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* TheConspiracy: [[spoiler:The USN ''does'' have a ship girl division, and it's being kept secret. There are two reasons for this. The first is the implication that the Abyssal fleet (or at least, the ones shown so far) is comprised of the vengeful spirits of American ship girls. The second is that the ship girl program was '''nowhere''' as successful as their counterparts in other nations. [[note]]The number of known USN shipgirls amount to single digits, and that's out of the hundreds, if not thousands of summoning attempts. The failure failures resulted in either nothing happening, or the summoning of fairies for a USN ship girl that never materialized. The USN is thus publicly writing the program off and calling it a complete failure just to save face.face, while keeping the continued existence of the program, and all the ship girls they've summoned, a secret.[[/note]] ]]
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* TheMenFirst: Deconstructed with Admiral Shimada. He prioritised the lives of his ship girls and had them retreat over ordering them into a SenselessSacrifice of a battle they had no chance of winning. Unfortunately, because said sacrifice would in theory have bought time for the civilians to evacuate, he ended up disgraced and hated both InUniverse and out.
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* TheMenFirst: Deconstructed with Admiral Shimada. Putting the welfare and lives of your men first and refusing to throw their lives away for nothing sounds noble at first glance, but doing so does not occur in a vacuum and has consequences. He prioritised the lives of his ship girls and had them retreat over ordering them into a SenselessSacrifice of a battle they had no chance of winning. Unfortunately, because said sacrifice would in theory have bought time for the civilians to evacuate, he ended up disgraced and hated both InUniverse and out.
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* DirtyBusiness: [[spoiler:Yvonne and the other American ship girls hate having to conceal their true natures, but it was a direct order from their superiors.]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: In chapter 8 Yvonne lays into Dakota for [[spoiler:her unauthorised spilling the beans about the US ship girl programme to Yamato]].
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 6. [[spoiler: Another super-Abyssal joins the fray. Hints are dropped that at least some Abyssal ringleaders are vengeful spirits. Yamato sorties into battle and is mortally wounded, and it's revealed thatthat Yvonne isn't a human officer, she's a shipgirl: USS ''Enterprise'', CV-6. And by the time reinforcements arrive, both Yamato and Enterprise are missing in action, presumed dead.]].
* WhamLine: The end of chapter 4.
--> "Admiral, they’ve… [[spoiler:it… it s-sank the Hood.”]]
* WiseBeyondTheirYears: Hibiki, very much so. ''No one'' noticed this until Tenryuu finally noticed it in the aftermath of the internet incident, noting that Hibiki probably had seen a LOT of things as Verniy.
* YanksWithTanks: The US Navy took a massive beating in the early days of the war, with both Pearl Harbor and Norfolk attacked by Abyssals, and the loss of nearly the entire fleet. [[note]]Nine out of eleven carriers, 70 surface warships, and almost the entire submarine fleet. [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/kantai-collection-the-greatest-generation.17091/page-3#post-3303253 Analysis here]].[[/note]] That said, the US is still contributing to the war effort with the US Air Force, who've taken up the antishipping mission formerly held by the US Navy.
** [[spoiler: And now as of Chapter 6 it turns out the US Navy ''does'' have a shipgirl of its own in the form of ''Enterprise'', aka Yvonne Swanson. Immediately followed by the appearances of two more US ship girls in O'Bannon and San Diego. Chapter 7 confirms that Yvonne's friend Dakota Leigh Gatch is actually the battleship South Dakota.]]
* WhamLine: The end of chapter 4.
--> "Admiral, they’ve… [[spoiler:it… it s-sank the Hood.”]]
* WiseBeyondTheirYears: Hibiki, very much so. ''No one'' noticed this until Tenryuu finally noticed it in the aftermath of the internet incident, noting that Hibiki probably had seen a LOT of things as Verniy.
* YanksWithTanks: The US Navy took a massive beating in the early days of the war, with both Pearl Harbor and Norfolk attacked by Abyssals, and the loss of nearly the entire fleet. [[note]]Nine out of eleven carriers, 70 surface warships, and almost the entire submarine fleet. [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/kantai-collection-the-greatest-generation.17091/page-3#post-3303253 Analysis here]].[[/note]] That said, the US is still contributing to the war effort with the US Air Force, who've taken up the antishipping mission formerly held by the US Navy.
** [[spoiler: And now as of Chapter 6 it turns out the US Navy ''does'' have a shipgirl of its own in the form of ''Enterprise'', aka Yvonne Swanson. Immediately followed by the appearances of two more US ship girls in O'Bannon and San Diego. Chapter 7 confirms that Yvonne's friend Dakota Leigh Gatch is actually the battleship South Dakota.]]
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** [[spoiler:Yvonne claims that her old Commanding Officer told her 'Hit hard, hit fast, hit often'. The quote is attributed to William Halsey Jr, who commanded a special task group during WW2 centering on the Enterprise. It also doubles as a ShoutOut to [[Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls Pacific]], whose ''Enterprise'' uses this quote as her motto, and is the version of an ''Enterprise'' ship girl that Yvonne is based on.]]
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* WhamLine: The end of chapter 4.
--> "Admiral, they’ve… [[spoiler:it… it s-sank the Hood.”]]
* WiseBeyondTheirYears: Hibiki, very much so. ''No one'' noticed this until Tenryuu finally noticed it in the aftermath of the internet incident, noting that Hibiki probably had seen a LOT of things as Verniy.
* YanksWithTanks: The US Navy took a massive beating in the early days of the war, with both Pearl Harbor and Norfolk attacked by Abyssals, and the loss of nearly the entire fleet. [[note]]Nine out of eleven carriers, 70 surface warships, and almost the entire submarine fleet. [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/kantai-collection-the-greatest-generation.17091/page-3#post-3303253 Analysis here]].[[/note]] That said, the US is still contributing to the war effort with the US Air Force, who've taken up the antishipping mission formerly held by the US Navy.
** [[spoiler: And now as of Chapter 6 it turns out the US Navy ''does'' have a shipgirl of its own in the form of ''Enterprise'', aka Yvonne Swanson. Immediately followed by the appearances of two more US ship girls in O'Bannon and San Diego. Chapter 7 confirms that Yvonne's friend Dakota Leigh Gatch is actually the battleship South Dakota.]]
* WhamLine: The end of chapter 4.
--> "Admiral, they’ve… [[spoiler:it… it s-sank the Hood.”]]
* WiseBeyondTheirYears: Hibiki, very much so. ''No one'' noticed this until Tenryuu finally noticed it in the aftermath of the internet incident, noting that Hibiki probably had seen a LOT of things as Verniy.
* YanksWithTanks: The US Navy took a massive beating in the early days of the war, with both Pearl Harbor and Norfolk attacked by Abyssals, and the loss of nearly the entire fleet. [[note]]Nine out of eleven carriers, 70 surface warships, and almost the entire submarine fleet. [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/kantai-collection-the-greatest-generation.17091/page-3#post-3303253 Analysis here]].[[/note]] That said, the US is still contributing to the war effort with the US Air Force, who've taken up the antishipping mission formerly held by the US Navy.
** [[spoiler: And now as of Chapter 6 it turns out the US Navy ''does'' have a shipgirl of its own in the form of ''Enterprise'', aka Yvonne Swanson. Immediately followed by the appearances of two more US ship girls in O'Bannon and San Diego. Chapter 7 confirms that Yvonne's friend Dakota Leigh Gatch is actually the battleship South Dakota.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 6. [[spoiler: Another super-Abyssal joins the fray. Hints are dropped that at least some Abyssal ringleaders are vengeful spirits. Yamato sorties into battle and is mortally wounded, and it's revealed that Yvonne isn't a human officer, she's a shipgirl: USS ''Enterprise'', CV-6. And by the time reinforcements arrive, both Yamato and Enterprise are missing in action, presumed dead.]].
* WhamLine: The end of chapter 4.
--> "Admiral, they’ve… [[spoiler:it… it s-sank the Hood.”]]
* WiseBeyondTheirYears: Hibiki, very much so. ''No one'' noticed this until Tenryuu finally noticed it in the aftermath of the internet incident, noting that Hibiki probably had seen a LOT of things as Verniy.
* YanksWithTanks: The US Navy took a massive beating in the early days of the war, with both Pearl Harbor and Norfolk attacked by Abyssals, and the loss of nearly the entire fleet. [[note]]Nine out of eleven carriers, 70 surface warships, and almost the entire submarine fleet. [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/kantai-collection-the-greatest-generation.17091/page-3#post-3303253 Analysis here]].[[/note]] That said, the US is still contributing to the war effort with the US Air Force, who've taken up the antishipping mission formerly held by the US Navy.
** [[spoiler: And now as of Chapter 6 it turns out the US Navy ''does'' have a shipgirl of its own in the form of ''Enterprise'', aka Yvonne Swanson. Immediately followed by the appearances of two more US ship girls in O'Bannon and San Diego. Chapter 7 confirms that Yvonne's friend Dakota Leigh Gatch is actually the battleship South Dakota.]]
* WhamLine: The end of chapter 4.
--> "Admiral, they’ve… [[spoiler:it… it s-sank the Hood.”]]
* WiseBeyondTheirYears: Hibiki, very much so. ''No one'' noticed this until Tenryuu finally noticed it in the aftermath of the internet incident, noting that Hibiki probably had seen a LOT of things as Verniy.
* YanksWithTanks: The US Navy took a massive beating in the early days of the war, with both Pearl Harbor and Norfolk attacked by Abyssals, and the loss of nearly the entire fleet. [[note]]Nine out of eleven carriers, 70 surface warships, and almost the entire submarine fleet. [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/kantai-collection-the-greatest-generation.17091/page-3#post-3303253 Analysis here]].[[/note]] That said, the US is still contributing to the war effort with the US Air Force, who've taken up the antishipping mission formerly held by the US Navy.
** [[spoiler: And now as of Chapter 6 it turns out the US Navy ''does'' have a shipgirl of its own in the form of ''Enterprise'', aka Yvonne Swanson. Immediately followed by the appearances of two more US ship girls in O'Bannon and San Diego. Chapter 7 confirms that Yvonne's friend Dakota Leigh Gatch is actually the battleship South Dakota.]]
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* WeHaveReserves: The Abyssals have always had seemingly endless numbers to throw at mankind. Best demonstrated in chapter 6, where [[spoiler:the Abyssal Ringleader uses six ''carrier strike groups'' as bait to lure Yamato out.]]
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** A big one in chapter 5 [[spoiler: Attempting to sink ''Bismarck'' in the exact same manner and at the exact same location as her namesake. When the ''Hood'' intervenes and saves the ''Bismarck'', an Abyssal super-sub, taking a page out of the playbook of [=USS=] "Hit 'em again" ''Harder'', plows through several of ''Hood''s escorts while no-selling their depth charges, and re-enacts the deck-penetrating magazine-detonating shot that sunk the original ''Hood'' by '''JUMPING OUT OF THE WATER AND LAUNCHING A TORPEDO AT HOOD'S FACE, BLOWING HER HEAD CLEAN OFF'''. ]] This alone causes Yvonne to realize that the repeats/re-enactments were happening in the first place, and causes her to go back and get info on ALL of the previous incidents.
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* TheReveal: Chapter 6 has one in the form of [[spoiler: Yvonne's true identity being none other than that of USS ''Enterprise'' CV-6, aka "The Grey Ghost".]] And since cat's out of the bag after that, the interlude after chapter 7 casually reveals [[spoiler:2 more US shipgirls: the San Diego and the O'Bannon]].
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* TheReveal: Chapter 6 has one in the form of [[spoiler: Yvonne's true identity being none other than that of USS ''Enterprise'' CV-6, aka "The Grey Ghost".]] And since cat's out of the bag after that, the interlude after chapter 7 casually reveals [[spoiler:2 more US shipgirls: the San Diego USSs ''San Diego'' and the O'Bannon]].''O'Bannon'']].
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** Here's the A big one in chapter 5 that led to Yvonne realizing that the repeats/re-enactments were happening in the first place, and causes her to go back and get info on ALL of the previous incidents. [[spoiler: Attempting to sink ''Bismarck'' in the exact same manner and at the exact same location as her namesake. When the ''Hood'' intervenes and saves the ''Bismarck'', an Abyssal super-sub, taking a page out of the playbook of [=USS=] "Hit 'em again" ''Harder'', plows through several of ''Hood''s escorts while no-selling their depth charges, and re-enacts the deck-penetrating magazine-detonating shot that sunk the original ''Hood'' by '''JUMPING OUT OF THE WATER AND LAUNCHING A TORPEDO AT HOOD'S FACE, BLOWING HER HEAD CLEAN OFF'''. ]]]] This alone causes Yvonne to realize that the repeats/re-enactments were happening in the first place, and causes her to go back and get info on ALL of the previous incidents.
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** A Here's the big one in chapter 5.5 that led to Yvonne realizing that the repeats/re-enactments were happening in the first place, and causes her to go back and get info on ALL of the previous incidents. [[spoiler: Attempting to sink ''Bismarck'' in the exact same manner and at the exact same location as her namesake. When the ''Hood'' intervenes and saves the ''Bismarck'', an Abyssal super-sub, taking a page out of the playbook of [=USS=] "Hit 'em again" ''Harder'', plows through several of ''Hood''s escorts while no-selling their depth charges, and re-enacts the deck-penetrating magazine-detonating shot that sunk the original ''Hood'' by '''JUMPING OUT OF THE WATER AND LAUNCHING A TORPEDO AT HOOD'S FACE, BLOWING HER HEAD CLEAN OFF'''. ]]
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* HoneyTrap: [[spoiler:As the American Joint Chiefs are trying to figure out how to keep Yamato from blowing the cover on their ship girls, one of them casually suggests Enterprise should try and see if [[GirlsLove she swings that way.]]]]
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** [[spoiler: She has another one in a later chapter where she imagines a worst-case scenario of her not watching her diet, turning her into a big, ugly, and fat monstrous version of herself that gets killed in one hit by an Abyssal torpedo.]]
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** [[spoiler: She has another one in a A later chapter where she imagines [[spoiler:recounts her having imagined a worst-case scenario of her not watching her diet, turning her into a big, ugly, and fat monstrous version of herself that gets killed in one hit by an Abyssal torpedo.]]
* EtTuBrute: In chapter 8 [[spoiler:Yvonne expresses her fear that Yamato will take the concealment of her true identity as a betrayal of trust.]]
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** [[spoiler:Being good with a bow for recreational hunting is one thing. But good enough to stand against the carrier girls who train to fight with it? And not just that, but to perfectly execute kyudo?`]]
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** [[spoiler:Being good with a bow for recreational hunting is one thing. But good enough to stand against the carrier girls who train to fight with it? And not just that, but to perfectly execute kyudo?`]]kyudo?]]
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* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: In chapter two [[spoiler:Yvonne has to force Yamato to confront her issues after three things happen in rapid succession: 1) Zuikaku delivers a blistering tirade over America's failure to summon ship girls just moments after Yamato had promised that the base would offer every courtesy to Yvonne. 2) Akatsuki embarrasses [=DesDiv Six=] with her malapropers-turned-innuendo. 3) Yvonne and Matsuda unintentionally fire a barrage of barbs that remind Yamato of her uselessness.]]
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* GetAHoldOfYourselfMan: GetAHoldOfYourselfMan:
** In chapter two [[spoiler:Yvonne has to force Yamato to confront her issues after three things happen in rapid succession: 1) Zuikaku delivers a blistering tirade over America's failure to summon ship girls just moments after Yamato had promised that the base would offer every courtesy to Yvonne. 2) Akatsuki embarrasses [=DesDiv Six=] with her malapropers-turned-innuendo. 3) Yvonne and Matsuda unintentionally fire a barrage of barbs that remind Yamato of her uselessness.]]
** In chapter two [[spoiler:Yvonne has to force Yamato to confront her issues after three things happen in rapid succession: 1) Zuikaku delivers a blistering tirade over America's failure to summon ship girls just moments after Yamato had promised that the base would offer every courtesy to Yvonne. 2) Akatsuki embarrasses [=DesDiv Six=] with her malapropers-turned-innuendo. 3) Yvonne and Matsuda unintentionally fire a barrage of barbs that remind Yamato of her uselessness.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: Bismarck enters one after Hood is killed while trying to save her]].
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* HeroicBSOD: HeroicBSOD:
** [[spoiler: Bismarck enters one after Hood is killed while trying to save her]].
** [[spoiler: Bismarck enters one after Hood is killed while trying to save her]].
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* MeaningfulName: At the end of chapter 6, the author's notes spell out the etymology of [[spoiler:Yvonne's cover name.]]
** [[spoiler:Dakota's full name would be another one. The "Leigh Gatch" part references to Captain [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thomas_Leigh_Gatch Thomas Leigh Gatch]].]]
** [[spoiler:Dakota's full name would be another one. The "Leigh Gatch" part references to Captain [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thomas_Leigh_Gatch Thomas Leigh Gatch]].]]
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* MeaningfulName: MeaningfulName:
** At the end of chapter 6, the author's notes spell out the etymology of [[spoiler:Yvonne's cover name.]]
** [[spoiler:Dakota's full name would be another one. The "Leigh Gatch" partreferences refers to Captain [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thomas_Leigh_Gatch Thomas Leigh Gatch]].]]
** At the end of chapter 6, the author's notes spell out the etymology of [[spoiler:Yvonne's cover name.]]
** [[spoiler:Dakota's full name would be another one. The "Leigh Gatch" part
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: In chapter 3 [[spoiler:[=DesDiv=] Six's theft of Yvonne's tablet, intended to clear Tenryuu's name, not only fails to do so, but in fact gets them in trouble too.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: MythologyGag: In ''Interlude - Schadenfreude'', "What do you take me for, some kind of gluttonous fiend?"
* NiceJobBreakingItHero:
** In chapter 3 [[spoiler:[=DesDiv=] Six's theft of Yvonne's tablet, intended to clear Tenryuu's name, not only fails to do so, but in fact gets them in trouble too.]]]]
** In chapter 8 Dakota's attempt to [[spoiler:help Yvonne break the existence of the American ship girl programme to Yamato only creates more problems.]] It's apparently a bad habit of hers.
--> She may have always had good intentions, but sometimes good intentions weren't enough.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero:
** In chapter 3 [[spoiler:[=DesDiv=] Six's theft of Yvonne's tablet, intended to clear Tenryuu's name, not only fails to do so, but in fact gets them in trouble too.
** In chapter 8 Dakota's attempt to [[spoiler:help Yvonne break the existence of the American ship girl programme to Yamato only creates more problems.]] It's apparently a bad habit of hers.
--> She may have always had good intentions, but sometimes good intentions weren't enough.
** The US President is [[Series/TheWestWing Bartlett]].
** The names of the US Joint Chiefs of Staff is a veritable fusillade of these:
*** [[Franchise/{{Stargate}} O'Neil]]
*** [[Film/TheRock Hummel]]
*** [[VideoGame/ModernWarfare Shepard]]
*** [[VideoGame/CallOfDutyBlackOpsII Briggs]]
*** [[ComicBook/TheIncredibleHulk Ross]]
** The names of the US Joint Chiefs of Staff is a veritable fusillade of these:
*** [[Franchise/{{Stargate}} O'Neil]]
*** [[Film/TheRock Hummel]]
*** [[VideoGame/ModernWarfare Shepard]]
*** [[VideoGame/CallOfDutyBlackOpsII Briggs]]
*** [[ComicBook/TheIncredibleHulk Ross]]
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* SoundtrackDissonance: Chapter 6. End with [[spoiler:Another Abyssal Ringleader having bombed Okinawa, with Yamato and Yvonne/Enterprise missing and presumed to be dead]]. The author then immediately after that posts [[https://youtu.be/n25JfP_curk this cute little video.]]
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* SoundtrackDissonance: Chapter 6. End with [[spoiler:Another [[spoiler:another Abyssal Ringleader having bombed Okinawa, with Yamato and Yvonne/Enterprise missing and presumed to be dead]]. The author then immediately after that posts [[https://youtu.be/n25JfP_curk this cute little video.]]
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* ThatCameOutWrong:
** Tenryuu goes beet red in ''Interlude - Schadenfreude'' after a certain awkward phrase.
** General Ross's reaction in chapter 8 when he realises that he sounded like he wanted to [[spoiler:have Yamato "silenced".]]
** Tenryuu goes beet red in ''Interlude - Schadenfreude'' after a certain awkward phrase.
** General Ross's reaction in chapter 8 when he realises that he sounded like he wanted to [[spoiler:have Yamato "silenced".]]
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** Quite possibly one for another Kancolle fanfic, in this case ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'': [[spoiler: Yvonne's true identity as that fic's version of ''Enterprise'']].
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** Chapter 8 introduces the USS ''Independence'', [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Independence_(LCS-2) lead ship]] of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Independence-class_littoral_combat_ship her class]] of littoral combat ships. [[spoiler:She was heavily modified to serve as a support ship for the US Navy's ship girl fleet.]]
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* KingIncognito: [[spoiler:All the known American shipgirls thus far are all covertly working in various US Navy departments. Enterprise (Yvonne) works in Office of Naval Intelligence, South Dakota (Dakota) works in Advanced Naval Weapon R&D Divison, O'Bannon works in Naval Construction Force, and San Diego is helping with Kitty Hawk reactivation, particularly with AA armament.]].
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* KingIncognito: [[spoiler:All the known American shipgirls thus far are all covertly working in various US Navy departments. Enterprise (Yvonne) works in Office of Naval Intelligence, South Dakota (Dakota) works in Advanced Naval Weapon R&D Divison, Divison (aka the US Shipgirl division), O'Bannon works in Naval Construction Force, and San Diego is helping with Kitty Hawk reactivation, particularly with AA armament.]].
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* ChildrenAreInnocent: And [=DesDiv=] Six are painfully so.
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* ChildrenAreInnocent: And [=DesDiv=] Six are Six, painfully so.so (except Hibiki. See WiseBeyondTheirYears below).
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* KingIncognito: [[spoiler:All the known American shipgirls thus far are all covertly working in various US Navy departments. Enterprise (Yvonne) works in Office of Naval Intelligence, South Dakota (Dakota) works in Advanced Naval Weapon R&D Divison, O'Bannon works in Naval Construction Force, and San Diego is helping with Kitty Hawk reactivation, particularly with AA armament. Also, there's also a probable submarine shipgirl, possibly the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Thresher_%28SS-200%29 Thresher]], working to get US submarine fleet back up.]].
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* KingIncognito: [[spoiler:All the known American shipgirls thus far are all covertly working in various US Navy departments. Enterprise (Yvonne) works in Office of Naval Intelligence, South Dakota (Dakota) works in Advanced Naval Weapon R&D Divison, O'Bannon works in Naval Construction Force, and San Diego is helping with Kitty Hawk reactivation, particularly with AA armament. Also, going by the conversion, there's also a submarine shipgirl, possibly the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Thresher_%28SS-200%29 Thresher]], working to get US submarine fleet back up.]].
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* KingIncognito: [[spoiler:All the known American shipgirls thus far are all covertly working in various US Navy departments. Enterprise (Yvonne) works in Office of Naval Intelligence, South Dakota (Dakota) works in Advanced Naval Weapon R&D Divison, O'Bannon works in Naval Construction Force, and San Diego is helping with Kitty Hawk reactivation, particularly with AA armament. Also, going by the conversion, there's also a probable submarine shipgirl, possibly the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Thresher_%28SS-200%29 Thresher]], working to get US submarine fleet back up.]].
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* KingIncognito: [[spoiler:All the known American shipgirls thus far are all covertly working in various US Navy departments. Enterprise (Yvonne) works in Office of Naval Intelligence, South Dakota (Dakota) works in Advanced Naval Weapon R&D Divison, O'Bannon works in Naval Construction Force, and San Diego is helping with Kitty Hawk reactivation, particularly with AA armament. Also, going by the conversion, there's also a submarine shipgirl, possibly the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Thresher_%28SS-200%29 Thresher]], working on reactivating the Kitty Hawk]].to get US submarine fleet back up.]].
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: In a span of one day, after having a military-issue laptop hacked by Yubari, the [=DesDivSix=] girls proceed to look up on the topics (with the help of Tenryu) of[[spoiler: The Rape of Nanking, The Holocaust, and 'making love'.]]
* BadDreams: The story begins with Yvonne reliving the attack on Pearl Harbor in her nightmares. Chapter 5 has Yvonne reliving the Pearl attack again.
* BadDreams: The story begins with Yvonne reliving the attack on Pearl Harbor in her nightmares. Chapter 5 has Yvonne reliving the Pearl attack again.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: In a span of one day, after having a military-issue laptop hacked by Yubari, the [=DesDivSix=] [=DesDiv=] Six girls proceed to look up on the topics (with the help of Tenryu) Tenryuu) of[[spoiler: The Rape of Nanking, The Holocaust, and 'making love'.]]
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** The story begins with Yvonne reliving the attack on Pearl Harbor in her nightmares. Chapter 5 has Yvonne reliving the Pearl attack again.
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** The story begins with Yvonne reliving the attack on Pearl Harbor in her nightmares. Chapter 5 has Yvonne reliving the Pearl attack again.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: In a span of one day, the [=DesDivSix=] girls find a laptop, have it hacked by Yubari and proceed to look up on the topics of[[spoiler: The Rape of Nanking, The Holocaust, and 'making love'.]]
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: In a span of one day, after having a military-issue laptop hacked by Yubari, the [=DesDivSix=] girls find a laptop, have it hacked by Yubari and proceed to look up on the topics (with the help of Tenryu) of[[spoiler: The Rape of Nanking, The Holocaust, and 'making love'.]]
