what you get for pinching from your guests!]]
* Mr. Stringer finding the Grand High Witch transformed into a mouse. He whacks her with a butcher knife and she explodes in a cloud of green smoke and gunk, some of which gets on his face.
** He also grabs a mouse in hand, but instead of killing it, he just tosses it across the room.
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-->"The fact that you're a mouse has nothing to do with me."
[[AC:Film]]
* The Grand High Witch’s [[LargeHam hammy]] response after shooting down one witch’s idea of feeding children poisoned candy.
-->“''VI''-TCHES VORK ''ON''-LY VITH ''MA''-GIC!”
* Elsie (Miss Sensitivity), while Marlene is crying hysterically.
--> '''Elsie''': Is she sober?
--> '''Mr. Stringer''': Yes she's sober! I've been with her all aftern... When... I... Uh... I saw her w... Yes, of course she's sober! Don't be stupid!
* Bruno’s [[DullSurprise reaction]] to discovering that he’s been turned into a mouse. At first he denies it, but upon taking a good look at himself, goes wide-eyed and can only mutter, “Good Lord”... [[AngstWhatAngst before shrugging and going right back to eating]].
* The head chef shouting about a mouse in his trousers.
* Ms Irvine's magnificent WTF face when she enters the dining room and sees all the mice running around.
* A random witch compliments the Grand High Witch's (disguised) new look. The Grand High Witch responds, [[DeadpanSnarker "I wish I could say the same for you."]]
* Bruno's father and his obnoxious attitude towards the hotel staff. His thick Scottish accent just adds to it. The Grand High Witch looks like she's seconds from giving him a ''very'' painful death when having to deal with him. When informed he's Bruno's father, the Grand High Witch scoffs she's not a bit surprised.
* Marlene slips into the Grand High Witch's room and spots a bottle of Formula 86. Mistaking it for perfume, she dabs it on her neck. During one of their secret trysts, Mr. Stringer tries kissing her on the neck, only to back away in disgust. Marlene then looks in the mirror and sees she's grown a patch of fur on her neck. She also squeals like a mouse, most likely because the formula sunk into her vocal chords. [[LaserGuidedKarma That's what you get for pinching from your guests!]]
* Mr. Stringer finding the Grand High Witch transformed into a mouse. He whacks her with a butcher knife and she explodes in a cloud of green smoke and gunk, some of which gets on his face.
** He also grabs a mouse in hand, but instead of killing it, he just tosses it across the room."
[[AC:Film]]
* The Grand High Witch’s [[LargeHam hammy]] response after shooting down one witch’s idea of feeding children poisoned candy.
-->“''VI''-TCHES VORK ''ON''-LY VITH ''MA''-GIC!”
* Elsie (Miss Sensitivity), while Marlene is crying hysterically.
--> '''Elsie''': Is she sober?
--> '''Mr. Stringer''': Yes she's sober! I've been with her all aftern... When... I... Uh... I saw her w... Yes, of course she's sober! Don't be stupid!
* Bruno’s [[DullSurprise reaction]] to discovering that he’s been turned into a mouse. At first he denies it, but upon taking a good look at himself, goes wide-eyed and can only mutter, “Good Lord”... [[AngstWhatAngst before shrugging and going right back to eating]].
* The head chef shouting about a mouse in his trousers.
* Ms Irvine's magnificent WTF face when she enters the dining room and sees all the mice running around.
* A random witch compliments the Grand High Witch's (disguised) new look. The Grand High Witch responds, [[DeadpanSnarker "I wish I could say the same for you."]]
* Bruno's father and his obnoxious attitude towards the hotel staff. His thick Scottish accent just adds to it. The Grand High Witch looks like she's seconds from giving him a ''very'' painful death when having to deal with him. When informed he's Bruno's father, the Grand High Witch scoffs she's not a bit surprised.
* Marlene slips into the Grand High Witch's room and spots a bottle of Formula 86. Mistaking it for perfume, she dabs it on her neck. During one of their secret trysts, Mr. Stringer tries kissing her on the neck, only to back away in disgust. Marlene then looks in the mirror and sees she's grown a patch of fur on her neck. She also squeals like a mouse, most likely because the formula sunk into her vocal chords. [[LaserGuidedKarma That's what you get for pinching from your guests!]]
* Mr. Stringer finding the Grand High Witch transformed into a mouse. He whacks her with a butcher knife and she explodes in a cloud of green smoke and gunk, some of which gets on his face.
** He also grabs a mouse in hand, but instead of killing it, he just tosses it across the room.
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* A random witch compliments the Grand High Witch's (disguised) new look. The Grand High Witch responds, [[DeadpanSnarker "You're too kind... I wish I could say the same for you."]]
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* A random witch compliments the Grand High Witch's (disguised) new look. The Grand High Witch responds, [[DeadpanSnarker "You're too kind... I "I wish I could say the same for you."]]
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* The Grand High Witch’s [[LargeHam hammy]] response after shooting down one witch’s idea of feeding children poisoned candy.
-->“''VI''-TCHES VORK ''ON''-LY VITH ''MA''-GIC!”
-->“''VI''-TCHES VORK ''ON''-LY VITH ''MA''-GIC!”
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* Bruno doesn't even notice he's a mouse until the protagonist points it out to him, and even denies it, even though the floor is much closer to his face and judging by the protagonist's description, he must have gone through some very intense pain during the transformation.
-->"The fact that you're a mouse has nothing to do with me."
-->"The fact that you're a mouse has nothing to do with me."
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* Bruno's father and his obnoxious attitude towards the hotel staff. His thick Scottish accent just adds to it. The Grand High Witch looks like she's seconds from giving him a ''very'' painful death when having to deal with him.
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* Bruno's father and his obnoxious attitude towards the hotel staff. His thick Scottish accent just adds to it. The Grand High Witch looks like she's seconds from giving him a ''very'' painful death when having to deal with him. When informed he's Bruno's father, the Grand High Witch scoffs she's not a bit surprised.
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* Bruno's father and his obnoxious attitude towards the hotel staff. His thick Scottish accent just adds to it.
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* Bruno's father and his obnoxious attitude towards the hotel staff. His thick Scottish accent just adds to it. The Grand High Witch looks like she's seconds from giving him a ''very'' painful death when having to deal with him.
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* Bruno’s [[DullSurprise reaction]] to discovering that he’s been turned into a mouse. At first he denies it, but upon taking a good look at himself, can only mutter, “Good Lord”... [[AngstWhatAngst before shrugging and going right back to eating]].
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* Bruno’s [[DullSurprise reaction]] to discovering that he’s been turned into a mouse. At first he denies it, but upon taking a good look at himself, goes wide-eyed and can only mutter, “Good Lord”... [[AngstWhatAngst before shrugging and going right back to eating]].
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* Bruno’s [[DullSurprise reaction]] to discovering that he’s been turned into a mouse. At first he denies it, but upon taking a good look at himself, can only mutter, “Good Lord”... [[AngstWhatAngst before going right back to eating]].
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* Bruno’s [[DullSurprise reaction]] to discovering that he’s been turned into a mouse. At first he denies it, but upon taking a good look at himself, can only mutter, “Good Lord”... [[AngstWhatAngst before shrugging and going right back to eating]].
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* Bruno’s [[DullSurprise reaction]] to discovering that he’s been turned into a mouse. At first he denies it, but upon taking a good look at himself, can only mutter, “Good Lord”... [[AngstWhatAngst before going right back to eating]].
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[[AC:Book]]
* The Grand High Witch has this when one of the witches wonders if the Formula 86 Delayed Action Mouse Maker recipe requires one alarm clock for each child to be transformed by it.
-->"Idiots! If you are vonting a steak, you do not cook the whole cow!"
** Just about anything the Grand High Witch says, given her outrageous accent.
* The Grand High Witch has this when one of the witches wonders if the Formula 86 Delayed Action Mouse Maker recipe requires one alarm clock for each child to be transformed by it.
-->"Idiots! If you are vonting a steak, you do not cook the whole cow!"
** Just about anything the Grand High Witch says, given her outrageous accent.
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* From the book: the Grand High Witch has this when one of the witches wonders if the Formula 86 Delayed Action Mouse Maker recipe requires one alarm clock for each child to be transformed by it.
-->"Idiots! If you are vonting a steak, you do not cook the whole cow!"
** Just about anything the Grand High Witch says, given her outrageous accent.
-->"Idiots! If you are vonting a steak, you do not cook the whole cow!"
** Just about anything the Grand High Witch says, given her outrageous accent.
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* A random witch compliments the Grand High Witch's (disguised) new look. The Grand High Witch responds, [[DeadpanSnarker "You're too kind...I wish I could say the same for you."]]
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* A random witch compliments the Grand High Witch's (disguised) new look. The Grand High Witch responds, [[DeadpanSnarker "You're too kind... I wish I could say the same for you."]]
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* A random witch compliments the Grand High Witch's (disguised) new look. The Grand High Witch responds, [[DeadpanSnarker "You're too kind...I wish I could say the same for you."]]
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** Just about anything the Grand High Witch says, given her outrageous accent.
* A random witch compliments the Grand High Witch's (disguised) new look. The Grand High Witch responds, [[DeadpanSnarker "You're too kind...I wish I could say the same for you."]]"]]
* Bruno's father and his obnoxious attitude towards the hotel staff. His thick Scottish accent just adds to it.
* Marlene slips into the Grand High Witch's room and spots a bottle of Formula 86. Mistaking it for perfume, she dabs it on her neck. During one of their secret trysts, Mr. Stringer tries kissing her on the neck, only to back away in disgust. Marlene then looks in the mirror and sees she's grown a patch of fur on her neck. She also squeals like a mouse, most likely because the formula sunk into her vocal chords. [[LaserGuidedKarma That's what you get for pinching from your guests!]]
* Mr. Stringer finding the Grand High Witch transformed into a mouse. He whacks her with a butcher knife and she explodes in a cloud of green smoke and gunk, some of which gets on his face.
** He also grabs a mouse in hand, but instead of killing it, he just tosses it across the room.
* A random witch compliments the Grand High Witch's (disguised) new look. The Grand High Witch responds, [[DeadpanSnarker "You're too kind...I wish I could say the same for you.
* Bruno's father and his obnoxious attitude towards the hotel staff. His thick Scottish accent just adds to it.
* Marlene slips into the Grand High Witch's room and spots a bottle of Formula 86. Mistaking it for perfume, she dabs it on her neck. During one of their secret trysts, Mr. Stringer tries kissing her on the neck, only to back away in disgust. Marlene then looks in the mirror and sees she's grown a patch of fur on her neck. She also squeals like a mouse, most likely because the formula sunk into her vocal chords. [[LaserGuidedKarma That's what you get for pinching from your guests!]]
* Mr. Stringer finding the Grand High Witch transformed into a mouse. He whacks her with a butcher knife and she explodes in a cloud of green smoke and gunk, some of which gets on his face.
** He also grabs a mouse in hand, but instead of killing it, he just tosses it across the room.
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