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Names The Same is no longer a trope
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* NamesTheSame: [[invoked]] Applejack and... Applejack. To avoid confusion and keep her cover from being blown, female!Applejack refers to herself as "Cousin [=JayJay=]" to Applebuck and her male self.
** Owlowiscious and Gummy, even though we never see them, are referred to by name by Dusk and Berry.
** Owlowiscious and Gummy, even though we never see them, are referred to by name by Dusk and Berry.
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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope
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** The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OsEAabIhETQ voice-over]] takes it UpToEleven!
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** The [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OsEAabIhETQ voice-over]] takes it UpToEleven!up to eleven!
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Rant Inducing Slight is now a disambig
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* RantInducingSlight: Twilight in Chapter 4, due to the stress of the whole situation, explodes on the group, and instantly feels horrible when she's finished.
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* RantInducingSlight: RageBreakingPoint: Twilight in Chapter 4, due to the stress of the whole situation, explodes on the group, and instantly feels horrible when she's finished.
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* {{Retcon}}: Sweetie Belle's male counterpart was originally named Sweepy Bell before his name was changed to Silver Bell.
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: After Rarity leaves the hedge to buy shampoo (for herself) and sunflower oil (for the spell to get them back home), Applejack realizes there are only two stores in Ponyville that sell shampoo...and one of them is the Luxury Lotus Spa, which is closed on Sundays...and Twilight realizes the only other one is Carousel Boutique...which means Rarity is heading there to meet her male self. Cue panic.
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: After Rarity leaves the hedge to buy shampoo (for herself) and sunflower oil (for the spell to get them back home), Applejack realizes there are only two stores in Ponyville that sell shampoo...and one of them is the Luxury Lotus Spa, which is closed on Sundays...and Twilight realizes the only other one is Carousel Boutique...which means Rarity is heading there to meet her male self. Cue panic. panic!
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: After Rarity leaves the hedge to buy shampoo (for herself) and sunflower oil (for the spell to get them back home), Applejack realizes there are only two stores in Ponyville that sell shampoo...and one of them is the Luxury Lotus Spa, which is closed on Sundays...and Twilight realizes the only other one is Carousel Boutique...which means Rarity is heading there to meet her male self. Cue panic.
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* AmazonianBeauty: Big Macintosh's counterpart Red Gala is not seen, but she is implied to be quite attractive, given that male-Applejack has caught Dusk Shine admiring her.
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** Male!Applejack comments that he's noticed Dusk Shine looking at his older sister (which probably means that Twilight Sparkle has been admiring Big Macintosh, as well.)
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** Male!Applejack comments that he's noticed Dusk Shine looking at his older sister sister, Red Gala (which probably means that Twilight Sparkle has been admiring Big Macintosh, as well.)
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* TallPoppySyndrome: Rarity knows a spell to temporarily make a cutie mark disappear because, as a filly, her classmates were jealous of her for getting her cutie mark early.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Butterscotch, being the male counterpart of [[{{Moe}} Fluttershy]].
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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* BiTheWay: Dash and her counterpart Blitz are both secretly bi-curious. Elusive also gives a hint of this with some off-hand thoughts towards his masseur.
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* CampStraight: Elusive (although his thoughts toward his masseur [[AmbiguouslyBi hint]] [[BiTheWay otherwise]]...)
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* CampStraight: Elusive (although his thoughts toward his masseur [[AmbiguouslyBi hint]] [[BiTheWay otherwise]]...otherwise...)
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''[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/06/story-on-cross-and-arrow.html On A Cross And Arrow]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction by Conner Cogwork.
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A voice drama is in production. [[https://www.youtube.com/user/TheHeolix See here]] for more information. A fully voiced reading of the entire series can be found [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLOpOKuCLrD8Evykcy4htPln22uDLRgO0R here]]. Can also be found at [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7211729/1/On_a_Cross_and_Arrow Fanfiction.net]] and [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/755/on-a-cross-and-arrow FiMFiction]].
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A voice drama is in production. [[https://www.youtube.com/user/TheHeolix See here]] for more information. A fully voiced reading of the entire series can be found [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLOpOKuCLrD8Evykcy4htPln22uDLRgO0R here]]. Can also be found at [[http://www.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7211729/1/On_a_Cross_and_Arrow Fanfiction.net]] and [[http://www.[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/755/on-a-cross-and-arrow FiMFiction]].
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Hello Nurse Renamed per TRS
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* CovertPervert: Dusk Shine has to make a conscious effort not to ogle [[HelloNurse Rarity]].
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* CovertPervert: CovertPervert:
** Dusk Shine has to make a conscious effort not to ogle[[HelloNurse [[HeadTurningBeauty Rarity]].
** Dusk Shine has to make a conscious effort not to ogle
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* MythologyGag: Ditzy Doo is the name of the famous googly-eyed clumsy female pegasus in the normal world, in the gender-swapped world, ''he'' is named Derpy instead.
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* MythologyGag: MythologyGag:
** Ditzy Doo is the name of the famous googly-eyed clumsy female pegasus in the normal world, in the gender-swapped world, ''he'' is named Derpyinstead.instead.
** Probably unintentional, but Butterscotch shares the same name as one of the first ponies in the early G1 toyline.
** Ditzy Doo is the name of the famous googly-eyed clumsy female pegasus in the normal world, in the gender-swapped world, ''he'' is named Derpy
** Probably unintentional, but Butterscotch shares the same name as one of the first ponies in the early G1 toyline.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: When Rarity first meets Elusive and looks him over, her inner schoolgirl squeals at the length of his horn.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: When Rarity first meets Elusive and looks him over, her inner schoolgirl schoolfilly squeals at the length of his horn.
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* NoodleIncident: Applejack mentioned a time Rainbow Dash got stir crazy from being coped up too long. Apparently it ''wasn't'' pretty.
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* NoodleIncident: Applejack mentioned a time Rainbow Dash got stir crazy stir-crazy from being coped cooped up too long. Apparently it ''wasn't'' pretty.
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Cogwork has also written a sequel, ''Fanfic/OnAWhisperOfWind'', where Applebuck travels to the mane 6's universe to find his "cousin" again.
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Cogwork has also written a sequel, ''Fanfic/OnAWhisperOfWind'', where Applebuck travels to the mane Mane 6's universe to find his "cousin" again.
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** "Well, speak o' [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTheMovie1987 th' smooze]]."
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** "Well, speak o' [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTheMovie1987 [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTheMovie1986 th' smooze]]."
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** "Well, speak o' [[MyLittlePonyTheMovie th' smooze]]."
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** "Well, speak o' [[MyLittlePonyTheMovie [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTheMovie1987 th' smooze]]."
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Rarity realizes she was ready to abandon Sweetie Belle and feels the guilt over it.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Rarity, on seeing Silver Bell, Elusive's little brother, realizes that in her wanting to stay in Elusive's world, she was ready to ''abandon Sweetie Belle'' to do it. She then tearfully admits to Elusive, "I...I have a sister. I-I haven't seen her in so long...seeing your brother just now, made me realize...''howmuchIreallymissher!!''" And goes into InelegantBlubbering as the guilt and longing hits home. [[spoiler: Knowing Rarity has a little sister like he does a little brother gives Elusive the strength to tell Rarity "Go to her."]]