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* AlphaBitch: Marie and Berry.
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* AuthorAvatar: Marie, probably.
* BeigeProse
* BeigeProse
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* CostumePorn
* CrackFic: Whether intentionally or not is debatable.
* CrackFic: Whether intentionally or not is debatable.
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* DirtyOldMan: Mr. Herriman.
* DramaticEllipsis: It wouldn't be a goffik My Immortal knockoff without 'em.
* DramaticEllipsis: It wouldn't be a goffik My Immortal knockoff without 'em.
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* DramaticEllipsis: It wouldn't be a goffik My Immortal knockoff without
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* GiftedlyBad: The author, if she's not a troll that is.
* {{Goth}}: What the main characters ''think'' they are.
* HollywoodSatanism
* {{Goth}}: What the main characters ''think'' they are.
* HollywoodSatanism
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* OurVampiresAreDifferent
* OutOfCharacter: Every. Single. Canon. Character.
* OutOfCharacter: Every. Single. Canon. Character.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin
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* StealthParody: Most likely. Hopefully...
* TearsOfBlood
* TrollFic: Again, most likely.
* TearsOfBlood
* TrollFic: Again, most likely.
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So yeah, it's basically ''Fanfic/MyImmortal: The Foster's Edition''. However, [[UpToEleven it actually manages to make less sense than its predecessor]].
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So yeah, it's basically ''Fanfic/MyImmortal: The Foster's Edition''. However, [[UpToEleven it actually manages to make less sense than its predecessor]].
predecessor.
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Okey-dokey, ''The Darkness of my Heart'' is a... uh... [[BlatantLies delightful]] ''WesternAnimation/FostersHomeForImaginaryFriends'' fanfiction about [[MarySue Marie Bloody Ebony D'arkness]], a goth vampire teenager who comes to work at a gothified Foster's. A Foster's where everyone is either gothic and depressed, a prep, or completely batshit insane. Yes, even happy-go-lucky Wilt and mature, level-headed Frankie have been reduced to whiny, suicidial "goffs" who self-harm, do drugs, and practice Satanism. Oh, and don't think they're the only canon characters who suffer this case of OOC, oh no no no, I just don't want to describe them all in fear that I'll start crying blood. And not in the "goffik bloody tearz" way.
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Okey-dokey, ''The Darkness of my Heart'' is a... uh... [[BlatantLies delightful]] ''WesternAnimation/FostersHomeForImaginaryFriends'' fanfiction about [[MarySue Marie Bloody Ebony D'arkness]], D'arkness, a goth vampire teenager who comes to work at a gothified Foster's. A Foster's where everyone is either gothic and depressed, a prep, or completely batshit insane. Yes, even happy-go-lucky Wilt and mature, level-headed Frankie have been reduced to whiny, suicidial "goffs" who self-harm, do drugs, and practice Satanism. Oh, and don't think they're the only canon characters who suffer this case of OOC, oh no no no, I just don't want to describe them all in fear that I'll start crying blood. And not in the "goffik bloody tearz" way.
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Capitalization was fixed from FanFic.The Darkness Of My Heart to Fanfic.The Darkness Of My Heart. Null edit to update page. Page may need a mojibake cleanup after the fact
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So yeah, it's basically [[FanFic/MyImmortal My Immortal]]: The Foster's Edition. However, [[UpToEleven it actually manages to make less sense than it's predecessor]].
Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4945438/1/the_Darkness_of_my_heart here]] and on her Website/DeviantArt account [[http://666gothicgurl666.deviantart.com/ here]] (with the added bonus of her "art"). Read at your own risk. [[http://www.equestriaforums.com/index.php/topic,5810.0.html A MST is here]]. Although it's certainly not as renowned as other (possible) trollfics, it's style and subject can safely be compared to fics such as ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' (obviously), ''FanFic/TwilaTheGirlWhoWazInLuvWithAVampyre'', and ''FanFic/ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen''.
Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4945438/1/the_Darkness_of_my_heart here]] and on her Website/DeviantArt account [[http://666gothicgurl666.deviantart.com/ here]] (with the added bonus of her "art"). Read at your own risk. [[http://www.equestriaforums.com/index.php/topic,5810.0.html A MST is here]]. Although it's certainly not as renowned as other (possible) trollfics, it's style and subject can safely be compared to fics such as ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' (obviously), ''FanFic/TwilaTheGirlWhoWazInLuvWithAVampyre'', and ''FanFic/ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen''.
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So yeah, it's basically [[FanFic/MyImmortal My Immortal]]: ''Fanfic/MyImmortal: The Foster's Edition. Edition''. However, [[UpToEleven it actually manages to make less sense than it's its predecessor]].
Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4945438/1/the_Darkness_of_my_heart here]] and on her Website/DeviantArt account [[http://666gothicgurl666.deviantart.com/ here]] (with the added bonus of her "art"). Read at your own risk. [[http://www.equestriaforums.com/index.php/topic,5810.0.html A MST is here]]. Although it's certainly not as renowned as other (possible) trollfics, it's style and subject can safely be compared to fics such as ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' (obviously),''FanFic/TwilaTheGirlWhoWazInLuvWithAVampyre'', ''Fanfic/TwilaTheGirlWhoWazInLuvWithAVampyre'', and ''FanFic/ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen''.
''Fanfic/ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen''.
Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4945438/1/the_Darkness_of_my_heart here]] and on her Website/DeviantArt account [[http://666gothicgurl666.deviantart.com/ here]] (with the added bonus of her "art"). Read at your own risk. [[http://www.equestriaforums.com/index.php/topic,5810.0.html A MST is here]]. Although it's certainly not as renowned as other (possible) trollfics, it's style and subject can safely be compared to fics such as ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' (obviously),
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* BerserkButton: Don't tell the author that ''The Darkness of my Heart'' is horrible, or is a ripoff of [[FanFic/MyImmortal My Immortal]], because [[BlatantLies IT'S TOTALLY NOT U GUISE!!!! FUKKING PREPZ!!!!11]] Also, in-story, when Marie is upset she'll sometimes release her "vampire powers".
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* BerserkButton: Don't tell the author that ''The Darkness of my Heart'' is horrible, or is a ripoff of [[FanFic/MyImmortal My Immortal]], ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'', because [[BlatantLies IT'S TOTALLY NOT U GUISE!!!! FUKKING PREPZ!!!!11]] Also, in-story, when Marie is upset she'll sometimes release her "vampire powers".
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* {{Crunchtastic}}: Words like "sexily" and "suicidely" as well as many others are used as adjectives throughout the story
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* {{Crunchtastic}}: {{Crunchtastic}}:
** Words like "sexily" and "suicidely" as well as many others are used as adjectives throughout the story
** Words like "sexily" and "suicidely" as well as many others are used as adjectives throughout the story
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* DeusExMachina: While trapped in the dungeon cell, Marie's magical bloody vampire tears conveniently reveals a secret message that tells her and the gang how to escape.
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* DeusExMachina: DeusExMachina:
** While trapped in the dungeon cell, Marie's magical bloody vampire tears conveniently reveals a secret message that tells her and the gang how to escape.
** While trapped in the dungeon cell, Marie's magical bloody vampire tears conveniently reveals a secret message that tells her and the gang how to escape.
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* RapeAsBackstory: See ParentalIncest above, although it's only made mention of in chapter 1 and 19.
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* RapeAsBackstory: See ParentalIncest above, Marie states her father has raped her, although it's only made mention of in chapter 1 and 19.
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Index, not a trope.
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* CommonMarySueTraits: Oh where to even begin? An unusual eye color, gothic attire (acting as AuthorAppeal), magical abilities, instantly popular, the list goes on and on.
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Fail O Suckyname is no longer a trope. Wicks are being disambiguated.
* DarknessVonGothickname: Marie Bloody Ebony D'arkness, as while as the nicknames some of the canon characters are given such as Darkness (Mac) and Disturbia (Eurotrish).
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* FailOSuckyname: Marie Bloody Ebony D'arkness, as while as the nicknames some of the canon characters are given such as Darkness (Mac) and Disturbia (Eurotrish).
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Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4945438/1/the_Darkness_of_my_heart here]] and on her Website/DeviantArt account [[http://666gothicgurl666.deviantart.com/ here]] (with the added bonus of her "art"). Read at your own risk. [[http://www.equestriaforums.com/index.php/topic,5810.0.html A MST is here]]. Although it's certainly not as renowned as other (possible) trollfics, it's style and subject can safely be compared to fics such as [[FanFic/MyImmortal My Immortal]] (obviously), FanFic/TwilaTheGirlWhoWazInLuvWithAVampyre, and ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen
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Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4945438/1/the_Darkness_of_my_heart here]] and on her Website/DeviantArt account [[http://666gothicgurl666.deviantart.com/ here]] (with the added bonus of her "art"). Read at your own risk. [[http://www.equestriaforums.com/index.php/topic,5810.0.html A MST is here]]. Although it's certainly not as renowned as other (possible) trollfics, it's style and subject can safely be compared to fics such as [[FanFic/MyImmortal My Immortal]] ''FanFic/MyImmortal'' (obviously), FanFic/TwilaTheGirlWhoWazInLuvWithAVampyre, ''FanFic/TwilaTheGirlWhoWazInLuvWithAVampyre'', and ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen
''FanFic/ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen''.
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Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4945438/1/the_Darkness_of_my_heart here]] and on her DeviantArt account [[http://666gothicgurl666.deviantart.com/ here]] (with the added bonus of her "art"). Read at your own risk. [[http://www.equestriaforums.com/index.php/topic,5810.0.html A MST is here]]. Although it's certainly not as renowned as other (possible) trollfics, it's style and subject can safely be compared to fics such as [[FanFic/MyImmortal My Immortal]] (obviously), FanFic/TwilaTheGirlWhoWazInLuvWithAVampyre, and ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen
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Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4945438/1/the_Darkness_of_my_heart here]] and on her DeviantArt Website/DeviantArt account [[http://666gothicgurl666.deviantart.com/ here]] (with the added bonus of her "art"). Read at your own risk. [[http://www.equestriaforums.com/index.php/topic,5810.0.html A MST is here]]. Although it's certainly not as renowned as other (possible) trollfics, it's style and subject can safely be compared to fics such as [[FanFic/MyImmortal My Immortal]] (obviously), FanFic/TwilaTheGirlWhoWazInLuvWithAVampyre, and ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen
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Okey-dokey, ''The Darkness of my Heart'' is a... uh... [[BlatantLies delightful]] ''FostersHomeForImaginaryFriends'' fanfiction about [[MarySue Marie Bloody Ebony D'arkness]], a goth vampire teenager who comes to work at a gothified Foster's. A Foster's where everyone is either gothic and depressed, a prep, or completely batshit insane. Yes, even happy-go-lucky Wilt and mature, level-headed Frankie have been reduced to whiny, suicidial "goffs" who self-harm, do drugs, and practice Satanism. Oh, and don't think they're the only canon characters who suffer this case of OOC, oh no no no, I just don't want to describe them all in fear that I'll start crying blood. And not in the "goffik bloody tearz" way.
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Okey-dokey, ''The Darkness of my Heart'' is a... uh... [[BlatantLies delightful]] ''FostersHomeForImaginaryFriends'' ''WesternAnimation/FostersHomeForImaginaryFriends'' fanfiction about [[MarySue Marie Bloody Ebony D'arkness]], a goth vampire teenager who comes to work at a gothified Foster's. A Foster's where everyone is either gothic and depressed, a prep, or completely batshit insane. Yes, even happy-go-lucky Wilt and mature, level-headed Frankie have been reduced to whiny, suicidial "goffs" who self-harm, do drugs, and practice Satanism. Oh, and don't think they're the only canon characters who suffer this case of OOC, oh no no no, I just don't want to describe them all in fear that I'll start crying blood. And not in the "goffik bloody tearz" way.
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[[caption-width-right:222:Yes, this was drawn by the author. You have every right to be afraid of what's in store.]]
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-sigh- Do I really have to do this?
-rifle click- JESUS CHRIST! ALRIGHT, ALRIGHT!
-rifle click- JESUS CHRIST! ALRIGHT, ALRIGHT!
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* ShallowLoveInterest: Marie probably only knew Wilt for a couple of hours ''at the most'' before they started banging like rabbits in heat. Same with Bloo, whom she had almost no interaction with until chapter 12 where he confesses his love to her and they hook up.
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* ShallowLoveInterest: SatelliteLoveInterest: Marie probably only knew Wilt for a couple of hours ''at the most'' before they started banging like rabbits in heat. Same with Bloo, whom she had almost no interaction with until chapter 12 where he confesses his love to her and they hook up.
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So yeah, it's basically [[FanFic/MyImmortal My Immortal]]: The Foster's Edition. However, [[BeyondTheImpossible it actually manages to make less sense than it's predecessor]].
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So yeah, it's basically [[FanFic/MyImmortal My Immortal]]: The Foster's Edition. However, [[BeyondTheImpossible [[UpToEleven it actually manages to make less sense than it's predecessor]].
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* AlphaBitch: Marie and Berry.
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* YaoiFangirl: The author seems to be fond of boy-on-boy action.
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Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4945438/1/the_Darkness_of_my_heart here]] and on her DeviantArt account [[http://666gothicgurl666.deviantart.com/ here]] (with the added bonus of her "art"). Read at your own risk. [[http://www.equestriaforums.com/index.php/topic,5810.0.html A MST is in progress here]]. Although it's certainly not as renowned as other (possible) trollfics, it's style and subject can safely be compared to fics such as [[FanFic/MyImmortal My Immortal]] (obviously), FanFic/TwilaTheGirlWhoWazInLuvWithAVampyre, and ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen
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Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4945438/1/the_Darkness_of_my_heart here]] and on her DeviantArt account [[http://666gothicgurl666.deviantart.com/ here]] (with the added bonus of her "art"). Read at your own risk. [[http://www.equestriaforums.com/index.php/topic,5810.0.html A MST is in progress here]]. Although it's certainly not as renowned as other (possible) trollfics, it's style and subject can safely be compared to fics such as [[FanFic/MyImmortal My Immortal]] (obviously), FanFic/TwilaTheGirlWhoWazInLuvWithAVampyre, and ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen
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Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4945438/1/the_Darkness_of_my_heart here]] and on her DeviantArt account [[http://666gothicgurl666.deviantart.com/ here]] (with the added bonus of her "art"). Read at your own risk.
[[http://www.equestriaforums.com/index.php/topic,5810.0.html an MST is in progress here]]
Although it's certainly not as renowned as other (possible) trollfics, it's style and subject can safely be compared to fics such as [[FanFic/MyImmortal My Immortal]] (obviously), FanFic/TwilaTheGirlWhoWazInLuvWithAVampyre, and ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen
[[http://www.equestriaforums.com/index.php/topic,5810.0.html an MST is in progress here]]
Although it's certainly not as renowned as other (possible) trollfics, it's style and subject can safely be compared to fics such as [[FanFic/MyImmortal My Immortal]] (obviously), FanFic/TwilaTheGirlWhoWazInLuvWithAVampyre, and ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen
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Can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4945438/1/the_Darkness_of_my_heart here]] and on her DeviantArt account [[http://666gothicgurl666.deviantart.com/ here]] (with the added bonus of her "art"). Read at your own risk.
risk. [[http://www.equestriaforums.com/index.php/topic,5810.0.html an A MST is in progress here]]
here]]. Although it's certainly not as renowned as other (possible) trollfics, it's style and subject can safely be compared to fics such as [[FanFic/MyImmortal My Immortal]] (obviously), FanFic/TwilaTheGirlWhoWazInLuvWithAVampyre, and ForbidenFruitTheTempationOfEdwardCullen
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* OurVampiresAreDifferent
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* RapeAsBackstory: See ParentalIncest above, although it's not really spoken of much until chapter 19.
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* RapeAsBackstory: See ParentalIncest above, although it's not really spoken only made mention of much until in chapter 1 and 19.