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* EldritchLocation: Planet Eris, without question.
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* OfficialCouple: Ingrid Tuition and Hocus Pocus.
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* {{Reconstruction}}: Whereas ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis'' and ''Fanfic/FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship'' {{Deconstruction}} the world of the Unicornicopians and their ideologies, ''Starfleet Redone'' starts the series over and makes the characters genuine heroes (with definable characteristics) as well as give them a better system of morals. WordOfGod has stated that the ideas in ''Starfleet Magic'' had potential, but were mishandled in-story.
** Of note, Lightning Dawn's status as TheHero is given a lot more credibility this time around. The original was seemingly found out of the blue by Celesto but here, he and Crystal are found at the same time after a tremendous display of power. Not only that, but he's able to stand up to [[BigBad Nadir]] in a weakened state, whereas LD Prime got knocked around a bunch, even by his minions and a mere clone, and then cowered upon first seeing him again
** Of note, Lightning Dawn's status as TheHero is given a lot more credibility this time around. The original was seemingly found out of the blue by Celesto but here, he and Crystal are found at the same time after a tremendous display of power. Not only that, but he's able to stand up to [[BigBad Nadir]] in a weakened state, whereas LD Prime got knocked around a bunch, even by his minions and a mere clone, and then cowered upon first seeing him again
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* {{Reconstruction}}: {{Reconstruction}}:
** Whereas ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis'' and ''Fanfic/FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship'' {{Deconstruction}} the world of the Unicornicopians and their ideologies, ''Starfleet Redone'' starts the series over and makes the characters genuine heroes (with definable characteristics) as well as give them a better system of morals. WordOfGod has stated that the ideas in ''Starfleet Magic'' had potential, but were mishandled in-story.
**Of note, Lightning Dawn's status as TheHero is given a lot more credibility this time around. The original was seemingly found out of the blue by Celesto but here, he and Crystal are found at the same time after a tremendous display of power. Not only that, but he's able to stand up to [[BigBad Nadir]] in a weakened state, whereas LD Prime got knocked around a bunch, even by his minions and a mere clone, and then cowered upon first seeing him again
** Whereas ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis'' and ''Fanfic/FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship'' {{Deconstruction}} the world of the Unicornicopians and their ideologies, ''Starfleet Redone'' starts the series over and makes the characters genuine heroes (with definable characteristics) as well as give them a better system of morals. WordOfGod has stated that the ideas in ''Starfleet Magic'' had potential, but were mishandled in-story.
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* ShipTease: Lightning/Astra gets plenty in the latter's debut, though at least one Lightning/Crystal hint has been made.
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* ShipTease: ShipTease:
** Lightning/Astra gets plenty in the latter's debut, though at least one Lightning/Crystal hint has been made.
** Lightning/Astra gets plenty in the latter's debut, though at least one Lightning/Crystal hint has been made.
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* ThePowerOfFriendship: The Grand Ruler believes a Starfleet officer’s greatest weapon is their bond with those around them.
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* ThePowerOfFriendship: The Grand Ruler believes a Starfleet officer’s officer's greatest weapon is their bond with those around them.
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--> "Compared to me, that cragadile will be mere foal’s play."
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--> "Compared to me, that cragadile will be mere foal’s foal's play."
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* {{Reconstruction}}: Whereas ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis'' and ''Fanfic/FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship'' {{deconstruct}} the world of the Unicornicopians and their ideologies, ''Starfleet Redone'' starts the series over and makes the characters genuine heroes (with definable characteristics) as well as give them a better system of morals. WordOfGod has stated that the ideas in ''Starfleet Magic'' had potential, but were mishandled in-story.
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* {{Reconstruction}}: Whereas ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis'' and ''Fanfic/FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship'' {{deconstruct}} {{Deconstruction}} the world of the Unicornicopians and their ideologies, ''Starfleet Redone'' starts the series over and makes the characters genuine heroes (with definable characteristics) as well as give them a better system of morals. WordOfGod has stated that the ideas in ''Starfleet Magic'' had potential, but were mishandled in-story.
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* TheWorfEffect: Team Trifecta consists of the three most elite officers in Starfleet's employ. So when they're having trouble against Nadir, that's your cue to panic.
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* TheWorfEffect: Team Trifecta consists of the three most elite officers in Starfleet's employ. So when they're having trouble against Nadir, that's your cue to panic.panic.
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* AlternativeContinuity: Serves as this to ''[[FanFic/MyLittleUnicorn Starfleet Magic]]''.
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* AlternativeContinuity: Serves as this to ''[[FanFic/MyLittleUnicorn ''[[FanFic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic Starfleet Magic]]''.
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* {{Reconstruction}}: Whereas ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis'' and ''Fanfic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony'' {{deconstruct}} the world of the Unicornicopians and their ideologies, ''Starfleet Redone'' starts the series over and makes the characters genuine heroes (with definable characteristics) as well as give them a better system of morals. WordOfGod has stated that the ideas in ''Starfleet Magic'' had potential, but were mishandled in-story.
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* {{Reconstruction}}: Whereas ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis'' and ''Fanfic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony'' ''Fanfic/FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship'' {{deconstruct}} the world of the Unicornicopians and their ideologies, ''Starfleet Redone'' starts the series over and makes the characters genuine heroes (with definable characteristics) as well as give them a better system of morals. WordOfGod has stated that the ideas in ''Starfleet Magic'' had potential, but were mishandled in-story.
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** Lightning and Starla Shine in the original were [[invoked]] StrangledByTheRedString, falling in LoveAtFirstSight and the latter only existing so that the Lightning would have a love interest. In this fic, Lightning and Astra Physics are given more time to develop as friends beforehand.
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** Lightning and Starla Shine in the original were [[invoked]] StrangledByTheRedString, falling in LoveAtFirstSight and the latter only existing so that the Lightning would have a love interest. In this fic, Lightning and Astra Physics are given more time to develop as friends beforehand.
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** Lightning and Starla Shine in the original were StrangledByTheRedString, falling in LoveAtFirstSight and the latter only existing so that the Lightning would have a love interest. In this fic, Lightning and Astra Physics are given more time to develop as friends beforehand.
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** Lightning and Starla Shine in the original were [[invoked]] StrangledByTheRedString, falling in LoveAtFirstSight and the latter only existing so that the Lightning would have a love interest. In this fic, Lightning and Astra Physics are given more time to develop as friends beforehand.
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** Lightning and Starla Shine in the original were StrangledByTheRedString, falling in LoveAtFirstSight and the latter only existing so that the Lightning would have a love interest. In this fic, Lightning and Astra Physics are given more time to develop as friends beforehand.
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** Celesto is barely around in the original, only showing up when the plot demands it. Here, we see him actually [[CurbStompBattle taking out a group of bandits]] far across the universe, and immediately rushing to Neo-Equestria when he senses it's in danger.
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** Celesto is barely around in the original, only showing up when the plot demands it. Here, we see him actually [[CurbStompBattle taking out a group of bandits]] far across the universe, and immediately rushing to Neo-Equestria when he senses it's in danger.danger, not only giving an explanation for his absence, but also showing that he truly is a benevolent ruler.
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** Of note, Lightning Dawn's status as TheHero is given a lot more credibility this time around. The original was seemingly found out of the blue by Celesto but here, he and Crystal are found at the same time after a tremendous display of power. Not only that, but he's able to stand up to [[BigBad Nadir]] in a weakened state, whereas LD Prime got knocked around a bunch, even by his minions, and then cowered upon first seeing him again
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** Of note, Lightning Dawn's status as TheHero is given a lot more credibility this time around. The original was seemingly found out of the blue by Celesto but here, he and Crystal are found at the same time after a tremendous display of power. Not only that, but he's able to stand up to [[BigBad Nadir]] in a weakened state, whereas LD Prime got knocked around a bunch, even by his minions, minions and a mere clone, and then cowered upon first seeing him again
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** The Neo-Equestrians being alicorns also gets it. Instead of being a race of [[MarySuetopia complete alicorns]], they function more like the main triad of ponies in the show, just with their main features being heightened.
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** The Neo-Equestrians being alicorns also gets it. Instead of being a race of [[MarySuetopia complete alicorns]], they alicorns, they're merely a bunch of MixAndMatchCritters that function more like the main triad of ponies in the show, just with their main features being heightened.