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* BringOutTheMusuemPiece: Following the devastating attacks on Pearl Harbor and Norfolk by the Abyssals, and the amount of surface ships lost in the fighting afterwards, the [=US=] Navy has had to re-activate whatever ships they could just to get back on their feet. A [=CNN=]-style news article details the reactivation of the ''Missouri'', ''Kitty Hawk'', and ''Little Rock''.
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** The CNN-style news interludes mention the reactivated ''USS Missouri'' being put under the command of [[Film/{{Battleship}} Captain Alex Hopper]].
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* JerkassHasAPoint: The way Admiral Shimada delivered his assertion left much to be desired, but no reasonable person can deny that sending five kanmusu against [[spoiler:six Abyssal ''carrier strike groups'']] is the definition of SuicideMission and TooDumbToLive, a SenselessSacrifice that would barely inconvenience the attacker, much less distract them from the refugees. After all, the general track record of surface combatants without air cover against air power is less than stellar. Just ask Yamato about a little thing called Ten-Go.

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* JerkassHasAPoint: The way Admiral Shimada delivered his assertion left much to be desired, but no reasonable person can deny that sending five kanmusu against [[spoiler:six Abyssal ''carrier strike groups'']] is the definition of SuicideMission and TooDumbToLive, a SenselessSacrifice that would barely inconvenience the attacker, much less distract them from the refugees. After all, the general track record of surface combatants without air cover against air power is less than stellar. Just ask Repulse and Prince of Wales about how they sunk. Or Yamato about a little thing called Ten-Go.

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* BigDamnHeroes:
** In Chapter 6, this is averted by Yamato, who (under Yvonne's orders) waits until the Abyssals launch their third wave against Okinawa's shipgirls. Only after they confirm Shimada's fleet is taking the brunt of the air attack does Yamato engage the Abyssal carriers.
** A more traditional example later in the chapter: [[spoiler: Yvonne reveals herself as the USS Enterprise and launches her air wing to rescue Yamato. See GunshipRescue below.]]



* GodzillaThreshold: In chapter 5, Dakota tells Yvonne that if the choice is between obeying orders and getting killed or breaking cover to survive but causing a political shitstorm, she should do the latter. [[spoiler:It comes to pass in chapter 6 with Yvonne choosing in favour of breaking cover.]]

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* GodzillaThreshold: In chapter 5, Dakota tells Yvonne that if the choice is between obeying orders and getting killed or breaking cover to survive but causing a political shitstorm, she should do the latter. [[spoiler:It comes to pass in chapter 6 with Yvonne choosing in favour of breaking cover.cover, in order to rescue Yamato.]]



* HeroKiller: The Abyssal submarine in Chapter 5. [[spoiler: It shows up and kills Hood with contemptuous ease after doing the same to a lot of destroyers.]]

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* HeroKiller: The Abyssal submarine in Chapter 5. [[spoiler: It shows up and kills Hood with contemptuous ease after doing the same to a lot pair of destroyers.]]



** A big one that set off chapter 5. [[spoiler: Attempting to sink ''Bismarck'' in the exact same manner and at the exact same location as her namesake. When the ''Hood'' intervenes and saves the ''Bismarck'', an Abyssal super-sub, taking a page out of the playbook of [=USS=] "Hit it again" ''Harder'', plows through several of ''Hood''s escorts and re-enacts the magazine-detonating hit that sunk the original ''Hood'' by '''JUMPING OUT OF THE WATER AND LAUNCHING A TORPEDO AT HOOD'S FACE, BLOWING HER HEAD CLEAN OFF'''. ]]
** In chapter 6 [[spoiler:they recreate Operation Iceberg, the bombardment of Okinawa. And then after Yamato is mortally wounded, she decides to invoke [[HeroicSacrifice Operation Ten-Go]]... seemingly all the way to her own end.]]

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** A big one that set off chapter 5. [[spoiler: Attempting to sink ''Bismarck'' in the exact same manner and at the exact same location as her namesake. When the ''Hood'' intervenes and saves the ''Bismarck'', an Abyssal super-sub, taking a page out of the playbook of [=USS=] "Hit it 'em again" ''Harder'', plows through several of ''Hood''s escorts and re-enacts the magazine-detonating hit that sunk the original ''Hood'' by '''JUMPING OUT OF THE WATER AND LAUNCHING A TORPEDO AT HOOD'S FACE, BLOWING HER HEAD CLEAN OFF'''. ]]
** In chapter Chapter 6 [[spoiler:they recreate Operation Iceberg, the bombardment of Okinawa. And then after Yamato is mortally wounded, she decides to invoke [[HeroicSacrifice Operation Ten-Go]]... seemingly all the way to her own end.]]



* JerkassHasAPoint: The way Admiral Shimada delivered his assertion left much to be desired, but no reasonable person can deny that sending five kanmusu against [[spoiler:six Abyssal ''carrier strike groups'']] is the definition of SuicideMission and TooDumbToLive, a SenselessSacrifice that would barely inconvenience the attacker, much less distract them from the refugees. After all, the track record of Japanese surface combatants without air cover against air power is less than stellar. Just ask Yamato about a little thing called Ten-Go.

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* JerkassHasAPoint: The way Admiral Shimada delivered his assertion left much to be desired, but no reasonable person can deny that sending five kanmusu against [[spoiler:six Abyssal ''carrier strike groups'']] is the definition of SuicideMission and TooDumbToLive, a SenselessSacrifice that would barely inconvenience the attacker, much less distract them from the refugees. After all, the general track record of Japanese surface combatants without air cover against air power is less than stellar. Just ask Yamato about a little thing called Ten-Go.



** There's also the fact that compared to US Navy ships, IJN ships had ineffective and inferior antiair guns, mounts, and outfits; for example, ''Enterprise'' in her final configuration carried more effective AA guns than all of ''Fubuki'', ''Akatsuki'' and ''Shiratsuyu''-class destroyers. ''Combined.'' [[note]]While the Japanese Type-3 127mm gun was theoretically a dual-purpose gun, in practice it was ineffective in the AA role due to a host of issues. The American 5" DP gun was significantly more successful as a weapon.[[/note]]

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** There's also the fact that compared to US Navy ships, IJN ships had ineffective and inferior antiair antiaircraft guns, mounts, and outfits; for example, ''Enterprise'' in her final configuration carried more effective AA guns than all of ''Fubuki'', ''Akatsuki'' and ''Shiratsuyu''-class destroyers. ''Combined.'' [[note]]While the Japanese Type-3 127mm gun was theoretically a dual-purpose gun, in practice it was ineffective in the AA role due to a host of issues. The American 5" DP gun was significantly more successful as a weapon.[[/note]]



* WhamEpisode: Chapter 6. [[spoiler: Another super-Abyssal joins the fray. Hints are dropped that at least some Abyssal ringleaders are vengeful spirits. Yamato sorties into battle and is mortally wounded, and it's revealed that Yvonne isn't a human officer, she's a shipgirl: the USS Enterprise]].

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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 6. [[spoiler: Another super-Abyssal joins the fray. Hints are dropped that at least some Abyssal ringleaders are vengeful spirits. Yamato sorties into battle and is mortally wounded, and it's revealed that Yvonne isn't a human officer, she's a shipgirl: the USS Enterprise]].Enterprise. And by the time reinforcements arrive, both Yamato and Enterprise are missing in action, presumed dead.]].
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** Quite possibly one for another Kancolle fanfic, in this case ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'': [[spoiler: Yvonne's true identity as ''Enterprise'']].

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** Quite possibly one for another Kancolle fanfic, in this case ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'': [[spoiler: Yvonne's true identity as that fic's version of ''Enterprise'']].
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** Quite possibly one for another Kancolle fanfic, in this case ''Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls'': [[spoiler: Yvonne's true identity as ''Enterprise'']].
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* TheReveal: Chapter 6 has one in the form of [[spoiler: Yvonne's true identity being none other than that of ''Enterprise'', aka "The Grey Ghost".]]
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* YanksWithTanks: The US Navy took a massive beating in the early days of the war, with both Pearl Harbor and Norfolk attacked by Abyssals, and the loss of nearly the entire fleet. [[note]]Nine out of eleven carriers, 70 surface warships, and almost the entire submarine fleet. [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/kantai-collection-the-greatest-generation.17091/page-3#post-3303253 Analysis here]].[[/note]] That said, the US is still contributing to the war effort with the US Air Force, who've taken up the antishipping mission formerly held by the US Navy.

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* YanksWithTanks: The US Navy took a massive beating in the early days of the war, with both Pearl Harbor and Norfolk attacked by Abyssals, and the loss of nearly the entire fleet. [[note]]Nine out of eleven carriers, 70 surface warships, and almost the entire submarine fleet. [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/kantai-collection-the-greatest-generation.17091/page-3#post-3303253 Analysis here]].[[/note]] That said, the US is still contributing to the war effort with the US Air Force, who've taken up the antishipping mission formerly held by the US Navy.Navy.
** [[spoiler: And now as of Chapter 6 it turns out the US Navy ''does'' have a shipgirl of its own in the form of ''Enterprise'' aka Yvonne Swanson.]]

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** [[spoiler: Finally, as the divebombers preparing to deliver the fatal blow to Yamato are swiftly splashed by Yvonne's Corsair squadrons.]]

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** [[spoiler: Finally, as the divebombers preparing to deliver the fatal blow to Yamato are swiftly splashed by Yvonne's Corsair squadrons.]]



** [[spoiler:Yvonne claims that her old Commanding Officer told her 'Hit hard, hit fast, hit often'. The quote is attributed to William Halsey Jr, who commanded a special task group during WW2 centering on the Enterprise. It also doubles as a ShoutOut to [[Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls Pacific]], whose ''Enterprise'' uses this quote as her motto, and is the version of a ''Enterprise'' ship girl that Yvonne is based on.]]

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** [[spoiler:Yvonne claims that her old Commanding Officer told her 'Hit hard, hit fast, hit often'. The quote is attributed to William Halsey Jr, who commanded a special task group during WW2 centering on the Enterprise. It also doubles as a ShoutOut to [[Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls Pacific]], whose ''Enterprise'' uses this quote as her motto, and is the version of a an ''Enterprise'' ship girl that Yvonne is based on.]]



** [[spoiler: And for that matter, why the hell has a random intelligence officer trained with the ''US Archery Team''? The team that goes to the ''Olympics''?]]



** [[spoiler: Yvonne also tries to do this with the Commander of the Okinawa base Admiral Shimada in Chapter 6 when said base is attacked by an overwhelming carrier strike force and Shimada decides to flee. It doesn't work unfortunately.]]

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** [[spoiler: Yvonne also tries to do this with Admiral Shimada, the Commander of the Okinawa base Admiral Shimada base in Chapter 6 6, when said base is attacked by an overwhelming carrier strike force and Shimada decides to flee. It doesn't work unfortunately.]]



* GunshipRescue: In Chapter 6, Yamato is about to be destroyed by Abyssal dive bombers, [[spoiler: when she's rescued by two squadrons of Corsairs from Enterprise's air wing]].

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* GunshipRescue: In Chapter 6, Yamato is about to be destroyed by Abyssal dive bombers, [[spoiler: when she's rescued by two Corsair squadrons of Corsairs from Enterprise's air wing]].



* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: In Chapter 6, mortally wounded and barely combat-effective, Yamato decides to invoke Operation Ten-Go, to deliberately draw Abyssal attention on herself, away from Okinawa's civilian population.]]



** Airfield Princess plopping herself down on Honiara International Airport.

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** Airfield Princess plopping herself down on Honiara International Airport.Airport, where Henderson Field used to be.



** In chapter 6 [[spoiler:they recreate Operation Iceberg, the bombardment of Okinawa. In response, Yamato invokes Operation Ten-Go... seemingly all the way to her own end.]]

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** In chapter 6 [[spoiler:they recreate Operation Iceberg, the bombardment of Okinawa. In response, And then after Yamato invokes is mortally wounded, she decides to invoke [[HeroicSacrifice Operation Ten-Go...Ten-Go]]... seemingly all the way to her own end.]]



* JerkassHasAPoint: The way Admiral Shimada delivered his assertion left much to be desired, but no reasonable person can deny that sending five kanmusu against [[spoiler:six Abyssal ''carrier strike groups'']] is the definition of SuicideMission and TooDumbToLive, a SenselessSacrifice that would barely inconvenience the attacker, much less distract them from the refugees. After all, the track record of surface combatants without air cover against air power is less than stellar. Just ask Yamato about a little thing called Ten-Go.

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* JerkassHasAPoint: The way Admiral Shimada delivered his assertion left much to be desired, but no reasonable person can deny that sending five kanmusu against [[spoiler:six Abyssal ''carrier strike groups'']] is the definition of SuicideMission and TooDumbToLive, a SenselessSacrifice that would barely inconvenience the attacker, much less distract them from the refugees. After all, the track record of Japanese surface combatants without air cover against air power is less than stellar. Just ask Yamato about a little thing called Ten-Go.



** There's also the fact that compared to US Navy ships, IJN ships had ineffective and inferior antiair guns, mounts, and outfits; for example, ''Enterprise'' in her final configuration carried more effective AA guns than all of ''Fubuki'', ''Akatsuki'' and ''Shiratsuyu''-class destroyers. ''Combined.'' [[note]]While the Japanese Type-3 127mm gun was theoretically a dual-purpose gun, in practice it was ineffective in the AA role due to a host of issues. The American 5" DP gun was significantly more successful as a weapon.[[/note]]



* WhamEpisode: Chapter 6. [[spoiler:Another super-Abyssal joins the fray. 'Yvonne' is the USS Enterprise CV-6.]]

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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 6. [[spoiler:Another [[spoiler: Another super-Abyssal joins the fray. 'Yvonne' Hints are dropped that at least some Abyssal ringleaders are vengeful spirits. Yamato sorties into battle and is mortally wounded, and it's revealed that Yvonne isn't a human officer, she's a shipgirl: the USS Enterprise CV-6.]]Enterprise]].

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* TheCavalry: In chapter 5 Bismarck is about to be sunk by Abyssal forces when Hood brings reinforcements. [[spoiler:Granted, it goes wrong afterwards, but it did happen.]]



** [[spoiler:Kongou correctly guessing that Yvonne is a ship girl, but guesses the wrong ship (She guessed the ''Iowa'', and promptly reminds herself that the ''Iowa'' is still moored at the Port of Los Angeles as a museum ship). However, she ''then'' corrects herself about how she must be a "flat-deck carrier," and is about to correctly guess Enterprise, but get cut off.]]
** [[spoiler:Don't you think Yvonne was a little ''to'' upset about saying that Enterprise wasn't coming to Hosho? It's almost as if she was ''lying,'' and was bothered by it...]]

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** [[spoiler:Kongou correctly guessing that Yvonne is a ship girl, but guesses the wrong ship (She guessed the ''Iowa'', and promptly reminds herself that the ''Iowa'' is still moored at the Port of Los Angeles as a museum ship). However, she ''then'' corrects herself about how she must be a "flat-deck carrier," and is about to correctly guess Enterprise, but get gets cut off.]]
** [[spoiler:Don't you think Yvonne was a little ''to'' ''too'' upset about saying that Enterprise wasn't coming to Hosho? Houshou? It's almost as if she was ''lying,'' and was bothered by it...]]



* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: Bismarck enters one, after Hood is killed while trying to save her]].

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* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: Bismarck enters one, one after Hood is killed while trying to save her]].



* JerkassHasAPoint: The way Admiral Shimada delivered his assertion left much to be desired, but no reasonable person can deny that sending five kanmusu against [[spoiler:six Abyssal ''carrier strike groups'']] is the definition of SuicideMission and TooDumbToLive, a SenselessSacrifice that would barely inconvenience the attacker, much less distract them from the refugees.

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* JerkassHasAPoint: The way Admiral Shimada delivered his assertion left much to be desired, but no reasonable person can deny that sending five kanmusu against [[spoiler:six Abyssal ''carrier strike groups'']] is the definition of SuicideMission and TooDumbToLive, a SenselessSacrifice that would barely inconvenience the attacker, much less distract them from the refugees. After all, the track record of surface combatants without air cover against air power is less than stellar. Just ask Yamato about a little thing called Ten-Go.
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** [[spoiler:Kongou correctly guessing that Yvonne is a ship girl, but guesses wrong ship (She guessed the ''Iowa'', and promptly reminds herself that the ''Iowa'' is still moored at the Port of Los Angeles as a museum ship). However, she ''then'' corrects herself about how she must be a "flat-deck carrier," and is about to correctly guess Enterprise, but get cut off.]]

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** [[spoiler:Kongou correctly guessing that Yvonne is a ship girl, but guesses the wrong ship (She guessed the ''Iowa'', and promptly reminds herself that the ''Iowa'' is still moored at the Port of Los Angeles as a museum ship). However, she ''then'' corrects herself about how she must be a "flat-deck carrier," and is about to correctly guess Enterprise, but get cut off.]]



** [[spoiler:Yvonne once mentioned her commanding officer quoting Halsey's "Hit hard, hit fast, hit often!". Not only did Halsey once command the ''Enterprise'', it also doubles as a ShoutOut to [[Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls Pacific]], whose ''Enterprise'' uses this as her motto, and is the version of ''Enterprise'' that Yvonne is based on.]]

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** [[spoiler:Yvonne once mentioned claims that her commanding officer quoting Halsey's "Hit old Commanding Officer told her 'Hit hard, hit fast, hit often!". Not only did often'. The quote is attributed to William Halsey once command Jr, who commanded a special task group during WW2 centering on the ''Enterprise'', it Enterprise. It also doubles as a ShoutOut to [[Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls Pacific]], whose ''Enterprise'' uses this quote as her motto, and is the version of a ''Enterprise'' ship girl that Yvonne is based on.]]
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** [[spoiler:Yvonne claims that her old Commanding Officer told her 'Hit hard, hit fast, hit often'. The quote is attributed to William Halsey Jr, who commanded a special task group during WW2 centering on the Enterprise]]
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** [[spoiler:Kongou correctly guessing that Yvonne is a ship girl, but guesses wrong ship (She guessed the ''Iowa'', and promptly reminds herself that the ''Iowa'' is still moored at the Port of Los Angeles as a museum ship.)]]

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** [[spoiler:Kongou correctly guessing that Yvonne is a ship girl, but guesses wrong ship (She guessed the ''Iowa'', and promptly reminds herself that the ''Iowa'' is still moored at the Port of Los Angeles as a museum ship.)]]ship). However, she ''then'' corrects herself about how she must be a "flat-deck carrier," and is about to correctly guess Enterprise, but get cut off.]]
** [[spoiler:Don't you think Yvonne was a little ''to'' upset about saying that Enterprise wasn't coming to Hosho? It's almost as if she was ''lying,'' and was bothered by it...]]



** [[spoiler:Yvonne's telling pause when she encounters a certain book written by Stafford about the most famous American warship.]]

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* ExtremeOmnivore: While Yvonne's tastes in food aren't t too weird, the ones she mentions (Muhallabia, Khao Neow Ma Muang, Peanut Butter cups and Durian) throw the Kongou sisters for a loop. However it's her admission that she prefers [[spoiler:coffee to tea]] that causes [[LargeHam Kongou]] to [[SpotOfTea faint]].

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* ExtremeOmnivore: While Yvonne's tastes in food aren't t too weird, the ones she mentions (Muhallabia, Khao Neow Ma Muang, Peanut Butter cups and Durian) throw the Kongou sisters for a loop. However it's her admission that she prefers [[spoiler:coffee to tea]] that causes [[LargeHam Kongou]] to [[SpotOfTea faint]].
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** Airfield Princess plopping herself down on Honiara International Airport.
** Attempting Doolittle's raid with little success.
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* SoundtrackDissonance: Chapter 6. End with [[spoiler:Another Abyssal Ringleader having bombed Okinawa, with Yamato and Yvonne/Enterprise missing and presumed to be dead]]. The author then immediately after that posts [[https://youtu.be/n25JfP_curk this cute little video.]]

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** [[spoiler:Kongou correctly guessing that Yvonne is a ship girl, but guesses wrong (She guessed the ''Iowa'', and promptly reminds herself that the ''Iowa'' is still moored at Los Angeles as a museum ship.]]

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** [[spoiler:Kongou correctly guessing that Yvonne is a ship girl, but guesses wrong ship (She guessed the ''Iowa'', and promptly reminds herself that the ''Iowa'' is still moored at the Port of Los Angeles as a museum ship.)]]
** [[spoiler:Yvonne once mentioned her commanding officer quoting Halsey's "Hit hard, hit fast, hit often!". Not only did Halsey once command the ''Enterprise'', it also doubles as a ShoutOut to [[Fanfic/PacificWorldWarIIUsNavyShipgirls Pacific]], whose ''Enterprise'' uses this as her motto, and is the version of ''Enterprise'' that Yvonne is based on.
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** A big one that set off chapter 5. [[spoiler: Attempting to sink ''Bismarck'' in the exact same manner and at the exact same location as her namesake. When the ''Hood'' intervenes and prevents that from ha
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sunk the original ''Hood'' by '''JUMPING OUT OF THE WATER AND LAUNCHING A TORPEDO AT HOOD'S FACE, BLOWING HER HEAD CLEAN OFF'''. ]]
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** [[spoiler:Kongou correctly guessing that Yvonne is a ship girl, but guesses wrong (She guessed the ''Iowa'', and promptly reminds herself that the ''Iowa'' is still moored at Los Angeles as a museum ship.]]



* HistoryRepeats: In chapter 5, Yvonne realises that the Abyssals have been consciously and deliberately recreating WW2 incidents. In chapter 6 [[spoiler:they recreate Operation Iceberg, the bombardment of Okinawa. In response, Yamato invokes Operation Ten-Go... seemingly all the way to her own end.]]

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* HistoryRepeats: In chapter 5, Yvonne realises that the Abyssals have been consciously and deliberately recreating WW2 incidents. Examples include:
** Re-enacting the Japanese sinking of the [=HMS=] ''Prince of Wales'' and ''Repulse'' on a pair of Singaporean Navy ''Formidable''-class frigates.
** Attacking Pearl Harbour with only aircraft, while keeping their surface ships in reserve, just as it happened historically.
** Emulating German U-Boat wolf packs.
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In chapter 6 [[spoiler:they recreate Operation Iceberg, the bombardment of Okinawa. In response, Yamato invokes Operation Ten-Go... seemingly all the way to her own end.]]



* OhCrap: Yvonne's reaction in chapter 6 when she realises that [[spoiler:the planes approaching Yamato aren't from friendlies.]]

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** Yamato's reaction shortly after the above when [[spoiler: those hostile aircraft attacking her are not the usual Abyssal fare, but Abyssalized Douglas [=SBD=] dive bombers]].



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* JerkassHasAPoint: The way Admiral Shimada delivered his assertion left much to be desired, but no reasonable person can deny that sending five kanmusu against [[spoiler:six Abyssal ''carrier strike groups'']] is the definition of SuicideMission and TooDumbToLive, a SenselessSacrifice that would barely inconvenience the attacker, much less distract them from the refugees.
--> I have five ships! I will not send ''my'' girls to fight a battle they cannot win! They are tired, they are outnumbered and they cannot fight like this!



* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Shimada correctly asserts that sending five girls against [[spoiler:six Abyssal ''carrier strike groups'']] is the definition of SuicideMission and TooDumbToLive. Unfortunately, the way he delivered his assertion left much to be desired.
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* CurbStompBattle: Three of them in Chapter 6:
** Yamato does this on the initial Abyssal task force, sinking four Wo-class carriers, damaging the other six, and forcing the task force to flee.
** [[spoiler: The Abyssal ringleader then launches her strike on Yamato and handily disables her.]]
**[[spoiler: Finally, as the divebombers preparing to deliver the fatal blow to Yamato are swiftly splashed by Yvonne's Corsair squadrons.]]


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* GunshipRescue: In Chapter 6, Yamato is about to be destroyed by Abyssal dive bombers, [[spoiler: when she's rescued by two squadrons of Corsairs from Enterprise's air wing]].

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: There are actually quite a few hints about [[spoiler:Yvonne's true identity]] that show up in earlier chapters.

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** [[spoiler:Being good with a bow for hunting or sport is one thing. But good enough to stand against the carrier girls who train to fight with it?]]

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** [[spoiler:Being good with a bow for recreational hunting or sport is one thing. But good enough to stand against the carrier girls who train to fight with it?]]



** [[spoiler:Dakota and Yvonne's talk about arrows that could blow the latter's cover.]]

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* GodzillaThreshold: In chapter 5, Dakota tells Yvonne that if the choice is between obeying orders and getting killed or breaking cover to survive but causing a political shitstorm, she should do the latter. [[spoiler:It comes to pass in chapter 6 with Yvonne choosing in favour of breaking cover.]]



* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Shimada correctly asserts that sending five girls against six Abyssal carrier ''strike groups'' is the definition of TooDumbToLive. Unfortunately, the way he delivered his assertion left much to be desired.

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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Shimada correctly asserts that sending five girls against six [[spoiler:six Abyssal carrier ''strike groups'' ''carrier strike groups'']] is the definition of SuicideMission and TooDumbToLive. Unfortunately, the way he delivered his assertion left much to be desired.desired.
--> I have five ships! I will not send ''my'' girls to fight a battle they cannot win! They are tired, they are outnumbered and they cannot fight like this!

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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Shimada correctly asserts that sending five girls against six Abyssal carrier ''strike groups'' is the definition of TooDumbToLive. Unfortunately, the way he delivered his assertion left much to be desired.



* WhamEpisode: Chapter 6. [[spoiler:'Yvonne' is the USS Enterprise CV-6.]]

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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 6. [[spoiler:'Yvonne' [[spoiler:Another super-Abyssal joins the fray. 'Yvonne' is the USS Enterprise CV-6.]]
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* MeaningfulName: At the end of chapter 6, the author's notes spell out the etymology of [[spoiler:Yvonne's cover name.]]

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* BigSecret: Chapter 5 mentions that Yvonne and Dakota seem to be hiding something.

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* BigSecret: Chapter 5 mentions that Yvonne and Dakota seem to be hiding something. [[spoiler:Chapter 6 reveals that the former is the USS Enterprise.]]


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* TheCloudcuckoolanderWasRight: Kongou [[spoiler:comes within a hair's breadth of correctly guessing Yvonne's identity.]]


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* {{Foreshadowing}}: There are actually quite a few hints about [[spoiler:Yvonne's true identity]] that show up in earlier chapters.
** [[spoiler:Her nightmares about Pearl Harbour have her believing that she could have helped if she were present. But how much good could one intelligence officer do?]]
** [[spoiler:Being good with a bow for hunting or sport is one thing. But good enough to stand against the carrier girls who train to fight with it?]]
** [[spoiler:Zuikaku inadvertently guesses that it wouldn't look out of place for fairy planes to be fired off Yvonne's bow.]]
** [[spoiler:Dakota and Yvonne's talk about arrows that could blow the latter's cover.]]


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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 6. [[spoiler:'Yvonne' is the USS Enterprise CV-6.]]
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** [[spoiler: Yvonne also tries to do this with the Commander of the Okinawa base Admiral Shimada in Chapter 6 when said base is attacked by an overwhelming carrier strike force and Shimada decides to flee. It doesn't work unfortunately.]]

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