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* ActionGirl: Flarepaw certainly is this, capable of holding her own in a fight and not being afraid to use intimidation, even if jokingly, on those who wrong her.
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* ActionGirl: Flarepaw certainly is this, capable of holding her own in a fight and not being afraid to use intimidation, even if jokingly, on those who wrong her.
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** Wildpaw, to a lesser extent.
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* TheresNoPlaceLikeHome: The motivation behind the protagonists' journey.
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* VolcanoLair: [=MagmaClan=] lives in underground caverns in the volcanic mountains of their territory.
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* VolcanoLair: [=MagmaClan=] lives in underground caverns in the volcanic mountains of their territory.territory.
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* VillainProtagonist: For one chapter, at least. [[spoiler:In Chapter 8, "Safe", Anemonepaw and co. leave behind Mistle, who had admittedly kidnapped Anemonepaw beforehand, but had done so to provide medical assistance for her own cats. By leaving to return home rather than staying to help these cats, they very well could have doomed them to die.]]
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** TheLeader: Fallenpaw
** TheLancer: Wildpaw
** TheSmartGuy: Anemonepaw
** TheBigGuy: Flarepaw
** TheChick: Mistpaw and Floodpaw
** TheLeader: Fallenpaw
** TheLancer: Wildpaw
** TheSmartGuy: Anemonepaw
** TheBigGuy: Flarepaw
** TheChick: Mistpaw and Floodpaw
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 8, entitled "Safe", is effectively a chapter-length ''[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Series/Firefly Firefly]]'' shout-out, complete with a recreation of the final scene of the episode, [[spoiler: with Anenomepaw, in the role of Simon Tam, being rescued by his friends, with Fallenpaw in place of Malcolm Reynolds, Wildpaw in place of Zoë Washburne, and Flarepaw in place of Jayne Cobb]].
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 8, entitled "Safe", is effectively a chapter-length ''[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Series/Firefly Firefly]]'' shout-out, complete with a recreation of the final scene of the episode, [[spoiler: with Anenomepaw, in the role of Simon Tam, being rescued by his friends, with Fallenpaw in place of Malcolm Reynolds, Wildpaw in place of Zoë Washburne, and Flarepaw in place of Jayne Cobb]].
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 8, entitled "Safe", is effectively a chapter-length ''[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Series/Firefly Firefly]]'' shout-out, complete with a recreation of the final scene of the episode, [[spoiler: with Anenomepaw, in the role of Simon Tam, being rescued by his friends, with Fallenpaw in place of Malcolm Reynolds, Wildpaw in place of Zoë Washburne, and Flarepaw in place of Jayne Cobb]].
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 8, entitled "Safe", is effectively a chapter-length ''[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Series/Firefly Firefly]]'' shout-out, complete with a recreation of the final scene of the episode, [[spoiler: with Anenomepaw, in the role of Simon Tam, being rescued by his friends, with Fallenpaw in place of Malcolm Reynolds, Wildpaw in place of Zoë Washburne, and Flarepaw in place of Jayne Cobb]].
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Their Journey was published on FanfictionDotNet on the 31st of January, 2015.
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Their Journey was published on FanfictionDotNet Website/FanFictionDotNet on the 31st of January, 2015.
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* BaitAndSwitch: The end of Chapter 12 seems to show Flarepaw [spoiler: after she runs away]]. It actually shows [[spoiler: Blackshadow]].
* BeachEpisode: Chapter 10 is basically this. The author
* BeachEpisode: Chapter 10 is basically this. The author
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* BaitAndSwitch: The end of Chapter 12 seems to show follow Flarepaw [spoiler: [[spoiler: after she runs away]]. It actually shows follows [[spoiler: Blackshadow]].
* BeachEpisode: Chapter 10 is basically this. The authorBlackshadow]].
* BeachEpisode: Chapter 10 is basically this. The author
* BackForTheDead: [[spoiler: Flarepaw returns for one appearance after she runs away, and she's dead.]]
** Chapter 16, appropriately called "Recollections", is full of these.
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* [[spoiler: DealWithTheDevil]]: [[spoiler: Blackshadow makes one with a mysterious entity in order to come back to life.]]
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* SourOutsideSadInside: Implied to be the case for Flarepaw.
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* SourOutsideSadInside: Implied Flarepaw houses a lot of inner anger and frustration pertaining to be her childhood and treatment in the case for Flarepaw.Clans.
* StarCrossedLovers: By the time Fallenpaw and Flarepaw begin to realize their love, [[spoiler: Flarepaw has run away and eventually dies without ever seeing Fallenpaw again.]]
* StarCrossedLovers: By the time Fallenpaw and Flarepaw begin to realize their love, [[spoiler: Flarepaw has run away and eventually dies without ever seeing Fallenpaw again.]]
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* BaitAndSwitch: The end of Chapter 12 seems to show Flarepaw [spoiler: after she runs away]]. It actually shows [[spoiler: Blackshadow]].
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* TheresNoPlaceLikeHome: The motivation behind the protagonists' journey.
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* Cliffhanger: Chapters often end with these, to the point where the author [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] her use of them in the author's notes.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Implied to be the case for Flarepaw.
* DramaticThunder: The prologue is set during a terrible storm,
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Implied to be the case for Flarepaw.
* DramaticThunder: The prologue is set during a terrible storm,
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* CallBack: The first chapter where the apprentices are gone is called ''Swept Away''. The chapter where they return to the Gathering place they'd been swept away from is appropriately called ''Swept Back''.
* Cliffhanger: Chapters often end withthese, to the point where the these. The author [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] notes her use of them in the author's notes.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Implied to be the case forFlarepaw.
Flarepaw. [[spoiler: Later revealed to be the case, having seen her sister seemingly die before her eyes and left alone as a former rogue in a hot-tempered Clan.]]
* [[spoiler: DealWithTheDevil]]: [[spoiler: Blackshadow makes one with a mysterious entity in order to come back to life.]]
* DramaticThunder: The prologue is set during a terrible storm, a prelude to the flood that sweeps the apprentices away.
* Cliffhanger: Chapters often end with
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Implied to be the case for
* [[spoiler: DealWithTheDevil]]: [[spoiler: Blackshadow makes one with a mysterious entity in order to come back to life.]]
* DramaticThunder: The prologue is set during a terrible storm, a prelude to the flood that sweeps the apprentices away.
