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--> '''[[OverprotectiveDad Sirius]]:''' Then I'm going to have to give you the same speech I gave Ron and Neville. ''[Ron pales and gulps]''
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--> '''[[OverprotectiveDad '''[[BoyfriendBlockingDad Sirius]]:''' Then I'm going to have to give you the same speech I gave Ron and Neville. ''[Ron pales and gulps]''
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--> '''[=McGonagall=]:''' [[UpToEleven Ninety points from Gryffindor!]]
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--> '''[=McGonagall=]:''' [[UpToEleven Ninety points from Gryffindor!]]Gryffindor!
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* Harry's habit of hexing whoever wakes her up. It turns into a CrowningMomentOfFunny when she falls asleep just before the Durmstrang and Beauxbatons students arrive, wakes up to people screaming (in excitement, but she doesn't know that) and throws a Stunner at the first person she sees... who happens to be Karkaroff. That's right: Harry welcomed the Durmstrang students to Hogwarts by ''knocking out their headmaster''. Great way to make someone feel welcome!
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* Harry's habit of hexing whoever wakes her up. It turns into a CrowningMomentOfFunny when When she falls asleep just before the Durmstrang and Beauxbatons students arrive, she wakes up to people screaming (in excitement, but she doesn't know that) and throws a Stunner at the first person she sees... who happens to be Karkaroff. That's right: Harry welcomed the Durmstrang students to Hogwarts by ''knocking out their headmaster''. Great way to make someone feel welcome!
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--> '''Harry:''' How much trouble am I in? No, wait, it doesn't matter. Because it was worth it. I regret nothing.
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--> '''Harry:''' How much trouble am I in? No, wait, it doesn't matter. Because it was worth it. I regret nothing.IRegretNothing.
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* The prank war Harry starts between the Hogwarts Houses. First she dyes the Slytherin, Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff dormitories pink, brown and purple, respectively. Then those Houses start throwing paint at the Gryffindors. Then it turns into a free-for-all.
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* Hermione figures out Harry's feelings for Tom before Harry does and says she's smitten with him. Tom happens to be listening.
--> '''Tom:''' I know I'm eye-candy, but really, ''smitten''? I'm flattered.
--> '''Harry:''' I - [=AM=] - [=NOT=] - [=SMITTEN=]!
--> [...]
--> '''Tom:''' I'm not pushing the issue, Harry.
--> '''Harry:''' Good. Glad you understand.
--> '''Tom:''' I can be patient for you to get over your denial.
** Harry tries to turn the conversation to Hermione and Draco.
--> '''Harry:''' And what of you and Draco, huh? You blush around him an awful lot!
--> '''Hermione:''' I ''am'' smitten.
--> '''Harry:''' Exact - wait, what?
--> '''Tom:''' I know I'm eye-candy, but really, ''smitten''? I'm flattered.
--> '''Harry:''' I - [=AM=] - [=NOT=] - [=SMITTEN=]!
--> [...]
--> '''Tom:''' I'm not pushing the issue, Harry.
--> '''Harry:''' Good. Glad you understand.
--> '''Tom:''' I can be patient for you to get over your denial.
** Harry tries to turn the conversation to Hermione and Draco.
--> '''Harry:''' And what of you and Draco, huh? You blush around him an awful lot!
--> '''Hermione:''' I ''am'' smitten.
--> '''Harry:''' Exact - wait, what?
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* Tom's invisibility poses a bit of a problem to public displays of affection.
--> Harry resisted the urge to hug [Tom] tightly. It wouldn't do to start hugging ''air'' to the eyes of onlookers, would it?
--> Harry resisted the urge to hug [Tom] tightly. It wouldn't do to start hugging ''air'' to the eyes of onlookers, would it?
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* In Snape's first [=DADA=] class, he has the students practice wordless magic.
--> '''Hermione:''' I ''would'' like to get the silent spells completely down. It would be nice if I could do ''all'' silent spells like you, Harry.
--> '''Harry:''' Not ''all'' of my spells are silent.
--> Hermione raised an eyebrow.
--> '''Harry:''' I can't do the ''Patronus'' silently.
--> '''Hermione:''' I ''would'' like to get the silent spells completely down. It would be nice if I could do ''all'' silent spells like you, Harry.
--> '''Harry:''' Not ''all'' of my spells are silent.
--> Hermione raised an eyebrow.
--> '''Harry:''' I can't do the ''Patronus'' silently.
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* Harry gets lectured by her various friends. Tom finds it hilarious.
--> '''Tom:''' That's what you get for having concerned friends and abandoning them.
--> '''Harry:''' You're enjoying this far too much, you sadistic eye-candy.
--> '''Tom:''' Well, glad you still think I'm eye-candy.
--> '''Harry:''' [[TakeThat It's about all you're good for]].
--> '''Tom:''' Ouch.
--> '''Tom:''' That's what you get for having concerned friends and abandoning them.
--> '''Harry:''' You're enjoying this far too much, you sadistic eye-candy.
--> '''Tom:''' Well, glad you still think I'm eye-candy.
--> '''Harry:''' [[TakeThat It's about all you're good for]].
--> '''Tom:''' Ouch.
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* Snape gets a bit of snark at Harry's expense.
--> '''Harry:''' I have a Potions question.
--> '''Snape:''' This ought to be good.
--> '''Harry:''' I have a Potions question.
--> '''Snape:''' This ought to be good.
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--> ''[Harry wakes up and throws a nonverbal Stunner at Umbridge, [[DestinationDefenstration knocking her through the window]]]''
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--> ''[Harry wakes up and throws a nonverbal Stunner at Umbridge, [[DestinationDefenstration [[DestinationDefenestration knocking her through the window]]]''
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* Harry's "throw hexes when awoken" habit provides another funny moment when [[TyrantTakesTheHelm Dolores Umbridge]] appears in Hogwarts.
--> '''Tom:''' ''[to a sleeping Harry, while Umbridge is making a speech]'' Death Eaters have taken over the school and one of them is giving a speech in Dumbledore's usual spot ''right now''.
--> ''[Harry wakes up and throws a nonverbal Stunner at Umbridge, [[DestinationDefenstration knocking her through the window]]]''
--> '''Hermione:''' Harry! You just sent our [=DADA=] teacher out the window!
--> '''Dumbledore:''' ''[amused]'' [[CallBack Is this going to be a regular occurrence]]?
** Right after this, [=McGonagall=] tries to deduct points. Unfortunately for her, Harry's a prefect, so when she deducts fifty points, [[RefugeInAudacity Harry gives herself fifty points]]. Then [=McGonagall=] deducts seventy points. Dumbledore interrupts before Harry can award seventy points, but she does as soon as [=McGonagall=]'s distracted. Just when it looks like Harry's won:
--> '''[=McGonagall=]:''' [[UpToEleven Ninety points from Gryffindor!]]
--> '''Tom:''' ''[to a sleeping Harry, while Umbridge is making a speech]'' Death Eaters have taken over the school and one of them is giving a speech in Dumbledore's usual spot ''right now''.
--> ''[Harry wakes up and throws a nonverbal Stunner at Umbridge, [[DestinationDefenstration knocking her through the window]]]''
--> '''Hermione:''' Harry! You just sent our [=DADA=] teacher out the window!
--> '''Dumbledore:''' ''[amused]'' [[CallBack Is this going to be a regular occurrence]]?
** Right after this, [=McGonagall=] tries to deduct points. Unfortunately for her, Harry's a prefect, so when she deducts fifty points, [[RefugeInAudacity Harry gives herself fifty points]]. Then [=McGonagall=] deducts seventy points. Dumbledore interrupts before Harry can award seventy points, but she does as soon as [=McGonagall=]'s distracted. Just when it looks like Harry's won:
--> '''[=McGonagall=]:''' [[UpToEleven Ninety points from Gryffindor!]]
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--> '''Tom:''' I don't think they could even if they wanted to.
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--> '''Tom:''' I don't think they could [take him] even if they wanted to.
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* Sirius forbids Harry from [[ItMakesSenseInContext jumping off Buckbeak in mid-air]] again.
--> '''Tom:''' If it makes you feel any better, you have my support in this.
--> '''Harry:''' At least ''someone'' has my side.
--> '''Tom:''' [[BaitAndSwitchComment I'm all for you looking like a complete idiot]].
--> '''Tom:''' If it makes you feel any better, you have my support in this.
--> '''Harry:''' At least ''someone'' has my side.
--> '''Tom:''' [[BaitAndSwitchComment I'm all for you looking like a complete idiot]].
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* Sirius gets a CaptainObvious moment.
--> '''Sirius:''' How is winning an extremely popular, highly-sought-after-for-tickets tournament good for publicity? ''[beat]'' Oh, I think I just answered my own question.
--> '''Sirius:''' How is winning an extremely popular, highly-sought-after-for-tickets tournament good for publicity? ''[beat]'' Oh, I think I just answered my own question.
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* Harry's habit of hexing the first person to wake her up. It turns into a CrowningMomentOfFunny when she falls asleep just before the Durmstrang and Beauxbatons students arrive, wakes up to people screaming (in excitement, but she doesn't know that) and throws a Stunner at the first person she sees... who happens to be Karkaroff. That's right: Harry welcomed the Durmstrang students to Hogwarts by ''knocking out their headmaster''. Great way to make someone feel welcome!
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* Harry's habit of hexing the first person to wake whoever wakes her up. It turns into a CrowningMomentOfFunny when she falls asleep just before the Durmstrang and Beauxbatons students arrive, wakes up to people screaming (in excitement, but she doesn't know that) and throws a Stunner at the first person she sees... who happens to be Karkaroff. That's right: Harry welcomed the Durmstrang students to Hogwarts by ''knocking out their headmaster''. Great way to make someone feel welcome!
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* After Delano (the boy Harry was talking to) bursts into tears at not being chosen for the Tournament, we get this exchange.
--> '''Harry:''' Ew. He's actually sobbing over not being chosen? [[PunctuatedForEmphasis So. Not. Eye-candy.]]
--> '''Tom:''' What did you expect? He is a Beauxbatons student.
--> '''Harry:''' Aw. Were you jealous? Don't worry, you'll always be my number one eye-candy.
--> '''Tom:''' Go to hell.
--> '''Harry:''' [[DeadpanSnarker I'll save you a seat.]]
--> '''Harry:''' Ew. He's actually sobbing over not being chosen? [[PunctuatedForEmphasis So. Not. Eye-candy.]]
--> '''Tom:''' What did you expect? He is a Beauxbatons student.
--> '''Harry:''' Aw. Were you jealous? Don't worry, you'll always be my number one eye-candy.
--> '''Tom:''' Go to hell.
--> '''Harry:''' [[DeadpanSnarker I'll save you a seat.]]
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--> '''Harry:''' ''[afterwards]'' ...What happened?
--> '''Neville:''' You knocked out a headmaster.
--> '''Harry:''' How much trouble am I in? No, wait, it doesn't matter. Because it was worth it. I regret nothing.
--> '''Ron:''' You just got a total of ten points deducted and one detention.
--> '''Harry:''' Wow, seriously? I ''really'' regret nothing now.
--> '''Neville:''' You knocked out a headmaster.
--> '''Harry:''' How much trouble am I in? No, wait, it doesn't matter. Because it was worth it. I regret nothing.
--> '''Ron:''' You just got a total of ten points deducted and one detention.
--> '''Harry:''' Wow, seriously? I ''really'' regret nothing now.
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* Tom's reaction to [[DistractedByTheSexy Harry seeing the Beauxbatons boys]].
--> '''Tom:''' ''[glaring at the boys]'' Oh, brother.
** Followed quickly by "You're just [talking to them] because of hormones". Wow, Tom, jealous much?
--> '''Tom:''' ''[glaring at the boys]'' Oh, brother.
** Followed quickly by "You're just [talking to them] because of hormones". Wow, Tom, jealous much?
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* "Voldewhore" and "The Dark Slut". Tom is not amused.
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* Harry panicking when she realises something important to her is going to be taken for the Second Task. Bear in mind that Basileus is a basilisk and Buckbeak is a hippogriff.
--> '''Harry:''' Alright, so they're going to take what I'll - [=OHMYGODBASILEUS=]! Oh my God! I have to hide him! ''Not my familiar!''
--> '''Tom:''' I don't think they could even if they wanted to.
--> '''Harry:''' ...Oh, right. But then who else - [=OHMYGODBUCKBEAK=]!
--> '''Tom:''' ''[facepalms]'' It's not your pet Hippogriff, either.
--> '''Harry:''' Alright, so they're going to take what I'll - [=OHMYGODBASILEUS=]! Oh my God! I have to hide him! ''Not my familiar!''
--> '''Tom:''' I don't think they could even if they wanted to.
--> '''Harry:''' ...Oh, right. But then who else - [=OHMYGODBUCKBEAK=]!
--> '''Tom:''' ''[facepalms]'' It's not your pet Hippogriff, either.
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* Harry breaks Fudge's nose over the Sirius fiasco. Fudge is absolutely terrified of her afterwards. She exploits this.
--> '''Harry:''' Minister, I would like to introduce you to my dear friends.
--> ...Fudge stumbled over himself to thrust his hand at the first person Harry introduced him to.
** Remus calls her out on it.
--> '''Remus:''' Quit taunting our Minister. You're going to give him a nervous break-down. You know he's still terrified of you.
--> '''Harry:''' Oh, but it's so much fun!
--> '''[[OnlySaneMan Hermione]]:''' There is something seriously wrong with you.
* Sirius meets Draco.
--> '''Sirius:''' ...Hello, boy. [...] So you're a friend of my Goddaughter?
--> '''Draco:''' Yes.
--> '''Sirius:''' And are you certain you're a boy?
--> '''Draco:''' Yes.
--> '''[[OverprotectiveDad Sirius]]:''' Then I'm going to have to give you the same speech I gave Ron and Neville. ''[Ron pales and gulps]''
--> '''Harry:''' Minister, I would like to introduce you to my dear friends.
--> ...Fudge stumbled over himself to thrust his hand at the first person Harry introduced him to.
** Remus calls her out on it.
--> '''Remus:''' Quit taunting our Minister. You're going to give him a nervous break-down. You know he's still terrified of you.
--> '''Harry:''' Oh, but it's so much fun!
--> '''[[OnlySaneMan Hermione]]:''' There is something seriously wrong with you.
* Sirius meets Draco.
--> '''Sirius:''' ...Hello, boy. [...] So you're a friend of my Goddaughter?
--> '''Draco:''' Yes.
--> '''Sirius:''' And are you certain you're a boy?
--> '''Draco:''' Yes.
--> '''[[OverprotectiveDad Sirius]]:''' Then I'm going to have to give you the same speech I gave Ron and Neville. ''[Ron pales and gulps]''
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* The tricks Harry and the twins play on Hogwarts after taking up the title "the new Marauders". Among other things, they rearrange the various classrooms so the Transfiguration classroom contains the Herbology classroom's equipment and vice versa, Potions switches with Charms, so on and so forth. HilarityEnsues.
* Harry's habit of hexing the first person to wake her up. It turns into a CrowningMomentOfFunny when she falls asleep just before the Durmstrang and Beauxbatons students arrive, wakes up to people screaming (in excitement, but she doesn't know that) and throws a Stunner at the first person she sees... who happens to be Karkaroff. That's right: Harry welcomed the Durmstrang students to Hogwarts by ''knocking out their headmaster''. Great way to make someone feel welcome!
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* Harry's habit of hexing the first person to wake her up. It turns into a CrowningMomentOfFunny when she falls asleep just before the Durmstrang and Beauxbatons students arrive, wakes up to people screaming (in excitement, but she doesn't know that) and throws a Stunner at the first person she sees... who happens to be Karkaroff. That's right: Harry welcomed the Durmstrang students to Hogwarts by ''knocking out their headmaster''. Great way to make someone feel welcome!
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