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* NamesTheSame: Dr. Matthias Harker [[spoiler: (founder of the Academy)]] and Dr. Matthias No-name-given [[spoiler: the doctor who tortured River)]]
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-> ""It's not going to be easy for her. She was there two years before I could break her out. I've seen what they've done to her, but I can't imagine what two years of torture… She loves this ship, Mal. She loves this crew. It's her family now. It's ''our'' family." - '''Simon Tam'''
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-> ""It's not going to be easy for her. She was there two years before I could break her out. I've seen what they've done to her, but I can't imagine what two years of torture… torture... She loves this ship, Mal. She loves this crew. It's her family now. It's ''our'' family." - '''Simon Tam'''
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A very well-thought out story that was created to resolve what was left of River's tale, [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8073765/1/Presets]] bypasses a light-hearted tone to deal with the problems Miranda left behind. Inara and Mal come to grips with their WillTheyOrWontThey relationship, Zoe begins to heal from Wash's still-recent demise, Jayne discovers that deep down he does care for everyone on ''Serenity'', and Simon learns about the true meaning of family. Very well-written.
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A very well-thought out story that was created to resolve what was left of River's tale, [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8073765/1/Presets]] net/s/8073765/1/Presets Presets]] bypasses a light-hearted tone to deal with the problems Miranda left behind. Inara and Mal come to grips with their WillTheyOrWontThey relationship, Zoe begins to heal from Wash's still-recent demise, Jayne discovers that deep down he does care for everyone on ''Serenity'', and Simon learns about the true meaning of family. Very well-written.
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Link was broken/story had been deleted. This appears to be the same story, but if someone who read it before can corroborate that . . .
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A very well-thought out story that was created to resolve what was left of River's tale, [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6118764/1/bPresets_b Presets]] bypasses a light-hearted tone to deal with the problems Miranda left behind. Inara and Mal come to grips with their WillTheyOrWontThey relationship, Zoe begins to heal from Wash's still-recent demise, Jayne discovers that deep down he does care for everyone on ''Serenity'', and Simon learns about the true meaning of family. Very well-written.
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A very well-thought out story that was created to resolve what was left of River's tale, [[http://www.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6118764/1/bPresets_b Presets]] net/s/8073765/1/Presets]] bypasses a light-hearted tone to deal with the problems Miranda left behind. Inara and Mal come to grips with their WillTheyOrWontThey relationship, Zoe begins to heal from Wash's still-recent demise, Jayne discovers that deep down he does care for everyone on ''Serenity'', and Simon learns about the true meaning of family. Very well-written.
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* ActionGirl: It's freaking {{Firefly}}. Zoe and River are the two most prominent examples, though.
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* ActionGirl: It's freaking {{Firefly}}.{{Series/Firefly}}. Zoe and River are the two most prominent examples, though.
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!!''{{FanFic/Presets}}'' contains examples of:
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* MeaningfulName: River calls her conditioned personality [[TheTempest Ariel]], because it was imprisoned and then freed and now serves.
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* MeaningfulName: River calls her conditioned personality [[TheTempest [[Theatre/TheTempest Ariel]], because it was imprisoned and then freed and now serves.
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It's been three months since the events of {{Serenity}}, and life for Malcolm Reynolds and his crew is just beginning to get back to normal. River's in training to become the new pilot, Simon and Kaylee are deeply in love, and Mal's even found a steady contract job. [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong Sounds like paradise, right?]]
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It's been three months since the events of {{Serenity}}, ''Film/{{Serenity}}'', and life for Malcolm Reynolds and his crew is just beginning to get back to normal. River's in training to become the new pilot, Simon and Kaylee are deeply in love, and Mal's even found a steady contract job. [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong Sounds like paradise, right?]]
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Combined with DownerEnding to form a bittersweet conclusion
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* BrainwashResidue
* EarnYourHappyEnding: Combined with DownerEnding to form a bittersweetconclusionconclusion.
* HeelFaceTurn
* EarnYourHappyEnding: Combined with DownerEnding to form a bittersweet
* HeelFaceTurn
* ItsAllMyFault
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: Matthias takes one to try and save [[spoiler: River]] from dying.
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: Matthias takes one to try and save [[spoiler: River]] from dying.
* MemoryGambit: Ariel's presence in River's mind wasn't something she knew about until her conditioning started to break down.
* MindOverMatter: [[spoiler: Matthias's wife]] is a Reader who happens to be telekinetic. But in order for [[spoiler: her]] to do anything, [[spoiler: she]] must expend the same amount of mental energy it would take to do the task physically. So anything more than a windstorm is generally impossible.
* MindOverMatter: [[spoiler: Matthias's wife]] is a Reader who happens to be telekinetic. But in order for [[spoiler: her]] to do anything, [[spoiler: she]] must expend the same amount of mental energy it would take to do the task physically. So anything more than a windstorm is generally impossible.
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* NamesTheSame: Dr. Matthias Harker [[spoiler: (founder of the Academy)]] and Dr. Matthias [[spoiler: the doctor who tortured River)]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone
* NamesTheSame: Dr. Matthias Harker [[spoiler: (founder of the Academy)]] and Dr. Matthias No-name-given [[spoiler: the doctor who tortured River)]]
* NamesTheSame: Dr. Matthias Harker [[spoiler: (founder of the Academy)]] and Dr. Matthias No-name-given [[spoiler: the doctor who tortured River)]]
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* TakeMeInstead
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* TakeMeInsteadTakeMeInstead
* {{Telepathy}}: In this particular flavor of {{Fanon}}, Readers are a genetically enabled minority in the population. When Mal actually meets some besides River, they're horrified to discover that she can't filter like they can.
* {{Telepathy}}: In this particular flavor of {{Fanon}}, Readers are a genetically enabled minority in the population. When Mal actually meets some besides River, they're horrified to discover that she can't filter like they can.
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* ActionGirl: It's freaking {{Firefly}}. Zoe and River are the two most prominent examples, though.
* BadassInDistress
* BadassInDistress
** And when [[spoiler: Gabriel Tam]] learns the truth
** And when the entire crew witnesses [[spoiler: River's death]].
** And when the entire crew witnesses [[spoiler: River's death]].
* HostageSituation: [[strike:River's]] Ariel's preferred method of negotiation
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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: River's conditioned personality, which she grows less and less able to control
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* MortonsFork
* NamesTheSame: Dr. Matthias Harker [[spoiler: (founder of the Academy)]] and Dr. Matthias [[spoiler: the doctor who tortured River)]]
* ScyllaAndCharybdis: A problem for nearly every character in the story.
* ShownTheirWork: The final chapter of the story contains a few paragraphs about the author's approximations of how fast Serenity can travel from planet to planet, down to some equations and references to resources. It shows in-story that she did her research.
* SongFic: Played with - many scenes and moods in the story are inspired by songs, which are given in the final chapter of the story, but only one song is actually quoted. The characters are actually singing it, because they're musicians, and it's not out of context for the story.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: River's conditioned personality, which she grows less and less able tocontrolcontrol over the course of the story.
* TakeMeInstead
* NamesTheSame: Dr. Matthias Harker [[spoiler: (founder of the Academy)]] and Dr. Matthias [[spoiler: the doctor who tortured River)]]
* ScyllaAndCharybdis: A problem for nearly every character in the story.
* ShownTheirWork: The final chapter of the story contains a few paragraphs about the author's approximations of how fast Serenity can travel from planet to planet, down to some equations and references to resources. It shows in-story that she did her research.
* SongFic: Played with - many scenes and moods in the story are inspired by songs, which are given in the final chapter of the story, but only one song is actually quoted. The characters are actually singing it, because they're musicians, and it's not out of context for the story.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: River's conditioned personality, which she grows less and less able to
* TakeMeInstead
