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* AdaptationalSexuality: Zigzagged for Big [=McIntosh=]. The canon episode "Hard to Say Anything" reveals that Big Mac is straight, or possibly bi, as he gets a crush on a mare. However, in this fanfiction, several characters believe him to be gay, however, he never harbours feelings for any stallions.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: Zigzagged for Big [=McIntosh=]. The canon episode "Hard to Say Anything" reveals that Big Mac is straight, or possibly bi, as he gets a crush on a mare.mare who he later married. However, in this fanfiction, several characters believe him to be gay, however, he never harbours feelings for any stallions.
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* LaxativePrank: Defied. The Mane Six plan to make Celestia use the toilet and Pinkie says that they should avoid making Celestia poop because that'd be too much for Twilight, so they stick with a diuretic.
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* LaxativePrank: Defied.Inverted. The Mane Six plan to make Celestia use the toilet and Pinkie says that they should avoid making Celestia poop because that'd be too much for Twilight, so they stick with a diuretic.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: When Celestia accidentally dyes herself pink, she calls herself a "pretty pink pony princess for the puerile paparazzi and the prudish postulants packing the place". Also, the title of the fanfic.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: When Celestia accidentally dyes herself pink, she calls herself a "pretty pink pony princess for the puerile paparazzi and the prudish postulants packing the place". Also, the title of the fanfic.place".
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* TechnicalEuphemism: Zigzagged when Princess Celestia has a PottyEmergency thanks to the Mane Six spiking her drink with a diuretic; the narration comments that it's quite urgent and requires "sophisticated vocabulary", but also notes that what she's going through isn't even that fancy, so "She didn't have to urinate or micturate either. She had to pee."
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* WeirderThanNormal: When Pinkie Pie arrives home from Zecora's, she seems sad.
--> '''Rainbow Dash''': "You're acting weird...er than normal."
--> '''Rainbow Dash''': "You're acting weird...er than normal."
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* AdaptationalSexuality: Zigzagged for Big [=McIntosh=]. The canon episode "Hard to Say Anything" reveals that Big Mac is straight, or possibly bi, as he gets a crush on a mare. However, in this fanfiction, several characters believe him to be gay, however, he never harbours feelings for any stallions.
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* HoYay: Pinkie Pie wonders if Big Mac is gay. Luna also inadvertently flirts with Fluttershy while drunk. Rainbow Dash also imagines Pinkie Pie marrying Zecora.
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** When Celestia is having her potty emergency, she doesn't want to sleep for fear of wetting the bed.
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* {{Immortality}}: Celestia is said to be immortal.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: When Celestia accidentally dyes herself pink, she calls herself a "pretty pink pony princess for the puerile paparazzi and the prudish postulants packing the place". Also, the title of the fanfic.
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* HoYay: Pinkie Pie wonders if Big Mac is gay. Luna also inadvertently flirts with Fluttershy while drunk.
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* MisterSeahorse: The blank expression that the ponies have is described as looking like that of a "shell-shocked soldier who'd just been informed that he was pregnant".
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* NatureTinkling: Apparently, "Pinkie Pie had to pee and so she stepped behind a tree".
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* WeirderThanNormal: When Pinkie Pie arrives home from Zecora's, she seems sad.
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: In-universe, when Rainbow Dash calls needing to pee more often "the squirts", Pinkie Pie points out she's using the wrong phrase.
--> '''Rainbow Dash''': "You're right that it makes things a lot harder, but this is abot as good as it's going to get if you don't want to get caught. Assuming that Princess Celestia doesn't ever need to use the bathroom, then the tea won't do anything. But if she ''does'', she just might get suspicious. What if she starts thinking that her sudden attack of the squirts isn't natural?"
--> '''Pinkie Pie''': "Uh, Dash? I don't think that's the right word. 'The squirts' is.."
--> '''Rainbow Dash''': "You're right that it makes things a lot harder, but this is abot as good as it's going to get if you don't want to get caught. Assuming that Princess Celestia doesn't ever need to use the bathroom, then the tea won't do anything. But if she ''does'', she just might get suspicious. What if she starts thinking that her sudden attack of the squirts isn't natural?"
--> '''Pinkie Pie''': "Uh, Dash? I don't think that's the right word. 'The squirts' is.."
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: When Celestia accidentally dyes herself pink, she calls herself a "pretty pink pony princess for the puerile paparazzi and the prudish postulants packing the place".
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* BreadEggsMilkSquick: Luna believes that "specialisation is for insects" and does a speech about things ponies should do, which is mostly useful talents (with the exception of 'plan an invasion') but ends with fighting and dying.
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* TheDiaperChange: Luna believes ponies should know how to change diapers.
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* EmbarrassingDampSheets:
** Pinkie Pie sees yellow rainclouds and wonders if Rainbow Dash has wet the bed, but she says she hasn't since she was fourteen.
** Pinkie Pie sees yellow rainclouds and wonders if Rainbow Dash has wet the bed, but she says she hasn't since she was fourteen.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Celestia mentally calls Prince Blueblood a "self-absorbed twat".
* LaxativePrank: Defied. The Mane Six plan to make Celestia use the toilet and Pinkie says that they should avoid making Celestia poop because that'd be too much for Twilight, so they stick with a diuretic.
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** Celestia thinks that arrogant individuals are not meant to be morning people.
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* PlayingSick: When Celestia is embarrassed at her coat being dyed pink, she wonders why she didn't falsely call in sick.
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** Celestia needs to pee, beginning at around Chapter Nine.
* ThePrankster: The Mane Six and Luna all take turns being pranksters.
* ThePrankster: The Mane Six and Luna all take turns being pranksters.
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* TheStoic: Celestia's guards are trained to be stoic.
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She and her friends then get some diuretic herbs from Zecora's hut and plan to put them in Celestia's tea. Meanwhile, Celestia is having a bit of a bad mood as she's been dyed pink and needs to pee but wants to avoid peeing to convince Twilight that Alicorns don't pee.
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She and her friends then get some diuretic herbs from Zecora's hut and plan to put them in Celestia's tea. Meanwhile, Celestia is having a bit of a bad mood as she's been dyed pink accidentally due to a prank and needs to pee but wants to avoid peeing to convince Twilight that Alicorns don't pee.
* BigStupidDoodooHead: Luna mentally calls griffons "stupid-heads".
* TheCuckooLanderWasRight: Twilight mentions this in her letter to Luna.
--> "Oftentimes even the oddest of ponies have hidden reserves of wisdom if you take the time to listen".
--> "Oftentimes even the oddest of ponies have hidden reserves of wisdom if you take the time to listen".
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* FacePalm: Celestia nearly puts her hoof to her face in annoyance but thinks better of it.
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* FacePalm: Celestia nearly puts her hoof to her face in annoyance but thinks better of it. Later, however, she actually does.
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* {{God}}: Twilight and Luna wonder if Discord is this.
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* FantasticRacism: Luna seems prejudiced against griffons and Fluttershy worries that she's prejudiced against Changelings.
* {{God}}: Twilight and Luna wonder if Discord isthis.this but then Luna thinks he must not be because Discord wouldn't allow bedsheets and pyjama-socks to be invented.
* {{God}}: Twilight and Luna wonder if Discord is
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* HoYay: Pinkie Pie wonders if Big Mac is gay. Luna also inadvertently flirts with Fluttershy while drunk.
* NiceGirl: Fluttershy doesn't want to sue as "that would be mean".
* OutOfCharacter: Celestia threatening to torch Luna's rump.
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* SiblingRivalry: Celestia shouts at the drunken Luna in the first chapter and worries that Luna has booby-trapped the toilet later on.
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* SiblingRivalry: Celestia shouts at the drunken Luna in the first chapter and worries that Luna has booby-trapped the toilet later on. She also yells at Luna while Luna's sober at one point. Luna then gets back at Celestia by playing various pranks on her.
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* YouAreFat: One of the council informs Luna that she made "veiled fat jokes" while drunk.
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* YouAreFat: One of the council informs Luna that she made "veiled fat jokes" at Fluttershy while drunk.drunk, however, Luna claims that she did not mean to call Fluttershy fat.
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[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/75393/1/princesses-dont-potty/chapter-1-princesses-dont-drink Princesses Don't Potty]] is a fanfiction of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' that has a rather crude (but not overly adult) plot.
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[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/75393/1/princesses-dont-potty/chapter-1-princesses-dont-drink net/story/75393/princesses-dont-potty Princesses Don't Potty]] is a fanfiction of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' that has a rather crude (but not overly adult) plot.
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[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/75393/1/princesses-dont-potty/chapter-1-princesses-dont-drink Princesses Don't Potty]] is a fanfiction of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' that has a rather crude (but not overly adult) plot.
It focuses on Princess Luna getting drunk on cider and shouting out drunkenly that she needs to pee, which makes Twilight curious as to whether or not Alicorns pee or poop (as she's not one herself yet).
She and her friends then get some diuretic herbs from Zecora's hut and plan to put them in Celestia's tea. Meanwhile, Celestia is having a bit of a bad mood as she's been dyed pink and needs to pee but wants to avoid peeing to convince Twilight that Alicorns don't pee.
!! Princesses Don't Potty contains examples of...
* AlcoholHic: Luna is said to have the hiccups when drunk.
* BigEater: Twilight eats [[GeniusSweetTooth three gallons of chocolate ice cream.]]
* BigNo: Twilight shouts "NO!" when she realises that Luna getting drunk wasn't a dream.
* CallingYourBathroomBreaks:
** Luna does this while drunk.
---> '''Luna''': "FAREWELL, MY LITTLE PONIES! WE ARE OFF TO CANTERLOT WHERE A MOST SPLENDID LAVATORY AWAITS US AND WHICH WE WILL MOST HAPPILY ANTICIPATE VISITING, FOR WE MUST SOON TAKE A ROYAL WHIZZ OR ELSE PERISH!"
** Twilight notes she's never heard Celestia do this.
* EatDirtCheap: Spike eats gems for breakfast.
* FacePalm: Celestia nearly puts her hoof to her face in annoyance but thinks better of it.
* {{Fainting}}: Fluttershy goes into a coma in the first chapter. She recovers, though. Twilight is also unconscious in the second chapter, apparently, she fainted after screaming.
* {{God}}: Twilight and Luna wonder if Discord is this.
* HeroicBSOD: Twilight gets all emotional at the prospect of [[SeriousBusiness whether alicorns pee.]]
* HoYay: Pinkie Pie wonders if Big Mac is gay.
* IntoxicationEnsues: Luna gets drunk after having downed a lot of cider on a bet. Celestia defies this on herself by drinking non-alcoholic cider.
* MotorMouth: Pinkie Pie has a lot to say.
* NobodyPoops: Averted. Twilight wants to find out whether this applies to Celestia and Luna.
* NoIndoorVoice: The drunken Luna shouts.
* NotAMorningPerson: Twilight wonders if Celestia is this.
* NotSoStoic: Celestia lashing out at Luna when the latter gets drunk. Freaks Twilight out.
* {{Pegasus}}: Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy.
* PottyEmergency:
** Luna claims to need a "royal whizz" when drunk.
* {{Pun}}: Luna makes a pun that she needs a "royal whizz", which surprises Rainbow Dash.
* RoyalWe: Luna speaks like this when drunk.
* SiblingRivalry: Celestia shouts at the drunken Luna in the first chapter and worries that Luna has booby-trapped the toilet later on.
* StellarName: Celestia, Luna and Twilight.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Twilight going into great detail about what happened the previous night while stating it didn't happen.
* TitleDrop: Twilight when she realises that the first chapter wasn't AllJustADream as she'd previously thought.
--> '''Twilight''': "NO! That was all a dream! It didn't happen! Princess Luna never drank any hard cider, and Princess Celestia didn't get embarrassed about her, and Princess Luna didn't make any drunken toilet puns, and I never, ever, ''ever'' thought about how I haven't seen Celestia excuse herself to the bathroom and that doesn't matter anyway because PRINCESSES DON'T POTTY!"
* ToiletHumor: A fanfic all about using the bathroom.
* {{Unicorn}}: Rarity, and Twilight since this is set before "Magical Mystery Cure".
* WeightWoe: Twilight wonders that if Celestia can get mad at her sister, can she also worry about her weight?
* WingedUnicorn: Celestia and Luna. Cadence is also mentioned.
* YouAreFat: One of the council informs Luna that she made "veiled fat jokes" while drunk.
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It focuses on Princess Luna getting drunk on cider and shouting out drunkenly that she needs to pee, which makes Twilight curious as to whether or not Alicorns pee or poop (as she's not one herself yet).
She and her friends then get some diuretic herbs from Zecora's hut and plan to put them in Celestia's tea. Meanwhile, Celestia is having a bit of a bad mood as she's been dyed pink and needs to pee but wants to avoid peeing to convince Twilight that Alicorns don't pee.
!! Princesses Don't Potty contains examples of...
* AlcoholHic: Luna is said to have the hiccups when drunk.
* BigEater: Twilight eats [[GeniusSweetTooth three gallons of chocolate ice cream.]]
* BigNo: Twilight shouts "NO!" when she realises that Luna getting drunk wasn't a dream.
* CallingYourBathroomBreaks:
** Luna does this while drunk.
---> '''Luna''': "FAREWELL, MY LITTLE PONIES! WE ARE OFF TO CANTERLOT WHERE A MOST SPLENDID LAVATORY AWAITS US AND WHICH WE WILL MOST HAPPILY ANTICIPATE VISITING, FOR WE MUST SOON TAKE A ROYAL WHIZZ OR ELSE PERISH!"
** Twilight notes she's never heard Celestia do this.
* EatDirtCheap: Spike eats gems for breakfast.
* FacePalm: Celestia nearly puts her hoof to her face in annoyance but thinks better of it.
* {{Fainting}}: Fluttershy goes into a coma in the first chapter. She recovers, though. Twilight is also unconscious in the second chapter, apparently, she fainted after screaming.
* {{God}}: Twilight and Luna wonder if Discord is this.
* HeroicBSOD: Twilight gets all emotional at the prospect of [[SeriousBusiness whether alicorns pee.]]
* HoYay: Pinkie Pie wonders if Big Mac is gay.
* IntoxicationEnsues: Luna gets drunk after having downed a lot of cider on a bet. Celestia defies this on herself by drinking non-alcoholic cider.
* MotorMouth: Pinkie Pie has a lot to say.
* NobodyPoops: Averted. Twilight wants to find out whether this applies to Celestia and Luna.
* NoIndoorVoice: The drunken Luna shouts.
* NotAMorningPerson: Twilight wonders if Celestia is this.
* NotSoStoic: Celestia lashing out at Luna when the latter gets drunk. Freaks Twilight out.
* {{Pegasus}}: Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy.
* PottyEmergency:
** Luna claims to need a "royal whizz" when drunk.
* {{Pun}}: Luna makes a pun that she needs a "royal whizz", which surprises Rainbow Dash.
* RoyalWe: Luna speaks like this when drunk.
* SiblingRivalry: Celestia shouts at the drunken Luna in the first chapter and worries that Luna has booby-trapped the toilet later on.
* StellarName: Celestia, Luna and Twilight.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Twilight going into great detail about what happened the previous night while stating it didn't happen.
* TitleDrop: Twilight when she realises that the first chapter wasn't AllJustADream as she'd previously thought.
--> '''Twilight''': "NO! That was all a dream! It didn't happen! Princess Luna never drank any hard cider, and Princess Celestia didn't get embarrassed about her, and Princess Luna didn't make any drunken toilet puns, and I never, ever, ''ever'' thought about how I haven't seen Celestia excuse herself to the bathroom and that doesn't matter anyway because PRINCESSES DON'T POTTY!"
* ToiletHumor: A fanfic all about using the bathroom.
* {{Unicorn}}: Rarity, and Twilight since this is set before "Magical Mystery Cure".
* WeightWoe: Twilight wonders that if Celestia can get mad at her sister, can she also worry about her weight?
* WingedUnicorn: Celestia and Luna. Cadence is also mentioned.
* YouAreFat: One of the council informs Luna that she made "veiled fat jokes" while drunk.
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