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'''Shiro:''' Minus fifty cutness points...\\
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'''Shiro:''' Minus fifty cutness cuteness points...\\
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* When Sora and Shiro first met Izuna, they start petting her over her cutness. The first thing Izuna says? "Why the hell are you assholes, touching me, please?" Causing Sora and Shiro to jump back in shock, shivering as they undergo a ColorFailure.
-->'''Sora:''' W-w-w-w-WHAT!?\\
'''Shiro:''' Minus fifty cutness points...\\
-->'''Sora:''' W-w-w-w-WHAT!?\\
'''Shiro:''' Minus fifty cutness points...\\
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Just For Pun is a disambiguation
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'''Shiro:''' [[JustForPun The servers here are better than in our world...]]
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'''Shiro:''' [[JustForPun The servers here are better than in our world...]]
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-->'''Sora:''' Sis...I've always thought life was just an impossible game for masochists, but...''[[WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs it's finally bugged out!]]''
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-->'''Sora:''' Sis...I've always thought life was just an impossible game for masochists, but...''[[WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs it's ''it's finally bugged out!]]''out!''
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* The siblings CutenessProximity around Izuna "a pretty girl with animal ears" and her enjoying it. This causes [[OverprotectiveDad Ino]] to angrily warn the siblings not to do that but they ''STILL'' do it on Izuna's behalf since she mentions that the way they pet her is much better than his.
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* The siblings CutenessProximity around Izuna "a pretty girl with animal ears" and her enjoying it. This causes [[OverprotectiveDad [[BoyfriendBlockingDad Ino]] to angrily warn the siblings not to do that but they ''STILL'' do it on Izuna's behalf since she mentions that the way they pet her is much better than his.
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* Kurami [[CryCute breaking down into tears]], complete with OcularGushers, after Sora's TheReasonYouSuckSpeech.
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* Kurami [[CryCute breaking down into tears]], tears, complete with OcularGushers, after Sora's TheReasonYouSuckSpeech.
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* The entire "Love or Loved 2" opening sequence [[ClicheStorm is chock full of clichés]], topped by [[Creator/{{Mugihito}} Inu]]'s [[LargeHam hammy narration]] and [[Creator/MiyukiSawashiro Izuna]]'s [[TastesLikeDiabetes cute singing]].
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* The entire "Love or Loved 2" opening sequence [[ClicheStorm is chock full of clichés]], topped by [[Creator/{{Mugihito}} Inu]]'s [[LargeHam hammy narration]] and [[Creator/MiyukiSawashiro Izuna]]'s [[TastesLikeDiabetes cute singing]].singing.
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Plural dewicking
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* Jibril summoning a whirlwind to lift up Stephanie's shirt, giving the siblings many opportunities for PantyShots. Much to Stephanie's objection.
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* Jibril summoning a whirlwind to lift up Stephanie's shirt, giving the siblings many opportunities for PantyShots.ComedicUnderwearExposure. Much to Stephanie's objection.
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* The siblings CutenessProximity around Izuna "a pretty girl with animal ears" and her enjoying it. And their frightened reactions to Izuna's cute yet blunt-sounding voice.
-->'''Izuna:''' Why the hell are you assholes touching me? please.
-->'''Shiro:''' (shivering) Minus 50 cuteness points...
** This causes [[OverprotectiveDad Ino]] to angrily warn the siblings not to do that but they ''STILL'' do it on Izuna's behalf since she mentions that the way they pet her is much better than his.
-->'''Izuna:''' Why the hell are you assholes touching me? please.
-->'''Shiro:''' (shivering) Minus 50 cuteness points...
** This causes [[OverprotectiveDad Ino]] to angrily warn the siblings not to do that but they ''STILL'' do it on Izuna's behalf since she mentions that the way they pet her is much better than his.
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* The siblings CutenessProximity around Izuna "a pretty girl with animal ears" and her enjoying it. And their frightened reactions to Izuna's cute yet blunt-sounding voice.
-->'''Izuna:''' Why the hell are you assholes touching me? please.
-->'''Shiro:''' (shivering) Minus 50 cuteness points...
**This causes [[OverprotectiveDad Ino]] to angrily warn the siblings not to do that but they ''STILL'' do it on Izuna's behalf since she mentions that the way they pet her is much better than his.
-->'''Izuna:''' Why the hell are you assholes touching me? please.
-->'''Shiro:''' (shivering) Minus 50 cuteness points...
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* The siblings CutenessProximity around Izuna "a pretty girl with animal ears" and her enjoying it.
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* The siblings CutenessProximity around Izuna "a pretty girl with animal ears" and her enjoying it. And their frightened reactions to Izuna's cute yet blunt-sounding voice.
-->'''Izuna:''' Why the hell are you assholes touching me? please.
'''Shiro:''' (shivering) Minus 50 cuteness points...
-->'''Izuna:''' Why the hell are you assholes touching me? please.
'''Shiro:''' (shivering) Minus 50 cuteness points...
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* Sora attempts to exploit ClothingDamage to shoot off an NPC's panties. He succeeds, but the NPC ends up disappearing before anything R-rated can be shown, much to the ire of Sora and the audience. He latter succeeds in shooting off another NPC's bra.
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*** Speaking of which if the reincarnation business is true then the film reveals the delicious irony that Riko as Sora had unwittingly gotten revenge for Schwi's death by forcing her murderer to be his and Shiro's (Schwi's reincarnation) slave.
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*** Speaking of which if the reincarnation business is true then the film reveals the delicious irony that Riko as Sora had unwittingly gotten revenge for Schwi's death by forcing her murderer to be his and Shiro's (Schwi's own potential reincarnation) slave.
