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* MeaningfulTitle: 'On A Cross And Arrow' refers to the female and male gender symbols, respectively.
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* ChivalrousPervert: Elusive to an extent. He rather blatantly eyeballs Rarity - particularly her [[BabyGotBack flanks]] - and primly compliments her figure in a way that Rarity knows is code for "you're hot". But of course, he's nothing short of a gentlecolt to her. Obviously, being technically the same pony, the same goes for Rarity in a rare female example of the trope.

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* ChivalrousPervert: Elusive to an extent. He rather blatantly eyeballs Rarity - particularly her [[BabyGotBack flanks]] - and primly compliments her figure in a way that Rarity knows is code for "you're hot". hot." But of course, he's nothing short of a gentlecolt to her. Obviously, being technically the same pony, the same goes for Rarity in a rare female example of the trope.
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* ChivalrousPervert: Elusive to an extent. He rather blatantly eyeballs Rarity - particularly her [[BabyGotBack flanks]] - and primly compliments her figure in a way that Rarity knows is code for "you've got a hot body". But of course, he's nothing short of a gentlecolt to her. Obviously, being technically the same pony, the same goes for Rarity in a rare female example of the trope.

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* ChivalrousPervert: Elusive to an extent. He rather blatantly eyeballs Rarity - particularly her [[BabyGotBack flanks]] - and primly compliments her figure in a way that Rarity knows is code for "you've got a hot body"."you're hot". But of course, he's nothing short of a gentlecolt to her. Obviously, being technically the same pony, the same goes for Rarity in a rare female example of the trope.
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* ContinuityNod: The Cute Mark Crusaders' tree house is mentioned.

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* ContinuityNod: The Cute Cutie Mark Crusaders' tree house is mentioned.

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* BiTheWay: Dash and her counterpart Blitz are both secretly bi-curious. Elusive also gives a hint of bi-curiosity.

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* BiTheWay: Dash and her counterpart Blitz are both secretly bi-curious. Elusive also gives a hint of bi-curiosity.this with some off-hand thoughts towards his masseur.



* ChivalrousPervert: Elusive to an extent. He rather blatantly eyeballs Rarity - particularly her [[BabyGotBack flanks]] - and primly compliments her figure in a way that Rarity knows is code for "you've got a hot body". But of course, he's nothing short of a gentlecolt to her. Obviously, being technically the same pony, the same goes for Rarity in a rare female example of the trope.



** Applejack also makes mention that Dusk sometimes shoots some looks at his big sister.

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** Applejack Male!Applejack also makes mention that Dusk sometimes shoots some looks at his big sister.
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** Applejack also makes mention that Dusk sometimes shoots some looks at his big sister.
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''[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06/story-on-cross-and-arrow.html On A Cross And Arrow]]'' is a [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic]] fan-fiction by Conner Cogwork.

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''[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06/story-on-cross-and-arrow.html On A Cross And Arrow]]'' is a [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic]] WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fan-fiction by Conner Cogwork.



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!!This WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic contains examples of:
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** When Dusk peforms a ''Bubble Berry'' swear, he pauses to make sure his eye is closed because of last time he did it.
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** Speaking of fan fic nods, Twilight mentions a universe where [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-world-without-rainbows.html Rainbow Dash DIDN'T pull off the Sonic Rainboom]] while explaining the concept of alternate universes to her friends.

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** Speaking of fan fic nods, Twilight mentions a universe where [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-world-without-rainbows.html [[{{FanFic/AWorldWithoutRainbows}} Rainbow Dash DIDN'T pull off the Sonic Rainboom]] while explaining the concept of alternate universes to her friends.
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** There's also the fact that Celestia and Solaris do some light flirting at the end of the fanfic.

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* TheDandy: Elusive to Rarity's [[TheFashionista fashionista]].

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* TheDandy: Elusive to Rarity's [[TheFashionista fashionista]].



* GlassesPull: Pinkie Pie in Chapter 2, à la [[CSIMiami Horatio Caine]] (minus the BigYes and song afterwords, which she was expecting to happen).

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* GlassesPull: Pinkie Pie in Chapter 2, à la directly mimicking [[CSIMiami Horatio Caine]] (minus the master himself]] (and then comments on the missing BigYes and song afterwords, which she was expecting to happen).afterwords).
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* {{Hammerspace}}: Where Pinkie Pie got the sunglasses for her GlassesPull, with even the text saying that they came from hammerspace.

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** Speaking of fan fic nods, the girls originally think they wound up in a universe where [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-world-without-rainbows.html Rainbow Dash DIDN'T pull off the Sonic Rainboom]].

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** Speaking of fan fic nods, the girls originally think they wound up in Twilight mentions a universe where [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-world-without-rainbows.html Rainbow Dash DIDN'T pull off the Sonic Rainboom]].Rainboom]] while explaining the concept of alternate universes to her friends.
** Twilight remarks at one point that Rarity's powers of observation would have made her a great detective, a possible reference to the SherlockHolmes FusionFic [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/story-study-in-rainbows.html A Study in Rainbows]].

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* BabyGotBack: When first meeting Elusive, Rarity inwardly compliments how his cutie mark is set upon "such firm cheeks".

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* BabyGotBack: A rare male example. When first meeting Elusive, Rarity inwardly compliments how his cutie mark is set upon "such firm cheeks".cheeks".
** Also, when Rarity is invited into his boutiqe, she ''struts'' in to show off and begin seducing him, and is "not disappointed, as she felt [[MaleGaze eyes upon her flanks]]."
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* BabyGotBack: When first meeting Elusive, Rarity inwardly compliments how his cutie mark is set upon "such firm cheeks".
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: When Rarity first meets Elusive and looks him over, her inner schoolgirl squeals at the length of his horn.
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* TwiceShy: Actually subverted with Fluttershy and Butterscotch.
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* PaletteSwap: Apparantly Mr. and Mrs. Cake's genderswapped selves are just each other body shapes with their natural colors. Applejack is shocked to see this.
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** The voice over takes it {{Up to Eleven}}!

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** The voice over [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OsEAabIhETQ&list=LLXgJgPr5deER_bF97JPW-xQ&index=2&feature=plpp_video voice-over]] takes it {{Up to Eleven}}! UpToEleven!

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* MeetCute: Fluttershy's and Butterscotch's meeting, straight up.

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* MeetCute: Fluttershy's and Butterscotch's meeting, straight up. up.
** The voice over takes it {{Up to Eleven}}!
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** Also Rainbow Blitz.
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** And just before the mane 6 return to their world, [[spoiler: Dash and Blitz]].

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** And just before the mane 6 return to their world, [[spoiler: Dash and Blitz]].Blitz]].

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*** Speaking of fan fic nods, the girls originally think they wound up in a universe where [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-world-without-rainbows.html Rainbow Dash DIDN'T pull off the Sonic Rainboom]].

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*** Also, PKE energy is mentioned.
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Speaking of fan fic nods, the girls originally think they wound up in a universe where [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-world-without-rainbows.html Rainbow Dash DIDN'T pull off the Sonic Rainboom]].
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** An interesting one, but Applejack refers to [[DoctorWho a certain tan pony]] as [[Fanfic/TimeLordsAndTerror "the Professor"]].
*** Speaking of fan fic nods, the girls originally think they wound up in a universe where [[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/05/story-world-without-rainbows.html Rainbow Dash DIDN'T pull off the Sonic Rainboom]].
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* YourUniverseOrMine: Applejack and Rainbow Dash fall for each others' alternate universe counterparts, while Fluttershy and Rarity fall for their ''own'' male versions.

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* YourUniverseOrMine: Applejack and Rainbow Dash Both Applejacks fall for each others' the alternate universe counterparts, counterpart of their Rainbow friend, while Fluttershy and Rarity fall for their ''own'' male versions.

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* OhCrap: Everypony's reaction to the chaos that would be created if Pinkie Pie and her counterpart Berry Bubble collaborated on a party.


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* OhCrap: Everypony's reaction to the chaos that would be created if Pinkie Pie and her counterpart Berry Bubble collaborated on a party.
* PornStash: Both Rainbows have a version of this.

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A voice drama is in production. [[http://www.youtube.com/user/johnnindex See here]] for more information.

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A voice drama is in production. [[http://www.youtube.com/user/johnnindex com/user/TheHeolix See here]] for more information.



** When Dusk offers to let her use his bed while he sleeps in the spare bed, she asks if the spare is full of lumps [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E8LookBeforeYouSleep from his sleepover]] with Applejack and Elusive.
* CovertPervert: Dusk Shine has to make a consious effort not to ogle [[HelloNurse Rarity]].

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** When Dusk offers to let her Twilight use his bed while he sleeps in the spare bed, she asks if the spare is full of lumps [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E8LookBeforeYouSleep from his sleepover]] with Applejack and Elusive.
* CovertPervert: Dusk Shine has to make a consious conscious effort not to ogle [[HelloNurse Rarity]].



* GlassesPull: Pinkie Pie in Chapter 2, à la [[CSIMiami Horatio Caine]] (minus the BigYes and song afterwords, which she was expecting to happen).



* ShipTease: Many of the ponies find themselves attracted to the opposite-gender counterparts of the ponies they are often shipped with. (Rainbow Dash towards Male!Pinkie Pie, female Applejack towards Male!Rainbow Dash, Twilight ''and'' Male!Twilight towards their [[HotForTeacher mentor's genderswapped-selves]], etc.)
* SickeninglySweethearts: Both interdimentional couples; Rarity/Elusive in a gushing, overdramatic Shakespearian-love sense, and Fluttershy/Butterscotch in a painfully shy, cutesy sense.

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* ShipTease: Many of the ponies find themselves attracted to the opposite-gender counterparts of the ponies they are often shipped with. (Rainbow Dash towards Male!Pinkie Pie, Berry, female Applejack towards Male!Rainbow Dash, Rainbow Blitz, Twilight ''and'' Male!Twilight Dusk towards their [[HotForTeacher mentor's genderswapped-selves]], gender-swapped selves]], etc.)
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* SickeninglySweethearts: Both interdimentional interdimensional couples; Rarity/Elusive in a gushing, overdramatic Shakespearian-love sense, and Fluttershy/Butterscotch in a painfully shy, cutesy sense. sense.
* SleepCute: According to Solaris, Dusk and Twilight. Celestia gave the most unladylike {{Squee}} when he mentioned it to her.
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* CampStraight: Elusive (although his thoughts toward his masseur hints [[BiTheWay otherwise]]...)

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* CampStraight: Elusive (although his thoughts toward his masseur hints hint [[BiTheWay otherwise]]...)

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* BelligerentSexualTension: [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash and Rainbow Blitz, apparently.]]
* BiTheWay: Dash and her counterpart Blitz are both secretly bi-curious. Elusive also gives a hint of bi-curiosity.
* CampStraight: Elusive (although his thoughts toward his masseur hints [[BiTheWay otherwise]]...)



** When Dusk offers to let her use his bed while he sleeps in the spare bed, she asks if the spare is full of lumps [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E8LookBeforeYouSleep from his sleepover]] with Applejack and Elusive.

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** When Dusk offers to let her use his bed while he sleeps in the spare bed, she asks if the spare is full of lumps [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E8LookBeforeYouSleep from his sleepover]] with Applejack and Elusive.
* CovertPervert: Dusk Shine has to make a consious effort not to ogle [[HelloNurse Rarity]].



* TheDandy: Elusive to Rarity's [[TheFashionista fashionista]].



** Also, Fluttershy and Butterscotch.



* MeetCute: Fluttershy's and Butterscotch's meeting, straight up.



** There are also a few allusions to fandom memes, such as Rainbow Dash getting a "[[SomethingElseAlsoRises wingboner]]" on seeing [[ShipTease Berry Bubble]].
* ShipTease: Many of the ponies find themselves attracted to the opposite-gender counterparts of the ponies they are often shipped with. (Rainbow Dash towards Male!Pinkie Pie, female Applejack towards Male!Rainbow Dash, Twilight ''and'' Male!Twilight towards their [[HotForTeacher mentor's genderswapped-selves]], etc.)
* SickeninglySweethearts: Both interdimentional couples; Rarity/Elusive in a gushing, overdramatic Shakespearian-love sense, and Fluttershy/Butterscotch in a painfully shy, cutesy sense.



** And just before the mane 6 return to their world, [[spoiler:Dash and Blitz]].

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** And just before the mane 6 return to their world, [[spoiler:Dash [[spoiler: Dash and Blitz]].
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** When Dusk offers Twilight his spare bed, she asks if it's still full of lumps [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E8LookBeforeYouSleep from his sleepover]] with Applejack and Elusive.

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** When Dusk offers Twilight to let her use his bed while he sleeps in the spare bed, she asks if it's still the spare is full of lumps [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E8LookBeforeYouSleep from his sleepover]] with Applejack and Elusive.

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