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** Up to eleven when you give Rath's personality and powers to Cooper.
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** Up to eleven Gets even better when you give Rath's personality and powers to Cooper.Cooper.
** In the first chapter, Rath yells "LET ME TELL YOU SOMETHING, ZOMBOZO! RATH REALLY HATES CLOWN! MORE THAN I HATE PEACOCKS!" Cue Kevin, Frightwig and Julie staring at this before giving Gwen a confused look. Gwen then says it had to do with a confrontation with Dr. Animo when Ben and Gwen were kids and to leave it at that.
** In the first chapter, Rath yells "LET ME TELL YOU SOMETHING, ZOMBOZO! RATH REALLY HATES CLOWN! MORE THAN I HATE PEACOCKS!" Cue Kevin, Frightwig and Julie staring at this before giving Gwen a confused look. Gwen then says it had to do with a confrontation with Dr. Animo when Ben and Gwen were kids and to leave it at that.
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* Skurd taunting the Grackleflint like acting like he's calling a dog to trick it into [[spoiler: Bear Hug]] gets him.
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* Rook is less than amused at Ben's comment about '[[RightThroughTheWall keeping the base up]]' comment after he realizes what he meant.
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** UpToEleven Up to eleven when you give Rath's personality and powers to Cooper.
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* Skurd attempting to use the tagline of the newest MyLittlePony upon Uniburn's first use
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** Also there's Komodo's [[TheDogBitesBack reunion]] with Dr Animo, who gave him his powers. Doc thinks it's best to let him tire himself out.
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** Upon seeing him again, Ben makes it clear he and Skurd have not forgiven Young One.
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* Rook's Grandmother has a similar...tendency to a certain [[Disney/TheLionKing mandrill from a well loved film.]]
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* During the Revvonahgander festivities, Rook's younger brother Young One convinces Ben to dress in traditional attire... [[{{Crossdresser}} women's traditional attire]].
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* Ben transforming into Rath to combat [[EvilIsHammy an equally loud and proud Appoplexian headhunter.]] [[HamToHamCombat You can probably guess what happens next.]]
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* During the [[WesternAnimation/TheSecretSaturdays Secret Saturdays]] crossover, Julie calls in for backup:
--> "This is Julie Yamamoto! [[ItMakesSenseInContext We've got snake people and giant rats in the Eastern part of Undertown. They're being led by a flying yeti in a stone mask.]][...][[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer NO, I AM NOT MAKING THAT UP, TETRAX!]]"
* During the [[WesternAnimation/TheSecretSaturdays Secret Saturdays]] crossover, Julie calls in for backup:
--> "This is Julie Yamamoto! [[ItMakesSenseInContext We've got snake people and giant rats in the Eastern part of Undertown. They're being led by a flying yeti in a stone mask.]][...][[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer NO, I AM NOT MAKING THAT UP, TETRAX!]]"
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* Skurd ends up getting into some...[[MarshmallowHell awkward spot]] when Looma makes her reappearance. And he's also the only one not in the know, and makes it clear he's annoyed that no one is filling him in.
* Psychobos getting annoyed that [[spoiler: he's being used as a chair during a [[MoodWhiplash rather tragic retelling about Feedback's destruction.]]]]
* Skurd ends up getting into some...[[MarshmallowHell awkward spot]] when Looma makes her reappearance. And he's also the only one not in the know, and makes it clear he's annoyed that no one is filling him in.
* Psychobos getting annoyed that [[spoiler: he's being used as a chair during a [[MoodWhiplash rather tragic retelling about Feedback's destruction.]]]]
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* When fighting Trombipulor, Enormity got grabbed and squeezed...which led to something right out of TeamFourStar.
* Jimmy easily cracking into Eddie's security, much to his shock (to the point of having to sit down)
* When fighting Trombipulor, Enormity got grabbed and squeezed...which led to something right out of TeamFourStar.
* Jimmy easily cracking into Eddie's security, much to his shock (to the point of having to sit down)
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* Ben tells someone to look out to their left, and Darkstar looked there...which only led to him getting hit since he was talking to Verdona.
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* When [[spoiler: Helen becomes human, she has to get something to cover the back of her pants due to having...well, no tail.]]
* When [[spoiler: Helen becomes human, she has to get something to cover the back of her pants due to having...well, no tail.]]
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* Ben tells someone to look out to their left, and Darkstar looked there...which only led to him getting hit since he was talking to Verdona.
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--> '''Jerry from Inhuman Resources''': IT'S A GOOD NAME AND YOU KNOW IT!
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** Speaking of, Ben having some trouble staying upright with Uniburn's...wheel appendage.
** Speaking of, Ben having some trouble staying upright with Uniburn's...wheel appendage.
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*Skurd attempting to use the tagline of the newest MyLittlePony upon Uniburn's first use
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** UpToEleven when you give Rath's personality and powers to Cooper.
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* Octagon and Rhomboid still blew up the academy...but they came back begging.
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* Rath is hilarious as per usual.
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* Skurd's remarks are still amusing, like in the canon version.
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