Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Overprotective Dad has been disambiguated
Changed line(s) 50 (click to see context) from:
* ParentalMarriageVeto: Korra and Tarrlok's cover story is that Korra's OverprotectiveDad refused to let them get married and they ran away together.
to:
* ParentalMarriageVeto: Korra and Tarrlok's cover story is that Korra's OverprotectiveDad father refused to let them get married and they ran away together.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
ZCE comment-outs.
Changed line(s) 18,21 (click to see context) from:
* BookDumb: Korra
* BrainsAndBrawn: In their new lives, Tarrlok is an elementary school teacher while Korra hunts wild game for the town butcher
* BreakTheCutie: Poor, poor Korra.
* CharacterDevelopment: Both Korra and Tarrlok go through this.
* BrainsAndBrawn: In their new lives, Tarrlok is an elementary school teacher while Korra hunts wild game for the town butcher
* BreakTheCutie: Poor, poor Korra.
* CharacterDevelopment: Both Korra and Tarrlok go through this.
to:
* BrainsAndBrawn: In their new lives, Tarrlok is an elementary school teacher while Korra hunts wild game for the town
*
%%* BreakTheCutie: Poor, poor Korra.
Changed line(s) 24 (click to see context) from:
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Tarrlok, which is a given since he's Yakone's son.
to:
Changed line(s) 53,54 (click to see context) from:
* ReplacementGoldfish: Sitka is one to Korra for Naga.
* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: Tarrlok and Korra
* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: Tarrlok and Korra
to:
Changed line(s) 61 (click to see context) from:
* TalkingInYourSleep
to:
Changed line(s) 68 (click to see context) from:
* VillainousCrush: Tarrlok had one on Korra ever since he met her.
to:
Changed line(s) 70 (click to see context) from:
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Tarrlok and Korra can't go back to Republic City or Tarrlok will be executed.[[spoiler: They go back anyway.]]
to:
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Tarrlok and Korra can't go back to Republic City or Tarrlok will be executed.[[spoiler: They go back return anyway.]]]]
----
----
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Page is now a redirect to the This Index Touches Itself index.
Deleted line(s) 14 (click to see context) :
* ADateWithRosiePalms: Korra does this while have a dream about [[spoiler: Tarrlok]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
Changed line(s) 39 (click to see context) from:
* {{Jerkass}}: Tarrlok, [[spoiler: although he changes after he bloodbended Korra from escaping, making him realize he's NotSoDifferent from his father.]]
to:
* {{Jerkass}}: Tarrlok, [[spoiler: although he changes after he bloodbended Korra from escaping, making him realize [[NotSoDifferentRemark he's NotSoDifferent no different]] from his father.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 49 (click to see context) from:
* {{Patricide}}: Tarrlok is revealed to have killed his father in this fic.
to:
* {{Patricide}}: Tarrlok is revealed implied to have killed his father in this fic.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Not only are aversions not notable, but I don't think it would even apply if he did rape her, since they're not really married. I do think Questionable Consent counts, though, as even the author admits it.
Deleted line(s) 45 (click to see context) :
* MaritalRapeLicense: To Tarrlok's credit, he explicitly averts this. He doesn't have sex with Korra until their relationship significantly improves and Korra clearly gives him her definite consent, which he constantly checks for.
Changed line(s) 48 (click to see context) from:
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone
to:
* MyGodWhatHaveIDoneMyGodWhatHaveIDone: Once Tarrlok sees the desperation that he's driven Korra to during captivity, he's horrified at how he's turned out so much like his father and tries to improve his treatment of her. He gets a second instance of this when he finally understands [[spoiler:thanks to a verbal dressing-down from Yue]] that forcing Korra to stay with him in hiding will never result in a healthy relationship.
Changed line(s) 50 (click to see context) from:
* {{Patricide}}: See SelfMadeOrphan
to:
* {{Patricide}}: See SelfMadeOrphanTarrlok is revealed to have killed his father in this fic.
* QuestionableConsent: Even though their relationship had drastically improved and already developed into a romantic one by this point, when Tarrlok and Korra sleep together it is still essentially an older man sleeping with a seventeen-year-old girl that he's been holding prisoner for months, and whom he'd previously bloodbended into submission multiple times beforehand when they were still hostile to each other. Korra is herself only going through with it, despite not being ready for such a step, because she hopes the closer intimacy that results will help convince Tarrlok to let her go. Tarrlok, who isn't aware that this is Korra's true intention, does at least try to make sure that this is really what Korra wants and makes clear that she doesn't have to sleep with him if she doesn't want to.
Changed line(s) 61 (click to see context) from:
* StockholmSyndrome: Korra is developing this.
to:
* StockholmSyndrome: Korra is developing this.develops this over the course of the fic. Although she never stops desiring to escape, she becomes sympathetic to Tarrlok after learning about his backstory of abuse and sharing more civil moments with him.
Added DiffLines:
* WantsAPrizeForBasicDecency: Early on Tarrlok is continually frustrated and angry about how rebellious Korra is in captivity, trying to make a point about how he hasn't treated her ''that badly'' as a captor. In one particular instance, he briefly tortures her with bloodbending--including implying that he could use his bloodbending to make her [[ImpliedRape sleep with him]] if he wanted--to make the point that since he ''doesn't'' do those things, she should be grateful to him.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AffablyEvil: Tarrlok shifts into this over time, becoming a genuinely motivated teacher and [[spoiler: loving husband]].
Added DiffLines:
* TheChainOfHarm: Tarrlok goes from being an abused son to an abusive husband, and has to take steps on his own to change.
Added DiffLines:
* PlotIrrelevantVillain: While Amon is still responsible for what happened in Republic City and still has to be stopped, the story focuses mostly on Tarrlok and Korra.
