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** [[spoiler: Futaba mentions that Raidou reminds her of Jotaro, a reference to them sharing an English VA in Matthew Mercer.]]
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** This is also implied to be the full extent of Houdini's power, with visibility/invisibility hinging on the refraction of light. Shizuka uses this principle to temporarily blind Paradise City by keeping the light from entering his eyes. [[spoiler: Its evolved form, Houdini Eclipse, takes it UpToEleven; it can not only alter light and color to create [[MasterOfIllusion illusions]], but can absorb light and blast it out as FrickinLaserBeams.]]
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** This is also implied to be the full extent of Houdini's power, with visibility/invisibility hinging on the refraction of light. Shizuka uses this principle to temporarily blind Paradise City by keeping the light from entering his eyes. [[spoiler: Its evolved form, Houdini Eclipse, takes it UpToEleven; it can not only alter light and color to create [[MasterOfIllusion illusions]], but can absorb light and blast it out as FrickinLaserBeams.[[EnergyWeapon Frickin' Laser Beams]].]]
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* DeusExitMachina: After learning about the shenanigans going on in Tokyo, Jotaro intends to go there...but then he gets a call about a vampire outbreak in Argentina and leaves to stop it. Not surprising, given that Jotaro [[StoryBreakerPower would break the plot]].
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* DeusExitMachina: After learning about the shenanigans going on in Tokyo, Jotaro intends to go there... but then he gets a call about a vampire outbreak in Argentina and leaves to stop it. Not surprising, given that Jotaro [[StoryBreakerPower would break the plot]].
* ForceAndFinesse: Generally speaking, Personae and Stands can be described as such. Personae have a large repertoire of direct, powerful elemental attacks and all pack a mean physical punch, with some specialising more in healing, status effects or navigation. Stands, on the other hand, have a singular trick that can be leveraged for maximum combat effectiveness like invisibility or trap generation, and not all of them are physically powerful, though they certainly can be. Shizuka describes the difference between them like this in Chapter 77.
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** Despite [[spoiler: Okumura not suffering a mental breakdown, the Arditi are still hit with a smear campaign that tanks their public support thanks to Akechi framing a couple of other breakdowns on them. However, it doesn't nearly effect them as much since they've been aware of the scope of The Conspiracy for awhile.]]
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** Despite [[spoiler: Okumura not suffering a mental breakdown, the Arditi are still hit with a smear campaign that tanks their public support thanks to Akechi framing a couple of other breakdowns on them. However, it doesn't nearly effect them as much since they've been aware of the scope of The Conspiracy for awhile.a while.]]
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* OffTheRails: The big derailment in the plot occurs [[spoiler: when the Phantom Thieves explore Okumura's Palace shortly after clearing Kaneshiro's. Even Yaldabaoth is caught off guard.]]
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* OffTheRails: The big derailment in the plot occurs [[spoiler: when the Phantom Thieves explore Okumura's Palace shortly after clearing Kaneshiro's.Kaneshiro's, and even clear both Futaba and Okumura's palaces concurrently. Even Yaldabaoth is caught off guard.]]
* TeamMemberInTheAdaptation: Two canon side characters are upgraded to members of the Phantom Thieves in this fic: Shiho Suzui and [[spoiler: Hifumi Togo]].
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** And again in Chapter 66, when [[spoiler: Akechi reveals he has picturing of the Arditi disappearing into the metaverse,]] he calls it "An interesting little vanishing act you pulled".
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** And again in Chapter 66, when [[spoiler: Akechi reveals he has picturing pictures of the Arditi disappearing into the metaverse,]] he calls it "An interesting little vanishing act you pulled".
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* BusmansHoliday: The Arditi's school holiday in Hawai'i has them dealing with some Stand users from Mr. A's organization.
** One of Mr. A's EliteFour, Okabe, runs into a Stand user that wants to take the empty spot in Mr. A's elite group by beating Okabe. Though Okabe thrashes him, he reappears later [[spoiler: using his Stand to track the retreating Phantom Thieves to the hidden Speedwagon Foundation clinic and lead Mr. A there]].
* EleventhHourRanger: The GrandFinale has Yu Narukami, Rise Kujikawa and even [[spoiler: Minato Arisato]] joining the coalition to beat Yaldabaoth.
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** On the other side of the subversion coin, Naoto uses a gun to drive off an intruder.
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** On the other side of the subversion coin, Naoto uses a gun her handgun to drive off an a Stand-wielding intruder.
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** In Chapter 49 [[spoiler: Shadow Okumura tells the Phantom Thieves if he had more time he could ascend to the political world. This subtly references his "Utopia"/escape plan from canon. Since the Phantom Thieves attacked earlier, the plan isn't done yet.]]
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** In Chapter 49 [[spoiler: Shadow Okumura tells the Phantom Thieves if he had more time he could ascend to the political world. This subtly references his "Utopia"/escape plan from canon. Since the Phantom Thieves attacked earlier, ahead of schedule, the plan isn't done yet.]]
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* {{Nerd}}: Shizuka has a love for superhero comics and pro wrestling, and usually makes lame puns or jokes. She's still a dangerous Stand user.
* PaperMaster: Lars Gunsche's Stand, Painkiller, has this power. Any paper he touches becomes incredibly resilient and rigid, allowing him to wear paper armour under his clothes, use origami shuriken and darts that cut better than real ones, and wield a sheet of paper like a blade.
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* PopCulturedBadass: Shizuka was raised on a steady diet of comic books and movies, and can still kick any baddie's ass. Not surprising, given that Joseph was also an example of this trope.
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* PopCulturedBadass: Shizuka was raised on a steady diet of comic books and movies, has a deep love for superhero comics and pro wrestling, and can still kick any baddie's ass. Not surprising, given that Joseph was also an example of this trope.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Shizuka has a love for superhero comics and pro wrestling, and usually makes lame puns or jokes. She's still a dangerous Stand user.
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* BadassBisexual: Per WordOfGod about Shizuka: "She leans more toward girls in general, but she wouldn't turn down the right guy." and of course being a Jojo protagonist she is very badass.
** Said bisexuality pokes its head up around the point the subject of Ann posing nude for a painting gets mentioned. Shizuka gets noticeably flustered by the idea and promises Ann that if the painting gets made, she would buy it to keep it out of the public eye. While also keeping it as a motivational poster.
** Shizuka ends up developing feelings for Makoto and confesses to her.
** Said bisexuality pokes its head up around the point the subject of Ann posing nude for a painting gets mentioned. Shizuka gets noticeably flustered by the idea and promises Ann that if the painting gets made, she would buy it to keep it out of the public eye. While also keeping it as a motivational poster.
** Shizuka ends up developing feelings for Makoto and confesses to her.
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* BiTheWay: Sae, apparently. Makoto remembers the occasional girlfriend Sae would bring home in addition to boyfriends.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Besides being merged with the Persona setting, there's one large change in the Jojo universe: Made in Heaven did not reset it. Exactly how this happened is currently unknown, and may not be relevant to the plot in any case.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Besides being merged with the Persona setting, there's one large change in the Jojo universe: Made in Heaven did not reset it. Exactly how this happened is currently unknown, and may not be isn’t relevant to the plot in any case.
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** Downplayed with how Akira reacted to Shizuka's Stand. He confronts her on it after seeing it saving Shiho and she reveals it, knowing that if he's able to see it, that'd make him a Stand User. Obviously, [[WrongGenreSavvy she's wrong in that regard]].
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* DirtyMindReading: G-rated version played for comedy. When trying out the mind-reading ability of Flaming Telepath, [[spoiler: Hifumi's]] Stand, she tries it out on Sergio and gets a LuminescentBlush when she reads that [[ShipTease he thinks she is very pretty]].
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** Touta's Stand only works in a very specific set of circumstances. [[BewareTheNiceOnes Haru]], knowing these circumstances, traps him in a position where he is unable to bring his full power to bear and subjects him to a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown.
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** Touta's Stand Stand, [[YourSoulIsMine Bloody Sunday]], only works in a very specific set of circumstances. [[BewareTheNiceOnes Haru]], knowing these circumstances, traps him in a position where he is unable to bring his full power to bear and subjects him to a NoHoldsBarredBeatdown.
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* PoweredArmor: [[spoiler: What 'American VI', Sanshiro's Stand final form, is. Sergio is quick to point out that if Shizuka was there she would "(Tell an) unabridged history of Comicbook/IronMan right now"]]
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* PoweredArmor: [[spoiler: What 'American VI', Sanshiro's Stand final form, is. Sergio is quick to point out that if Shizuka [[PopCulturedBadass Shizuka]] was there she would "(Tell an) unabridged history of Comicbook/IronMan right now"]]
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* {{Squee}}: No actual squeal, but [[spoiler: Lavenza]] gets a very big grin when she sees the Trickster ([[VideoGame/Persona5 Akira Kurusu]]), the [[spoiler:Savior ([[VideoGame/Persona3 Minato Arisato]])]], and the Seeker ([[VideoGame/Persona4 Yu Narukami]]) all in the same room.
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* {{Squee}}: No Downplayed with no actual squeal, but [[spoiler: Lavenza]] gets a very big grin when she sees the Trickster ([[VideoGame/Persona5 Akira Kurusu]]), the [[spoiler:Savior ([[VideoGame/Persona3 Minato Arisato]])]], and the Seeker ([[VideoGame/Persona4 Yu Narukami]]) all in the same room.
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** Shizuka's "Confidant ability" gives all the Phantom Thieves a power they didn't have in canon: The ability to summon Personas in reality.
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** Necronomicon has CombatTentacles [[spoiler: and transdimensional warp capabilities]].
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** Futaba's Persona Necronomicon has CombatTentacles [[spoiler: and transdimensional warp capabilities]].
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Non-romantic examples. This is part of the reason that Sergio and Yusuke became friends and both Shizuka and Futaba almost immediately recognized each other as ones.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: Non-romantic examples. This is part of the reason that Sergio and Yusuke became friends and both Shizuka and Futaba almost immediately recognized each other as ones.fellow geeks.
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* CoolShades: Shizuka is almost constantly wearing shades of various types, they were given to her by her father for her birthdays and damaging them is a very severe BerserkButton for her on par with insulting Josuke Higashikata's hair.
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* CoolShades: Shizuka is almost constantly wearing shades sunglasses of various types, they were given to her by her types. Her adoptive father for made it a tradition of giving her birthdays a pair on her birthday (and since he's now dead she won't be getting any new ones), and damaging them is a very severe BerserkButton for her on par with insulting Josuke Higashikata's her brother's hair.
* FingerPokeOfDoom: Sergio's Stand Breakthru works by imparting momentum into whatever it touches, so it doesn't actually need to punch anything to launch it; a simple and gentle tap of its knuckles is enough to send the touched object flying. In fact, the longer Breakthru touches an object, the more momentum he can impart.
* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: [[spoiler: During the mission to get the Phantom Thieves out of [[LotusEaterMachine Dies Irae]], the group encounter a cognition of Ryuji's abusive, alcoholic father, mutated into a giant.]] With Ryuji stricken with fear, Akira gives him a slap to snap him out of it.
* GroundhogDayLoop: The power of Lynott, an enemy Stand user, and his Stand, Time in a Bottle. Everything within the Stand's radius is reset as soon as the buttons on its palms are pressed, including memories, but excluding damage dealt to one's body.
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** The Sphinx battle, it summons an army of Shadows from the pyramid Palace. Several of the Thieves have to hold back the army of Shadows running to the top of the pyramid while the others deal with the Sphinx.
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** The During the Sphinx battle, it summons an army of Shadows from the pyramid Palace. Several of the Thieves have to hold back the army of Shadows running to the top of the pyramid while the others deal with the Sphinx.
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** The Arditi divide into two groups in order to tackle [[spoiler: both Futaba and Okumura's Palaces at the same time.]]
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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Shizuka does some research into the mental shutdowns and explains that they're timed to occur when the victim is occupied. Such as when they're taking a bath, or on the stairs. The result is usually fatal, and covers up what actually happened.
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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Shizuka does some research into the mental shutdowns and explains that they're timed to occur when the victim is occupied. Such as when they're taking a bath, or on the stairs.stairs, or crossing a street. The result is usually fatal, and covers up what actually happened.
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** Shizuka has her own Confidant arc, as if she was actually in the video game itself. She even has her own Confidant ability, which is allowing the other Phantom Thieves to summon their Personas in reality.
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* PowerUpgradingDeformation: Averted. Futaba mentally comment that while she would like to tell Makoto that Shadow Sae [[BodyHorror less than pleasant looking body]] is due to [[spoiler:Akechi making her go berserk]], it is her actual true form.
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* PowerUpgradingDeformation: Averted. Futaba mentally comment comments that while she would like to tell Makoto that Shadow Sae Sae's [[BodyHorror less than pleasant looking body]] less-than-pleasant-looking form]] is due to [[spoiler:Akechi making her go berserk]], it is her actual true form.
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** Any time a previous Persona character sees Akira [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall they'll compare him to their own game's protagonist]]. Similarly, any time one of Akira's friends sees Yu Narukami they'll compare him to Akira.
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** Any time a previous Persona character sees Akira [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall [[YouRemindMeOfX they'll compare him to their own game's protagonist]]. Similarly, any time one of Akira's friends sees Yu Narukami they'll compare him to Akira.
** Happens when Sugimura gets rough with Haru in front of Shizuka, who breaks his nose in retaliation. Shizuka can tell he's a rich boy, but tells him that she is not the kind of girl who he should play the money game against, being a Joestar and all.
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** Not Futaba herself, but Necronomicon/Prometheus does this whenever Futaba is in too much danger, taking her to a place it consider "safe". [[spoiler: So when the world itself start to be overwritten, it takes her to another universe - specifically, that of ''VideoGame/RaidouKuzunohaVsTheSoullessArmy'']].
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** Not Futaba herself, but Necronomicon/Prometheus does this whenever Futaba is in too much danger, taking her to a place it consider "safe".considers "safe", like out of the Metaverse. [[spoiler: So when the world itself start to be overwritten, it takes her to another universe - specifically, that of ''VideoGame/RaidouKuzunohaVsTheSoullessArmy'']].
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* TalkToTheFist: Sergio interrupts Shadow Kaneshiro's introduction of his Piggytron mech by smashing him into the safe that makes up said mech. Multiple times.
--> '''Sergio:''' Sorry. I have a hearing disability. Whenever I hear a piece of shit talk to me, all I can hear is 'please punt me into the nearest wall.' How rude of me.
--> '''Sergio:''' Sorry. I have a hearing disability. Whenever I hear a piece of shit talk to me, all I can hear is 'please punt me into the nearest wall.' How rude of me.
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* TheUnfought: [[spoiler: Director Arisawa of the SIU]]. He gets a whole original Palace that the Arditi have to infiltrate, but instead, [[spoiler: his Shadow is captured by Mannish Boy, and later slain]].
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* YouRemindMeOfX: Several times, characters from previous Persona games will see Akira and think that he reminds them of their own protagonist, [[VideoGame/Persona4 Yu Narukami]] or [[VideoGame/Persona3 Minato Arisato]]. Similarly, some of the Arditi remark that Yu Narukami reminds them of Akira.
** Yukari Takeba, upon running into Ann and Yusuke, is briefly reminded of Minato when she looks at the latter due to their blue hair.
** Yukari Takeba, upon running into Ann and Yusuke, is briefly reminded of Minato when she looks at the latter due to their blue hair.
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* BlindedByRage: The Phantom Thieves defeat Miwa, one of Mr. A's Deadly Aspects, through Shiho [[IShallTauntYou taunting her]] to DrawAggro, until they can trap her Stand in place and attack it directly.
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* CanonWelding: WordOfGod states that the Kirijo group developed their anti-Shadow weapons by drawing on the technology of Von Stroheim's cyborg parts after the American occupation of Japan when the Speedwagon Foundation started working in the country.
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* CanonWelding: WordOfGod states that the Kirijo group developed their anti-Shadow weapons by drawing on the technology of Von Stroheim's cyborg parts after the American occupation of Japan when the Speedwagon Foundation started working in the country. Aigis is the result.
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* CurbStompCushion: [[spoiler: Satoshi has the crap beaten out of him on his assault on Mr. A's base, [[SuicideMission and he knew that going in]], but he manages to get one [[PlayingWithFire fireball]] shot off from his Stand that leaves some wicked burns on Mr. A's face]].
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* CurbStompCushion: [[spoiler: Satoshi has the crap beaten out of him on his assault on Mr. A's base, [[SuicideMission and he knew that going in]], [[DoNotGoGentle but before the killing blow]], he manages to get one last [[PlayingWithFire fireball]] shot off from his Stand that leaves some wicked burns on Mr. A's face]].
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** Sergio, an SID member and also from Italy, occasionally injects Italian into his sentences.
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** Sergio, an SID member and also from Italy, occasionally injects Italian into his sentences. There's also his BattleCry, "Vattene!", Italian for "Begone!"
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** Shizuka was taught by the biggest Guile Hero of canon ''Jojo'', Joseph Joestar. And so she fights by using unconventional tactics and the environment, coupled with her invisibility powers. Joseph would be proud.
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** Shizuka was raised and taught by the biggest Guile Hero of canon ''Jojo'', Joseph Joestar. And Joestar, so she fights by using unconventional tactics and the environment, coupled with her invisibility powers. Joseph would be proud.
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** This is also implied to be the full extent of Houdini's power, with visibility/invisibility hinging on the refraction of light. Shizuka uses this principle to temporarily blind Paradise City by keeping the light from entering his eyes.
** [[spoiler: Taken UpToEleven by Houdini Eclipse; which can not only alter light and color to create [[MasterOfIllusion illusions]], but can absorb light and blast it out as FrickinLaserBeams.]]
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**eyes. [[spoiler: Taken UpToEleven by Its evolved form, Houdini Eclipse; which Eclipse, takes it UpToEleven; it can not only alter light and color to create [[MasterOfIllusion illusions]], but can absorb light and blast it out as FrickinLaserBeams.]]
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'''Cog!Sugimura:''' Oh yes Sugimura, I really do believe you can change.\\
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* PseudoCrisis: In Chapter 46, the Arditi escape a crumbling Palace. When they re-enter the real world they can't find Shizuka and start getting worried. Then it turns out she's in an alleyway vomiting.
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* BadassBisexual:
** Per WordOfGod about Shizuka: "She leans more toward girls in general, but she wouldn't turn down the right guy." and of course being a Jojo protagonist she is very badass.
** Per WordOfGod about Shizuka: "She leans more toward girls in general, but she wouldn't turn down the right guy." and of course being a Jojo protagonist she is very badass.
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* BadassBisexual:
**BadassBisexual: Per WordOfGod about Shizuka: "She leans more toward girls in general, but she wouldn't turn down the right guy." and of course being a Jojo protagonist she is very badass.
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** In Chapter 97, Sanshiro is about to take out Sergio, when [[spoiler: Sae and a {{BFG}} formed by her Stand Luck Be A Lady scores a headshot]]. It's only enough to gain his attention though.
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* BlownAcrossTheRoom: In Chapter 57. American VI(which is reviled later to be[[spoiler: PowerArmor]]) sends Aigis flying.
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* BlownAcrossTheRoom: In Chapter 57. 57, Sanshiro's Stand American VI(which VI (which is reviled revealed later to be[[spoiler: PowerArmor]]) be [[spoiler: PoweredArmor]]) sends Aigis flying.
* CurbStompCushion: [[spoiler: Satoshi has the crap beaten out of him on his assault on Mr. A's base, [[SuicideMission and he knew that going in]], but he manages to get one [[PlayingWithFire fireball]] shot off from his Stand that leaves some wicked burns on Mr. A's face]].
* CurbStompBattle:
** One of the side missions of Shido's Palace involves getting a letter from an official who is a raging pervert. Shiho's BerserkButton is pressed, she marches up to the official, and proceeds to literally stomp him into submission.
* CurbStompBattle:
** One of the side missions of Shido's Palace involves getting a letter from an official who is a raging pervert. Shiho's BerserkButton is pressed, she marches up to the official, and proceeds to literally stomp him into submission.
* DeadManWriting: After getting TiredOfRunning, [[spoiler: Satoshi Morihiro]] writes one such letter to his son [[spoiler: Oyama]], before embarking on his SuicideMission against Mr. A.
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* FastballSpecial: In Chapter 50, Shizuka throws Ryuji into the air to attack a target on the ceiling.
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* FastballSpecial: FastballSpecial:
** In Chapter 50, Shizuka throws Ryuji into the air to attack a target on theceiling.ceiling.
** [[spoiler: The final battle has Sergio use Breakthru's propulsion powers to launch Prometheus at Yaldabaoth]].
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** [[spoiler: The final battle has Sergio use Breakthru's propulsion powers to launch Prometheus at Yaldabaoth]].
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* FixFic: While the author does not go out of his way to make everything be perfect, he does respond to most things that the fandom have found lacking story wise with things like presenting Haru to the group earlier that in canon or [[spoiler: Goro being direclty confronted while possing a very real threat to the Arditi during Sae's palace]].
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* FixFic: While the author does not go out of his way to make everything be perfect, he does respond to most things that the fandom have found lacking story wise with things like presenting Haru to the group earlier that in canon canon, removing the subplot of Morgana leaving the Thieves, or [[spoiler: Goro being direclty directly confronted while possing possessing a very real threat to the Arditi during Sae's palace]].
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Junichiro Shioma, villainous user of the Stand Smash Mouth, is killed when his Stand's power collapses part of a ceiling onto him.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: HoistByHisOwnPetard:
** Junichiro Shioma, villainous user of the Stand Smash Mouth, is killed when his Stand's power collapses part of a ceiling onto him.
** Junichiro Shioma, villainous user of the Stand Smash Mouth, is killed when his Stand's power collapses part of a ceiling onto him.
** [[spoiler: Yaldabaoth's schemes, though successfully weakening humanity's desires for control, also weakened humanity's desires to die as well, i.e. [[VideoGame/Persona3 Erebus]]. With Erebus weakened, Nyx was not being drawn to Earth as strongly, freeing up Minato Arisato enough to return to Earth and help his old allies against the new threat.]]
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** [[spoiler: SEES, the Investigation Team, and other Stand users like Jotaro and Josuke help guard the Tokyo tower from attacking Angels, to allow the broadcast of the Phantom Thieves to reach everyone in the world.]]
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** [[spoiler: SEES, the Investigation Team, and other Stand users like Jotaro and Jotaro, Josuke and Sae help guard the Tokyo tower from attacking Angels, to allow the broadcast of the Phantom Thieves to reach everyone in the world.]]
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* IronicName: In Chapter 21 Shizuka says she is well aware that her name ('Quiet') is pretty ironic given how loud and boisterous she is.
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* IronicName: In Chapter 21 21, Shizuka says she is well aware that her name ('Quiet') is pretty ironic given how loud and boisterous she is.
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** [[spoiler: Taken UpToEleven by Houdini Eclipse; which can not only alter light and color, but can absorb light and blast it out; whether this is actually anything more than a blinding flash is up in the air.]]
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** [[spoiler: Taken UpToEleven by Houdini Eclipse; which can not only alter light and color, color to create [[MasterOfIllusion illusions]], but can absorb light and blast it out; whether this is actually anything more than a blinding flash is up in the air.out as FrickinLaserBeams.]]
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* LotusEaterMachine: [[spoiler:What Camael's Stand, Dies Irae, provokes.]]
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* LotusEaterMachine: [[spoiler:What Camael's Stand, Dies Irae, provokes.creates.]]
* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler: Even after being captured by the Arditi]], Akechi proves to be this. [[spoiler: He tricks Akira and the Arditi into going after the SIU director Arisawa, knowing that thanks to Mr. A's connections, the Conspiracy has a Stand-user that can alter the Metaverse enough to lay a trap for the thieves]].
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* TheRestShallPass: The final confrontation with Mr. A and his Deadly Aspects involve small groups of the Arditi staying behind to confront each Deadly Aspect while the rest go on to the next.
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* TheRestShallPass: The During the final confrontation with Mr. A and his remaining Deadly Aspects involve small groups Aspects, half of the Arditi staying stay behind to confront each Deadly Aspect Sanshiro while the rest go on to the next.next, Okabe.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Not Futaba herself, but Necronomicon/Prometheus does this whenever Futaba is in too much danger, taking her to a place it consider "safe". [[spoiler: So when the world itself start to be overwritten, it takes her to another world]]
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: ScrewThisImOuttaHere:
** When their first battle with [[spoiler: Camael]] goes south fast, the Arditi don't hesitate in executing the Joestar Family secret technique of throwing up a distraction and retreating in quick order.
** Not Futaba herself, but Necronomicon/Prometheus does this whenever Futaba is in too much danger, taking her to a place it consider "safe". [[spoiler: So when the world itself start to be overwritten, it takes her to anotherworld]]universe - specifically, that of ''VideoGame/RaidouKuzunohaVsTheSoullessArmy'']].
** When their first battle with [[spoiler: Camael]] goes south fast, the Arditi don't hesitate in executing the Joestar Family secret technique of throwing up a distraction and retreating in quick order.
** Not Futaba herself, but Necronomicon/Prometheus does this whenever Futaba is in too much danger, taking her to a place it consider "safe". [[spoiler: So when the world itself start to be overwritten, it takes her to another
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** Chapter 52 also suggests a LoveTriangle between Akira, Futaba, and Haru.
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** Chapter 52 also suggests a LoveTriangle between Akira, Futaba, and Haru. Only later does Akira get together with Futaba.
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** In Chapter 56, Akhiko and [[spoiler: Hideki Sanshiro]]'s fight is much like a major fight in VideoGame/{{Yakuza}}.
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** In Chapter 56, Akhiko Akihiko and [[spoiler: Hideki Sanshiro]]'s fight is much like a major fight in VideoGame/{{Yakuza}}.
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* {{Squee}}: [[spoiler: Lavenza]] gets a very big grin when she sees the Trickster ([[VideoGame/Persona5 Akira Kurusu]]), the [[spoiler:Savior ([[VideoGame/Persona3 Minato Arisato]])]], and the Seeker ([[VideoGame/Persona4 Yu Narukami]]) all in the same room.
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* {{Squee}}: No actual squeal, but [[spoiler: Lavenza]] gets a very big grin when she sees the Trickster ([[VideoGame/Persona5 Akira Kurusu]]), the [[spoiler:Savior ([[VideoGame/Persona3 Minato Arisato]])]], and the Seeker ([[VideoGame/Persona4 Yu Narukami]]) all in the same room.
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Though Death 13 is defeated, he uses his last bit of strength to kill Arisawa's Shadow-self, killing the man in the real world and framing the Phantom Thieves for his death]].
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* TakingYouWithMe: TakingYouWithMe:
** [[spoiler: Though Death 13 is defeated, he uses his last bit of strength to kill Arisawa's Shadow-self, killing the man in the real world and framing the Phantom Thieves for hisdeath]].death]].
** Attempted by Sanshiro against Sergio. [[spoiler: In the brief moment before Breakthru knocks him out, Sanshiro throws his Stand [[HotKnife American I]] and nails Sergio in the gut. Luckily, Josuke gets there in time]].
** [[spoiler: Though Death 13 is defeated, he uses his last bit of strength to kill Arisawa's Shadow-self, killing the man in the real world and framing the Phantom Thieves for his
** Attempted by Sanshiro against Sergio. [[spoiler: In the brief moment before Breakthru knocks him out, Sanshiro throws his Stand [[HotKnife American I]] and nails Sergio in the gut. Luckily, Josuke gets there in time]].
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* UndyingLoyalty: Lars Gunsche to Mr. A, due to the latter [[IOweYouMyLife altruistically curing the former's cancer]]. [[spoiler: So much so, in fact, that when Shizuka finally defeats him, Lars chooses to [[DrivenToSuicide slit his own throat]] rather than live with his failure to his boss]].
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** Akira [[TheScream screaming internally.]]
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* AdaptedOut: The Piggytron mech battle.
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* AdaptedOut: The Piggytron mech battle. Shadow Kaneshiro tries to summon it, but Sergio has none of that and breaks the vault it... is. [[GrievousHarmWithABody By repeatedly smacking Shadow Kaneshiro into it]].
* AndHereHeComesNow: During the Shujin Academy trip to Hawaii, Ryuji says that Yusuke (who goes to a different school) would love the view. Cue Yusuke appearing since his school's flight got redirected.
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** The letter opener Akechi gave Sae as a gift. We only learn many chapters later [[spoiler:why it needed to be so sharp]].
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** The letter opener Akechi gave Sae as a gift. We only learn many chapters later [[spoiler:why it needed to be so sharp]].sharp - to have Sae assassinate her boss after Akechi inflicts a breakdown on her]].
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* ConvenientComa: In Chapter 53 [[spoiler: Haru's father is put into a coma after being attacked by a Stand-user, preventing him from revealing the Conspiracy to anyone.]]
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* ConvenientComa: In Chapter 53 [[spoiler: Haru's father is put into a coma after being attacked by a Stand-user, preventing him from revealing the Conspiracy to anyone.]]anyone]].
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* DemotedToExtra: Shadow Kaneshiro tries to summon his Piggytron mecha. Sergio has none of that and breaks the vault it... is. [[GrievousHarmWithABody By repeatedly smacking Shadow Kaneshiro into it]].
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** [[spoiler:The Medjed persona]] fires light elemental ones.
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** [[spoiler:The Medjed persona]] Persona]] fires light elemental ones.
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** Due to a number of changes, Haru fully awakens her Persona right away. On that note, the part where Morgana leaves the Phantom Thieves doesn't happen. (Morgana even got some sushi!)
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** Due to a number of changes, Haru is met earlier and fully awakens her Persona right away. On that note, the part where Morgana leaves the Phantom Thieves doesn't happen. (Morgana even got some sushi!)
* FriendlyFireproof: The Chemical Brothers' main tactic applies, [[spoiler: with one generating vertigo-inducing sound to keep their targets disoriented, leaving them easy pickings for the other's swarm of [[FlyingSeafoodSpecial flying]] {{Piranha|Problem}}, who has to wear earplugs to ward off his brother's sound. Once Shizuka and Makoto figure that out and manage to remove the earplugs, things go south quickly for the Brothers]].
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* HappilyAdopted: Shizuka clearly loves her adopted family who more than reciprocate it in full and then some.
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* HappilyAdopted: Shizuka clearly loves her adopted family family, who more than reciprocate it in full and then some.
* ImpaledPalm: In the middle of a Stand battle, Shizuka inflicts this injury on the enemy Stand, keeping its user from using its palm-activated GroundhogDayLoop powers.
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* LogicalWeakness: As in the video game, Shadow Okumura sends out robot minions from the ceiling. The Thieves eventually realize they can attack the place the robots come from.
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* LogicalWeakness: LogicalWeakness:
** As in the video game, Shadow Okumura sends out robot minions from the ceiling. The Thieves eventually realize they can attack the place the robots come from.
** As in the video game, Shadow Okumura sends out robot minions from the ceiling. The Thieves eventually realize they can attack the place the robots come from.
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* MetronomicManMashing: Done against Paradise City in Chapter 13, causing it to fall apart into chunks while it's caught in a tarp.
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* MetronomicManMashing: Done against Houdini does this to Paradise City in Chapter 13, causing it to fall apart into chunks while it's caught in a tarp.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler: Akira gives one to Akechi for all the shit he made him, Futaba, and Haru go through. The only reason he didn't kill him was Ryuji snapping him out of it.]]
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler: Akira gives one to Akechi for all the shit he made him, Futaba, and Haru go through.through, summoning his many Personas one after the other to deliver the beatdown. The only reason he didn't kill him was Ryuji snapping him out of it.]]
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---> "Oh yes Sugimura, I really do believe you can change."
---> "Y-you do?"
---> "Yes. I believe you can change into a stain on the ground."
---> "Oh yes Sugimura, I really do believe you can change."
---> "Y-you do?"
---> "Yes. I believe you can change into a stain on the ground."
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---> "W-wait '''Cog!Sugimura:''' W-wait Haru! I can change!"
---> "Ohchange!\\
'''Cog!Sugimura:''' Oh yes Sugimura, I really do believe you can change."
---> "Y-you do?"
---> "Yes.\\
'''Cog!Sugimura:''' Y-you do?\\
'''Cog!Sugimura:''' Yes. I believe you can change into a stain on the ground."
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'''Cog!Sugimura:''' Oh yes Sugimura, I really do believe you can change.
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---> "Yes.
'''Cog!Sugimura:''' Y-you do?\\
'''Cog!Sugimura:''' Yes. I believe you can change into a stain on the ground.
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* RageBreakingPoint: [[spoiler: After beating Akechi, just a single thought of everything he did drives Akira past his normally calm demeanor to just start pummeling him into the floor.]]
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* RageBreakingPoint: [[spoiler: After beating Akechi, just a single thought of everything he did drives Akira past his normally calm demeanor to just start pummeling him into the floor.floor, and even start choking him out.]]
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** Later on she declares that this is Prometheus main ability. [[spoiler: Too bad that this is the reason that it can take her against her will to another dimension to escape from Camael's Stand]]
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** Later on she declares that this is Prometheus Prometheus's main ability. [[spoiler: Too bad that this is the reason that it can take her against her will to another dimension to escape from Camael's Stand]]Stand]].
* TheRestShallPass: The final confrontation with Mr. A and his Deadly Aspects involve small groups of the Arditi staying behind to confront each Deadly Aspect while the rest go on to the next.
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Though Death 13 is defeated, he uses his last bit of strength to kill Arisawa's Shadow-self, killing the man in the real world]].
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* TakingYouWithMe: [[spoiler: Though Death 13 is defeated, he uses his last bit of strength to kill Arisawa's Shadow-self, killing the man in the real world]].world and framing the Phantom Thieves for his death]].
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* TiredOfRunning: Satoshi's first encounter with [[spoiler: Mr. A]] ended with [[spoiler: his wife dead, his son obliquely threatened, and Mr. A cowing him into compliance]]. After a battle that leaves the Phantom Thieves in bad shape, Satoshi decides enough is enough and [[spoiler: stages a solo attack on Mr. A's hideout, recording everything to show the Phantom Thieves their opposition, [[SuicideMission knowing full well he won't make it out alive]].]]
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* TiredOfRunning: Satoshi's first encounter with [[spoiler: Mr. A]] ended with [[spoiler: his wife dead, his son obliquely threatened, and Mr. A cowing him into compliance]]. After a battle that leaves the Phantom Thieves in bad shape, Satoshi decides enough is enough and [[spoiler: stages a solo attack on Mr. A's hideout, clearing out the guards and recording everything to show the Phantom Thieves their opposition, [[SuicideMission knowing full well he won't make it out alive]].]]
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* ToonPhysics: [[spoiler: 'Sing you Sinners', Okabe's Stand, make the world function like a Creator/MaxAndDaveFleischer animation in a certin radius, including those inside that radius. While being hurt inside does absolutely nothing life-threatening, once outside the effective range, the injuries become very, very real.]]
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* ToonPhysics: [[spoiler: 'Sing you Sinners', Okabe's Stand, make makes the world function like a Creator/MaxAndDaveFleischer animation in a certin certain radius, including those inside that radius. While being hurt inside does absolutely nothing life-threatening, once outside the effective range, the injuries become very, very real.]]
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* TheVoice: Mr. A, the crime boss of Tokyo, takes pains to keep his identity a secret. If he has to directly communicate to an underling he calls them on the phone from a number that can't be identified. The narration notes he might not even be a [[CollectiveIdentity single]] [[SamusIsAGirl man]].
* WaitWhat: A quick humorous one appears in Chapter 2, when Shizuka's butler Simmons is learning need to know Japanese phrases, the one that elicits the response in question is: [[AccidentalPervert You misunderstand, I wasn't trying to grope you.]]
* WaitWhat: A quick humorous one appears in Chapter 2, when Shizuka's butler Simmons is learning need to know Japanese phrases, the one that elicits the response in question is: [[AccidentalPervert You misunderstand, I wasn't trying to grope you.]]
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* TheVoice: Mr. A, the crime boss of Tokyo, takes pains to keep his identity a secret. If he has to directly communicate to an underling he calls them on the phone from a number that can't be identified. The narration notes he might not even be a [[CollectiveIdentity single]] [[SamusIsAGirl man]]. \n [[spoiler: When he finally appears, he is a real man and a very deadly Stand user.]]
* WaitWhat: A quick humorous one appears in Chapter 2, when Shizuka's butler Simmons is learning need to know Japanese phrases, the one that elicits the response in question is:[[AccidentalPervert "[[AccidentalPervert You misunderstand, I wasn't trying to grope you.]]]]"
* WaitWhat: A quick humorous one appears in Chapter 2, when Shizuka's butler Simmons is learning need to know Japanese phrases, the one that elicits the response in question is:
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** Shiho Suzui didn't do much in canon. Here she becomes a Persona-user and surprisingly displays an aggressive streak.
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** Necronomicon has CombatTentacles [[spoiler: and transdimensional warp capabilities.]].
** Hifumi Togo, the sweet confidant with a chuuni personality and a passion for shogi [[spoiler:has a Stand.]]
** [[spoiler: Sae Niijima is stabbed with the Stand Arrow in order to save her from the influence of a psychotic breakdown, giving her a Stand of her own.]]
** Hifumi Togo, the sweet confidant with a chuuni personality and a passion for shogi [[spoiler:has a Stand.]]
** [[spoiler: Sae Niijima is stabbed with the Stand Arrow in order to save her from the influence of a psychotic breakdown, giving her a Stand of her own.]]
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** Necronomicon has CombatTentacles [[spoiler: and transdimensional warp capabilities.]].
capabilities]].
** Hifumi Togo, the sweetconfidant shogi-playing Confidant with a chuuni personality and a passion for shogi [[spoiler:has a Stand.]]
Stand. Moreover, instead of being a Confidant, she becomes a full-fledged Phantom Thief]].
** [[spoiler: Sae Niijima is stabbed with the Stand Arrow in order to save her from the influence of a psychotic breakdown, giving her a Stand of herown.]]own]].
** Hifumi Togo, the sweet
** [[spoiler: Sae Niijima is stabbed with the Stand Arrow in order to save her from the influence of a psychotic breakdown, giving her a Stand of her
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** Hifumi Togo, in canon, is a confidant who was originally planned to be a main character but was cut out due to time constraints. In the story [[spoiler:She not only is a natural Stand user, but gets recruited to the Phantom Thieves in late September.]]
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** Hifumi Togo, in canon, is a confidant who was originally planned to be a main character but was cut out due to time constraints. In the story [[spoiler:She not this story, [[spoiler:not only is she a natural Stand user, but gets recruited to the Phantom Thieves in late September.]]
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** Being a handsome, cocky Italian with supernatural powers, Sergio is described as being the Caesar to Shizuka's Joseph.
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** Being a handsome, cocky Italian with supernatural powers, Sergio is described as being the Caesar to Shizuka's Joseph. [[spoiler: It later comes up that he is a Zeppeli by blood]].
* RunningIntoTheWindow: Weaponized variant; since Houdini can make anything it touches invisible, one of Shizuka's go-to moves is to drag a heavy barricade (like a dumpster) into the way of a pursuer, turn it invisible, and listen for the inevitable crash.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: Black Mask fails to kill Okumura in his Palace, unlike in canon. Even after another assassination attempt by one of Mr. A's people, Okumura is still very much alive. This also applies to all of the ''Franchise/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' characters (with the exceptions of Rohan and Giorno) that are still alive in Part 6, as Jotaro and Jolyne are able defeat Pucci and stop his plan to reset the world.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: SparedByTheAdaptation:
** [[spoiler: Black Mask fails to kill Okumura in his Palace, unlike in canon. Even after another assassination attempt by one of Mr. A's people, Okumura is still very much alive. ]]
** This also applies to [[spoiler: all of the ''Franchise/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' characters (with the exceptions of Rohan and Giorno) that are still alive in Part 6, as Jotaro and Jolyne are able defeat Pucci and stop his plan to reset the world.]]]]
* {{Squee}}: [[spoiler: Lavenza]] gets a very big grin when she sees the Trickster ([[VideoGame/Persona5 Akira Kurusu]]), the [[spoiler:Savior ([[VideoGame/Persona3 Minato Arisato]])]], and the Seeker ([[VideoGame/Persona4 Yu Narukami]]) all in the same room.
** [[spoiler: Black Mask fails to kill Okumura in his Palace, unlike in canon. Even after another assassination attempt by one of Mr. A's people, Okumura is still very much alive.
** This also applies to [[spoiler: all of the ''Franchise/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' characters (with the exceptions of Rohan and Giorno) that are still alive in Part 6, as Jotaro and Jolyne are able defeat Pucci and stop his plan to reset the world.
* {{Squee}}: [[spoiler: Lavenza]] gets a very big grin when she sees the Trickster ([[VideoGame/Persona5 Akira Kurusu]]), the [[spoiler:Savior ([[VideoGame/Persona3 Minato Arisato]])]], and the Seeker ([[VideoGame/Persona4 Yu Narukami]]) all in the same room.
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* TheMagicTouch: The power of [[spoiler: Sae Nijima's]] Stand, Luck Be A Lady. One touch can turn mundane objects into deadly weapons, such as a Nerf gun into a high-powered sci-fi cannon.
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* MutuallyExclusiveMagic: If one has a Stand or a Persona, they can't have a Shadow or a Palace. [[spoiler: This is why Shizuka's Plan B for Sae Nijima's Shadow going berserk is to stab her with the Stand Arrow, giving her a Stand and thus removing her Shadow.]]
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* TiredOfRunning: Satoshi's first encounter with [[spoiler: Mr. A]] ended with [[spoiler: his wife dead, his son obliquely threatened, and Mr. A cowing him into compliance]]. After a battle that leaves the Phantom Thieves in bad shape, Satoshi decides enough is enough and [[spoiler: stages a solo attack on Mr. A's hideout, recording everything to show the Phantom Thieves their opposition, [[SuicideMission knowing full well he won't make it out alive]].]]
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* BadassInANiceSuit: Sergio/Diabolik's thief costume is a full three-piece suit.
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** Rohan's Heaven's Door becomes pivotal in [[spoiler:helping proving that Akechi is Black Mask and that he work for Shido by reading Okumura's mind]]
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-->''Sanshiro:'' The world is just like that, a big fuckin' thumb pressing down on a section of the people. You can either knuckle under it... or you can ''be'' the thumb.
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* FightingSpirit: It's a Jojo/Persona crossover, so of course you're going to have souls materialised into fighting entities everywhere.
* TheGlomp: What Yukari and Aigis deliver to [[spoiler: Minato]].
* GreenAroundTheGills: Ryuji takes on a "Hulk-ish" tinge to his face when Sergio's Stand Breakthru launches Morgana and all his passengers through Mementos to Kaneshiro's Palace, which is hovering in the air.
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* GuardianEntity: It's a Jojo/Persona crossover, so of course you're going to have summoned spirit guardians everywhere.
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* HoldTheLine: The Sphinx battle, it summons an army of Shadows from the pyramid Palace. Several of the Thieves have to hold back the army of Shadows running to the top of the pyramid while the others deal with the Sphinx.
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* HoldTheLine: HoldTheLine:
** The Sphinx battle, it summons an army of Shadows from the pyramid Palace. Several of the Thieves have to hold back the army of Shadows running to the top of the pyramid while the others deal with theSphinx.Sphinx.
** [[spoiler: SEES, the Investigation Team, and other Stand users like Jotaro and Josuke help guard the Tokyo tower from attacking Angels, to allow the broadcast of the Phantom Thieves to reach everyone in the world.]]
** The Sphinx battle, it summons an army of Shadows from the pyramid Palace. Several of the Thieves have to hold back the army of Shadows running to the top of the pyramid while the others deal with the
** [[spoiler: SEES, the Investigation Team, and other Stand users like Jotaro and Josuke help guard the Tokyo tower from attacking Angels, to allow the broadcast of the Phantom Thieves to reach everyone in the world.]]
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* ImprovFu: This is Shizuka's fighting style. Whether it's by dropping chandeliers on Shadows, creating an invisible cage from metal in Mementos, or distracting enemies by calling them names, Shizuka uses the environment and unconventional tactics to her advantage.
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* ImprovFu: ImprovFu:
** This is Shizuka's fighting style. Whether it's by dropping chandeliers on Shadows, creating an invisible cage from metal in Mementos, or distracting enemies by calling them names, Shizuka uses the environment and unconventional tactics to heradvantage.advantage.
** Sergio's fighting style also is very environment-focused, most commonly by using his Stand Breakthru to send debris shooting at his targets.
** This is Shizuka's fighting style. Whether it's by dropping chandeliers on Shadows, creating an invisible cage from metal in Mementos, or distracting enemies by calling them names, Shizuka uses the environment and unconventional tactics to her
** Sergio's fighting style also is very environment-focused, most commonly by using his Stand Breakthru to send debris shooting at his targets.
* INeverSaidItWasPoison: During their first meeting, Akechi makes reference to going out for pancakes. While an innocuous statement on its face, [[spoiler: Morgana was talking about pancakes earlier, and Shizuka realizes that if Akechi heard Morgana, it would make him either a Persona or a Stand user]].
* InvulnerableKnuckles: Averted. Houdini punching away objects or projectiles causes Shizuka's knuckles to sympathetically bleed.
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** Shizuka renames Achtung Baby to Houdini for this fic, this fits the naming criteria for Stands as Houdini is the name of a song by Music/FosterThePeople, but it ALSO fits the the Persona theme of tricksters and "rebels from society" for VideoGame/Persona5 as per this article about Creator/HarryHoudini himself: [[https://www.theguardian.com/stage/2015/aug/10/houdini-and-conan-doyle-impossible-edinburgh-festival here]].
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** Shizuka renames [[MeaningfulRename renames]] Achtung Baby to Houdini for this fic, this fits the naming criteria for Stands as Houdini is the name of a song by Music/FosterThePeople, but it ALSO fits the the Persona theme of tricksters and "rebels from society" for VideoGame/Persona5 as per this article about Creator/HarryHoudini himself: [[https://www.theguardian.com/stage/2015/aug/10/houdini-and-conan-doyle-impossible-edinburgh-festival here]].
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* MeaningfulRename: Achtung Baby is renamed by Shizuka to Houdini for this fic.
* SacrificialLion: [[spoiler: Dr. Lifeson is killed by Mr. A's goons when they assault the hospital. Not because he was a target, but because he was in the way]].
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--->"With great power, comes great responsibility. [[Franchise/SpiderMan Spider-Man]] [[PopCulturalOsmosisFailure isn't obscure in Japan]], right?"[[note]]Well there's [[SpiderManJapan this...]][[/note]]
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--->"With great power, comes great responsibility. [[Franchise/SpiderMan Spider-Man]] [[PopCulturalOsmosisFailure isn't obscure in Japan]], right?"[[note]]Well there's [[SpiderManJapan [[Series/SpiderManJapan this...]][[/note]]
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** While briefly travelling the multiverse, [[spoiler:Futaba]] ends up in the universe of ''Raidou Kuzunoha'', and also glimpses the words of Steel Ball Run, ''Manga/{{Baoh}}'' and Digital Devil Saga.
** [[VideoGame/DevilMayCry Nero from Devil May Cry]] shows up in an Omake to bail out Junpei and Labrys.
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** While briefly travelling the multiverse, [[spoiler:Futaba]] ends up in the universe of ''Raidou Kuzunoha'', and also glimpses the words of Steel Ball Run, ''Manga/{{Baoh}}'' and Digital ''Digital Devil Saga.
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** Chapter 30 has a subtle one. Akira's Confidant with Shizuka is the Aeon Arcana, and in this chapter he reveals his first Aeon Persona, [[BatOutOfHell Camazotz]]. [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Camazotz Camazotz]] is from Mayan mythology, referencing the {{Mayincatec}} [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood Stone Mask]] and [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureBattleTendency Pillar Men]] from Jojo... and possibly also ''VideoGame/{{Persona 2}}''. [[http://megamitensei.wikia.com/wiki/Camazotz Camzotz]] was an enemy in that game, and its mythological home Xibalba played a role in the plot.
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** Chapter 30 has a subtle one. Akira's Confidant with Shizuka is the Aeon Arcana, and in this chapter he reveals his first Aeon Persona, [[BatOutOfHell Camazotz]]. [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Camazotz Camazotz]] is from Mayan mythology, Myth/MayanMythology, referencing the {{Mayincatec}} [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood Stone Mask]] and [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureBattleTendency Pillar Men]] from Jojo... and possibly also ''VideoGame/{{Persona 2}}''. [[http://megamitensei.wikia.com/wiki/Camazotz Camzotz]] was an enemy in that game, and its mythological home Xibalba played a role in the plot.
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/vanishing-act-jojo-persona-5.514762/reader Vanishing Act]] is a completed ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' and ''VideoGame/Persona5'' crossover by Shocker, where the invisible baby becomes a PhantomThief of Heart.
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/vanishing-act-jojo-persona-5.514762/reader Vanishing Vanishing]] [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/20147704/chapters/47732245 Act]] is a completed ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' and ''VideoGame/Persona5'' crossover by Shocker, where the invisible baby becomes a PhantomThief of Heart.
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** In canon Shizuka was just an invisible baby who could turn other things invisible. Not only is she grown up in this story, but Shizuka's Stand has gained a physical form with the requisite RapidfireFisticuffs.
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** [[spoiler: Sae Niijima is stabbed with the Stand Arrow in order save her from the influence of a psychotic breakdown, giving her a Stand of her own.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: Black Mask fails to kill Okumura in his Palace, unlike in canon. Even after another assassination attempt by one of Mr. A's people, Okumura is still very much alive.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: Black Mask fails to kill Okumura in his Palace, unlike in canon. Even after another assassination attempt by one of Mr. A's people, Okumura is still very much alive. This also applies to all of the ''Franchise/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' characters (with the exceptions of Rohan and Giorno) that are still alive in Part 6, as Jotaro and Jolyne are able defeat Pucci and stop his plan to reset the world.]]
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** The letter opener Akechi gave Sae as a gift. Many, many chapters later is shown [[spoiler:the why it needed to be so sharp]].
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** The rest of the Investigation Team (Yosuke, Chie, Yukiko, Kanji and Teddie) also show up in a later chapter, watching the events from the Amagi Inn.