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* OutDamnedSpot: After Pinkie Pie's idea to use Dimmed Star's Ink in a non-destructive way leads to the latter becoming possessed and nearly killing her, Pinkie secludes herself in the bathroom to wash herself of the Ink she was covered in. The trauma causes her to vigorously wash herself over again, and she later does it again by using rainwater.


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* ScrubbingOffTheTrauma: After Pinkie Pie's idea to use Dimmed Star's Ink in a non-destructive way leads to the latter becoming possessed and nearly killing her, Pinkie secludes herself in the bathroom to wash herself of the Ink she was covered in. The trauma causes her to vigorously wash herself over and over again and she later does it again by using rainwater.
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* AdultFear: For Night Light and Twilight Velvet; their son ends up in a coma when their daughter nearly kills him, and she's put on trial for that as well as killing many others.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Dimmed Star, Business Savvy, Brutus Meadows.

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* ImplicitPrison: Though Princess Luna was welcomed back by her sister right after she stopped being Nightmare Moon, the governing council insisted on having her answer for the crimes she committed after her release from the moon. After much struggle between Celestia and the council, Luna was sentenced to a house arrest of two years, obliged to being accompanied by armed guard at all times, and wearing a magic-sealing ring outside performing her nocturnal duties. The last Nightmare Night was the only time Celestia was able to get Luna out of these restrictions.



* RealityEnsues:
** Though Princess Luna was welcomed back by her sister right after she stopped being Nightmare Moon, the governing council insisted on having her answer for the crimes she committed after her release from the moon. After much struggle between Celestia and the council, Luna was sentenced to a house arrest of two years, obliged to being accompanied by armed guard at all times, and wearing a magic-sealing ring outside performing her nocturnal duties. The last Nightmare Night was the only time Celestia was able to get Luna out of these restrictions.
** Cadance spends an entire night studying laws in order to act as Dimmed Star's defence attorney. She falls asleep and is woken up by Luna after Dimmed Star has left the courtroom.

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** ''Mares on a Mission'' — Steel Blitz requests to speak privately with Mayor Mare and Cheerilee.



* DeathGlare: When Hasty Vote is about to reprimand the sobbing Twilight Velvet, she loses all her bravado for a significant while when the awakened Dimmed Star glares at her over her mother's shoulder.

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When Hasty Vote is about to reprimand the sobbing Twilight Velvet, she loses all her bravado for a significant while when the awakened Dimmed Star glares at her over her mother's shoulder.shoulder.
** Cheerilee delivers one for Mayor Mare while ranting to the latter about how ineffective Ponyville's town guard has become.
--->''Cheerilee's eye narrowed dangerously, causing the Mayor’s voices to choke up as her ears began to lay flat against her skull. A feeling of dread washed over her as Cheerilee's unblinking eyes stared into her very being. She knew this feeling well, ''everypony'' knew this feeling. There wasn’t a student in Equestria that hadn't been subjected to ''the look'' at least once in their lives. The disapproving, reproachful eyes of their teacher that had just found them doing something that they weren’t supposed to, it made her heart pound thunderously in her chest as she suddenly felt as though she were still a filly in class.''



* PoliceAreUseless: Ponyville's town guard has grown soft since the Mane Six started taking care of threats. When Cheerilee needs a guard to accompany her to Scootaloo's home, there's nopony at the guard house. [[spoiler:Given [[TilMurderDoUsPart what she discovers]] and [[HeKnowsTooMuch what nearly happens to herself]], she really would have needed a guard to protect her.]]

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* PoliceAreUseless: Ponyville's town guard has grown soft since the Mane Six started taking care of threats. When Cheerilee needs a guard to accompany her to Scootaloo's home, there's nopony at the guard house. [[spoiler:Given [[TilMurderDoUsPart what she discovers]] and [[HeKnowsTooMuch what nearly happens to herself]], she really would have needed a guard to protect her.]]]] After this happens, she makes a point to rip into Mayor Mare about how the guard must be whipped back into shape.
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* LotsOfLuggage: Pack Rat travels from Canterlot to Ponyville with two luggage carts loaded with suitcases and one with duffel bags.


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* NiceToTheWaiter: When Pack Rat yells at a young porter for not having brought him his luggage, Steel Blitz steps in and gives the porter a tip while nicely asking him to retrieve Pack Rat's belongings.


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** Steel Blitz tells Pack Rat "That. Is. ''Enough''!" while ordering him to stop harassing a porter over his luggage.


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* YouAreGrounded: After Spike [[spoiler:wakes up Scootaloo back to her painful condition]] even though Zecora warned him to [[spoiler:let the injured filly sleep]], Dimmed Star grounds him.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Apple Bloom whenever she blushes in Spike's proximity.
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* AuraVision: Zecora is able to use her magic to see Dimmed Star's dark aura.
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* EvilLaugh: When the Entity drives Dimmed Star into attacking Pinkie Pie in the 24th chapter, it laughs grotesquely within her subconscious.


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* LightIsGood: Dimmed Star's positive emotions take the form of a glowing light that prevents the Entity from completely possessing her.
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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:As Brutus lies dying in the 28th chapter, [[MyLifeFlashedBeforeMyEyes he has flashbacks]] of the kinder stallion he used to be and how he turned into the abusive foster father and uxoricide we've come to know him as, causing him to [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone seriously regret what he has become]]. He then hallucinates meeting Scootaloo for whom he tries to apologise, only to be tortured by the decayed filly and his similarly grotesque wife. In the next chapter, he's dead. Though he gets to express remorse before dying, it still doesn't wash away the severity of his actions.]]

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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:As Brutus lies dying in the 28th chapter, [[MyLifeFlashedBeforeMyEyes he has flashbacks]] of the kinder stallion he used to be and how he turned into the abusive foster father and uxoricide we've come to know him as, causing him to [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone seriously regret what he has become]]. He then hallucinates meeting Scootaloo for whom he tries to apologise, only to be tortured by the decayed filly and his similarly grotesque wife. In the next chapter, he's dead. Though he gets to express remorse before dying, it still doesn't wash away the severity of his actions.]]



* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Brutus Meadows abuses his adoptive daughter Scootaloo, kills his wife Vibrant Glow, and tries to kill Cheerilee just to get away with it all. He's then excessively mangled by Dimmed Star, resulting in him bleeding to death.]]

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* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Brutus Meadows abuses his adoptive daughter Scootaloo, kills his wife Vibrant Glow, and tries to kill Cheerilee just to get away with it all. He's then excessively mangled by Dimmed Star, resulting in him bleeding to death. Though he gets to express remorse before dying, he never gets a chance to make up for his bad deeds.]]
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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:As Brutus lies dying in the 28th chapter, [[MyLifeFlashedBeforeMyEyes he has flashbacks]] of the kinder stallion he used to be and how he turned into the abusive foster father and uxoricide we've come to know him as, causing him to [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone seriously regret what he has become]]. He then hallucinates meeting Scootaloo for whom he tries to apologise, only to be tortured by the decayed filly and his similarly grotesque wife. In the next chapter, he's dead.]]

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* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:As Brutus lies dying in the 28th chapter, [[MyLifeFlashedBeforeMyEyes he has flashbacks]] of the kinder stallion he used to be and how he turned into the abusive foster father and uxoricide we've come to know him as, causing him to [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone seriously regret what he has become]]. He then hallucinates meeting Scootaloo for whom he tries to apologise, only to be tortured by the decayed filly and his similarly grotesque wife. In the next chapter, he's dead. Though he gets to express remorse before dying, it still doesn't wash away the severity of his actions.]]
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** When he was younger, Shining Armor got beaten up by two stallions when he stopped them from robbing a mare. Twilight, a filly at the time, afterwards cried against his chest while calling him stupid for risking his life like that.
** When Spike finally accepts that Dimmed Star is Twilight, he cries against her chest.


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** Rainbow Dash ends up crying into Fluttershy's chest when she thinks [[spoiler:Scootaloo]] is dead.

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%%* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Brutus Meadows]]

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%%* * AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Brutus Meadows]]Meadows abuses his adoptive daughter Scootaloo, kills his wife Vibrant Glow, and tries to kill Cheerilee just to get away with it all. He's then excessively mangled by Dimmed Star, resulting in him bleeding to death.]]


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* TheNoseKnows: As a dragon, Spike has a superb sense of smell. It's used in the 29th chapter to find [[spoiler:Scottaloo]] from the Everfree Forest.


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* SuperSenses:
** As a dragon, Spike has a keen hearing and sense of smell.
** Downplayed with Dimmed Star whose senses aren't much better than with ordinary ponies. She's able to locate [[spoiler:Brutus' house]] by following the strong reek of alcohol and sweat [[spoiler:Brutus]] left behind while chasing [[spoiler:Cheerilee]], but she needs Spike's help to follow [[spoiler:Scootaloo's]] trail in the Everfree Forest.


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* TheyHaveTheScent: In the 29th chapter, Spike uses his sense of smell to track down [[spoiler:Scootaloo]] in the Everfree Forest.

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%%* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Brutus Meadows]]



* EarAche: In the 23th chapter, Brutus bites Scootaloo's ear and drags her from it so hard that its top half becomes torn. [[spoiler:Zecora has to remove the top half since [[AmputationStopsSpread it has become necrotic]].]]

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* EarAche: In the 23th chapter, Brutus bites Scootaloo's ear and drags her from it so hard that its top half becomes torn. [[spoiler:Zecora has to (painfully) remove the top half since [[AmputationStopsSpread it has become necrotic]].]]


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* PummelingTheCorpse: Rainbow Dash, desperate to find [[spoiler:Scootaloo]], suddenly attacks the already dead [[spoiler:Brutus]] in an effort to wake him up and make him tell her where [[spoiler:the filly]] is. Applejack and Big Macintosh need to pull her off and pin her to the ground.


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* ThatLiarLies: When Dimmed Star is finished recounting her side of what has happened in regards to [[spoiler:Cheerilee, Brutus and his collapsed house]], Rainbow Dash accuses her of lying because she doesn't want to believe that [[spoiler:Scootaloo isn't safe and sound at school]]. Applejack states that Dimmed Star hasn't lied at all, adding that they can still get from Cheerilee her side of things.

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