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Can be found on [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/wolf-spider-worm-complete.39611/ Sufficient Velocity]] and on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/14369655/chapters/33174018 AO3]].
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Can be found on [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/wolf-spider-worm-complete.39611/ Sufficient Velocity]] and on Website/{{Archive Of Our|Own}} [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/14369655/chapters/33174018 AO3]].
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* MixedAncestry: Pelter/Stefanie is biracial, her mom is black and her dad is white.
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* BadassGay: Arachne, Bitch, Parian, and Flechette are all varying kinds of badass and none of them are straight.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: In canon both Taylor and Rachel are straight. Here they are [[BiTheWay bisexual]] and [[ButchLesbian gay]] respectively.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: In canon both Taylor and Rachel are straight. Here they are [[BiTheWay bisexual]] bisexual and [[ButchLesbian gay]] respectively.
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Premise: [[Literature/{{Worm}} Taylor Hebert]], bullied here, does a few things differently and winds up meeting a very different Undersider, in rather different circumstances. Minor AU by [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/members/the-laurent.5133/ The Laurent]]
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Premise: [[Literature/{{Worm}} Taylor Hebert]], bullied here, does a few things differently and winds up meeting a very different Undersider, in rather different circumstances. Rachel is a main character, btw. Minor AU by [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/members/the-laurent.5133/ The Laurent]]
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* BadassGay: Arachne, Bitch, Parian, and Flechette are all varying kinds of badass and non of them are straight.
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* BadassGay: Arachne, Bitch, Parian, and Flechette are all varying kinds of badass and non none of them are straight.
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* IdealizedSex: Subverted, when [[spoiler: Taylor and Rachel]] have sex for the first time it is described as having been awkward and strange. This is to be expected since [[spoiler: Taylor]] was a virgin and [[spoiler: Rachel]] only had sex once before.
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* IdealizedSex: Subverted, Subverted; when [[spoiler: Taylor and Rachel]] have sex for the first time it is described as having been awkward and strange. This is to be expected since [[spoiler: Taylor]] was a virgin and [[spoiler: Rachel]] only had sex once before.
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* SparedByAdaptation: In canon Pelter/Stefanie dies during the endbringer fight, here she lives and becomes a recurring character.
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* TitleDrop: Wolf Spider gets used in Rabid 4-A as a ship name for Arachne and Bitch [[spoiler: when it’s found out their in a relationship.]]
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* TitleDrop: Wolf Spider gets used in Rabid 4-A as a ship name for Arachne and Bitch [[spoiler: when it’s found out their they're in a relationship.]]
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* BattleCouple: [[spoiler: Arachne and Bitch.]]
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* BattleCouple: BattleCouple:
** [[spoiler: Arachne and Bitch.]]
** [[spoiler: Arachne and Bitch.]]
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* IdealizedSex: Subverted, when [[spoiler: Taylor and Rachel]] have sex for the first time. This is to be expected since [[spoiler: Taylor]] is a virgin and [[spoiler: Rachel]] only had sex once before.
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* IdealizedSex: Subverted, when [[spoiler: Taylor and Rachel]] have sex for the first time. time it is described as having been awkward and strange. This is to be expected since [[spoiler: Taylor]] is was a virgin and [[spoiler: Rachel]] only had sex once before.
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* IdealizedSex: Subverted, when [[spoiler: Taylor and Rachel]] have sex for the first time. This is to be expected when [[spoiler: Taylor]] is a virgin and [[spoiler: Rachel]] only had sex once before.
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* IdealizedSex: Subverted, when [[spoiler: Taylor and Rachel]] have sex for the first time. This is to be expected when since [[spoiler: Taylor]] is a virgin and [[spoiler: Rachel]] only had sex once before.
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* DefectingForLove: Bitch leaves the Undersiders to be with [[spoiler: Arachne]].
* IdealizedSex: Subverted, when [[spoiler: Taylor and Rachel]] have sex for the first time. This is to be expected when [[spoiler: Taylor]] is a virgin and [[spoiler: Rachel]] only had sex once before.
-->'''[[spoiler: Taylor]]''': “It had been awkward. It had been strange. I hadn’t known what I was doing, and I was pretty sure that I could do better next time--”
* IdealizedSex: Subverted, when [[spoiler: Taylor and Rachel]] have sex for the first time. This is to be expected when [[spoiler: Taylor]] is a virgin and [[spoiler: Rachel]] only had sex once before.
-->'''[[spoiler: Taylor]]''': “It had been awkward. It had been strange. I hadn’t known what I was doing, and I was pretty sure that I could do better next time--”
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* BattleCouple: Arachne and Bitch.
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Arachne/Taylor and Bitch/Rachel are this to each other, with Rachel being the more aggressive.
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: [[spoiler: Arachne/Taylor and Bitch/Rachel Bitch/Rachel]] are this to each other, with Rachel [[spoiler: Rachel]] being the more aggressive.
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* BadassGay: Arachne, Bitch, Parian, and Flechette are all varying kinds of badass and non of them are straight.
* BattleCouple: Arachne and Bitch.
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* BattleCouple: Arachne and Bitch.
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Can be found [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/wolf-spider-worm-complete.39611/ here]].
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Can be found on [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/wolf-spider-worm-complete.39611/ here]].
Sufficient Velocity]] and on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/14369655/chapters/33174018 AO3]].
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* AdaptationNameChange: In this fic Taylor goes by Arachne instead of Skitter.
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* AdaptationalBadass: In canon Charlotte and Greg Veder were normal humans here [[spoiler: they are parahumans the former being [[SuperEmpowering trump]] and the latter being a [[GadgeteerGenius tinker]].]]
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* AdaptationalBadass: In canon Charlotte and Greg Veder were normal humans here [[spoiler: they are parahumans the former being a [[SuperEmpowering trump]] and the latter being a [[GadgeteerGenius tinker]].]]
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* AdaptationExpansion: In canon the only things known about Pelter/Stefanie Lamana are her names and that she died during the Leviathan fight. Here she survives, [[spoiler: joins Taylor and Rachel’s team.]]
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* AdaptationExpansion: In canon the only things known about Pelter/Stefanie Lamana are her names and that she died during the Leviathan fight. Here she survives, becomes a recurring character, and [[spoiler: joins Taylor and Rachel’s team.]]
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* AdaptationExpansion: In canon the only things known about Pelter/Stefanie Lamana are her names and that she died during the Leviathan fight. Here she survives and [[spoiler: joins Taylor and Rachel’s team.]]
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* AdaptationExpansion: In canon the only things known about Pelter/Stefanie Lamana are her names and that she died during the Leviathan fight. Here she survives and survives, [[spoiler: joins Taylor and Rachel’s team.]]
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* TitleDrop: Wolf Spider gets used in Rabid 4-A as a ship name for Arachne and Bitch [[spoiler: when it’s found out their in a relationship.]]]]
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* AdaptationalBadass: In canon Charlotte and Greg Veder were normal humans here [[spoiler: they are parahumans the former being [[SuperEmpowering trump]] and the latter being a [[GadgeteerGenius tinker]].]]
* MixedAncestry: Pelter/Stefanie is biracial, her mom is black and her dad is white.
* SparedByAdaptation: In canon Pelter/Stefanie dies during the endbringer fight, here she lives and becomes a recurring character.
* SparedByAdaptation: In canon Pelter/Stefanie dies during the endbringer fight, here she lives and becomes a recurring character.
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* TheirFirstTime: [[spoiler: Taylor and Rachel in Bark 2.4.]]
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* TheirFirstTime: [[spoiler: Taylor and Rachel in Bark 2.4.]]
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* TitleDrop: Wolf Spider gets used in Rabid 4-A as a ship name for Arachne and Bitch [[spoiler: when it’s found out their in a relationship.]]
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* AdaptationExpansion: In canon the only things known about Pelter/Stefanie Lamana are her names and that she died during the Leviathan fight. Here she survives and [[spoiler: joins Taylor and Rachel’s team.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: During the [[spoiler: battle with Behemoth]] a lot of people died, quite a few either survived canon worm or died at a latter time.
** Didn’t die in canon: [[spoiler: Glory Girl, Brandish, Laserdream, Flashbang, Lung, Labyrinth, Armsmaster, Assault, Shadow Stalker, Cache, Ursa Aurora, Dispatch, Exalt, Tecton, Cuff, and Narwhal.]]
** Died at a latter point in canon: [[spoiler: Othala, Hookwolf, Clockblocker, Rime, and Revel.]]
* TheImmodestOrgasm: [[spoiler: After Taylor and Rachel are done having sex for [[TheirFirstTime the first time]] Taylor mentions that they made a lot of noise.]]
* SuperEmpowering: [[spoiler: After triggering Charlotte/Amp can do this.]]
* TheirFirstTime: [[spoiler: Taylor and Rachel in Bark 2.4.]]
** Didn’t die in canon: [[spoiler: Glory Girl, Brandish, Laserdream, Flashbang, Lung, Labyrinth, Armsmaster, Assault, Shadow Stalker, Cache, Ursa Aurora, Dispatch, Exalt, Tecton, Cuff, and Narwhal.]]
** Died at a latter point in canon: [[spoiler: Othala, Hookwolf, Clockblocker, Rime, and Revel.]]
* TheImmodestOrgasm: [[spoiler: After Taylor and Rachel are done having sex for [[TheirFirstTime the first time]] Taylor mentions that they made a lot of noise.]]
* SuperEmpowering: [[spoiler: After triggering Charlotte/Amp can do this.]]
* TheirFirstTime: [[spoiler: Taylor and Rachel in Bark 2.4.]]
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Premise: [[Literature/{{Worm}} Taylor Hebert]], bullied here, does a few things differently and winds up meeting a very different Undersider, in rather different circumstances. Minor AU by [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/members/the-laurent.5133/ The Laurent]]
Can be found [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/wolf-spider-worm-complete.39611/ here]].
It is complete as of March 2018.
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!! This fic provides examples of:
* AdaptationalSexuality: In canon both Taylor and Rachel are straight. Here they are [[BiTheWay bisexual]] and [[ButchLesbian gay]] respectively.
* SuperEmpowering: [[spoiler: After triggering Charlotte/Amp can do this.]]
Can be found [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/wolf-spider-worm-complete.39611/ here]].
It is complete as of March 2018.
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!! This fic provides examples of:
* AdaptationalSexuality: In canon both Taylor and Rachel are straight. Here they are [[BiTheWay bisexual]] and [[ButchLesbian gay]] respectively.
* SuperEmpowering: [[spoiler: After triggering Charlotte/Amp can do this.]]
